Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2019 03:46 PM · On: Epilogue
loved it, was a littel confusing sometimes
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. It was a tad complex, but I tend to get that way when dealing with the supernatural. The plot line was complicated, and required a stretch of the imagination, but I'm very glad you enjoyed it! Thanks!
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2018 02:35 AM · On: Epilogue
Great story from start to finish and all in a day's time!!! And I can't wait to start the next one!!!
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2017 12:40 PM · On: Epilogue
This was a brilliant read. I loved it. Off to read the 3rd part in the series. I'm so glad you wrote a sequel!
Author's Response: :-)
Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2016 08:02 PM · On: Epilogue
So glad I started re-reading this series, it is just as good, or even better, the second time around. I'm off to start the follow up finale:-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Eye for An Eye
OK, i wasn t really going to say anything on this one but I'm cracking....first...FANtastic story...and two...you are SUCH a melodrama Queen! Are you sure you're not a fag?? ;)
Author's Response: lol I always say I must have been a drag queen in a prior night. I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I loved writing it! In some ways, I like it better than BTWYTWY. :-)
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2012 10:55 AM · On: Epilogue
Well, Gina Marie, where do I begin?
This story brought every imaginable emotion - I don't know if I have ever read a story with more to offer.
- we had humor...Fran Fine - what a hoot!
- we had redemption - who didn't want to see Joan admit she loved Brian?
and watching her learn to love Justin as well - what a bonus!
- we had the probably my favorite secondary story ever! - and more - not
only Andy's story - but Alexander's story - and of course - the curse!
- we had not only new characters who quickly became beloved - but also
the best break-out of a tragically under-used character with the full
bodied story line for Emmett - a place in the family and a partner we
love - who loves him heart and soul
- we had amazing storyline dictated use of each and every character
introduced (except for the guy a Babylon in the BTWY-TWU series -
what as his name - jordan maybe?) - love how you do that
- we have good vs evil - Heaven vs - Hell - faith in God's will - leaving us
with even Brian believing - what a joy
- and we have probably the longest review I've ever written - if I don't stop
I'll rival the length of the story - lol
so - I'll close with a thank you from the bottom of my heart - (although my family will not thank you - they haven't seen me in days - and I got nothing done on this vacation that I wanted to except read this story - lol)
hope your daughter is thriving and healthy - and that you continue to write long into the future - while I try to find time to move on to A Stitch in Time without being disowned and unemployed
as always - loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: I never had a review leave me feeling so....good! I can't tell you how much it means to me that you loved my story! I loved writing, and I fell in love with each of my characters. I'm so glad you did too. Thank you for your lovely review!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2012 11:50 PM · On: Prologue
...and this is exactly what I mean - here in this beginning - you weave a story of such depth of love that one can't help but be drawn into it - even with characters that we do not already have such a glowing history with - it makes one feel like that type of love might be possible here in the real world as well - and now, of course, I wait for more of the same with our boys, comfortably at home with what we know and love - and yet sure to be surprised as you tell your story - onward.....
loving life,
Charle
Author's Response: :-) Sooooo glad you're loving life, and my story! I really liked writing this sequel, I hope you enojoy the story!
Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2010 11:58 PM · On: Epilogue
Bravo! This sequel is extraordinary ! I read it in almost one go through 3 days!
I was at first afraid : I guess the plot with Adeline very early and though it will bore me to read it BUT NO the part about the curse was really well written. Your amagination put up an amazing plot and an ending that I couldn't come up with.
Very susprising and excellent ! I was afraid this didn't get an happy ending but it was formidable! I can't wait to read the sequel... after some shut eyes time! Lol
Author's Response: Thank you so much for this lovely comment! I do hope you enjoy A Stitch in Time. It's another paranormal. And the end of this series. I am toying with the idea of writing another sequel...but we shall see.
I do have a new story currently on MW, (Its a WIP), Broken Open. It's not part of the BTWYTWY series, but I do hope you give it a try. It's a detective story staring our two favorite boys.! But as is typical in my writing, it's not your 'normal' detective story! lol
Enjoy your holidays, and thank you for reading!
Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2010 02:33 AM · On: Epilogue
Thank you. Thank you for making me believe that through faith, love conquers all. I was so happy Brian was able to see Andy again and have everything resolved with the help and sacrifice of Elliott. This was one intense sequel and I loved every chapter. It was worth the read. Thank you so much, now on to the next story.
Author's Response: So glad you liked the sequel. Thank you for commenting. I hope you enjoy A Stitch in Time.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:20 PM · On: Epilogue
Well ain't that special? I think we have a part 3 to read.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:04 PM · On: Full Circle
I saw this coming. Very well written I might add.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:31 PM · On: The Greatest Gift
I bet hell doesn't want him.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 02:30 PM · On: Lock and Key
Well that was something to read.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:51 PM · On: Finding Alexander
Can a curse be reversed by a blessing, anti-curse?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:24 PM · On: What's Love Got To Do With It
Glad Justin got the new instructions.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 01:06 PM · On: Pattern Of Deceit
I can't stir this thick plot.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 12:32 PM · On: Of Angels and Demons
I can't see the abortion ending the curse; I see the opposite will do it.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:57 AM · On: Eye for An Eye
This story cannot get any thicker I fear.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 11:24 AM · On: The Winds
I wonder how the vow affects the family.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:41 AM · On: The Family Tree
I wonder how the curse can end.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 10:14 AM · On: Forget me...Not
Does Justin have all his memories back?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:57 AM · On: The Deception
Another baby? Oh they should have many more I guess.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 09:15 AM · On: When I Need You
Would have been more fun in the hay of the barn.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:49 AM · On: The Curse
The June 6th date is very important to the story.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 08:08 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
Slowly Justin returns.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 07:30 AM · On: It's In His Kiss
How long will Justin be lost?
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:52 AM · On: Do I Move You
Justin will have a very slow recovery.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 06:14 AM · On: Breaking the Silence
Brian will solve this problem.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 05:59 AM · On: My Brothers' Keeper
I wonder how long Justin's memory will be gone.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 05:24 AM · On: Not All Memory is Sweet
They have to get Justin out of that house.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:43 AM · On: Full Disclosure
The next morning will be exciting.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:21 AM · On: The Search Begins
This will be very touchy once they find Justin.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 04:02 AM · On: Body and Soul
I have very little memory reading this story so I can enjoy it again.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:35 AM · On: The Awakening
I wonder how they can find Justin.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:21 AM · On: Life's Stormy Voyage
I have an idea where this is going.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2010 03:04 AM · On: The Graduation Party
Very interesting extension of this storyline. Jason seems to be ok with all things considered.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 04:47 AM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
France, all the gang in France sounds exciting.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2010 03:56 AM · On: Prologue
I guess I read on into the series again. It's been a while and this time once again I'll give brief chapter comments like the first story.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2009 12:07 AM · On: The Graduation Party
Wow,,,,, Jagger seems to be following Brian's footsteps too closely..... hopefully he will straighten up before he repeats everything Brian did...
Author's Response: There is a whole 'sub plot' involving Jagger in this one. I do hope you enjoy!
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 07:14 PM · On: Epilogue
I remember reading this story and it inspired me to try to write myself. I could read how much you enjoyed the creative process. Thanks for our work.
Author's Response: Thanks JT! And may I return the compliment. You have a wonderful imagination! I love your story and all the nuiances you have in it. I always look forward to an update of yours.
