I love this chapter..the constant thrill was great. Hope there cover won't blow up any time soon ..I am enjoying the discoveries both are making. Thanks for writing and sharing!

Author's Response:

Hi, Kim - my favorite name, BTW - ha!  Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback, my friend, and don't worry - I want to play with the boys' minds just a bit longer and let the girls discover more about their other father and the lives they lead.  I also want to get Debbie, Jennifer, and Brian's friends involved as well.  There's going to be a lot of little discrepancies here and there that will cause Brian and Justin to wonder what's going on.  And I still have to torment the 'interloper!' I think Katie's just the girl to take care of that, too - LOL!  Thanks again for taking the time to leave me your thoughts, Kim - that means a lot to me.:)~Kimberly

And so it begins...Somehow I think Katie is going to be waaaaaay harder on Alex than Kaylee ever was! I love how you had the boys dealing with Winters, very IC! Can't wait to see when Brian picks up his "daughter"!

Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend!  Yes, Brian and Kaylee's reunion will definitely be in the next chapter, and I envision Brian being both stern as well as proud in a way of what his daughter did to Sandra to defend herself.  I'm going to have a lot of fun writing about how the girls have to adjust to a new environment and how their skills and talents don't quite mesh with their new reality.:)  This should be heading into the more interesting parts now; so glad you'll be following it!  Thanks as always for your support, my friend; I'll get this updated just as soon as I can.:)

I'M SORRY IT'S TAKEN SO LONG TO REVIEW--HAVE BEEN SUPER BUSY.  I HAVE TWO NEW SURGICAL RESIDENTS UNDER MY WING.  TEACHING IS NOT JUST TEACHING--AS I GUESS YOU KNOW.  TOO MUCH PAPERWORK AFTER EACH SHIFT.  I HAVE BEEN HARPED ON BY YOU KNOW WHO--HAVE YOU REVIEWED, HOW COME, YOU'LL UPSET KIMBERLY--SO HERE I AM BEING A GOOD BOY REVIEWING. GEESH, SHE CAN BE A YOU  KNOW WHAT HA!HA!  JUST KIDDING.  THIS STORY IS VERY WELL WRITTEN.  I CONCUR WITH LINDC AS I LIKE LONG CHAPTERS BUT HATE THESE CLIFF HANGERS.  HAD DINNER WITH LEE AFTER ROUNDS.  HE IS DOING WELL.  I TOLD HIM HE NEEDS TO BE OFF TIL AFTER CHRISTMAS.  WE'LL SEE.  WILL TRY TO GET A LITTLE SLEEP, AS I AM ON AGAIN IN FIVE HOURS.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  I feel flattered that you fit my story in between all that work and teaching!  I don't suppose the surgical residents need any reading material to pass the time?  LOL!  (I know, WHAT time???).  I certainly know about 'paperwork' - seems like all I do lately is grade papers!!  I still think I need to get a commission together for lindc due to all the readers she's brought my way - I really appreciate that as you both know!  I'm so glad about Lee's recuperation - that is so great!  Not sure he's going to be happy about not working until after Christmas, though, but that will give him more time to read my stories.:)

Thanks as always for taking time out of your very busy schedule to fit my stories in and to review.:)  You guys are all great!  Hope you get a little more rest!:)  Take care.

Kimberly

YOU WOULD BE VERY PROUD OF MY TYPING SKILLS NOW. MY CAST IS OFF AND MY OVER-ALL THERAPY IS ONLY ONCE A WEEK NOW.  MY PEEPS TAKE ME OUT ONCE A WEEK WHEN THEY ARE OFF.  DON'T KNOW WHAT I WOULD DO WITHOUT THEM.  I MAY BE ABLE TO GO BACK TO WORK PART-TIME AFTER THANKSGIVING IF MY DR. GIVES ME THE OK.  HOW GREAT IS THAT???  I DON'T THINK ANYONE KNOWS HOW GRATEFUL I AM TO STILL BE HERE AND CAN GO BACK TO THE JOB AND PEOPLE I LOVE.  SORRY I GOT OFF TRACK.  THIS STORY IS GOOD GOOD GOOD!!!.  CAN'T WAIT TIL THE GUYS FIGURE OUT THEY HAVE THE WRONG KIDS,  THIS IS GOING TO BE SO MUCH FUN.  READ YOUR ANSWER TO ANOTHER REVIEWER ABOUT MY STORY UP NEXT.  WILL BE WAITING PATIENTLY.  LOVE 2 U.

