Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 10:37 PM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

I had forgotten about the Mikey incident. It was good Brian cleared that up.

It was also nice to see everyone in happy relationships. Gus is were he should be and things are looking up for Kayla as well.

Nice chapter.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Mika and I thank you for reading and for the comments.  Yes, this one is slowly wrapping up. But I know we will have a great deal to cover in the epilogue, including some new adventures for the boys' life together.;)  Hope you wil continue to enjoy it. I know we're past climax now (sorry for the pun - ha!), but there is still more excitement to come.  Thanks again for the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Mika


Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 12:37 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

Hello Kim! Another great chapter. I really enjoyed reading this story and kind of little bit sad that it is about to end. But still can't hide the excitement of the ending chapter specially if it will be after a year, getting curious what will be happening to their individual love life. And I am also hoping for new stories you and Mika might come up with. {{{Hugs}}}

Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend.  Mika and I appreciate that so much.  Well, I THINK the next chapter will be the last one.  We will have a lot to cover, so it will depend upon how much we can complete in that chapter without it getting too lengthy. But I'm hopeful we can get it wrapped up with one more part.  So glad that you are enjoying it. As for new stories, I always have plenty on the back burner, but not sure if Mika will want to collaborate on another one. I want to finish up at least one more of my own stories before I start a new one anyway.  Hopefully that won't take too long, though.  Thanks again for all the support!  It is very appreciated.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Mika

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:43 PM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

Big chapter - I really like the Tristan character. He's a real cutie. Looking forward to the ending! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag - Mika and I thank you for reading and for the comments.  I do enjoy coming up with original characters to interact with the main ones from the show; I think the challenge is in making them more 3-dimensional so readers are emotionally invested in them.  So I'm glad you like Tristan.:)  Thanks again for the feedback; we greatly appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:04 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

well - you did it again, my friend

I started this story because you wrote it - but thinking it wasn't really going to be my thing ... and then you caught me (as you do - lol)

love our favorite couple in this - very different - very sweet - and then (who would have thought it) Tristan and Gus became just as much the stars of the show

such a shame that we only have one more chapter - really would have loved to watch that one grow and develop

looking forward to seeing how you tie this one up

Charle



Author's Response:

Hi, Charle! Well, I'm glad you took a chance on this one.  It IS a different premise.  I DID tell Mika at the onset that I would not want an actual, physical relationship between Gus and Justin, or I just couldn't see anything developing afterward with Brian and Justin; too much of an "ew" factor.  But the idea of both Kinney 'men' falling for the same guy was too good to resist.;) 

We're going to try and wrap it up in the next part; I would really like to. Whether or not we can do that in one more installment remains to be seen, though, because we will have a lot to cover. But we'll see what happens. 

Thank you so much for deciding to read and for the comments, Charle!  Mika and I are very appreciative of the support.  And, BTW, hope that you will either work some more on your Christmas WIP or on a new story (hint, hint). I always love to read your stories.:)  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 10:56 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

I like Tristan and Gus.  What is it about the Kinney men, you have to practically hit them over the head to make them realize what's there?  Sweet, hot scene w/B & J, too.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Yeah, someone told me they were missing my smut (for a different story, actually), so I thought I'd throw a little bit in here.;)  Glad that you enjoyed it.  I'm glad, too, that Mika and I could finally get them back on track.  I think a rather long epilogue where we detail what is transpiring a year down the road is a good point to conclude it.  You know me, though; what I THINK may be an epilogue may turn out to be two more instead - ha!  We'll have to see, but our goal IS to conclude it in the next part.

Thanks very much for reading and for the comments!  Mika & I greatly appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: November 26, 2013 09:29 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

Epilogue?-  wahahah-  I am so enjoying this story but I guess you have tied up loose ends-  can't wait for the reveal-hope you post soon.

 

sandy



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy! Thank you for reading and for the comments. I suppose Mika and I could have stretched it out just a bit to detail more of Kayla and Tristan's relationship with River and Gus, but it feels right to move it forward in light of what we want to write in the last part (how is that for a tease?);)  But we are very glad you have been enjoying the story, and hopefully finishing this up - along with maybe one other story of my own - will allow me to start on a new one.;)  Thanks again for the kind words and for the support; we greatly appreciate it.  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: BrianNJustin (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 07:08 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

update soon!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 06:36 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

Hey Kim :) I can't believe there is only one more chapter left...I loved reading this and taking this journey with young group of friends and lovers.

I hope River takes the news about Kayla's true age well and that our two beautiful couples have managed to stay together.

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara! Thank you for reading and for the comments.  Yes, I think probably one more chapter to go.  But there will be quite a bit going on in the next part.;)  Mika and I are very glad you've enjoyed the journey with us. Thank you for the constant support you've given us - and for all the other writers you review.  I'm sure they appreciate it as well.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: zsadistwhore (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 05:45 AM · On: Sweet, Sweet Love

Here I am, super excited because Tristan and Gus are finally together and you have to go and spoil my fun by mentioning an epilogue. I'm not ready for this to end!



Author's Response:

Hi, Nikki! Well, I consider that a big compliment.  Eventually all stories must conclude (even mine - ha!).  Mika and I will do our best to wrap everything up into a nice package in the next chapter.  If it's any consolation, I think it will be a long one.;) Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend! We greatly appreciate the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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