Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: keykoles77 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2019 04:40 PM · On: Chapter 14

Oh wow! Do you think there will be a sequel? Taking Gus to Kilkenny or Justin's Irish mates coming to the Pitts. Shit, this could be a whole series. They do writ smutty novels about Irish Lords with a castle and a steed. 😆

Thank you for writing this!!!!

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2015 04:36 AM · On: Chapter 14

What a fun, sexy AU and point of divergence! And, it could be canon. Both Brian and Justin were in character. And they got over the stumbling block of Brian's fear of change. Hooray! Thank you.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2014 03:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi!:) I have to say, I was basically ignoring this story at first because usually combination of B/J journey and some big inheritance seems uninteresting to me. But then I peeked at the comments, saw a few things that I liked and decided to give it a try after all. I’m so happy I did! This story is really incredible, I enjoyed it so much, I couldn’t stop reading. It belongs to the category where I savor every like, every word. The atmosphere of the story is overwhelming, I myself fell in love with Kilkenny. It’s such a beautiful place, and what an interesting story that gives Brian ownership! This kind of inheritance is so rare, but quite possible, and it’s so nice to think of Brian as of noble blood.

I *loved* his relationship with Justin! It was very in canon, and every problem they had kept me on the edge of my seat. I wasn’t sure what Justin would do if Brian sold Kilkenny after all – he’d probably have gotten over it, but it would have put a rift between them for a while. The place is beautiful, it deserves to remain untouched. I loved how you showed the gradual change in Brian – at first I just couldn’t imagine him loving this place, agreeing to keep it! Bu the nature, the traditions, local people – it all grew on him. It touched me so much when he bought the horse for that poor man, fulfilling his dream. This is so *Brian* - doing something big and altruistic and then being horrified at it, trying to make it look as nothing. It’s impossible not to love him.

I loved how strong and patient Justin was – I hate when writers make him a saint, taking Brian’s shit and only thanking him for that. Your Justin is canon, he calls Brian on his bullshit but also acts maturely and lovingly. He understands Brian, he loves him, but sometimes his patience reaches its limits as well.

Thank you so much for this amazing work, I loved it! I’m so happy I read it after all, because otherwise I would have missed so much. I can’t wait to read more of your stories!



Author's Response:

That's so funny that it was the reviews that convinced you to read. I'm glad they did! I do see how the plot elements communicated in the banner might not entice all readers right away, but I wanted to take a different road for the challenge than just the route of tropical destination or something obvious like that. And I wanted the story to involve both travel (the theme for the challenge) and a larger plot. I thought that Brian and Justin's fledgling relationship circa season two would be a perfect compliment to such a quirky and transformative trip, and I guess you agreed :) I really like that you found their interactions true to character and not too extreme in one way or the other. I try to write these two as a realistic couple. Thanks so much for giving my story a shot after all! And thanks for the lovely review; it was nice to see that.

Reviewer: renad (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2014 03:18 PM · On: Chapter 14

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Loved it si much , it's so sweet 

Ur so talented thank you for this awesome story

 

 



Author's Response:

Oh thank you I'm glad you think so, and you're welcome. Thanks for reading it!

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2014 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 14

I love your story. Congratulations on winning the challenge, it's very well deserved...

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks Alois, that's so flattering :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2014 12:53 AM · On: Chapter 14

Wonderful story I enjoyed so much I would like to see more from this universe in the future xxChris

Author's Response:

Hey Chris, thank you so much for saying that. I'm glad you enjoyed it so much. I might revisit this universe one day.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2014 08:22 AM · On: Chapter 14

Hey Sarah :)

Congratulations on winning the challenge. 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Thanks flosee! It was so fun writing. I'm glad you read.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2014 07:59 PM · On: Chapter 14

Finally finished reading. Great story! Loved the sappy, romantic ending! I'm so glad you've joined our little ranks of fanfic writers here on MW - I can already tell I'm going to look forward to all your stories. Thanks for taking part in my challenge, too. TAG



Author's Response:

Oh I'm so happy you liked the romantic ending. I tried not to make it too sappy, but still very special. Have I joined ranks? Cool! I had a blast writing for this challenge. I really felt like it inspired me to write something that was not my usual type of fic. I'm happy with what I put out, and thank god for that deadline extension, lol.

Reviewer: ME (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2014 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 14

Cute story! I swear I've read this before on another site maybe. Do you post on another site as well?



Author's Response:

No, but I've got my other qaf story posted on fanfiction.com. 

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2014 02:44 PM · On: Chapter 14

This story was my favorite of all the challenges



Author's Response:

Wow, thanks!

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2014 02:16 PM · On: Chapter 14

Okay, I admit it; as soon as I read "holy water font, before hastily dunking four fingers into it and blessing himself" all I could think about was how wet he would be.  I know, only my mind would go there.  LOL

I'm curious to know how the castle will now make money to support the workers that are there. 

