Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2018 01:24 PM · On: Heartsick

Fucking Lindsy, never liked that bitch.  She is the cause for all the problems



Author's Response:

My co-writer, Mika and I, thought that we could both envision Lindsay in this sort of role.  She will continue to be a problem for a while, too, until she gets her smackdown. Thanks again for choosing to read this one. ~Kim

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2014 02:24 PM · On: Heartsick

Poor Justin ;) I hope Brian explain the situation to him, so they can come back together. Grrrrrrrrr Lindsey



Author's Response:

Hi, Dear!  Thank you for continuing to read this story.  I do hope you enjoy the rest of it.  And I promise it will get better!  Thanks agan for the support!  *Hugs*  ~Mika and Kim

Reviewer: ANDROMEDA (Anonymous) · Date: August 28, 2013 03:58 PM · On: Heartsick

Oh my Brian why? that was so cruel!!!! GRRR!!! Loved it!!!

Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2013 07:04 PM · On: Heartsick

Isn't Gus old enough to stand up in court and say who he wants to be with?  Lindsey popping up now, after the boy is in high school is just criminal.  And she sounds so creepy. 

Great chapter.

All the best,

Laura

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2013 04:23 PM · On: Heartsick

Oh! I read the new chapter as soon as I came back from my vacation, but since then, I tried really hard not to think about this story. Cliff-hangers are *evil*! Especially cliff-hangers like yours! That was such an intense chapter, I was reading with my mouth agape, and now I’m just *dying* to see what will happen next!

This impossible triangle is getting more and more complicated! Justin is waiting for Brian, Gus is waiting for Justin, Tristan is waiting for Gus. And Brian… Brian behaves like a total shit. I can’t believe he could say something like that to Justin!! No matter how hurt he is, it’s not right to vent his anger and pain on Justin. And in such cruel way… I’m not sure Justin will forgive him easily. Justin in this story is so incredibly strong, stubborn and independent. They love each other deeply, but I think Brian needs Justin more than Justin needs him. Especially now, when Lindsay went crazy and decided she has some chances, some rights on Gus! Gus is almost an adult, and he loves his father – of course he would choose him. Lindsay is disgusting!

I wanted to cry when Justin told Nancy everything. It’s horrible to see a strong person like him breaking and hurting so much. I wonder, what Brian will do and think now? Now he isn’t drunk any more, will he regret what he did last night?   

It’s a relief that Gus at least shows more and more interest in Tristan, even if he may not fully understand it now. Maybe it will make the truth about Brian and Justin a little less painful. Oh, everything is really so very complicated here! Now, with Lindsay, even more so. I hope Gus won’t make a big mistake and destroy his father, but he has a few reasons to be insanely angry with him. Will he be more angry because of Brian’s being the person Justin dated? Or maybe he will be more pissed off by Brian’s treatment of Justin? I have no idea, but I’m sooo looking forward to finding out! I can’t even think straight, I’m so immersed in this story! Thank you, girls!    

        



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Michal and I always look forward to your thoughtful comments.  You have hit upon a lot of the problems that are going to rise very soon regarding this situation.  And I should probably hide under my desk, because we are working on the next chapter now, and we can tell you that there is a humdinger of a cliffhanger in the next chapter.  And the big reveal is at hand, too.

Sooo happy that you are enjoying this roller coaster ride! Thank you very much for all your support of this story!  It will be updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Heartsick

I just finish reading this story today,I have to say I love it soooo much! Hoping you can update it soon!



Author's Response:

Hi, there!  Michal, my co-writer, and I thank you very much for reading and for the lovely comments.  We should be updating this again very shortly, and the big reveal is (finally!) about to happen.  Of course, that will just cause a lot more angst to come until we get everyone straightened out.  But I think I can say on behalf of both of us that we will eventually get them all in a happier place.

