I absolutely loved this!  I can totally picture both Gale and Randy behaving like this in real life.  Thanks for sharing this gem.

thank you!

MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE.... PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE WRITE MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS AMAZING STORY... I AM HOOKED AND I HAVE GOT MY BEST FRIEND HOOKED TOO.... WE NEED YOU TO CONTINUE SO VERY VERY MUCH

I love the domestic scenes between them, too. 

 

And of course, you've seen the effects of the *eh hem* other, scenes. :)

This story just has everything, and it's so well written, so emotionally honest and they're so in tune with each other, and it's just so good! 

 

Thanks so much for posting it!!!!!!!!!!

No words. Sorry. Will try again momentarily.

 

*Deep breath. I will provide real feedback. I will. *

 

I think it's amazing that you can have such in-depth personal scenes between them interwoven with more "everyday" scenes with others. That's how life is, but it's easier to write one kind of scene without complications of another. 

 

This story is TOO good. :)

********Incoherent, quick-breathing pile of nothingness***********

 

Um.

Their misunderstanding played out very realistically, not only because that's so often what derails people (misunderstanding rather than genuine disagreement) and in terms of the characters you've created. 

 

As for their reunion...

"Let me --" 

"Anything."

Ummmm. I thought I couldn't be any more enamored, but I guess I was wrong, wasn't I? ! :) 

This story is just so wonderful. One of my top three of any I've ever read.... I love that connection they have, whatever it is... 

And I feel so much for Gale in this -- his attraction, his desire, and his tenderness are just palpable. 

Once again, you also manage to give him this honesty and sincerity that is just the hottest thing in the world to me. And you give it to *Gale*. As if he needed to be any hotter! 

 

Your Randy is wonderful, too. I love how considerate he is and supportive...

First of all, I've already read this whole fic as it stands so far...then I posted something of my own and realized how much comments can help. So, I thought I should be fair and say OH MY GOD I LOVE THIS STORY! 

 

I love your characterization of how they interact with each other...I can imagine it so easily, and it sets a tone of something between them. Not just chemistry, something deeper. I deeper understanding of each other, instinctive, gut-level understanding of each other.

It's an awesome way to start the story because it gives something to build on, something that seems like it would be worth a risk, it would be intoxicating, as it would have to be to bring the two together. :)

WHATCANISAY !!! -It was mesmerising !! -Each 'n' every chapter drove right thru my heart body 'n' soul -You're amazing -!! -How did you do this -??? !!! -I loved reading every single line -Their chemistry 'n' "longing" for each other can only come by when 'Soulmates' meet -There's no other explanation for this kinda intenceness - An' I feel you gotta live many lives to find 'The One' who satiates you in every sence - i.e Your soulmate -Not everyone is so lucky - One goes thru one's entire life happily I guess -  yet - at times you do feel that -"That Somethin' " sometimes is still missin' 'n' you dunno what or why - I guess this is it -Till the time one doesn't find the other half of your soul -You just keep re-living births !!-AND here are these two -Who you see an' you know that this is what it must be like -feel like -God knows with these two where the fiction ends an' the real thing starts -Its like a never ending question or story -I hope you will be posting more an' that , this is not the end -I'll really look forward to more of this -Thanx for a wonderful soul read -Take care -Huggs !!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'ved loved reading your comments. This will indeed continue. I'm working on completing one of my wips...Private Dancer. And then I'll be starting on a cycle of fics. I stopped working this one after Gale's accident..it was kind of hard to think about. But since Gale is safe and sound... =) I'll definately be continuing it. Thank you so much for all of your support. =) And please be patient and stay tuned.

Liz

shit !!-Why d'he go 'n' tell Rebecca NOW !! -Is she that trustworthy ??!!- I hope she won't turn on him -I think for a while Gale should've kept it to hisself-without anyone knowin' 'bout them !!- But I'm sure you have the plot worked out -It is really interesting -

Damn ! - You've really got me hooked -So-so hot an' sexy - I can't wait to read the rest - I'm droolin' !!!- :o)))))  !!!!! -

This is the most sensational story. I couldn't get enough of it. I've waited till hubby is in bed and sneaked back to read the last 2 chapters. I don't understand why there's not more reviews on this.  I'll be reccing it on our "True Queer Love" sight. My only objection was Gale calling him "Rands". Beautifully written and so emotional and so addictive. Just how I would imagine them to be in real life with each other. They seem to have gotten on really well on set and their farewell speech was a joy to watch with them fooling around with each other.

Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for your responses. It means so much to know that are enjoying so much and that it falls in line with how you imagine they would be in real life. In a lot of ways, this is my most difficult story to write. Which was made harder by Gale's accident....But I plan to take up thread again soon. I'm trying to focus on The Spy Who Loved Me till it is done. I do appreciate the reccing though. I haven't made my way over to True Queer Love Yet. Maybe I should. =)

 Thanks,

Liz

OMG I'm speechless!!!

I am an avid Gale and Randy RPS reader and I've come to the conclusion that this is the best story of this kind I've read.  I am looking forward i reading  more of your other stories in the future.  Keep up the good work, you are a very talented writer.  Thank you!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much. I love RPS myself...and I'm glad I'm not the only one. =)

Liz

This is such a sexy story - thanks a bunch and please update soon!

This was so great but the have come so far please let them be able to travel the rest togethere.

I had begun to read this at some point and was very excited to see everything. Well I am all caught up now, and need a cold shower, plus I lovev their clossnes.

Oh dear, what a great story. please update soon...I want to know what happens when they are apart :-)) rose

yeey you put it back on i've looked for ages for this story

Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm glad you liked it.

Liz

i could swear i read this before, maybe under another name. it just seems familiar to me. whether i did or didn't doesn't matter to me i loved it anyway.

Author's Response:

Thank you. =) I'm pretty sure you've responded to this on on LJ. So that's probably where. Thank you. =)

Liz