Reviewer: starbaby (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2021 07:32 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

Isn't Justin a millionare? $5 million for one painting and 6 figures for one other. Why is he still bartending? Why can't he share in the upkeep of the condo?

 

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2016 09:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

:)

Reviewer: chouhou (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2016 01:58 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

I don't understand your story anymore. Brian fucking Evan ok, it's the kind of behavior Brian absolutely could have but sending flowers to Justin to make him come back to him, really? Come on, it's not credible at all. And now Justin is always angry and yelling. It's not in the character of Justin. You forget he's a strong little fucker... Actually in this story it's impossible for Justin to come back with Brian, Evan is always here. When Justin cheated on Brian with Ethan Brian didn't want to hear about Ethan anymore! And here Brian is working with him, he sees him everyday, it's beyond comprehension. Now either Evan have to go definitively and Justin might think to forgive Brian or Evan and Brian stay together. After all, in the begining, Brian seemed to have feelings for him. Because once again Brian doesn't make promises if he knows there is a risk that he can't hold it. This is Brian. And I find Evan is a good guy. There is too much ambivalence now, it's not clear at all. But I don't want to upset you because I love your fics usually and I read them with pleasure mostly your one shot. So now Justin might have balls or to forgive or to give up. And I like Evan he's protective of Brian. He isn't childish like Justin now. So now I'm looking forward to read the next chapter... See you soon and thank you for sharing your stories it's always a great pleasure to read you.

Author's Response:

Just noticed this comment on the first chapter....way to spoil it for everyone if they check the reviews.

I'd appreciate it if you left reviews under their respective chapters! And maybe...sign them?

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2016 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

I dont blame Justin for his reaction

 

And i hate Evan so much now

 

Reviewer: Joy (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 08:45 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

i totally understand😔😔but 1 thing I don't understand why Brian can bottom 2days for a person like Evan when he have a caring partner why to cheat I can't breath also now if you have written another chapter then post it or send me any where but pls show some mercy on me pls

Reviewer: Joy (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2016 08:24 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

fu***ng bastard Brian how can he do this to Justin he not only broken his promise but bottom for Evan for 2night ass hole I think Justin should leave a pieces of shit I really hate this story now how that happen to Justin who love that ass hole & he is bottoming to some1 & saying to hide it yaak it's sticks 

Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2016 09:39 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

So, Brian bottomed for Evan. Good for Justin to know that now. And like Sunshine I don't trust Evan but I don't know what to hink about Brian yet...

Reviewer: Manado (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2016 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

Hello there, this story is interesting, the plot about someone from Brian's past is always intriguing and as far as I know, there are 3 authors who wrote about Brian Kinney-Evan Steele, you, Blissink, and Ashleigh, the last mentioned author didn't like the idea B/J together at the end of story, so I hope Brian and Justin will eventually do end up together in your story, thank you.

Author's Response:

Hi! :)

I found this Brian-Evan background story fascinating so I had to tackle the idea. I promise it has a HEA for our boys.

I hope to hear from you as the story progresses and see what you think of it.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2016 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

Great start. Love Izzy. Love the flip flop killing the bug (which I assume was a cockroach) I can see the two of them getting into all sorts of trouble.....LOL Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing. Izzy is going to be a great friend.

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 04:57 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

WOW, where is this coming from?
I wrote only 2 sentences.
The first one was to indicate the author, because I really thought Kim and you don't remember who she was. And I love her writing - I'm not gonna apologise for that.
When was I mean exactly?
You didn't think that before, when I was praising your work, did you?

The second sentence was to wish you good luck with your story.

I apologise to everyone, who is stuck to witness our conversation and believe the mods will erase it, if I overstepped the rules.

Author's Response:

That's the way it sounded to me when I read it. I'm sure you know how interpretative thing you say on the internet can be.

I know you love my work, that's why I was surprised the see those words. Maybe the quotation marks, of you quoting me threw me off and made me think you were mean.

Well, now you decide if to stick around to read or not.

 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2016 03:47 AM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

I really like it so far.  It seems like Izzy and Justin will be good roommates.  

Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, they'll get along very well.

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2016 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Moving In

Well, first of all, it takes courage to set up Brian with Evan again, if it's who I think it is. I believe I remember him from reading another author's stories. So kudos to you on that. 

BTW, just a suggestion.  If it IS from the other stories I remember, at the very least I would ask that you credit the other author and the stories as a courtesy, since it involves a character he/she created.  Perhaps provide a link so readers might get some background into the character as well?

And I may have missed it, but please make sure you place a story disclaimer on this if you haven't.;) One last (admin) thing - if you want to email me the banner, I'll get it posted for you.;) 

Now onto the story! Very interesting beginning! Like Izzy's quirky character, and especially the way she greeted Justin with the bug squashing - ha!  Nice set up happening with where Izzy is working.  I'll be interested in seeing how Evan, Brian, and even Ethan fit into this picture. Looking forward to more.;)  ~Kim

 

Author's Response:

Evan is from the original QaF books, I mentioned it in the authoer note. I know someone else used him in a story on livejournal. It gave me courage to share my idea too.

Ooops. I keep forgetting about the disclaimer. Will add it up.

Sure, I'll email you the banner - but what email address? :)

I'm glad you like the beginning, I hope you'll enjoy the rest of it....when Evan makes an appearance.

 

Is his last name Steele or some variation of that? If so, some author must have used it in another QAF fan fiction story I read, or it may just be a coincidence. Perhaps list the titles of the books and the author, then, just to avoid any issues.  You could include it in your disclaimer, BTW, with something along the lines of 'the character of Ethan is based upon the books (insert titles) by (insert author's name).  No copyright infringement is intended, etc...

 

As for the email address, I'll send you one based upon the email you registered under, and you can then reply with the banner.  May take me a few hours, though, since I have to run out for a while. Any questions, let me know.;)  ~Kim