Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I was giddy with excitement reading this chapter. One of the best parts was Justin getting on Michaels nerves lol. I loved how Brian was in this it was seriously amazing.
Author's Response: Your review made me so happy!
Reviewer: Sid401k (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 02:46 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
So if Brian didn't go to the bris at all, then Gus got circumsized this time 'round. Maybe that will diminish some of Melanie's hostility going forward?
Author's Response: I hadn't thought about that. You could be right.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2019 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I'm just loving this story! Justin may have the abilty to 'change' his destination, but... I love the new and improved Brian. Maybe the non-stalking helps.
Micheal is an ass. I wish Justin and Daphne would out him at the Big Q. You know, all innocent like. in front of Marley... "Hi Michael. Sorry Brian and I left you at Babylon." Couldn't you just see his face? He also should have told the guys how Michael managed to get the booth in the diner. Michael's "faults" should be pointed out from early on.
And Debbie! What a freak! I'm with the kids. My Michael... such a sweet boy. A mother is blind.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying this story. Brian is more willing to listen to Justin who is not as immature as he was. You're right about Michael. Outing him would be too easy. Debbie changes according to the chapter, what Brian didn't know could hurt him and did.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2019 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
Fascinating premise. Can't wait to see how things develop. Bill
Author's Response: Thank you. Your review means a lot to me.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2019 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
Hi! What's wrong with Brian? I think it is nice, but I think, Brian doesn't know the past. Okay, I never thought Debbie was the perfect mother and I'm waiting for what's coming. Great story! I like the changes very well. Thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: Brian is basically the same Brian that Justin meet all those years ago and while Justin is the only one who lived through things the first time he won't be alone.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2019 09:47 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
It's so much better! Justin is thinking of his future, so much the better if the tips will allow him to be independent. And I also appreciate that Debbie is shown for who she really is, Michael's mother who favors him and all the others are assholes. Sorry but for me she is not the mother of the year. Does Brian also go back? Will they finally have a life without interference? I like this chapter. Thanks for the update.
Author's Response: Yeah, my plan was for Justin to be financial able so as not to need to move in with Brian or Deb. But for some reason Deb has decided not to be as friendly with Justin as she appeared in the series. There will still be interferience but now that Justin's had time to think about it, he will respond differently counteracting the interferience hopefully.
Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2019 06:23 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I like this Tracy. Just a feeling, did Brian make this little trip back in time too?
Justin is making some smart decisions. Liking your story.
Author's Response: Unfortunately Brian is the same Brian. Everytime Justin reacts just a little different, Brian changes how he reacts. Glad you're liking this.
Reviewer: Slugger07 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2019 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I like the changes so far.
Author's Response: Glad to hear it. I'm sure that there are some changes others would have done different, but these are the ones that I felt needed changing.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2019 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
Yeah, with this change of the past, Michael is really coming off as a loser, and Justin is figuring out that other people see him like that as well. Even Tracy, who had the big crush on him, sees it.
Author's Response: I really enjoyed writing Tracy like that. She was a bright spot at the Big Q.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: November 20, 2019 03:31 PM · On: Chapter 3 - Episode 3 (No Bris, No Shirt - No service)
I like This!! It reminds me of that old saying “ Wish I knew now what I didn’t know then” I’d go back and do all the right things so my a Life would be better! hehe
Author's Response: Even knowing won't make things turn out better. But I'll do my best.
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