Thank you again for reading and for taking the time to comment!  We greatly appreciate that and it is very motivating to us.  We hope that you will continue to enjoy this story, and it WILL be completed.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2013 12:32 AM · On: Heartsick

Oh this is getting more and more intricate.  Can't wait for Gus to realize that the "man" is Brian and for Brian to tell him about Lindsay.  Eager to see how the story unfolds.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sandy! Thanks for the comments, my dear.:)  We're hoping to have the next chapter up sometime early next week.   And the 'big reveal' should be in that chapter (at last!).  Obviously, there's more angst coming before everything is ironed out, and yes, someone is definitely going to get hurt here - in more ways than one. But you know where my heart lies always.:)  Thanks for reading and for the comments, Sandy!  Michal and I greatly appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: BIZ (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 08:58 AM · On: Heartsick

Hello! I am back to reading. I don't know if you remember me or not. I have been traveling over in Europe and have just returned to the states. I left my phone and laptop at home so I could spend my time studying and checking out the local sites and atmosphere. It was great, but now back to my life as it were. I really love this story. I see there are two of you on this one. It surely is a wonderful colaboration. What a wonderful plot. so many twists to it. Now I am left to wonder where this will end up. I trust not too happy for some of the participants. Wonderful story line, am really enjoying it. I now have to catch up on your other wips.

Author's Response:

Hi, there! Yes, I DO remember you! So good to hear from you again!  Sounds like you had a great time in Europe; hope it was a wonderful adventure for you.:)   I give you a lot of credit for leaving both your phone and your computer at home; I know what a big temptation to take them is, but I'm sure your experience was even richer as a result.

Michal and I are delighted that you are back to reading, and that you are enjoying this story.  Yes, this is the first story that I have ever co-written, but I am enjoyig helping to write it immensely. I really like the story plot that Michal has crafted here.  Right now things are kind of in a mess with the boys - and the big reveal is coming up in the next chapter, which promises to make things even MORE tense.  But I promise that we will get them all straightened out eventually, and they will all come away happier.:)

Welcome back! I hope you enjoy catching up on some of my other stories.:)  Thank you for reading and for taking the time to comment.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 03:59 AM · On: Heartsick

went on several sites to acertain his age. Can't find it anywhere. Was wondering if he is Randy's age or older or younger. Nosey much!!!! I will stop with the questions, but I have to go to the source when I have questions about the guys. Gale looks pretty sexy on horseback. I wonder if that movie will be released to all of us in November or just where it was shot? Time is up-have to do more housework ugh!!! lol

Author's Response:

Not sure about his age, but I just saw something from 2011 that stated he was 28.  So I'm assuming he's around 30, which would make him a little younger than Randy. And yes, Gale looks quite comfortable on that horse; apparently that is why he had to wear that beard for the con.  He looks pretty hot as a Civil War soldier, doesn't he?  Not sure when the movie will be released, but is has a lot of well-known names in it, so I'm hoping it will have a widespread release.  I'm looking forward to Such Good People, Randy's movie, being distributed eventually, but they will have to find $ support to do that, so it's hard to say when that will happen.:)  Keep those questions coming - Ha!  (After the housework first...).;)

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 03:42 AM · On: Heartsick

checked out nick mcgough. OMG!!!have you seen his pictures-especially the nude. I think Randy is one lucky guy. lol

Author's Response:

LOL! Yeah -  but I've ALSO seen some other ones that might indicate the 'impressive' ones have been photoshopped.:)  Only Randy can tell us, and I"m sure he's not volunteering that information - ha!

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 01:26 AM · On: Heartsick

I checked out the picture---sooo good. She has some amazing pictures also.Thers is one of Randy and a guy sitting on what looks like a colored wall. Who is that? Just curious. I guess he has a new boyfriend true? I haven't read anywhere who that is. Do you know? I am just nosey for the peeps.

Author's Response:

Hi, lindc.  Yes, she does have some wonderful photos; she stays on top of what's going on with G and R.  Tanya has made a lot of my banners over the past couple of years for me, too; she's very creative.  I think the 'colored wall' is actually the edge of a swimming pool, and the guy with him is Nick McGough, who is purportedly his current beau.  He's a dancer in the traveling edition of "Flashdance: The Musical" touring the country.  Apparently from what I understand Randy went directly from the VIP dinner at the con to Texas to visit him; that was where the show was being performed at the time (San Antonio). 

