Reviewer: Leather Cuff (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 02:53 PM · On: Emmett's Arrival

Oh no, this threatens to spoil everything !

Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2013 12:09 AM · On: Emmett's Arrival

I had never started this story when you first initiated it.  It could't picture Brian as a teenaged country boy.  But I'm glad I started readying it now.  You have done a good job maintaining Brian's and Justin's personalities in an alternate life.  The plot and character development of all the characters make is a wll rounded stroy that doesn't just revelve aroung justin and Brian' sex life.  Please continue a little quicker.

Author's Response:

Hi, Jean!  I'm glad that you had faith in me and gave this one a try.:)  It's the first story I've ever written from a younger standpoint, at least for Brian, so I was a little hesitant to tackle it myself.  But I have really grown to like the characters of his aunt and uncle - Sarah, especially - and I like the slower pace of this one.  I, too, enjpy a good old-fashioned PWP from time to time just like everyone else, but what really intrigues me is the slow buildup of their relationship.  So I'm happy that you're enjoying this one. 

And I apologize for the slowness in updating lately.  I committed myself to writing a story for the LJ annual QAF Fan Fiction Exchange in mid-November, which meant I had to start - and finish - a complete story by 12/29, and it grew and grew into the 19-chapter monstrosity that is now posted over here ("I Could Have Shagged All Night.")  That, in addition to my full-time teaching job, has really slowed me down lately, so I am sorry it's taking me longer to update.  If it's any consolation, I DO have the next part almost completely written, and it will be posted before I move onto my other two WIPs.  I have written around 60 stories so far, though, and have never failed to complete one, so please rest assured that this story, along with the other two WIPs, WILL be completed just like the rest have been. 

Thank you again for reading and for the feedback; it is very appreciated.  And I hope you'll bear with me until I can update it again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 13, 2013 03:08 AM · On: Emmett's Arrival

Ditto on the banner from me too! I really like this one. This takes me back to Brian in that acutal scene telling Justin about his infamous shower scene - haha. That image really fits in for this story.

:)

Author's Response:

Thanks, my friend; I appreciate the kind words.  I was very pleased with it when I got done; I like the younger look here of Justin, and deliberatly sought out a Season 1 pic of Brian, too, so he would appear on the young side as well.  And yes, you're absolutely right - it WAS from the scene where Brian was asking him if he was giving him a rocket countdown - LOL!  Thanks again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 12:04 PM · On: Emmett's Arrival

Jared really needs to be locked in a small stall with that mean steer, for about an hour. I like him about as much as I like my bad guy, haha. Can't wait for the next chapter : ) *~* Hugs, Janet

Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  That's an idea - let's pair up Glen with Jared; I think they deserve each other  - ha!  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2013 01:00 AM · On: Emmett's Arrival

I think I need a pair of cranberry gator boots, they sound divine. I hope Emmett isn't so blinded by his feelings for Jared that he agrees to ruining a the beginning of a beautiful pairing. I really think this story would be a happier place with a tasteful double funeral, Craig and Jared really need to relax, a think a dirt nap would improve them in many ways. I'm almost willing to let Cranky Uncle Will live, as long as he stays out in the barn and only comes in to the house to sleep, better yet Sarah could sew up a nice quilt and he would be comfortable on a bed of hay. So much easier at feeding time, no sheets to change, just feed the bedding to a hungry cow. I hope the social happens soon. I have a feeling Brian is going to be feeling very social, just hope he picks a good spot, I think the rabbit barn would set the mood nice. The hog pen area might not be too romantic, the noise and smell might bother Justin. Ohhh, how about the tack room by the track, the smell of leather might give them ideas...Justin must know how to use a whip to get the best performance from his steed/stud.
Lori

Author's Response:

OMG, Lori, as usual I don't know where to begin with these comments - LOL!  "Dirt nap" - ha!  And yes, I think Brian might start to feel downright frisky at the social; the question is, though, will Jared's plan but the kibosh on that dream?  Hmmm...I CAN tell you that the social does occur in the next part, so we should find out most of it at least.  I don't think the hog pen will 'set the "moo-ed" here, though (see what you're doing to me now?  LOL!).  

 

Thanks as always for your comments, my friend; they're almost worth writing a story all by itself!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 12:09 PM · On: Emmett's Arrival

Noooo...! I was just going to glance at this site. I wasn't suppose to read anything, but there was no way I could pass this story up.

I loved every little bit of this chapter from Brian confessing about the corn liquor to Emmetts cranbery boots and the scheming Jared. This is currently my favorite story of yours.

Please update soon!

Author's Response:

Hi, Sandra!  Well, I'm glad I was able to tempt you into reading.:)  I AM working on the next part right now; I just knew it would be a few days, and knew it had been a good while since I updated, so I went ahead and posted the first part.  I'll get them all straightened out (eventually!).  Thanks so much for reading and for reviewing.  BTW, ever heard of cow-chip throwing?  Well, if you haven't you're about to find out what it is - ha! *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 10:43 AM · On: Emmett's Arrival

Emmett can't possibly be that gullible, Stevie Wonder could have seen through that phony act lol. I hope Jared's so called plan to protect his brother's honor comes back to bite him in his shiftless ass.

Thank you for the banner by the way this update was just the icing on the cake ;) YOU FUCKING ROCK!!!!! JP

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Stevie Wonder could have seen through that phony act - LOVED that line!  So funny!  You haven't been taking lessons from Lori on here, have you?  LOL!  Well, you know Em - he's a sensitive sort of guy who's smitten with our arrogant jerk Jared.  But he WILL know the truth at some point. 

And you're welcome for the banner; I'm glad I could help; anytime.:)  I'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2013 09:58 AM · On: Emmett's Arrival

This is the longest courtship ever. We need alittle Brian and Justin action soon, please.

Author's Response:

Hi, Cheryll - I guess by 'action' you're not talking about the dessert judging at the town social coming up - ha!  No, I didn't think so.  Sigh...I'm working on it; I have to build up to it first (I know - and build - and build - and build..). They HAVE kissed and fooled around a little bit; if it's any consolation, they're heading in that direction (after they get rid of a certain nasty big brother!).  I hope, though, that you're still enjoying the story and will bear with me just a little longer until I can get to where you want me to be.  Thank you for reading and for the comments.  *Hugs*  ~Kim