Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2019 01:28 PM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

Brian can't base his wanting to be sober solely on which meeting he may run into Justin. Maybe Justin should just come out and tell him no.

Reviewer: TrueIllusion (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2019 02:56 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

I hope Brian will let Justin in at least enough to let him sponsor him. Looking forward to seeing how things go for them at tomorrow's meeting! Really interesting AU. I'm also eager to hear more about Justin's past.



Author's Response:

So happy that you are enjoying the story.  It is an interesting AU in that I'm using parts of Canon except the fact that Brian and Justin do not meet when Justin is 17.  I think the meetings will be an integral part of the story.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2019 01:21 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

Brian doesn't understand why he's so interested in Justin, which from my pov is a good thing.  Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Brian has a lot to work through before Justin would be willing to have sex with him.  I hope you enjoy the story.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2019 11:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

Good chapter!!   I'm glad that Brian ran into Justin at a meeting and happy that Brian was really listening to the stories the people were telling.    I think he will find a certain comradery with them all.   This really is a good place for him to be - people who are all dealing with similar issues.  



Author's Response:

Thanks-  I think he has a lot to review about his life and some hard decisions to make.  It will be a journey.  ( It appears that writing short stories is not in my repertoire- very often)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2019 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

I do not know addictions but I think it takes a lot of courage and honesty to be able to talk about your life and your problems. I hope Justin can help. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you. It will take a lot for Brian to really look at his life and determine what he needs to change

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2019 02:16 AM · On: Chapter 3 The Hook Up

Very good chapter.  I think you are doing fine with the writing.  All addictions are different and all alcoholics are different.  Keep up the good work.  This is fiction so if an error is made no one should be critical.



Author's Response:

Thanks-  I jsut wanted to put the disclaimer out there.  don't want to offend anyone.  

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