Author's Response:

Hi, Lee!  That's wonderful news about your recuperation!  I'm thrilled to hear that!:)  I'm a little selfish, though, too, because while you're recovering I've had more of your attention - LOL!  You have come so far since your accident - you should be very proud of your progress.  I think God has great things in mind for you.:) 

I'm happy you like the way the story's progressing - I agree; we're finally getting into more of the 'meat' of the story now!  I'm looking forward to writing about Kaylee and Brian's reunion, as well as how the girls experience some difficulties in getting used to their new surroundings while not giving away, at least initially, what's really going on.  Of course, I'm sure everyone is keen on seeing the two guys meet again as I am.  But you know me - I have to lead up to that slowly just so I can torture everyone - ha! 

And yes, I HAVE started on your favorite, but it's a little slow going right now.  I want to try and get the rather contentious town meeting written correctly, so for some reason that's slowing me down a little.  That and having quarterly grades due next week for my 21 students - EXTREMELY time-consuming!!  But rest assured I will keep plugging along on the chapter until I get it done and posted! 

Thanks as always for your comments, my friend.  I'm sending a *big* hug your way.:)  Tell lindc, Brian, and the rest of the 'peeps' that I said hello.:) 

Wow another wonderful chapter so much to look at. At last the girls are going to meet their other fathers. The meeting between Katie and Justin was so beautiful and i assume the meeting with Brian and kaylee will be the same. Loved the neves the girls had but were so eager to meet their father. I do hope that Justin realises Alex wants so much more and he cannot give it to him because he loves Brian. I look forward to the next chapter xo Hugs Chris

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  Thanks for reading and for your lovely comments.:)  I think we all know whose heart Justin belongs to!  But that's not to say I won't have a lot of fun along the way getting them there!  I'll get another update with Kaylee and Brian's reunion up soon.  Thanks again for taking the time to read and review.:)  *Hugs* back to you.:)

This was so great.   Even the camp supervisor is in on it.   I have been waiting on the switch forever.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Latoya!  I'm so glad to know you're following the story and enjoying it.;)  In the next chapter I have to write, Brian and Kaylee will definitely be reunited, and the chapter will involve the girls settling in with their other father and getting to know them better.  Of course, they will also be conniving secretly with each other, as well as some of the boys' friends and family, to draw them closer together.  And there's that pesky boyfriend they still need to get rid of - LOL!  Thanks so much for the comments - I really appreciate that!:)

I keep getting Kaylee and Katie mixed up and which one belongs to whom. but I guess that's perfect for this story. LOL.

I loved the coniving part of the story in the first movie of this and this chapter does not disappoint in that aspect as well. Sandra deserved it!

I like Winters. The twins seem to pick uo allies along the way.

I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Thanks for leaving me your comments.:)  Yes, I know the feeling about getting them mixed up; I've had to resort to a 'cheat sheet' to make sure I'm following them correctly - LOL!  As you may have noticed, Katie finally gets to meet Justin again in the next chapter, and I'm *this close* to Kaylee meeting Brian again.  It will definitely be in the next chapter.  And I have a specific preference as to whether Brian finds out about the two first or Justin does, but I'll leave that for you to find out later - don't want to spoil it for you.:) 

Thanks again for reading and for your comments - that means so much to me and is very motivating.:)

~Kimberly

Can't sleep, so am practicing and reading and reviewing.  Have read the Christmas story==very emotional and happy at the same time.  Just what the Dr. ordered.  I can lose myself in your stories for ever long as they last.  Don't have to think or worry about anything for that amount  of time.. This story is typical of some camp scenerios.  Witnessed some pretty mean things at camp when i was younger.  There are a lot of Sandras out there and boys too.  The next few chapters  will be interesting, to say the least.  Went out to dinner with the peeps.  I had a good time, ate too much tho.  My appetite has returned with a vengence.  Will have to work out i fear when i am able. Keep up your good writing.  I'm off to read Color me green-looks like another good one.  love 2 you!

Author's Response:

Hi, Dear Lee.  I'm always so delighted to hear from you!  I hope you like "Color Me Green."  I'm assuming you already read the first story with it ("It's Only Polite to Share"), but if not they can really stand alone from each other.  Glad to hear you had a good time at dinner.  At least I can take advantage of your convalescence to get these wonderful reviews!  Just got back from seeing Randy in "Habit of Art."  Play was okay - not nearly as enjoyable to me as "Tommy" - but at least I got my poster autographed AND a photo with him so I'm very happy with the outcome!  I hope you continue to recover quickly from your injuries.  I'm sure eventually you'll be as good as new!  I'm working on the next part of "Paper Hearts Killer."  I hope to have that posted in the next couple of days.  Thanks again for all your kind words.  I'm sending you a big *hug* your way.:)

* makes happydance * didn't expect an update this weekend, because you've been to Randy.