A funny moment happened at the con, BTW, when someone asked Gale what Brian would be doing presently (Brian Kinney, not Randy's old BF), and he said something about him performing in "Flashdance."  I think that was more than a coincidence, don't you?;) But I don't know exactly what he was trying to say. 

Randy's back in NYC now rehearsing for his play, "Harbor."  Can't wait to see him in it in early August.:)

Reviewer: lindc & the peeps (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2013 12:53 AM · On: Heartsick

Just hoping you saw the news and why all of the lbgt community is happy in California. Long awaited for news. We are finally making some progress for people to be treated equal-no matter what sex, color, religion when it comes to marriage. Big parties are coming very soon. The whole city is a happy place!!! lol

Author's Response:

I saw it - it's great news!  Why it should matter to anyone who others choose to love - when it has nothing to do with them - is beyond me.  Things are slowly changing finally.;)  BTW, I put a wonderful photo of G and R from the con over on my LJ.  It actually belongs to a friend of mine who gave me the okay to post it over there.  It's only one of two professional photos that I'm aware of that were taken with only G and R from the con, and it's amazing if you want to go check it out.:)

 

I'm working on the update right now to "Parent Trap."  It should be posted pretty soon...and the twins are up to their old antics again, too.;)  Great to hear from you, lindc!  Tell everyone I said hello and send my love to them.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 08:43 PM · On: Heartsick

Orgrgugfdcbj% $/&£€####asdfghhjkkl i think that is quite the transcription of the noise I just made.

 I read the last 3 chapters in a row, and it was so great! So many feels and different emotions... i had a goofy smile, a hand on my mouth and a sad face. Congrats, good job! :) If i had a doubt before, now it is sure I ship badly Gus and Tristan.

The last chapter was my fave... bad lindsay is bad. I hope she won't be the one to reveal the identity of the kinneys men's crush or that she won't go after Justin to ask him to leave Gus alone. "You are so gullible," he told him as Justin's heart promptly broke in two.  "But you WERE good in bed." " my heart also broke.

I am happy,I, finally, had the time to read the last 3 updates. Thank you. Can t wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetie!  I understand that first sentence loud and clear - LOL!  My thoughts exactly.  Poor Justin - and Gus.  Justin is in such deep pain right now, while poor Gus is just simply confused by his feelings for both Justin and Tristan. 

I really don't think Justin, though, will encourage Gus despite his sorrow at the moment.  I think that will get resolved pretty quickly. The big secret at last is about to be revealed in the next chapter, though, and that promises to open up even more angst!

Thanks for reading and for taking the time to comment; we're so happy that you're enjoying this story, and we'll work on getting it updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 07:50 PM · On: Heartsick

Hey Kim and Michal :)

First let me start by saying that Lindsay is being a total bitch here. How could she even think that after sixteen years that she has the right to make such demands. Brian on the other hand is making a big mistake treating Justin that way because he's afraid of losing Gus. Once again damn Lindsay for making Brian feel like he is unfit as a father.

This thing with Justin and Gus needs to get resolved soon. As long as Justin keeps sending him mixed messages, Gus will never truly understand the boundaries of their frienship not to mention the strain it's going to put on his relationship with his father once the truth comes out.

Gus should have taken the time to talk to Tristan. It's obvious that he is starting to recognize his attraction to the young man. If Gus keeps turning a blind eye he is going to miss out on the opportunity to share something very special with Tristan.

You know I'll be sneaking in to check for an update in between formation times ;)

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Now don't go getting into trouble - ha!  Thanks for reading and for your comments.:)  Yes, Lindsay is not a nice person here. We will take the fact that you think she's an awful person here as a big compliment, though, because that's exactly the way Michal and I wanted her to be portrayed.  I mean, it takes a lot of nerve to come back into someone's life after 16 years of no contact.  And to answer your question, no, it won't be her that spills the beans about Justin.  She really doesn't know about him yet.  But the big shock WILL be coming up in the next chapter, and there will be plenty of other twists and turns coming up yet. 