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Epilogue
I finally got a chance to finish reading this story. I know I have said it many times, but again, and again – thank you so much for writing this story and sharing with us. I just have to make a few comments. Thank you for bringing Andy in to the world of Brian and Justin. Actually, thank you so much for bringing all those wonderful characters in the story, but Andy – well Andy is Andy. Ok, just one more thank you. I really wanted and asked you to help Elliot. Well you did it – he has wings and he is an Angel. Yes!! That was wonderful. Finally, what a terrific way to end this story, celebrating the central figure of this universe, BRIAN KINNEY. A man well worth celebrating. Well you finished it a story and characters I won’t soon forget. One last time – thank you! DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you DavidR For sharing in this journey with me. BTWYTWY and RTM have truly been a labor of love for me that's lasted almost two years! Wow, I can't believe so much time has gone by. I'm so glad I was able to give you joy with this story. You are right when you surmised that at the end, I brought it back to the central figure of this AU I created, the one and only Brian Kinney! For he is that to me. I consider myself a big film and TV buff. I've fallen in love with many wonderful characters on the big and little screen over the past 40 years, but I have NEVER come across a character like Brian Kinney. I've been asked to write another installment of what's now becoming a series. I'm thinking about it. I simply can't leave these characters! Just like Justin can't ever leave Brian, and visa a versa. I'm forever hooked! Thank you for your kind words. Happy holidays! Gina Marie
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2008 05:47 PM · On: Epilogue
I thought I would read it again, it s just so wonderful.
Author's Response: Hey gerri, I just want to let you know I've got a story in mind to continue in this universe. Another 'adventure' to throw our boys into. I'm still working on the details. Again, thank you so much for your constant support of this story. Though I think it's now officially a series...lol
Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2008 04:41 AM · On: Prologue
thank you so much for letting us be a part of this lovely journey, i have read it from the beginning and i have loved every thing about it. Many Hugs Buffytess
Author's Response: Thank you so much for coming along on this journey with me! And thank you so much for your comment. Feedback is so appreciated. I'm glad you enjoyed my stories.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 11:44 AM · On: Finding Alexander
Excellant chapter. Love the showdown of words between Elliot and Joffith. Yeah Brian finally gets it, so he says, about his conversation w/ Elliot. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks alys! Elliot is a force to be reckoned with! it's good to have him on your side. Brian does understand, but applying that 'understanding' into action is going to be hard. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:57 AM · On: Finding Alexander
Oh my! This gets more intense by the second. Great idea about Rena helping Andy remember. I'm just on the edge of my seat with this story! Brian is gonna have his hands full with his Mini Me! Loved Gus' phone call. I hope Brian heedes Elliots words and just continues to remember that he and Justin are stronger together. And to let things be. It will be hard for him, I know he'll stuggle with that. He hates to see the people he loves suffer in anyway. By the way, in the beginning of the chapter you wrote Emmett, did you mean Elliot? Its in the third sentence. Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Shit, I did mean elliot! Thanks for catching that, I'll go correct it right now. (must have Emmett on my mind lol) You're right about Brian, he'll have to give up control and trust that whatever is about to happen, he and Justin will survive without his interference. And as we know, giving control up isn't going to be easy for Brian. There's going to come a point where Justin is going to be hurting, and his instincts are going to want to jump in and protect him, but he can't. He has to let the events unfold with out interfering. Ok, dont' want to give too much away! Soo glad you're enjoying the story! I'll work on the next chapter this week. Thanks for commenting, and for catchign that 'oops' for me!
Reviewer: TaraN (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Finding Alexander
Gina Marie: Another great chapter. It was the perfect escape that I needed to find this update. RL has been a mess of late. Look forward to your update soon.
Author's Response: I'm sorry to here that TaraN. Sending LOTS of positive vibes your way! You've always been so kind, and supportive to me when life was kicking my ass. Hang in there. The world's a fucking mess right now, but as the saying goes, "this too shall pass." I hope your troubled times pass quickly. GM
Reviewer: camjakefan (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 08:29 AM · On: Finding Alexander
I just love this story. I can't wait for the next update. The sex waas hot. I adored the conversation between Justin and Gus. i can't wait to see what happens once Andy remembers.
