Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 12:25 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Wow that was a huge Change I was surprised. That Claire needs a bitch slap for saying that. It was not Brian's fault. Fantastic work. Hope you are well and safe x

Author's Response:

I always wanted to fix that, Mikey and his condisention trying to make himself out to be thoughtful.  What a bunch of bull.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2020 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I don't know if you intended for the funeral to be a comedy routine, but I about died laughing! (it makes me think of another funeral story, but I can't remember which one.)

Where's Debbie when you need her? With Horvath showing up... Then with her idiot son...

Michael and his BIG MOUTH! Cripes! Because of him, the police are now questioning Brian and telling him not to leave town. Man, I hope Brian wrings his bloody neck! I gather there won't be any scene between Brian and Michael in the loft after the funeral... THANK GOD!!!!

And no Daphne and Justin... another screw-up of Cowlips! (Thank you for all your fixes!)

Are Melanie and Lindsay supposed to be together? Where's Gui? We never heard of him leaving...

So, what is Michael dealing with that Brian is spending so much time with him?

I'm interested in knowing how far into the series you plan to go? Are you going to do all 83 episodes?

HUGS  ~Cathy

Author's Response:

Let me see if I can answer all your questions.  I'm glad you found the funeral fun because I was chuckling the whole time I was writing it.  Deb is still on the outs with Justin and her meeting Horvath early wouldn't help.  Let's face it Michael often said things that had Brian looking bad and weren't even true.  At the moment Justin hasn't had any contact with the two, so we don't know what happened.  If Melanie was smart she wouldn't take Lindsay back, but Mel isn't the most sensible afterall she did pick Michael to father her daughter.  A big mistake in my opinion.  Michael is dealing with David, he does nothing but complain about the man but because he doesn't have anyone courting him he keeps dating him.  I'm trying to do all 83 episodes, but some of the changes make certain episodes redundant.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 09:02 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I did not expect that. The autopsy will only reveal the heart attack. I'm glad Justin is with Brian this time Michael is so useless.

Author's Response:

Maybe, maybe not.  Mikey was his usual self pointing out what he felt Brian was doing wrong.  Good thing Justin was there to keep things in prospective.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 02:11 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

Wow, wasn't expecting that.  Great update.  Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:

Surprise!  When I was writing this chapter it just kinda took a twist.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2020 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

And the plot thickens. I'm very intrigued. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Yep, of course it does mess with the episodes where Joanie showed up.  No showing up at Brian's office or chocolate, chocolate chip cake.  

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2020 10:10 PM · On: Chapter 19 - Episode 19 (Good Grief)

I was not expecting that at all. Justin should use Jack's dead to get Brian tested for cancer or something. More please!

Author's Response:

That's an idea.  Wish I'd thought of it.  He does eventually get Brian to get tested if that helps.