Lovely just lovely, thanks, can't wait till the next chaper.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Ha, ha!  I know - that does put your mind on other things, doesn't it?  LOL!  Actually, I had this written before I left but was waiting for a friend of mine to look it over for boo-boos.  So glad you liked it, my friend!  I'll get this updated just as soon as I can - *hugs* back to you.:)

Getting purposely expelled from camp is brilliant! Hayley Mills should've thought of it! :) And it had the added bonus of seeing that little bitch get what was coming to her!

I can't wait to see the girls "see how the other half lives".

Author's Response:

Hi, Megan Rose!  Thanks so much as always for you taking the time to comment - it is greatly appreciated.  Yes, I'm anxious to get them switched out and get on with the story involving the boys.  I may actually write the next part of this before moving onto my next story, in fact.  Thanks so much for all your support in reviewing - you're so great about doing that and I really am grateful.:)  *Hugs* to you, my friend.:)

Loved the update ...i can't stand that mean girl. I am sure katie will get back at her. Thanks for sharing this story and please update soon.

Author's Response:

Hi, Kim (love the name - we both have good taste, or at least our mothers do...LOL!)....Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback!  So glad you like it.:)  Don't worry, BTW, I have a really good idea to put Sandra in her place.  Of course, that might not sit too well with her, though, but I have a feeling what happens afterward might wind up being a good thing for the girls.  I'm hoping to get them switched with their dads soon, perhaps in the next chapter.  But as usual it will depend upon how wordy I get.:)  Thanks again for leaving your comments - they are very much appreciated.:)~Kimberly

hope you are feeling lots and lots better now.  i knew your ever faithful would respond.  all they needed was a little nudge.  i'm a good nudger ha!ha!  lee loved it .  he is having a therapy session now.  he still gets cramps in his fingers--so i told him typing would help him--so i think he may review later.  glad this little set back and depression has lifted.  you go girl.  just remember we, your peeps, love you.  lol and big hugs!!

Author's Response:

Hi, Dear Friend.:)  Glad to hear that Lee enjoyed the latest chapter, also.  And thanks for the nudges - I noticed you've got Brian trained very well now - ha!  I'm sure his words were quite sincere though, and very much appreciated, as is your ongoing encouragement.  There are so many new stories over here right now and the banners are so beautiful!  I'm jealous of them!  They put the ones I make on Publisher to shame....I'll have to find someone to make me a pretty banner to go with my next story - whenever I get one of my OTHER ones done - LOL!  I'm feeling somewhat more cheerful today - still a little unsure of myself, though, I guess, but I'll keep plugging along.  I've started on Paper Hearts Killer's next chapter, but it will be a few days.  I still have a ballgame to go to.:)  Thanks again for all your kindness, lindc - I hope someday I can meet you and the peeps!  Maybe you'll go see Randy in the Berkshires next year again.  If so, we'll have to coordinate our trip for the same time!  *Big* hug back to you and the Peeps!

This is my favorite of your stories right now.

I like that it was Jennifer who initiated the whole plan of getting thr boys back together.

The girls have a little problem with that bully. It looks like Katie is like her father Brian, in being protective.

I glad Justin did not quickly agree to the proposal. I would think he would be skittish with not only having to think about Kaylee but his last marriage as well.

Now I can't wait to see what you are going to do with Michael and Brian.

Anxiously awaitng the next update!

Author's Response:

Thank you as always for reading and commenting, dear friend; that means so much to me!  Yes, I can tell you that Katie is not done taking care of "King Kong" - ha!  She certainly takes after her father in that regard (Brian as well as a touch of Justin, too - after all, he's not exactly a pussycat when it comes to defending those issues and people that he's passionate about, either).  I am also looking forward to having the two boys meeting up again.  But first I have to get the two girls switched and have the boys eventually realize what's going on.  I have some definite ideas on how to do that, so I can foresee this one taking a while to play out in its entirety.  My personal favorite part is going to be the cat and mouse game that will no doubt ensue once they see each other again, as well as what the girls wind up doing to help nudge them along...!