Also, I think Justin is very vulnerable right now, but even he will realize that he and Gus cannot be anything more than friends; he's too in love with Brian now to consider that, despite his great pain. 

We'll get this updated just as soon as possible.  Thanks again for all the support, my friend.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 06:46 PM · On: Heartsick

I may have mentioned I dislike Lindsay at least Mel does not pretend to like Brian! Lindsay is a wispy manipulative bitch!

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris - well, if we have portrayed Lindsay as stiff and unsympathetic here, then our job is done - LOL!  Seriously, she is being totally unreasonable, I agree, and her own son will eventually tell her as such, in addition to what Brian has already said.  Things are quickly going to be reaching a head here very soon - the big secret is about to be revealed in the next chapter.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.  We'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 06:46 AM · On: Heartsick

Wow, things are REALLY getting complicated now! Eek! How are you going to get them out of this mess, hmmmm? Hurry with that next chapter! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag - yeah, it seems to be going from bad to worse, doesn't it?  But you know eventually we will get them all straightened out (well, in a manner of speaking, anyway - LOL!). The big shocker's coming up in the next chapter, so get ready.  The angst is definitely ramping up for a while.  Glad that you're enjoying the story, my friend.  Hopefully with me out of school for the summer, I'll have more updating time in between getting familiarized with next year's curriculum.  Thanks for reading and for the comments; Michal and I really appreciate that.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

 

P.S.  Hope you got my email a few days ago about your story.  Let me know if you have any questions.  I hope it helped.:)

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 04:05 AM · On: Heartsick

...and the sea was getting verwy wough.  OMG - why did Lindsay have to come back?  One thing I am sure of;  you'll fix it!  I really enjoyed this chapter, please please please update soon.  Jane



Author's Response:

Yes, Jane, verwy, verwy wough indeed - ha!  You must like Loony Tunes, too.:)  In fact, I think we could say that LINDSAY is Looney Tunes for thinking she's going to waltz in and take Gus away from his father.  Gus is going to have a lot to say about that, in addition to his father. The big reveal is coming up in the next chapter, and that's going to start the craziness all over again (tee-hee). But we promise to fix them all up, good as new, before we're finished.:) Thanks so much for reading and for the comments! It is greatly appreciated.  *Hugs*  Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Saskya (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 03:59 AM · On: Heartsick

Lindsay is such a b*tch!  I hope Brian velvet with Lindsay and Gus stays where it belongs! Nicely with Brian. As for Justin, poor guy, I hope Brian comes to mind, although in its nature understand his outburst. And then everyone will nicely together and happy. :)
Sorry for my English, it's not my native language, obviously :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Saskya! That's okay.:)  Michal and I are grateful to you for reading and reviewing.:)  Thank you!:)  Yes, Lindsay is definitely the woman we love to hate in this chapter - ha!  But she's about to get the wrath of BOTH Kinney men against her, and it's not going to be pretty. In the meantime, Gus is about to get the shock of his life in the next chapter, along with his father and Justin, as we get ready for the big reveal.  Stay tuned; it's coming up!  Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment, Saskya!:)  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 03:12 AM · On: Heartsick

Nice!!!!! cliff hanger. Lindsey what BITTTTCH. Poor Brian pain management 101 again. Hopefuly Jus doesn't give up on him. Good chapter.lol

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend. I know, I know - everyone's itching for the reveal.  It's coming up at the end of the next chapter. And yes, that would typically be very much like Brian to go off the deep end temporarily and insert his foot into his mouth before he thinks things through. But something tells me that Justin isn't giving up on him - and Brian isn't giving up on him, either.;) Thank you for taking the time as always to comment.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Donna (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2013 02:40 AM · On: Heartsick

Still loving this story but due the slow pace of the story and chapter postings I'm going to have to step away from it. Hope you finish if soon.

