Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2022 07:20 AM · On: Amends
I loved reading this...
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2015 05:29 AM · On: Amends
What a feel-good resolution for Hobbs and Justin (also Brian). Hobbs and Justin forgive themselves and each other.
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2014 09:49 PM · On: Amends
Wow, this was really great. It's very refreshing to see personal growth from all involved. Forgiveness is a powerful thing. Thank you for sharing. :) ~Mandi
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2013 01:12 PM · On: Amends
I must say I love unique plots like this one. It was a pleasure to read and I love that Gus, Justin and Brian’s only thought at seeing Hobbs were for each other’s safety not their own; that’s love. You handled Hobb’s realisation and regret for past mistakes beautifully. Thank you for sharing this.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you so very much!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:10 AM · On: Amends
I think you have what Hobbs was feeling the day of the prom down 100%. He was confused by his feelings towards Justin and, although he's not gay (or bi), the thoughts scared him. Good job.
- Jackie
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Jackie! I'm glad you liked it.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 02:22 AM · On: Amends
Ok I have to admit that when I found out that this story is about Hobbs I thought of not going through with it, but I decided to go on, and I am glad I did. This is a very nice story, though I have to say that I doubt anyone can be so forgiving after the ordeal that Justin and Brian went through even if it was over 10 years (13 here).
I really enjoyed this story, well done!
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Blue!
I am glad you stuck with the story despite your misgivings and enjoyed it in the end. When I wrote this I was compelled to write a story of redemption. So, you are right, it's not very realistic all things considered. It did make me feel good to come up with something so hopeful for all the characters involved.
Thanks again!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: NMS (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2012 08:32 AM · On: Amends
I loved the story, Vin. Bitter-sweet and very well written. Totally supports my belief that we come to understand something important about ourselves and regret our mistakes and sins when we ourselves become parents- just like Chris has. Thanks for this profound story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, NMS! I really appreciate you reading and reviewing this story. :)
Hugs,
Vin
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2012 01:37 AM · On: Amends
This was beautiful, though I won't lie, I always believed Chris, in a messed up way, loved Justin. It's really and truly a beautiful piece.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and reviewing this story! It means a lot to me.
As for Chris Hobbs, I am in agreement that the way he's portrayed on the original show alludes to him being a closet case. I just had this idea for a one-shot where Chris is just a severely confused/scared straight guy who misinterprets his attraction for Justin as a person for something sexual, gets scared and acts on it out of fear. The plot bunny steered me towards a story of redemption, so that's what I tried to write and I am glad I succeeded (at least based on my readers' opinions).
In any case, I am very happy that you enjoyed the story and thought it beautiful, despite seeing Chris's motivations from a different perspective.
Thank you again for a lovely review.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:10 AM · On: Amends
there are so many love about them,it is a genius job.i love it ! there are not many directly wrote BJG,but through Chris,we could seen every gesture was showing the love between them!this is kind of my most loved ending of the story especially seven years after the show 513.
the sample life little story show us their endless pure love and happiness.it seems like real like they lived around us,they are among us,belong us foever!
love them and you!thank you give me a wonderful time this morning!
Author's Response: Oh, thank you Ivy for a lovely, lovely review. I am so very happy that you enjoyed it. I am a great fan of "slice-of-life" stories with the boys myself, so I am glad I was able to write a story like that.
Thank you for reading & reviewing.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: neetaskita (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 02:58 AM · On: Amends
Thank you for this story. Really enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you very much for both reading and reviewing!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: twoells (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Amends
I was genuinely suprised by this ! at first I thought the 'observer' was Ethan, then changed my mind and thought it was Justin's dad ... but you took me completely by suprise when i finally twigged it was Chris Hobbs ! Good writing :-)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and reviewing, twoells!
I am very happy you enjoyed the story and glad the beginning created a bit of confusion/speculation among a couple of my readers. It's what I was going for originally, but I thought I ruined it when I created the banner. I am pretty new to photo-editing software and I've been going a bit hog-wild with my banners as I've been learning the process. LOL!
I guess I didn't ruin it as much as I thought I did.
Thanks again!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2012 02:33 AM · On: Amends
I listened to this yesterday and then read over it again this morning. I had no idea it was Hobbs initially. I thought for a while it was Ethan. I was still trying to think about stories in which Chris Hobbs apologized and the list was small.
