Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 12:46 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Hi my friend! It's been a long time, nearly three years when I've fallen in love with your story "Entwined" and I still love it! I've just re-read it! It's amazing! And it's crazy, but I'm also still totally in love with Brian and Justin. I must admit, I'm addicted. And fortunately, there are so many amazing stories on mw or kinnetikdreams. But that's also the reason why I haven't read "The Date" until now. So, now, at last, you'll get a much earned review. Such a cute first chapter. You made me smile so often. It's so cute to see Brian and Gus interacting and there are so many awesome moments. While reading it - and I think I haven't mentioned it before in one of my reviews for "Entwined" - I just realized, Gus is the first person to whom Brian can openly admit that he loves Justin, isn't he. That's so amazing! And wow, this scene in the flower shop when Brian speaks about Justin "He is the most exquisite flower I have ever met" - haha, so funny. Great, I haven't enough words for it, how you pictured Brian and Gus and then also let us know what Brian thinks about the situation he founds himself in. Amazing! Thanks for making my day and warmest regards!
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:23 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Omg I'm in love with this story, is that possible but I so am. I love how Brian is with Gus, he would do anything for that little boy and this proves it. Gus is just like his dad a huge heart and he is so into his dad as well and how he feels about Justin. You have melted my heart so much. I wonder what Brian would have said if Lindsey had asked to give Gus another brother or sister. This story is getting added to my favs.
Brilliant work xx
Author's Response: We're glad you're loving this! I knew this would be your kind of story :) Brian and Gus have such a wonderful relationship, right?
Thank you for giving this one a try!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 01:06 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Gus is such a sweet child, and very smart like his daddy and Justin. Just knowing that chocolate is good for you, ans about the meaning of different flowers.Brian would do anything to make Gus happy, even if Justin teases him about the big day.
Author's Response: Gus is a very sweet kid, and Brian is very lucky to be given a reason to celebrate Valentine's day! LOL
Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:26 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
As always, I love this. Even though Brian probably isn't a fan of the grand romantic gestures Gus wants to make, I'm sure he is happy to have the father/son time. Also, it does give him a push to show a tiny bit of romance to Justin yet still gives him a logical reason as to why (Gus made him, duh.) Great chapter! <3
Author's Response: Of course it's all Gus's fault. Brian hates romantic shit, that's why he put up with buying ridiculous chocolates, the perfect flowers, eat more carbs we could ever eat and watch the Lion King. And he doesn't enjoy it one bit. Nope. * grin *
Thank you for the reviews!!!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2017 06:36 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Great Story. Brian will do anything for Gus! I smiled all through this story. Bill
Author's Response: Hi Bill!
Brian would do anything for Gus, you're absolutely right. Thankfully for us LOL
Thank you so much for your review :D We will post the next chapter very soon :)
~ eureka1 and Alois
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 09:52 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Omg that had me chuckling so often and at times lol, my husband kept frowning at me. Thank you so much I can see this being the only way it actually happening
Author's Response: Hi Chris!
We're so glad this story made you smile and laugh :D Thank you so much for this wonderful review which made us very happy. And all our apologies to your husband ;)
More to come very soon :)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 08:59 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Brian never does anything he doesn't want to do so that means he really wanted to do this.
Author's Response: Hi there!
Yes, Brian can't do anything he doesn't want to do. And lucky for us, he can't resist his son :D
Thank you sincerely for your review! More to come very soon :)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 04:10 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Haha! This is so great! Gus is very informed on the meaning of flowers! I can't wait for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: Hi Kristine!
Gus has done his homeworks as how to be the most prefect gentleman to his date. Of course he would know all the meanings regarding flowers, right? LOL
We're very glad you're enjoying this! Next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days :D
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 03:48 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
I rmember the original conversation and am glad that you decided to develop it into a full story. Can't wait to see how the "dates" go. Enjoying reading in this universe again
Author's Response: Hi Sandy!
We're so thrilled you are interested to read more about this universe. Thank you very much for your never-ending support on this story :D
The date will begin in the next chapter, which will be posted probably on Friday :)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: boo (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 03:32 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Very SWEET!
Author's Response: Thank you! We're so glad you're enjoying this :D
More to come very soon!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 02:09 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
This is so sweet! Entwined is one of my favorite story's and I love how you tied this into it. I'm so enamored with Gus ... he's way beyond his 8 years and he sure is teaching our beloved Brian a thing or two about romance. Although, I do believe Brian is a closet romantic...he just needs a little shove to show it and who better to shove him than Gus?! Kudos for another great story! I can't wait for the date!!
Author's Response: Hi Laura!
First of all, thank you for the praise about Entwined ** blushing ** We couldn't leave this verse without exploring the double date Gus mentioned in the last chapter. Of course, Gus just have to look at Brian with his 'You're the best dad ever' look for Brian to do exactly what his son wants him to do. And forcing Brian into romantic gestures is too hilarious for us to spare him ;)
Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback Laura! The next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days :D
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 01:17 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
What a lovely surprise on this Valentine's Day! And it fits so perfectly where Entwined left off. I'm almost as anxious as Gus to go on this date!
Author's Response: Hi Trish!
Aw, we're so happy you're looking forward to read about the date :D We thought it to be appropriate to write a Valentine's day story in the Entwined verse. This story takes place after the last chapter of Entwined, but before the Epilogue and Brian's declaration to Justin. But Gus is doing a perfect job to turn his father into a hopeless romantic case LOL
Thank you so much for your wonderful review! More to come in the next couple of days :)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 01:15 AM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
OMG!!!! What a treat! I loved the Entwined story so much so discovering this little gem made my day. I cannot wait for the next chapter....
Author's Response: Hi Carrie!
Thank you so much for your enthusiasm! We're so thrilled you're enjoying this so much :D ** blushing and performing a happy 'à la Jack Kinney' dance **
Next chapter will be posted very soon! (in the next couple of days)
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: soirsagrey (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 10:25 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
Oh yes Mr. Kinney you can protest as much as you can but this date is going to happen. Complete with flowers and chocolate.
Can't wait to see the look on Justin's face when he gets his box of chocolates and his golden gardenia's. I bet he will love his flowers.
Ladies, this chapter made me smile and giggle in some places. I thought it sweet, lovely and very entertaining. And believe me ladies that is big praise from the Scrooge of Valentine day, Valentine? Bah, humbug. ;)
Looking forward to the next chapter
XOXO
Meriam
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Author's Response: Hi Meriam!
Brian can't refuse anything to his son, even when he has to become a complete romantic fool to please him. Justin is going to have a blast, we're sure LOL
And we feel you on the Valentine's day love. This story is mainly an excuse to have fun and we're thrilled you enjoy this!
Thank you very much for taking a chance on this story and for your feedback! Both are deeply appreciated :)
XOXO
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2017 09:56 PM · On: Chocolates and Flowers
This was so cute, Ladies! Gus, counseling his father on what to do, and talking him into things he wd never be caught dead doing!
My favorite line was when Brian told his son that he was sure that Justin would 'love to come.' LOL!
What a sweet, sweet story! Thank you for posting this on here! I'm looking forward to the actual date. a86; ~Kim
Author's Response: Hi Kim!
We're very happy you enjoy Brian's predicament with his son ;) Who could resist Gus, anyway?
And LOL, of course Justin is always happy to come when Brian is involved...
We will post chapter 2 in the next couple of days :) Thank you as always, for your wonderful support!
~ eureka1 and Alois ~
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