I'm honored that you are enjoying this story and that it's your favorite, my friend.  Thank you for all the reviews you've steadfastly given me over the last several months.  I appreciate that more than you will ever know.:)

hey Predec2 - just wanted to make sure that you didn't think I was being critical with my comments - I know how much work you must put in to each chapter - and what it takes to get a new chapter completed and posted - so please know that I more than understand how RL priorities cause unavoidable wait time for your anxious fans...like me

your stories are wonderful - and worth the wait - and talent like yours should always be encouraged

love your writing - love your heart

loving life,

Charle

Author's Response:

No, Charle, I didn't think that at all - I really appreciate all the support you've given me!  Thank you for your kind words of encouragement - this site has been very kind to me and I really am grateful to everyone who's welcomed me over here.  Guess I'll just have to learn how to grow a thicker skin, won't I?   I see these stories as my 'babies,' though, and it hurts sometimes is all.  Thank you for caring, my friend - you're very kind. :)

I was just going to bed (it's 1am), but I read the comment of that stupid reviewer.

 

Don't you ever stop writing. Promise me ! You and your stories are wonderful !!!

 

 

And now I'm going to bed ... pfff it's really late * big hug *

Author's Response:

Are you trying to make me cry, Marny?  (In a good way, at least...).  Thank you, dear friend, that is very soothing to my soul.:)  You're so loyal about reviewing and that means more than you know.:)  Don't worry - I would never stop writing a WIP anyway and I still have four of those to finish.  Maybe by the time I get done with them, I will be excited about a new story and I will be ready to write another one.  Thank you for taking the time to leave me encouragement.  I'm sending you a big hug, too.:)

I like to kept it real, and there alway the other story with the same name that make more sense

Author's Response:

I respect your opinion, but it would be nice from time to time to hear good things, too....  Apparently none of mine are your cup of tea, however.  Thank you for giving it a chance, anyway.

trolling the site and came upon this gem.  love this story so much.  sandra will get her just desserts brian's daughter will see to it.  little girls can be as mean as bigger girls.  i remember my camp days vividly. where are you taking us next-i didn't check your sequence.  finally got a day off after 4 in a row.  things have slowed down some here.  got a phone call from san fran, they want me to fly out (on them) for a second interview!!  i thought bb would hear something before me he is the mensa guy.  we'll see what exactly they want.  going to see lee, he is doing so well.  being young and in good health before this happend to him is standing him in good stead.

Author's Response:

Thank you, dear friend, for your encouragement.  Ironic you would use the word 'trolling,' after the last review I just received.  It's ones like that that make me think seriously about simply finishing up the WIPs I have going right now and just forgetting any more.:( 

I'm very happy about your opportunity for a second interview - congratulations! They would be so lucky to have you there as an employee, along with Brian.  Hopes he also gets that opportunity. I imagine San Francisco would be a wonderful place to live, although I know the cost of living is quite high.  Say hello to both him and Lee for me.  Next up is "Paper Heart's Killer."  Hopefully the reviews for that one will be most positive.  Thanks again for all your support.:)

* waves * still reading and still loving it.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Aw....thanks, Marny!  Glad to know you're still with me.:)  I promise to get this updated just as soon as possible - I am now on my way to a doubleheader with the boys and Gus in "Paper Hearts Killer."  Thanks as always for your support - a big *hug* back to you, too, my friend!:)

"listened" Even if I could not spell it, I know how to use spell check.

New glasses Monday!!!

And since I'm here again:

"As he opened it, he noticed immediately that the room lights were dimmed considerably; the main light in the room was now coming from several pillar candles flickering in every corner of the living area." 

Heck, I would marry Alex. Of course, if it were Brian, Justin would not have cared if the man threw him a ring over a cheeseburger.

Author's Response:

Hi, friend - you're so faithful about reading and reviewing my stories - I really appreciate that!:)  I'm glad you gave this one a chance; it should be quite a bit different than the movies.  Yeah...I would have loved that sort of romantic treatment from a beau, too, and you know how Justin likes to be romanced.  BUT - I also think he' s a little more 'street savvy' when it comes to those sorts of endeavors now post 'Ian,' and you'll notice Alex said nothing about Justin's number one priority - his daughter.  So....I don't see Alex going away anytime soon (have to antagonize Brian, don't I? ha!), but I'm not sure he's going to get what he wants just yet, either....hmmm....thanks again for taking the time to leave your thoughts after that humongous chapter!  I'll get this updated just as soon as I can...I am now on to the "Paper Hearts Killer" next.:P)

happy for you to go to d.c.  we're not going to go anywhere any time soon.  chaos abounds here.  so busy not enough staff.  i guess it happens everywhere.  now it's hitting us.  you will have to fill me in on all the news.  i read about the play.  sounds like it's up our boys alley. back to work. more doubles to do. lol

