Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Town Social
Ok, Brian, this is where the rubber meets the road. Come on...you can make the right decision here...lol
I think Aunt Sarah is gonna smooth the way, and if Brian doesn't f*&% it up, things could get very enjoyable...for them and for us...very soon!
oh - and please tell me that we are going to get a bird's eye view of Jared getting all he is due...in spades!
I can 't wait for this Brian - a little less suave...a little less mature - to experience real passion and yearn for more.
BTW - I think the little sub plot of acceptance is ingenious - neither Mom or Aunt Sarah batted an eyelash when they realized the draw between these two...love it!
great job - left me wanting more - much more! lol
Charle
Author's Response: Aww...you're so sweet, Charle! I should say something 'country-sounding' here like pshaw or much obliged, ma'am - LOL! I am really becoming fond of Brian's aunt; I think she's just what he needs to change into the man he could be while still maintaining his irascibility. And I think she might be just the calming influence on both boys coming up.;)
Thanks so much for reading and for the kind words, Charle; I appreciate that so much. I'll get this updated just as soon as I can. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 11:56 PM · On: Town Social
HEY THERE PROLIFIC GIRL! I AM THE DESIGNATED REVIEWER. AREN'T YOU IMPRESSED?? LINDC READ THIS NICE LONG CHAPTER AND THEN HAD TO GO TO SEVERAL MEETINGS. THINGS ARE CHANGING HERE-NEW OR ROOMS, RENOVATIONS,ETC. SO I GUESS THE SUITS WANT IMPUT INTO HOW THE TEAMS WANT THINGS SET UP. I AM TOO LOW ON THE TOTEM POLE FOR THAT. ha! AS USUAL YOUR STORIES ALL HAVE A BADASS, JARED BEING THE ONE IN THIS STORY. HE WILL GET HIS JUST REWARD SOON-KNOWING YOU. THE PEEPS ALL WANT ME TO SEND YOU THEIR LOVE. WE ARE ALL GOOD. I GUESS ALL THE STRESS AND SHIT THAT HAPPENED LAST YEAR HAS BEEN PENNED UP AND DISPOSED OF. "V" IS GOOD, POLISHED, GASSED UP AND HAPPY. SHE HAS A FEW MORE MILES ON HER AS I HAVE BEEN TOURING AROUND THIS BIG STATE. REALLY NICE, SUNNY AND BEAUTIFUL HERE. NO SNOW-YEA. LUV 2 U.
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetheart! I'm sure you're taking good care of your 'baby.' I'm so glad that you can all be together to support each other, and that everything seems to be (finally!) taking a more positive turn. I have good vibes about that in the coming year.
I could never adequately express what all of your support of my stories mean, Lee. I know how busy you are, so the fact that you take time to leave me your thoughts so consistently really makes me feel special, so I thank you all sincerely for that. I am definitely planning on going to the QAF con in Long Beach in June; if all of you are anywhere near there, I would love to finally meet at least some of you if that's possible (and maybe even take a ride in the famous "V.";) I will probably have a car rented, so I can travel if need be.
Take care of yourself and your baby.:) I'm sending my love to all of you, too.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 09:59 PM · On: Town Social
I don't think I took time to review your previous chapters. I'm so sorry Kim.
I have the worst scenario in my head right now for the next chapters. Jared is a little shit.
Thank you.
Author's Response: Hi, my friend! Thank you for reading and for the comments! And don't apologize; I'm just grateful that you take the time to read and review when you're able to.:) I'll try not to let your worst nightmares come true in the next few chapters. I think we're actually heading in the right direction (believe it or not). First we have to get these two stubborn boys back in each other's arms. I think Aunt Sarah is about to help with that.;) Thanks again for all the support you give me; I appreciate that more than you know.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 04:17 PM · On: Town Social
Dam Jared he has certainly put the fox in the hen house and caused a stir. Poor Justin he wants Brian so much but he also wants love and respect and sadly Brian is not quite there yet. I love Emmett and I hope he sees Jared,s scheme for what it is. Great fic Kim and fast moving chapter.
PS have you finished the twins story or is it still between chapters?
Author's Response: Hi, Chris! Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend. I wouldn't have normally updated this one again so soon, but this part was supposed to included in the previous chapter, and as usual, it just kept growing and growing until I had to break it up. Ugh! I actually wanted to get farther than I did, but I had to stop it somewhere so I could move onto my other two WIPs. So to answer your question about "Parent Trap,' no, it's definitely NOT done yet - I think my readers would kill me if I got to the point where they reconciled and then didn't let them consummate their relationship again.;) So it will definitely be updated. I have to update "My Heart's Desire" next, though, since it's been the longest since I've posted a chapter. I do apologize for how long it's been taking - my teaching job is really cutting into my time lately. But they will all be updated again very soon, I promise.