Author's Response: Thanks camjakefan. Some bumpy roads ahead. Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 05:10 AM · On: Finding Alexander
Another heartbreaking chapter. Andy is starting to forget who he is because he's been in Jason's body for too long. He really needs to remember his past life as Alexander before it is too late. I just shake this feeling that this is a calm before the storm and things are about to get bad to worse for Brian and Justin. I just hope Brian and Justin remember to keep faith and everything will work out. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Lynn I couldn't have sumarized it better. you are right on the money in saying that Brian and Justin have to "REMEBER TO KEEP FAITH". Thatt is what Elliot meant when he said to brian, 'remember who you are'. He has to remember that his and Justin's love is strong enough to survive anything. Thanks for commenting! next chapter should shed some more light on the situation, and the solution.
Reviewer: berrynutz (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2008 01:11 PM · On: The Deception
What a cliffhanger! Please, please, please (yes I'm begging) add another chapter soon! If you didn't catch on I love this story and I'm excited to see how things go. This story is every bit as addicting as BTWY. I look for a new chapter every day (I know you don't post every day, but I still keep my eye out)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you love this story, and BTWY! Both are labors of love for me. I knew this chapter would cause some intense feelings, but I ask my readers to trust me. I'm working on the next chapter now. Things always look darkest before the dawn! thanks so much for commenting, and for letting me know you like my stories! *hugs*
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2008 12:18 AM · On: Prologue
Great chapter. I am looking forward to the confrontation between Brian and Corrine. lol. Justin really needs to tell Adeline the truth, that he is not her husband before it is too late. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Lynn. Everythings coming to a head in the next chapter. Stay tuned! So glad you're still enjoying this story.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2008 05:06 PM · On: Prologue
Jagger and Corrine...the hetero Justin and Brian! Its like Brian is seeing his what he and Justin went through from the outside now. I also love the fact that even though Justin has no memory of his family, he's still protective and has a bond with them. Loved him being there when Jagger needed his DJ! And the "wife" is so unstable, it frightens me what that woman can be capable of when Justin finally talks to her.
Author's Response: LOL Yeah, the straight version of B/J! If you noticed though, I can't write explicit straight sex scenes! LOL B/J got me spoiled! You are right, Brian is watching his and Justin's realtionship from the outside being and observer to his son's. It's going to put a new perspective on things for him. Adeline is very frightening. We're going to find out just how much in the next chapter. Thanks for commenting Kat! I'm so glad you're still enjoying this sequel.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2008 12:38 PM · On: When I Need You
they are so much alike. the first half od the chapter i kept thinking, brian and justin all over again. brian proved that with his own thoughts. this thing with adeline, why is justin putting it off? i'm afraid she's going to do something to brian just to keep justin with her. i'm reading, all engrossed, when you throw in the zinger..." "Guess whose coming to dinner?" He said. "Sydney Poitier?" Brian replied cheekily. "Who?" Justin asked. Brian groaned. that was so perfect.
Author's Response: As usual, very astute! Adeline does want to keep Justin with her, and has planned to do just that! Justin has this 'feeling' why he can't tell adeline yet. It's a good thing too, as you'll find out. Now that his memory is shot, his natural psychic abilities, (hereditary) is kickin in and he 'knows' to wait. I love putting humor in my stories. they tend to be too serious and angsty at times! lol As for Jagger and Corrine, yes, very much like B/J. I just like writing the jagger character. Gives me a chance to explore brian in his younger days. well, what I think he'd be like. Glad you liked this chapter sjmpets. The next one will be somewhat surprising,...I hope... : -)
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2008 06:54 PM · On: When I Need You
jagger seems a really tough and stubborn guy. brian and justin can be so funny.. just like an old married couple...:-)) rose
Author's Response: LOL uh oh! I don't think Brian would like being compared to an old married couple! But I know what you mean. Even without his memory, he and Justin just. well.. fit.. :-) thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2008 03:11 PM · On: When I Need You
I loved Jagger calling Dan about 10 different names lol. I was so worried Brian wasnt going to answer his phone, luckily he did and hopefully after Justins talk with him Jagger will be ok for now atleast. Brian and Justin's little spat was hot.