I loved that Chris was able to witness the two of them together and mature enough to finally see their loving relationship. His revelations to himself about why he had attacked Justin had me reviewing the story again. The part about his jealousy made sense:
There was something about Taylor that has always fascinated him, ever since they were kids. His perpetual happiness, his positive attitude, his intelligence, his ease with everyone around him, his artistic talent, his stubbornness, his resilience, his beauty, his bravery...
I could understand that and with seeing how much Justin was loved by Brian at the prom. But I still prefer my feeling and assessment about Hobbs -- that he was a closet homosexual and jealous that Justin wasn't afraid to say that he was gay. Justin represented everything he wanted to be or possible have and couldn't. This is always debatable, so I want dwell on it any further.
Still, I love this story. Justin didn't go into a panic attack, but instead, made sure Gus was safe. The response of Brian blazing through the parking garage like Rage was exciting.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Hello, dear no sleep!
And thank you for another wonderful comment. I am ever so pleased that you liked the story, especially the fact that you thought my explanation for Chris' jealousy was plausible.
As for Chris Hobbs...truthfully, I normally agree with the majority of people that think his character was a closet case and bashed Justin because he couldn't deal with his own sexuality (or homosexuality). But for some reason when writing this story, I kept thinking that there are plenty of homophobes out there (which is a very sad thing indeed) who are NOT closet cases - they are just plain confused, afraid, misguided, uneducated people. There are also plenty of straight homophobes that are just plain assholes. So, the plot bunny sort of steered me in the direction of a straight Chris Hobbs who one of those scared and confused individuals. Plus, I wanted the story to be about redemption and second chances, I guess, so it seemed to fit.
At the end of it all, this is just a one-shot. If I ever write anything featuring Chris Hobbs again, I can pretty much guarantee that it'll be a ClosetCase!Hobbs, because that's the impression I got from watching the show.
Anyway... again, thank you so much for an always thoughtful review.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 08:37 PM · On: Amends
Hi, Vin! Yes, it's really me! And yes, I am home from the hospital! I got home yesterday night. I am very weak still and have to carry around a small bag that has an IV antibiotic that is constantly being pumped into my system 24/7 for the next 10 days - long story but it at least enabled me to come home. The pain is much better, too. I saw your story and had to read it, though. Wonderful as always, my friend. I'm going to try and work on my own stories while I'm resting - not sure how fast it will be but I will be doing my best. I am so thankful just to be back home. I will never take for granted just being able to get up from bed, etc., whenever I want to. I felt like a prisoner for the past five days in that hospital.
Just wanted to let you know how much I enjoyed this story and the way that you conveyed the love between Brian, Justin, and their son. *Hugs* Kim
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you are home and feeling better. I can't say that enough. Hospitals can be very inhospitable places after a while, I know. Thank God for the wonders of technology where you can have 24 hour antibiotic IV pump in the comfort of your home. I hope (and pray) for your speedy recovery!
Thank you so, so much for reading my story and for writing a lovely review. It means a lot to me, it truly does. Although I feel kind of bad that you read it while sick. Please take it easy, dear Kim. I applaud you for wanting to write and update your stories during your recovery, just make sure you take lots and lots of rest and make YOURSELF a priority.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: feet526@aol.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2012 12:11 PM · On: Amends
very interesting take on the boys lives...really, really enjoyed! and I was surprised about the third party. great job. Thank you............
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comment. I am truly happy you liked the story.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2012 12:09 PM · On: Amends
it's great ur writting it great kim
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Kim!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: boriqua522 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Amends
wow, this was really good. i loved that gus wanted to protect justin. great one shot, you had me hooked till the end.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am so, so glad you enjoyed it.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2012 09:31 AM · On: Amends
nice ending for all the horror of the past. loved it-but you are a wonderful writer.:)
Author's Response: Thank you so much, Linda! What a lovely compliment. It means a lot to me that you enjoy my writing.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 09:29 AM · On: Amends
amazing! - loved it
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you, Charle!
I am incredibly happy this story worked.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Amends
Grrrr, I can't you believe you made Chris Hobbs seem human...well I still hate Ethan! What a wonderful story. I especially enjoyed the part about wildebeests masquerading as children.
Lori
Author's Response: Aw, thank you so very much, Lori! I am a Chris Hobbs-hater myself, usually. But this plot bunny decided to take over my brain until this story was told. Oh, well, what can you do. I am very glad you liked it.
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2012 07:32 AM · On: Amends
:)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Cheers,
Vin
Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2012 07:06 AM · On: Amends
Fantastic story. I really liked it
Author's Response: Thank you so very much, Jay!
Cheers,
Vin
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