Author's Response:

Hope you're able to get some rest soon, my friend!  Don't know how you stay on your feet like that for so long!:)  I'll make sure to let you know how the play goes - my friend's having trouble finding a decent fare from Hartfort CT to DC for under $200 - I had to settle for around $273 from Ohio - had to grab it while I could!  Talk to you later.:)  Take care - say hi to Lee and Brian for me.:)

say no say no. omg!!  this was predictable, but hopefully he will say no.  but, i guess if we are following the other story it will be true til the scamps get after them.  good chapter.  went to read to lee, but he is sleeping.  has to have an operation on his wrist with pins etc.  it's not healing right.  his leg is doing fine they will have him up in a couple of days to sit in a chair.  i miss my peeps they are all over the hospital with different people.  i see them but it's not the same. bb feels the same way. lee is the  glue that holds us together.  don't when or if he will be back with us.  so sad. just glad he is strong and doing well.  off to get some rest.  worked two doubles.  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend.:)  I was so touched yesterday when Lee left a review for me on "My Heart's Desire," because I can just imagine how hard that must have been for him physically.  That review meant so much to me.:)  I'm sorry to hear all the 'peeps' are split up right now, but I'll keep my fingers crossed that it's just a temporary thing.  As far as Justin and his would-be suitor goes, you might just be surprised by his response (hint, hint...).  Let's just say the old fella's not going away - at least for now - but the story may not follow canon exactly, either....Don't worry, though, I have a lot of tormenting up my sleeves involving a LOT of people yet - ha!  Thanks so much for the review you left, even though I'm sure you're exhausted - I don't know how you do it.  But if I ever wind up in a hospital, I want to go to yours! 

BTW - I'm definitely going to see Randy again; got tickets to see "A Habit of Art" in Washington, D.C. on Saturday, Oct. 1 - 4th row tickets so I'm excited!  I am now officially obsessed because I'm just going up for that weekend - how crazy is that???  But I talked another 'crazy' friend into doing it, too!  I hope one day we can meet at one of his plays - if only I had thought about that back in July! (sigh...).  Let's shoot for next year in the Berkshires, okay?  But I'm ALSO planning on going to Germany if they can pull the convention off....I'm keeping my fingers crossed on that; talk to you later, my dear.:)  Tell Lee I'll be thinking about him and tell Brian I said hello, too.:)

" Perhaps it was because there wasn't a lot of anticipation that emerged from the idea of being alone for a week with Alex – it would be nice, predictable, and comfortable.  Sort of like an old, well-worn shoe, he thought dryly.  Was he expecting too much, though?  After the fire and passion he and Brian had shared, would any other subsequent relationship ever compare?"

I love my two boys together but after what Brian pulled, that old shoe should look appealing. (But don't mind me, I'm old. I prefer comfortable.) Brian is going to have to do some major groveling!

So the bully's name is Sandra. It's unusual to see that. It has not a popular name in the past few decades. 

Author's Response:

LOL!  You're right about the bully's name - I guess I'M dating myself, too!  After a while, though, I guess I get tired of all the 'Nicoles,' 'Tiffanys,' "Brittanys,' etc., etc. in stories...(no offense intended to any readers with those names, BTW....!)  I suppose I was looking for a little different name - the girl was probably named after her mother, then - ha! 

Alex would be a 'safe' choice for Justin and they may be compatible, but I think the poor man's still suffering from 'first-love' syndrome.  I think while he is still hurting even now after what Brian did, he still can't erase his feelings for him because of how deep they run.  I think he will maybe be able to convince himself that it's all for the best and maybe he'll even seriously consider what Alex wants, but he also his daughter to think about and Alex, while he tolerates her, doesn't exactly come across as the ideal 'stepfather.'  Thanks again for reading this - I'm very glad you're enjoying it and gave it a chance.:)

"Too many years of seeing Brian fucking other men, at home, at Babylon, at Kinnetik, at Woody’s, the diner; hell, everywhere, had culminated in the inability for him to forgive and forget this time.  At that moment, he knew he had only been kidding himself that Brian would ever commit to him totally."

I was so mad. I could not believe Brian would do that, and then bring up Ethan? He practically pushed Justin into Ethan'a arms.

