Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2019 12:55 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Loved this chapter so much. And Justin father is so... Ugh. He is too much. He is a teen damn it,  but they are suffocating him. He is carrying the whole family on his back.

And Brian being silly xD He is so smitten with Justin hehe. Can't wait for Em to come.

And Jared is such an asshole. I know what is like to have such a brother *sigh* 

Reviewer: GuitarsAndPoetry (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2013 01:17 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

ha! A moonshined Kinney is an adorable thing. His sneaky passionate kiss was wonderful. :] I always love when writers have Justin strong and stand up for himself, a weak Justin just does'nt fit. Someone needs to continue to knock Jared of his high horse that he's too lazy to even ride. This story is great!

'"I love the sound of a train horn," he told him as their shoulders touched.  "There's just something nostalgic about them, almost hypnotic.  It's peaceful in a way."-I agree. I grew up near a train that ran across our back woods, when we moved I had a hard time sleeping without the whistle. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Tina!  I'm sorry I missed your review the other day; sorry about that!  I, too, like the idea of a drunk, singing Brian.:)  My grandmother lived in a home in Kentucky where the train ran right in front of her home, and I used to go there and visit with my parents and brothers and listen as the train got closer and closer as I lay in bed at night.  Perhaps that's why it's so nostalgic to me, too.

 

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback, Tina; I hope you continue to enjoy this story.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Kym (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2012 10:22 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

I am so late in reviewing.  RL has been kicking my butt and not in a good. way.  Had to have some minor female surgery-ok now but felt crappy for quite a while.  I couldn't use my laptop-too out of it on the meds.  Finally can see to read and type.HA!  This chapter so good.  Moonshine is the best.  I have tried it although a few years ago.  It really sets you on your ass!  Waiting fory boy Em to show up.  I really loved him a lot in the series.  I didn't want you to think I forgot about this story.  Will be waiting for another update. Ta



Author's Response:

Hi, Kym!  I'm so happy to hear from you again.  That's very considerate of you to worry about me; thank you for letting me know.  I'm sorry to hear about the surgery, but glad to hear that you're doing better now.:)  And I'm delighted that you enjoyed this chapter; I thought it was fitting that Brian discover the joys of both moonshine as well as his sunshine.:) 

Emmett is coming up in the next chapter; won't be long now.:)  I promise to update this again very soon; thank you for reading and for the feedback, Kym; I hope you continue to gain strength and feel better.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: November 15, 2012 08:20 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Cow tipping!!! absolutely hilarious!

can't wait for the social.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for taking the time to review; I thought if anyone could accomplish cow-tipping, it would be a drunk but resolute Brian - ha!  Unfortunately, even Brian couldn't pull that one off.:)  I'm so delighted that you're enjoying this story; I promise to update soon. Thank you again.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: November 14, 2012 01:40 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

 

thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, Orhida!  (Pretty name, BTW).  I'm glad you are enjoying this story.  I will get it updated again soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2012 07:29 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Brian and Justin were really cute in this chapter. 

I hope Justin find out what Jared is up too. 

Great chapter, looking forward in what happens next. 



Author's Response:

Hi, Lynn! Thank you for reading this latest chapter and for your comments.  I am really enjoying this take on a younger Brian and how he is slowly bonding with both Justin as well as his aunt and uncle.  I will definitely have Emmett's arrival as well as the town social coming up in the next chapter, and it won't be long before Justin reveals more about the circumstances surrounding Dale's death.  Thank you again for the support.  BTW - noticed we both have a favorite author in common - confused_bliss.:)  If I need a 'dominating'  Brian to handle Jared I know where to turn to - LOL!  I'll get this updated soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 12:08 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Finally, the truth about 'cow tipping' has been exposed. Ha ha ha. What a fun chapter! Can't wait for the social! TAG



Author's Response:

Hi, Tag; yes, the ugly truth is out:  cowtipping is 'udder' nonsense (sorry, couldn't resist - LOL!).  I really did mean to get to the social - and to Emmett's arrival - but my normal overactive imagination and verbosity won out over my good intentions in the end.  