I like the touch with the ring and Brian buying one that was too small.  Priceless.

Thanks for the entertainment.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I was going to put in a detail about how I imagine Brian will pay those people and pay for the car and horse he purchased, but left it out because there wasn't a tidy spot for it. Basically, I was going to have it work out that he used taxpayer dollars as a sort of supplementary income. Peerages like Brian's title sometimes receive income from the taxes in their county/district/whatever. Not exactly democratic, but I think the people of Kilkenny would agree that it's a fair exchange for getting to keep their town the way it is.

Thanks for reading Flossee!

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2014 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 14

Really enjoyed this fun adventure! Great job! Hopefully you will write a sequel with Brian and Justin taking Gus to Kilkenny.

Author's Response:

Thanks! A sequel might be in order :)

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 14

I just read this story beginning to end, and loved it! Right up to the end - (how clever Brian, a ring too small to wear) Brian was Brian (no 'for my prince' comments) and yet Justin knows he is loved - and the town keeps its ambiance! What's not to love here, really?!?!?

I think there really needs to be a sequel - more of Lord Brian and Justin in the castle, rebuilding the parts of the castle in such disrepair, and of course the gang  interacting with his new friends would be a total hoot.

Really enjoyed this one. Thank you!

Charle

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Like most people I ate up Brian's Britin proposal dialogue in season five with a silver spoon, but I kind of gagged too because it was SOO not him (I kind of think the writers for the show should have rethought that dialogue). I didn't want to go there in this fic, but I did want Brian to do the right thing. I'll do a little sequel one day, probably with the Liberty gang coming over for a visit. Thanks for reading all the way through!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 08:56 PM · On: Chapter 14

Hi, Sarah - finally had the chance to finish the rest of your story. This was just simply delightful. Touching, poignant, humorous, very much in character for both men. Loved how you were able to show how Brian loved Justin, and how the town and the people in it were ultimately able to change his mind.  You really are an excellent writer. Thank you for writing this. *Hugs*  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thanks Kim, that means a lot. I'm glad you thought the boys were in character (I had trouble there with Brian at the end, lol). *Hugs*

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 08:08 PM · On: Chapter 14

You have made me a very happy soldier! I'm so glad Brian decided not to sell, now he'll have something to pass down to his son. ;)

Author's Response:

Hey that's great! I think Brian would eventually want to show guess the castle and Kilkenny.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 14

What perfect ending to a perfect tale.  I'm so glad that the shamrock bloomed, but that was a given.  The castle will be there waiting for them.  I do wonder how the family reacted when Justin and Brian got home, because Justin was there to stay.  Now they are on their way to Atlanta!!!  Wahooo!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked how it ended. I'd bet that the family all wanted to go visit Brian's awesome castle once they found out he kept it :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 14

 I think a trip of the whole Liberty gang over to Ireland could be a funny thing to see in a sequel, don't you?

 

Do I really need to answer this question? YES !! * grins and makes a happy dance * You're gonna write it NOW !! Sorry * is blushing *



Author's Response:

I might have to do that... one day. Right now I want to try something new. Going on vacation in a week, when I plan to start a new fic.

Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 12:40 PM · On: Chapter 14

Perfect ending, loved the whole story!!



Author's Response:

Oh, so happy to hear you thought so! Thanks!!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 14

Oh that is lovely I loved the ending thank you

Author's Response:

You're quite welcome. Thanks for reading my fic!

Reviewer: XPO787 (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2014 11:28 AM · On: Chapter 14

I enjoyed this story. Thank you. :)



Author's Response:

You're welcome :)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 14

I just read the last three chapters and they blew me away.  I guess the Luck of the Irish made its way into Brian's heart.  He knew how he grew up and made sure that these people didn't have to lose their homes or their town.  Thanks for the great ride.  This was wonderful.

Jane



Author's Response:

Well the last three chapters were really where most of the change with Brian hapened, so I hope it didn't seem rushed to you. Ireland (and Kilkenny) definately changed Brian for the better. And he made the kinder decision in the end. Thanks so much for reading all the way through, that means a lot :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2014 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 14

I knew it, well done Brian.

But * giggles * that claddagh ring!! Brian you know: Justin can wear it on a necklace.

 

Wonderful ending of a wonderful story. I want to read a sequel, please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

It was hard for me to write Brian doing such a kind thing. I like him a la QAF: rude, selfish, and completey hedonistic. But hey, even he couldn't sell off Kilkenny in the end. I afgree with you that Justin could wear it on a necklace, but I think either way he's just happy that Brian has admitted how much he means to him. So so happy that you read all the way through and that you liked the ending. I think a trip of the whole Liberty gang over to Ireland could be a funny thing to see in a sequel, don't you?

 

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