I could not believe that Jennifer could forgive Brian for this and want them back together. She might as well take Craig back.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the thoughtful comments!:)  Yeah, "Ian" I think will always remain a painful part of both theirs lives...as far as Jennifer, I think you've read enough of the additional chapters by now to know that she's going to wind up being in their corner shortly....thanks so much for reading.:)

really getting into this story.  sooo cute.i thnk that mean camper is about to get her cummupance.  boys are sleeping so am reading to myself. can't seem to shut myself down.,  i did read roughing it to them--they loved it being males.  was good, so had to put more enthusiasm into my reading as i get somewhat giddy when i'm tired.  we may be working different hours in the near future, as they rotate us 39154every six months or so.  we'll see.  now off to try to get some z's  lol

Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend - thanks for taking the time to comment.  I think you're right - Katie comes across as small but feisty, sort of like someone ELSE we know....!  And I don't think she's going to be afraid of going after Sandra at all....Glad the guys liked "Roughing it."  If you haven't read it to them, they might also like "Arms Open Wide" with the scavenger hunt clues and the sequel to it, "Payback."  I'm pretty sure you've already read those if I recall properly.:)  Hope you'll able to get some much-needed rest.....Take care.:)

even if it's a long chapter I hate to see it stop :-))

Author's Response:

Hi, Rose...:)  Thanks for reading!  Hopefully the chapter made sense - by the time I got done with it and my computer konked out on me for a while, it was well after midnight and I'm not sure WHAT I had written - LOL!  I'm glad you liked it.  The story should be starting to heat up a lot more now that the girls are in cahoots together.  Look out, Dads!  Thanks for taking the time to leave your comments.:)

 

Great chapter. Hihi what a way to meet eachother.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny, my friend!  *hug* back to you!  Well, at least they'll both look alike now, at least with the mud - LOL!  Something tells me one of the girls is about to get a haircut, too....!  Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, my friend.:)  I'm very appreciative.:P)

i was supposed to ask from bb if paper hearts was next.  so i came on here to ask for him and read your answer to our review and told him paper hearts was next.  he is very happy.  yes i heard him sing on snippet on you tube 14 seconds.  what a drag.  he will be so much better than that stuff he did at joe's pub that was a little wierd-supposed to be funny i think but sort of left me a little cold.  tommy will be awesome.  i hope there is a huge crowd.  his youtube travel to israel was awesome, although i like him clean shaven better than scruffy. lol

Author's Response:

Tell Brian I'm glad he's looking forward to it - I've just started on it, so it may take me a couple of days - I'm starting at the children's hospital with Gus and then will be moving onto the police station from there so our boys can get to know each other better (wink, wink).  And I agree - I like Randy clean shaven, too, although I'd take him any way I could get him - ha!  I just hope we get a chance to actually see him up close after the show - would love to get a good, candid photo of him.  Surely they will allow photos AFTER the show's over for the night if we get a chance to take a picture!  Can't wait to see the reviews for it!  I'll be leaving next Thursday but will have my netbook with me so I can keep writing!  We'll have to compare notes afterward! LOL! 

After I read the first couple chapters I had to the see the movie, the Hayley Mills version. That took me back.

Hope that Kaylee doesn't have to cut her hair; imagine Brian's reaction to her long beautiful hair, sunshiny long beautiful locks. How about wigs(wink)???. I am just so into this story.

Loving it completely.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know you're enjoying the story!  I was feeling a little insecure about it since there hadn't been many reviews for it, so your kind comments really perked me up.:) I appreciate that very much!  I look at some of these other writers and wonder if I can compare sometimes - they're so talented!  The Hayley Mills version, BTW, is my favorite, also.:)  I'm afraid a wig probably wouldn't work, since she doesn't exactly have a lot of wig shops around the camp - LOL!  But I think you're right - actually it will be JUSTIN who will have the heart attack, because Kaylee's the one right now with the long, wavy hair (don't fret - I constantly have to go back and check to make sure I have their characteristics right, too - LOL!).  At least Justin probably won't queen out about the hair like Brian would, but it will be interesting to see his reaction along with how the girls are different in other ways, but that's part of the fun of it, I think.  That and bringing these guys back together where they belong!  Thanks again for the feedback - I am very grateful; that is the main motivation why I write them (that and the mere fact that I LOVE these characters!).:)  I promise to get this updated just as soon as I can.

great story i can not wait to read the next chapter i enjoy reading this wonderful job writting this story

Author's Response:

Thank you very much, jm c!  I'm delighted that you're enjoying it.  I should be posting another chapter soon.  Thanks again!:)

just a note fyi so disappointed. i couldn't go but today 6 16 11.  at the colonial theater in the berkshires from 5-8 there was music, beverages & karaoke with the cast of the who's tommy.  bummer.  just trolling through gale's site and came upon it.  would have been fun huh??  lol