Thank you for reading and for the comments, my friend; I'll get this updated again very soon.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim 

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:25 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Yup! we were waiting for the social. We can wait.  This Jared is a trip.  None of us like him.  Lee especially dislikes him as he reminds him of a kid he went to school with=not a nice kid picked on a lot of kids.  Lee said he beat this kid up in 8th grade and caught hell-but it was worth it he said and the kid stopped his attacks.  Who would have thought Lee was such a beast.!!  Ha!.  Where are you taking us next, young lady?  Nonie is doing fantastic.  She will have to stay out of work for six weeks at least.  She has come to stay with me for a while.  It's easier for me as I'm closer to work this way.  Three workers here have attached themselves to me as the rumor mill has it about my reading prowess.  I guess I have to include them in my "peeps".  We have a place to read now also.  Funny how things ebb and flow.  One young man has just purchased the 5 years of qaf.  It still amazes me how many fans this show still has after all these years so he is really turned on to your stories.  I have had him read several and he is hooked.  So if you get reviews from Sam-you will know who he is.  BB is good, still working hard and dating lots!!  lol



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Hello, ever-growing Peeps!  You are so wonderful to find new recruits for my stories - I can't tell you how much your confidence in me means, lindc; thank you for all the wonderful support you've given me and continue to give me.  I hope I can continue for a long time to write stories that you and your friends will enjoy.:)  It gives me a lot of pleasure to do that.

Tell Nonie I am very relieved that she is doing well and that I am thinking about her!  That's wonderful news!  And tell Lee good for him for standing up to that jerk like Justin did with his brother.  As you can imagine, though, Jared is none too pleased at the moment, and that little green monster is eating him alive.  He will be using Emmett in a not-so-nice way coming up to try and drive a wedge between the two boys, but we all know whatever gains he makes will be short-lived. 

It sounds like your new friend Sam is quite hooked on QAF just like me!  Tell him about the plans for the QAF con in LA next June; they're still working on it, but I'm very hopeful they'll pull it off.  He might be interested in attending - it was wonderful at the one in Germany to see all of them in person (except Gale - he'd better show up this time - grrrrrr!). 

I'll be updating this very soon to include Em's arrival and the town social; tell Lee his favorite is up next!  Thanks again for everything.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:16 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Haha Brian Brian Brian you stupid town boy * giggles * .
Well done Justin, stand up for yourself !!

* big hug *

and now of to do some homework ... bleeeh.

Author's Response:

Hi, Marny!  Yes, Brian is quite entertaining as a drunk, isn't he?  LOL!  I don't think he was a bullfighter in another life, though, do you?:)  I'm glad I wrote Justin in a more forceful way in this chapter, too; after all, he is his father's meal ticket and he knows it; that gives him a lot of leverage IMO. 

Hope school is going well!  If it's any comfort, I may not HAVE homework, but I have to grade 18 sets of it.:)  Thanks for taking the time to read this, my friend, and for the encouragement.  I'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

I learnt something in this chapter too; you can’t tip a cow; but can you tip a heifer? LOL Yay, that’s the type of Justin I like to see, one that uses his brain and can see he has an advantage. What will this town social bring and how is Em following Jared around going to work to his advantage? Please update as soon as possible. Thank you for the long chapter.


Cheers

Author's Response:

Hi, my friend! I'm so delighted that you liked this latest chapter!  To answer your question, I would imagine a heifer weighs pretty much the same as a cow, so in my scientific opinion I would still say that cow-tipping is out - ha!  The things I have to research for this story!  At least they have indoor plumbing; when I was growing up and we went to visit my grandmother in Kentucky, she had an outhouse for a long time; trust me, it was a loooonnng walk to get there when it was cold!:)

Jared will be using Emmett in a not-so-nice way in the next chapter, but of course we would expect nothing less.  I promise to update this again very soon; thank you for all the feedback, Flossee, and for being so supportive of my stories, my friend; I greatly appreciate that.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

lol what a fun chapter and Jared nearly got his comeuppance so I hope that happens soon. As always a wonderful chapter thank you xxChris

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris!  First of all, thank you again for all the support you give my stories; we go a long way back now, don't we?:)  I am very appreciative of that.  Thanks, too for the feedback on this chapter.  I'm very happy that you enjoyed it. I do think that Craig has discovered that his 'gravy train' may be coming to an end eventually.  All I can say is that the town social should stir quite a few things up!;)

I'll get this updated again very soon.  Thanks again, Chris.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 12:05 PM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

That damn Jared.....he just needs to realize that Brian has no interest in him at all especially after he lied about their only encounter.