Author's Response:

Sorry to hear that, Donna. But if you have read any of my other stories, you probably know that it takes me a while to get to the big climax, because I tend to write a lot of detail in my storylines.  I suppose that's not everyone's cup of tea, though, so I can understand.  If it's any consolation, the reveal over Justin's role in both their lives is coming up at the end of the next chapter, but I guess now you will be waiting until the story is finished to continue reading.  I CAN tell you that out of 60+ stories, I personally have NEVER left a story unfinished, so you can be assured that any time my name is attached to a story as a writer or co-writer, it WILL be completed. I work full time, am an administrator for this site, have three other WIPs, and do a lot of beta work for others, so I admit sometimes there is a gap between story updates that is longer than I would like it to be.  I am not starting any other new stories until I have at least one more of mine finished, too, to hopefully alleviate some of that delay time.  I do apologize if that is too long a wait for you.

I do respect your decision, and I appreciate the comments. Sorry to hear you will no longer be reading along, though.

~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 02:03 AM · On: Heartsick

Agrrrr nooooo don't stop.
Now come back, sit behind your computer and write !! sorry I'm a little demanding.

But that's a cliffy *sighs *

* hugs *

Author's Response:

I know, my friend; I feel your pain!  But if it helps, the big reveal is (finally) coming up at the end of the next chapter. Not sure which one will be the most surprised, though:  father, son, or Justin himself.  More angst coming with it, too!  Thank you for hanging in there with us inthe meantime; it means a lot to both of us.  *Hugs*  Michal and Kim

 

P.S.  You can be as demanding as you want; it's when people DON'T want anymore that I would be worried.:)  So we thank you for the support and encouragement.

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 01:48 AM · On: Heartsick

Brian really does retreat to a dark place here.  I hope he gets out of it and realizes how special Justin is for him.

- Jackie

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Author's Response:

Hi, my friend.  I think this is typical Brian - to retreat into himself and refuse help.  Of course, Justin had nothing to do with this, but Gus is too precious to him to stop and think about what he's doing by alienating the one person he needs the most right now.  I think it won't be long, though, before things start to move in that direction.  Thank you for taking the time to read AND review (I noticed this one this time - ha!  We're working on the review notification problem, BTW, and hope to have fix for that soon).  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

Reviewer: Blanca (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 01:25 AM · On: Heartsick

Hello to Kim and Michal! One request....Can u just let Lindsay die in the next chapter, like having an accident? *evil me, hehehe* I just really hate her so much!

This chapter is really sad, you are breaking my heart. I felt so bad for Justin. I hope Brian will come to realize what he had done. He should fight Lindsay @ court, and with this he needs all the moral support esp from the one he loves....Justin. And also hopefully Gus will come to his senses that he is just infatuated with Justin and he has feelings for Tristan that he is not fully aware yet how he really felt.

Thanks for the update sweetie! {{{Hugs}}}



Author's Response:

Hi, Cindy!  We know - very sad chapter.  But believe it or not, it's setting it up eventually to put all the pieces in their proper places.;)  It's obvious that Gus is quite confused here in a lot of ways.  And you're right; the last thing Brian needs is to push Justin away.  Lindsay is more of a temporary blip here to the overall story, if that's any help.;) Some events are coming up that will make some of the characters realize how much they mean to each other - and which pair truly belongs together.

We'll get this updated again soon - thanks for reading and especially taking the time to comment, Cindy; Michal and I really appreciate that.:)  *Hugs* back ~Kim and Michal

Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2013 12:02 AM · On: Heartsick

Oh no, everything is all messed up and they still haven't even figured everything out. Hopefully Brian will come to his senses and apologize, and Lindsey will fall in a ditch and never be found. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Jessie! Thanks for reading and for your comments.  Yeah, Lindsay did a great job of really screwing everything up now, didn't she?  And the angst is just now ramping up - we still don't have the big reveal yet, but it's coming, along with some other twists and turns.  I do hope you're enjoying the story.  We'll get it updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Michal and Kim

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