Author's Response:

I know - I SAW that!  I would have so loved to have gone!  I'll have to check the boards to see whether or not Randy showed up and sang - I would be SO jealous!  The girls I'm going with are wanting to check out Michael's in Stockbridge in case he should show up there to perform karaoke, but with the show I don't think that's too likely.  I am definitely looking forward to Tommy, though - thanks for pointing that out!

love the chapter - don't like Alex one bit (but then I'm not supposed to, am I?)

the interaction between each daughter and the father who raised her is so sweet - and I couldn't be more thrilled that they are still so in love after all these years - it will just make for the most amazing reunion...these two couldn't keep their hands off each other for more than a few hours, so after all these years - it will just explode (in more ways than one!)

I'm guessing that in the next chapter, that charcoal drawing will reveal the truth to very shocked and uncertain girls - as they try to fill in the pieces of the puzzle - this is going to be so much fun!!!!!

I am loving this story!

loving life,

Charle

Author's Response:

Now, Charle, we don't even know poor Alex yet - LOL!  But not to worry, he's not going down without a fight but he'll be no match for the entire Kinney-Taylor clan, especially the twins!  You're right - the drawing will definitely play a part in the girls meeting each other at camp, which should be in the next chapter.  Thanks so much as always for the review, my friend!:)

Is it the new or the old version?  It's the version of 1998 the new one. I'm gonna search for the old one * giggles * But I don't know if I can find it for downloading.

Author's Response:

The old one is a Disney version starring Hayley Mills if that helps - it's quite dated just like me - ha! - probably from the '60's - but I loved her English accent as well as Maureen O'Hara as the mother and Bill Keith (?) as the father.  It was so cute and unlike the new version, the parents didn't get remarried on a cruise ship.:)

wow this is heartwrenching. at first i didn't wnt to read this story. but seeing as how i love all of your other stories i had to read this one too! i'm reading on here instead of fanfiction.net today cause i wanted to look at all the banners. this is great so far!

Author's Response:

Hi, Shauna!  How great to see you over here!  I love being able to make banners for my stories on this site; you can also intersperse other photos throughout the stories, too, which I enjoy doing.  I went crazy with the boys' honeymoon in "Heart's Desire" - LOL!  You should post some of your own stories over here - the readers would love them!:)  Thanks for having faith in me to straighten the boys' mess out.:)  I'm going to enjoy the girls conniving together to reunite them.  This one is actually up next for update, but I think the readers are chomping at the bit for an update to "The Paper Hearts Killer," so I may have to write that chapter first.  But I will definitely get this one updated shortly.  Thanks for coming over and reading/reviewing it - hope to see some of your OWN stories over here soon, too.:)

I love the twins * smiles *.

Kaylee already a little label princess and Katie the little artist.

 

And what must I say about Brian and Justin! Pff Brian and Justin you're both idiots * shakes head * . What a waste of time.

Glad to here that Jennifer and Daphne still have contact with both men and  grandchilds.

* smiles * sneaky grandmother.

 

Please write really fast, wanna "see" the girls faces when they meet.

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hello, dear friend!  Big *hug* back to you!  Hope things are at least a little sunnier for you.....I will type just as fast as my fingers can go - LOL!  The boys won't actually meet at camp - I want to wait until the girls meet and begin to connive together to reunite them - I'm going to have fun with that one!:)  Yes, Jennifer is VERY sneaky, isn't she - ha!  Thanks so much, my friend.:) 

You never cease to amaze with me with your awesome ideas! please update soon, hon, I'm dying to know what happens!

Maddie

Author's Response:

Aww......thanks, Maddie, you're so sweet!:)  I'm actually in the middle of writing the next chapter today.  Hopefully, I'll be able to complete it before the day's over so I can get it posted. It's going to take a few chapters before the boys are reunited, but never fear - they will eventually have a happy ending!  Thanks again for letting me know you'll be reading along, my friend.:)

yup i've read kinnetic bliss over there.  this one will be good--but i think the model would work well no guns and violence.  this one will be good.  i'll read it.