Craig needs to take heed to what Jennifer is trying to tell him about his favoring one son over the other. Kudos to Justin for standing up for himself and reminding Craig what their family would be losing if he continues to be harder on him and coddles Jared.

Please update soon JP

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Thank you for the feedback, Sweetheart!  You're so faithful about that, and I do appreciate it; it's always very encouraging to me.  Yes, Justin can be quite feisty when he's stirred up, can't he?:)  Jared, I'm afraid, isn't done provoking his brother; I think it's just too much of a wound to his pride and his ego to let it drop.  Let's just say that the town social should be quite interesting in a lot of ways!

I'll get this updated again very soon; thanks again for all the support.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 11:18 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

OMG, this chapter! I LOVED IT, LOVED IT, LOVED IT! Brian's drunken antics were hilarious - the attempted singing, the moonshine bottle hugging, the cow-tipping attempt, etc, etc, etc... I laughed so hard, cause I could picture it so clearly.

Justin standing up for himself and standing up to his father was pure AWESOMESAUCE! I wanted to stand up and cheer. I love it when Justin is displaying his bravery and strength. It's one of the reasons why I love his character and this scene - way NOT to be a doormat! Just fantastic.

Can't wait to read about the social. This story is, frankly, exceeding all my expectations and I like it more with every chapter.

Cheers,

Vin



Author's Response:

Hi, Vin, my friend!  Wow - thank you for those wonderful comments; I appreciate that so much!  Yes, I suspect that a lot of readers were thinking Brian on a farm didn't sound too interesting or appealing.  Hopefully, though, they'll give this one a try in hopes I can change their mind.:)  I'm so glad that you're enjoying this story!  Jared is not going to let this drop; not before he tries at least one more time to snare Brian away from Justin, but he's too late - the boy is firmly hooked now (he just doesn't quite realize that yet - ha!).

I'll get this updated again shortly.  Thanks again, Vin - and thanks for being the wonderful person and encouraging friend that you are.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 11:11 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Ha- Brian is funny when he's drunk, but I bet he's going to have a whopper of a hangover the next day. Craig's favoritism of Jared over Justin continues to show, and Jared can't stand the fact that Brian has the hots for Justin. I think eventually his jealousy is going to bite him in the butt. Can't wait for the next update and I really want some blueberry cobbler!  ~*~ Hugs, Janet

 

 



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet - me, too - and pumpkin pie, and strawberry shortcake and butter pecan ice cream... uh, where was I?  LOL!  Oh, yeah!  I think you're right - Jared's pride has been wounded, so he will have to lash out one more time at a minimum with some pretty dire results, at least in the short term.  But eventually he's going to realize he is wasting his time - Brian has found his match.;)

Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend; I can always count on you for support.:)  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2012 10:11 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Hello, my dear. I am so enjoying this story. As much as I worry about Jared and any of his machinations, I love the banter between our two stubborn boys. Justin is doing his best to keep Brian on his toes. I couldn't enjoy that more! I cannot wait to read more and see how this unique taming commences. At this point, not sure who is taming who, though. Excellent and fun update, my friend. *Hugsss*



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend - love that line about 'who is taming who' - so true!! LOL!  Thanks so much for the comment and for reading, too:)  *Hugs back*

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 09:57 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

Oooh.  A little heat between our boys.  Justin knows that he wants him, but made a good decision not to do it when Brian's drunk.  Good story.

- Jackie



Author's Response:

Thanks, Sweetie - I thought readers might like this chapter a little more than the last one, since at least the boys were back together (that Brian's a sneaky little rascal, isn't he?  LOL!).  As always, I'm grateful for your support.  Thank you for taking the time to comment.:)  I'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2012 09:55 AM · On: Shine On, Shine On Harvest Moon....

I cannot wait for the town social!! oooh I hope Jared fails miserably at whatever plan he's going to concoct next, he definitely needs taken down a peg or 3 lol :D



Author's Response:

Hi, Hannah! Thanks for reading and for your comments, my friend.  Don't worry - something tells me that Jared's plan won't quite turn out the way he thinks.;)  So glad you're enjoying the story; thanks again - I'll get this updated again very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

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