Author's Response: I love when those little impromptu fights B/J have end up in hot sex. :-) Jagger and Corrrine are going to have a rough go at it. Our boys are going to have to lend a helping hand in that relationship. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2008 12:40 PM · On: The Curse
WOW!! WOW!! What a story, you amaze me! You have to add another chapter(s) soon. This is such a page turner!
Author's Response: Thanks Kat! Things are moving slowly, but I'm working on it.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2008 07:32 AM · On: The Curse
great twist on how they are entertwined for generations in the past. love the chapter and as alwasy look forward to more
Author's Response: Thanks sfscarlet! I'm working on the next chapter tonight. I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 10:07 PM · On: The Curse
oh my my!!! *bouncy* just a fast post to say : *grin* What's can I say? You always surprise me and I love this story! xmao and ciao
Author's Response: Thanks kika! I'm glad you're still enjoying it. Some fun stuff coming up....Stay tuned!
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 10:07 PM · On: The Curse
oh my my!!! *bouncy* just a fast post to say : *grin* What's can I say? You always surprise me and I love this story! xmao and ciao
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2008 09:26 PM · On: The Curse
gina - i don't know why i got logged off but i just wanted you to know that i was anonymous. it's me, of course i would pick up on adeline drugging justin. i'm that devoted that i always try to find something hidden in your work. lol sherry
Author's Response: Ah I should have known it was you! You always get me! *huge hug* Glad your back! I missed my 'sjmpets!' The next chapter will be a little lighter. More fun, less 'ominous' some Jag/Cor and B/J fun.
Reviewer: aries (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 06:31 PM · On: The Curse
OMG finally the curse is revealed!! I absolutely love this series! I think you've done an awesome job keeping everyone in character and really developed them all including the new ones you've created -I love them all esp Fran and James! :) And of course the plot is very well paced, not too dragged out and never dull, keeping us guessing constanly. Anyways, just wanted to say thank you for sharing your brilliant story with us :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting aries! This one is a bit more difficult to write. The plot line is more complicated and I'm trying to wove it in with BTWYTWY. I'm so glad you're enjoying it!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 09:48 AM · On: The Curse
omg. justin's family was cursed, brian's family was cursed. but how about andy? how did he see alexander's past? if the curse is suppose to be over why isn't it? is it because of brian that it continues?so many questions that i'll have to wait to find the answers to. adeline kept justin drugged with the tea without him knowing. i think without her knowing really too.
Author's Response: Yes, lots of questions will be answered in upcoming chapters. I'm so glad you're enjoying this! And I'm glad you picked up on Adeline drugging Justin. there will be conseqences to that as well. As many of my readers know, my stories tend to be multi-demensional. "soap operish" if you will. Lots of mini plot and storylines going on at the same time. Thank you for commenting, and I hope you continue to enjoy this story!
Reviewer: berrynutz (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 09:46 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
I love this story and look forward to every chapter. I just have one question...didn't you in 'Before There Was You, There Was You' have Brian pretty much wisk Justin away from Ethan to go meet Rena in New York? If I'm thinking of the right story wouldn't that have made their office reunion not happen and so Justin wouldn't be able to remember it. I may be wrong. It doesn't really matter because you are a wonderful writer and like I said before this is a terrific story. I wait for each chapter eagerly!!
Author's Response: No, you're right. I missed that! Damn! They did make up at the loft, not at his office. My bad. I might have to go back and rewrite that memory . Instead of Justin remembering having sex with Brian on his desk in his office, I'll rewrite it so that he remembers Brian having reunion sex with him at the loft. Thanks for pointing that out. I am a stickler for details, hate when I miss one. This one is easy enough to fix though. I'm glad you're enjoying the story! And thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: TaraN (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 09:30 AM · On: Prologue
Gina: I realize that Brian was quasi adopted into Andy and Rena's family. However, if Andy is a decendent of Alex and Alex was an O'Hara and Joan is an O'Hara then Brian is one too. Which makes him Andy and Alex distant cousins also. Did I miss something there?
