Reviewer: sasha (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2015 07:04 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
brian is lucky to have such supporting relatives! i loved how they showed they loved him. and justin and brian's moments were gentle, i loved them. loved everything, very great chapter!
Author's Response: Hi, Sasha! Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment! I truly appreciate that, and I'm happy you enjoyed this chapter.;) I think it's important that Brian have someone to support him, and it just seemed like the right time for the boys to finally profess their love for each other.
I am working on the update to this right now, so I hope to have it posted soon. Thanks again for being so supportive. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2015 07:05 PM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Hi Kim! Great chapter! I love your story. Brian and Justin are so cute together. I hope nothing happens with Justin.Thank you so much for sharing...:) Many greetings, Myriam....:)
Author's Response: Thank you, my friend, for reading this latest chapter, and especially for taking the time to comment; I really appreciate that more than you know.;) I still have quite a bit more to tell yet; I appreciate you bearing with me in between updates. I only wish I could post faster like some others, but with RL sadly it is just not possible. Be assured, though, that I am updating just as quickly as I can.
Thank you again for your support, and for the encouragement. Hope you, Meggi, and I can one day perhaps meet up in NYC to see one of Randy's plays.;) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2015 09:26 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Hi Kim! I finally have some time and I was delighted to see a new update! I love so many things about this chapter, you describe Brian's emotions over his parents' attitude so well 😊 I love the love, if I can say that, between the Walkers and Brian and of course, between the boys. Their scene is so beautiful! Now that Dale is going to talk, I can't wait to read what happens next :) Thank you for this great update and this great story!
Author's Response: Hello, my friend. I appreciate you reading and commenting on this chapter more than you know; thank you. It helps to keep the discouragement at bay.;) I am happy you enjoyed this latest update; I thought it was finally time that both boys declare outloud how they felt about each other, too. You will find out Doug's response to the plea deal in the next chapter. Thank you again for all the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: nata (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2015 09:57 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
oh what a chapter!!! very rich of events! brian and justin are the greatest couple i have ever seen, you made them so real and great, i love them! after this chapter i felt i want to read everything again, i remember they had an interesting first meeting and brian couldn't choose between two brothers. now he is sure! thank you!!!
Author's Response: Hi, Nata! You are very thoughtful to read and review this chapter; thank you for bearing with me in between updates. I am delighted that you enjoyed this latest chapter. And yes, you are correct; when Brian first arrived, he was torn between both boys, but eventually he realized where his heart truly lay.;)
I do want to apologize for the lapse between updates; this story and my other WIP are constantly on my mind, and they WILL be finished. I wish I could update as fast as some others do, but with RL, the full-time job, and my duties on here it is very difficult to update any faster. But hopefully I can accelerate my schedule now that I only have the two open stories. I will get this updated again just as soon as I can. Thank you for all the support! It is deeply appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2015 09:08 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Hi, Kim! I’m so happy you updated this wonderful story – the ending of the last chapter is something I won’t forget any time soon. It was so painful and heartbreaking…
I can’t imagine how Brian feels right now. Will and Sarah showed incredible support and devotion, I nearly cried – it was so emotional. I’m so grateful Brian has them in his life now. Being sent here is the best thing that has even happened to him. I was afraid Will would lose his patience – when Brian is hurt, he can be a real hurtful brat himself, but no, he reacted so decently… he is a real father.
I was even more touched when Brian came to Justin for comfort. He’s more open in his feelings now, he isn’t afraid of admitting he needs his blond boy in his life.
Justin is… he is simply amazing. So supporting and so loving. I was ecstatic when he told Brian the words! FINALLY! And Brian didn’t hide behind the mask right away, he obviously accepts and cherishes Justin and his confession. The moment they shared is everything I ever wanted for them. It was perfect.
I feel sorry for Doug, but I do see his father’s point. He should have told him the truth from the beginning, but he’s let everything go way too far. And now his life is practically ruined! I can’t imagine he has to spend so many years in prison! I’d lose my mind! I’m happy he accepted the deal – and I love how Doug’s dad assured him he still loves him. This is the most important thing right now.
Thank you, Kim, this chapter was incredible! Love story, drama, anguish, remorse, fear, pain, family… everything is in here. I *loved* it tremendously. I’m looking forward to the next one!
Author's Response: Hi, Katrin! I'm so happy that you are still following this story, and I appreciate all your lovely comments; feedback means a lot to me as a writer. Yes, I actually feel sorry, both for Doug and for his father; I think Doug just got in over his head, and didn't know what to do at that point. But what he did was quite serious, and he will unfortunately have to pay the price for his actions. At last, though, I think the real people behind the two incidents will be brought to justice. Things may not go as smoothly as everyone hopes, though; that is yet to be seen. These are some pretty ruthless people they will be dealing with, and they will have a lot to lose.