If it's any consolation, Jared will be dealt with shortly, and Brian will finally figure out how to express how he feels to his beautiful neighbor the RIGHT way this time! Thanks again for reading and for the comments, Chris. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 11:37 AM · On: Town Social
Ah, the chapter I've been waiting for : ) I wonder what Jared and Emmett's plan is though, not good I'm afraid. Hopefully Emmett will come to his scenses and realize he's been had.LOL, I really hope Jared gets what's coming to him. Great start to the town social and looking forward to the next part, Kim. : ) *~* Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: Hi, Janet! Thanks for the comments, my friend. It's kind of a mess here right now, isn't it? LOL! But don't worry, I'll get them fixed up soon and Jared will get what's coming to him. Emmett's a very smart boy - I don't think he will be duped for very long, even if he IS enamored with the arrogant, older brother. Thanks again for the comments and for reading; you know how much that means to me. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 11:31 AM · On: Town Social
OMG... where to start this review. So I got the email alert for FF, so I read it there, but on my phone, and I hate "writing" a review without an actual keyboard. So I knew I would need to leave a review when I got home. So here I am, clicking on MW and the first thing I see is that banner... wow! Be still my heart. Good lord, KP, I love that banner, so absolutely perfect and made me want to re-read the chapter with those exact images in my head... whew!
Ok, on to the review of the actual story. You've done it yet again, my friend, I loved this chapter and I think you captured everyone perfectly! I truly feel for Justin, but at the same time I feel for Brian too. We knew he let his other head do the talking, too much at times. I can see a number of things happening next, but I will be exceedingly curious as to where you go. Hopefully Emmett will prove himself a good friend and good observer that we know he is. And I hope you have something deliciously evil planned for Jared when everyone eventually finds out what he's been saying and they all confront him.
I know eventually everything will work out, but I so enjoy following the amazing journey's you layout for us to follow blindly and oh so willingly. I can't wait for more.
Cheers, Laura :) xoxo
Author's Response: Hi, Laura! "We knew he let his other head do the talking, too much at times." Love that line - ha! So true in Brian's case - open mouth, insert foot! But not to fear, I will get them all straightened out, and Jared will get his just reward for all his anger and duplicity. And I really liked the way the banner came out, too - so much better than the first one, I think.;) Thank you for the compliment - and thanks for reading and for the comments. I truly appreciate all the support that you give me, Laura. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:56 AM · On: Town Social
OHHHH !!! Goody goody. This brings back so many memories for me. Poor Em duped again. Poor Jus wants more than Brian can or won't give. Em and Brian together--ugh don't think I like them apples. This chapter was a nice long one--so good.
Author's Response: Hi, Kym! So great to hear from you again. Yeah, this one was not only long, it was supposed to be part of the previous chapter initially, but as usual I got carried away - ha! I actually wanted to write more in this part, but just had to stop eventually so I could move onto my other two WIPs, which have been a little neglected lately. I'm glad you enjoyed this chapter. I know it's not what everyone wanted to see, but I'm heading that way. Brian will soon figure out just how to express himself properly to Justin, and Sarah will be a big help in that regard, also.
Thank you again for reading and for the comments, Kym! I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:41 AM · On: Town Social
You really paint small town life well.Brian really likes Justin they just need to talk. Thier " date " was sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, Cheryll, for reading and for the comments.:) I think Brian's slowly becoming used to this almost 'other-wordly' experience of living out in the country; of course, Justin has helped him a lot to 'adjust' (wink, wink). I promise to get them patched up soon, and I think Brian's aunt will be a big help there to make that happen. I'll get this updated again very soon - thanks again, Cheryll, for taking the time to leave me feedback; I really appreciate that. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: luisa (Anonymous) · Date: January 15, 2013 10:07 AM · On: Town Social
Oh no, you can´t, tell Brian is not going to do that,he is not falling right? Great chapter, update soon please, and i'm looking for the nex chapter of the parents trap too.
Hugs.
Author's Response: Hi, Luisa! Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend. Don't worry - I'll get the boys back on track very shortly. Jared will NOT come out the winner here, and Em is very smart; I think he will figure it out sooner rather than later.
I'm glad you're enjoying "Parent Trap" as well. I do need to update "My Heart's Desire" first, but "Parent Trap" is definitely coming up. Thank you again for reading and for the feedback; I really appreciate that, Luisa. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 09:23 AM · On: Town Social
Ah, the tension builds. Brian sure didn't do a good job of holding on to Justin when he had him. Oh, well. Something tells me there's much more coming.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Hi, Sweetie! I know - this was actually the second part of the previous chapter. And I still didn't get where I wanted to go, but after a total of about 21,000 words between the two parts, I knew it wasn't going to happen in this part. I need to work on my other WIPs, so I reluctantly had to stop it there. Thank you so much for reading and for the comments, my friend. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 08:57 AM · On: Town Social
Wow how low can Jared stoop? I really hope that Sarah can talk some sense into Justin so that he will know Brian's true intentions.
Please update soon~ JP
Author's Response: Hi, Tamara - nothing like a boy scorned, huh? Don't worry, though; I'll bring the boys back to where they need to be soon. Jared will be taken care of before this is all over with. Thank you for reading that *humongous* chapter and for the feedback. *Hugs* ~Kim
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