Author's Response: No no, you got it right. Andy is a descendant of Alex. But Rena isn't. I know it's confusing, but there is an explination. I just don't want to give too much away. Ok, I guess by telling you that Rena isn't a descendant and Andy is pretty much tells you that one of them was fathered by Emilian, and one wasn't.... :-) But to answer your question, yes. They are all descendants of the O'Hara clan.
Reviewer: TaraN (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2008 05:52 AM · On: Prologue
What an AMAZING chapter!!! Great job. I love spirituality and metaphysics. I guess that is to be expected from a Piscean born with a veil. LOL!!! So Brian and Justin are distant cousins. Andy/Rena and Brian and Justin are distant cousins. Was Andy born with a veil too? As bad as this is, the silver lining is that they can all say that they are blood related family no matter what. The curse explains why Joan's brother died. Adain. I like how you use the first letters of each persons name to tie it all together. We have Adain, Andy, Alex and Justin and Jonathon. I wonder if any other members of the gang fit into this blood line? So many questions and possibilities. Please update soon.
Author's Response: OMG TaraN I could sooo kiss you! You picked up on things I was worried would go unnoticed. YES! The first letters of the names...Alex,Adian,Andy...all related, descendants of Alexander. Justin is a descendant of Jonathon. YES they are all blood related. BUT.... Remember Andy and Rena are Brian's 'adopted' family, not blood related. Brian was raised by the "Cardies." Maria and Emilian. So how is Andy connected? And he IS connected. :-) Stay tuned! Also, why hasn't the curse ended? That clue is in the curse itself... I'm sooo glad you're enjoying this! It's extremely difficult for me to write precisely because I'm a stickler for details so everything has to 'fit', has to connect and make sense. I'm constantly going back to BTWYTWY to fact check. (like George, Nana's brother who has a penchance for wearing female underwear--she mentioned him once when she attended Justin's and Brian's "Celebration ceremony" Justin asked her if she was ok with him being gay, and she told him about uncle George. Well, he plays a role in this story as well) Anyway! Thank you, thank you, thank you! Your comment validates that the story is 'working' and people are following it. I hope you continue to enjoy it!
Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2008 12:11 AM · On: The Curse
This is truly an incredible story. The plot is so mesmerizing it just draws me in- I love the intricacy and the way you tie everything together (I’m so intrigued by the ‘June 6th’ curse’…). I’m sorry your RL is a bit unsettled now (I can sympathise ;)), but I’m glad you can find the sanctity in writing this that I find in reading it. Thank you!
Author's Response: Thank you Sapphire! The storyline is a bit complicated, I hope the readers can follow along. There is more to the lineage, more clues in the curse itself as to why it's not over yet, and a mystery that ties Andy into all of this. Thank you so much for commenting! And thank you for understanding about RL - I always look forward to one of your updates!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 11:36 PM · On: The Curse
Such a powerful chapter. Now we know the reason the curse was cast on Brian and Justin's family way back when. I really do hope Brian and his friends find a way to lift that curse. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanks Lynn! There's more to the lineage, and a loophole in the curse that keeps it going. Ok, I always give away too much! LOL Glad your still enjoying it! Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 08:37 PM · On: The Curse
As much as I love the story involving B/J dirctly this stuff is just so intriguing, thanks.