As for the boys, yes, I thought it was finally time that they both expressed their deep feelings for each other. They already knew they were in love; but Brian's declaration about not being worthy of being loved was the catalyst to bring it to the forefront.;)
Thank you for reading this chapter, and for all the support you have given me, Katrin; that means the world to me. Knowing others are enjoying what I write is such a motivation to me. I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2015 11:41 PM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Hi Kim! Can't wait to find out where you take this story next. I've enjoyed all your story telling so far but it's lovely when those old WIPs get some air time too 😉😊 Will be finding out next whether Fin will propose or not up next ...? Henri
Author's Response: Hi, Henri! Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and especially for the feedback; I deeply appreciate that, and I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. Sigh...I am trying to update my two WIPS just as fast as I can. I am very faithful about finishing every story that I start, so do not worry; they WILL be completed.;) I am envious of those who have the time and luxury of being able to write and post daily, but with RL and a full time job - along with my duties on here - there is just not enough time in the day to do what I would like to do. I am very sorry for the delay in between; I hope you will bear with me as I work toward completing this story and my other one. I am trying not to post any new stories right now unless they are finished, even though I have so many new ideas floating around in my head that I would love to write. It is hard to show restraint! But I am trying.;)
As for Fin, yes, "My Heart's Desire" is up next for update, and one of the questions that I have yet to resolve is whether Fin will, indeed, fulfill his partner's most fervent wish and make him a married man. That, along with Alex's status and the question of a possible baby, will be answered before the story is finished.
Thank you again for the support, Henri. I am very grateful. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2015 05:04 PM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Thank you ! This was a good chapter :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, and for the comments, Edda! I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. More to come just as soon as I can. I still have quite a bit more to cover in this story. Thank you for the support. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2015 02:33 PM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Wow!!! lots packed into this chapter. Brian & Justin's time together so sweet They are so good together. Hurray for aunt & uncle for standing up for Brian--love people like that. I still think Brian will be racing True Blue, down the road. I have a sneaking feeling about chapters to come. Ha!
Author's Response: Hi, lindc! Hmmm...you may have something there.;) Only time will tell.;) I thought it was the right time for the boys to finally profess their love for each other. I think Brian has found a new family now.;)
Thank you for always reading and for the comments. I appreciate that so much. Give everyone my love. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2015 06:27 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
I love how Brian's uncle expressed his feelings for him. Eloquent, but simple. The boys exchanging "I love you"s was very sweet and right for the moment. Exciting conclusion, too. Let's see how the deal works out.
- Jackie Mag
Author's Response: Hello, dear friend! I'm happy you liked this chapter. Yes, I thought it was time that the boys admit their true feelings for each other. I thought it was especially appropriate for Justin to say it first, if only to reassure Brian that he IS worthy of being loved. We're slowly moving toward the home stretch (pardon the pun - ha!), but I still have quite a bit more to write yet. Thanks for all your support. I know I don't update as fast as I and the readers would like, but it is always uppermost in my mind, and it will be finished like all my other stories have been. Thanks for bearing with me until then. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2015 04:59 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
Damn this was a heavy chapter...but everything happening here is necessary for things to get somewhat back to normal. The boys declarations of loving each other was a very good start to the healing process.
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara - thank you for choosing to stay with me on this story, and for your feedback, my friend. Was beginning to feel a little lonely over here.;) I thought it was time that the boys express their feelings for each other, especially in light of Brian's turmoil and what his parents had said to him. There is still quite a bit to tell here before it's all finished. I will update just as fast as I can. Sigh...wish I could update daily like some authors can - or even weekly - but with RL it just isn't possible. It WILL get done, though, and for those who are sticking with me such as yourself, I truly appreciate the support. Thanks again. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2015 02:08 AM · On: The Many Definitions of Love
I am so happy that Brian's uncle verbalized what he and his wife felt for Brian. That's a big step. Can't wait to find out how Sarah will be helping Brian with his inheritance. Then there was Dale's horse and how he more or less bonded with Brian. Loved that. Justin and Brian admitting they loved each other was just what each needed.
Now we have Doug. I actually feel sorry for him. Will he be able to get his life on track? Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! You are always so supportive and so consistent with leaving feedback. That is such a motivation to me; thank you for that. I am happy you liked this chapter. I thought it was a good time for the boys to finally admit their feelings for each other, and Brian needed that reassurance from his aunt and uncle that he was someone to be loved and respected. I will be explaining Sarah's idea coming up about Brian's inheritance. Unfortunately for Doug, due to the seriousness of his crime, I'm afraid he's pretty much sealed his fate. But hopefully he will get some leniency at his hearing.
Thanks again for your thoughtfulness and your support; it is deeply appreciated. *Hugs* ~Kim
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