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! Glad you found the story I was talking about.:)  BTW - I'm going to post another chapter of "Paper Hearts Killer" today - give BB the heads up for me - LOL! Talk to you soon.:)

I can't imagine a reason for the two of them to break up. I'm curious to what happened.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading!  I will be explaining more about that in future chapters as the girls conspire to bring their fathers back together.  Hope you continue to read and leave me your thoughts. Thanks for the feedback - I greatly appreciate that!:)

I loved this chapter! It grabbed me from the getgo. Can't wait for more!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I know this chapter is quite sad; but the next one will move ahead by eight years to the girls meeting again; from there, it's "Katie" bar the door - ha!  They will be conniving to bring their dads back together.  I am looking forward to hatching ways for the girls to throw them together (can you say a camping cabin alone - locked in, etc? wink, wink....).  Will Justin be able to withstand a force like Brian Kinney?  And what will happen to the poor fiance of Justin's (I think we all know the answer to THAT question!).  Thanks for reading - hope you'll stay tuned.:)

I trust you...I really do....lol...but....after reading the reviews ...I decided to skip this.... the thought of them breaking up and being apart for years....  is not for me... Thanks.... 

Author's Response:

Thank you for letting me know.  I'm disappointed you won't be reading along but I understand.  If it's any consolation, I won't be detailing the years apart; the next chapter will actually start eight years later when the twins meet again for the first time.  The boys may even meet again in the next chapter, depending upon how long the chapter is.  I have to set their meeting up, but it will be either in the next chapter or the one after that, so I hope you might reconsider.  Either way, though, I respect your feelings and I appreciate you letting me know.:)

Why the divorce!? They love each other!

Beautiful names for the girls. Catherine Elizabeth (Kate) is the new princess of the United Kingdom. You knew that or is it coincidence?

 

* hugs *

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  I knew but I had forgotten about that.:)  Thanks for the feedback - you will find out more about it later.  Actually, I didn't really 'marry' them off, but that's not to say that might not come later (hint, hint, wink, wink...).  Stay tuned - I'm just setting this one up for now.:)  *Hugs* back to you!

OMG! You did NOT just break my heart AGAIN!!  And this is only the first chapter of this?  AND it's a WIP so I don't even have the luxury of going to the next chapter?  You are an evil, evil person!  You're smiling right now, aren't you?  Tell the truth!  

I'm going to go dig through your stories until I find one that I can read without crying my eyes out before the 2nd scene!  I will find one!  :-D

Hugs, Cindy

Author's Response:

Okay, Cindy, yes, I admit it - I actually chuckled a little in sick delight over your next-to-last statement!  I'm flattered as well as honored if I'm evoking emotions in a reader because that means I guess I've done my job.  As for non-tearjerkers, believe it or not, I DO have some - ha!  Not sure which ones you've read, but I can suggest some of them if you like:  "Roughing It," "A Little More Conversation," "Arms Open Wide," and "Payback" would all fit that category.  Hope you'll check them out if you haven't already.  And thanks so much for the feedback - I am very grateful for that.:)

Hmmm. I am not usually a fan of stories based on existing movies, they can go so wrong. And I am so anxiously waiting for some of your other writings to reach the next level - each so different - yet each intriguing.and each leaving me on the edge of my seat waiting for more. I know you always have a few going at a time, but I sure hope that adding another story again does not mean more time between each new chapter for the stories I've already gotten hooked on.

That said, I can look down the road and see where this story might go - and knowing the movie storyline, anticipate some really fun moments along the way - along with the possibility of the kind of passion only our boys can bring, I am so excited. This story has so much potential - and now you've got me hooked again you rascal.

I have to admit though, that I am most intrigued here by the fact that, in your flashback, both men seem to be reluctant to part. While that increases the promise of what may be to come, it makes it harder t explain why they would break up a family rather than persevere. Can't wait to see how you explain that.

Always enjoy your work - thanks for all your work. It is appreciated.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the thought-provoking and insightful comments.  If it's any consolation, I think I am seeing the eventual end of "Tender Loving Care," so that should free up more writing time. AND I am about to have 2 1/2 months off since I teach during the year, so that should help considerably.:)  I will explain later how they came to a parting of the ways here, but you are correct; my stories always end up with the two together so you can figure out pretty readily where it will wind up eventually.  However, that being said, they will need to do some maneuvering to get to that point.  And if you know the movie, you also know there's that sticky little problem of a fiance hanging around.  I could make one up for Brian, but I so adore making the lad jealous, so in all likelihood it will be a beau for Justin.  And you know the girls will be doing everything in their power to get their two dads together, including causing some mischief for the poor fiance.  I think I will be having fun with this one - ha!  Hope you'll stay tuned.  And I promise to keep updating regularly - don't worry; I'm very conscientious about that.  Thanks for having faith in me - and for reading my stories.  I am very honored as well as grateful.:P)