Author's Response: Thanks Gerri! But never fear, there is PLEANTY of B/J coming up! And Jagger and Corrine! I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 08:19 PM · On: The Curse
wow, what a mystery/ full of symbology story you have going. Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks alys! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I hope it's a bit fanciful, but I'm having fun writing it. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 05:42 PM · On: The Curse
this chapter was fantastic. how do you come up with such amazing ideas?? you´re a genius :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks rose! RL is so unsettling, writing is my way of escaping. And what better way then with our boys! Thanks for your comment!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 02:21 PM · On: The Curse
this chapter had me on the edge of my seat, so if on Justins side the 7 generations of sons were finished before he was born then Justin should be free, so does that mean when Brian was born the curse hadnt finished so he has the curse? great chapter, update soon
Author's Response: You're following the story perfectl But it's a little more complicated (involed?) than that. There is one more surprise, that no one knows about that James will uncover down the road. When both family histories are revealed, it will still be a mystery why the curse isn't broken yet. Clue: It's in the curse itself. Anywayyy! I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: June 25, 2008 02:12 PM · On: The Curse
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!! i was so glad to see an update so soon :) Keep the chapters coming ;) all the best, Sigi
Author's Response: Thanks Sigi! I hope it's not too complicated. I'm trying to unfold past events to explain our boys current situation. More to come! Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
Like always I put the post in the wrong one!!! Uff! (ch.13)...re-post here: It's a joy to read the part with Brian and Emmett. I love their interaction! AUUU Jagger! You fallin hard! Yes! Justin rememeber something more! *bouncy* Thanks for this wanderful chapter!!! xmao
Author's Response: Thank you kika! I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! I'm working on the next chapter now, unraveling more of the mystery. I too LOVE emmett and brian! I've always thought they had a special freindship. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2008 10:11 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
It's a joy to read the part with Brian and Emmett. I love their interaction! AUUU Jagger! You fallin hard! Yes! Justin rememeber something more! *bouncy* Thanks for this wanderful chapter!!! xmao
Reviewer: DavidR (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 11:52 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
Wow, wonderful chapter. So much going on. As far as RL for you, and the wait for another chapter – so what? I am not going anywhere. Whenever you publish a chapter, I will be here to read it. No rush, just do what you have to do. June 6th huh? I am glad James islooking into the back grounds of both Andy and Justin. It should be interesting how it all lays out. In the meantime, it is good to see Justin getting his memory back. Terrific ending to the chapter.
Well – that is it for now. I will continue to follow this storyand smile each time I see a chapter posted. I know I have thanked you for this story several times. What the heck – thank you, thank you, thank you – it is really good reading. I like all those new characters, there are so many wonderful people in this story.Too many for me to mention now. DavidR
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment DavidR! And for your kind words. "big hug". I would just LOVE to write all day! I get such pleasure from it. *sigh* Thank you for understanding how difficult life can be sometimes. But, to quote Debbie Novotney, "sometimes all you can do is hold on and wait until the scenery changes." That's what I'm doing. In the meantime, writing this story is sooo much fun for me. And hearing from readers such as yourself, makes my day. I'm thrilled to know others are enjoying reading this story as much as I am enjoying writing it. This story is difficult to write because of the complex storyline. I hope I do it justice. Thank YOU, for sticking with me, and letting me know I'm doing O.K. :-) some surprises coming up. Stay tuned!
Reviewer: hccmain (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2008 10:43 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
OMG! I love this story! You must update NOW!
Author's Response: Thanks hccmain! I'll try to update soon. Life is kicking my A$$ right now. :-( But I promise to do my best to update as quickly as possible. I'm glad you are enjoying my story! Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 02:47 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
Ahh! Perfect ending. Can't wait for an update. I love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks Cait! I hope to get the next chapter up sooner. It's just been a crazy time for me. I'm glad your enjoying the story!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 01:38 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
Finally!!! *lol* Brian and Justin finally connected physically as well as emotionally. I just loved the last part when Justin told Brian he remembered he loved him and told him so. Very sweet. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeahh! lol I feel like you. FINALLY Justin realizes he loves Brian! I was happy to FINALLY post this chapter! lol. I liked that last line too. I could just imagine Brian's face hearing Justin say that. :-) Thank for commenting Lynn!
Reviewer: Eileen (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 12:21 AM · On: Getting To Know You...
I love this series... It is wonderful...
Author's Response: Thank you Eileen! Feedback is so appreciated. My readers are the ones who inspire me to go on, and challenge myself to do better. Thank you so much for commenting. I hope you continue to enjoy this story.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2008 11:30 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
corrine is so lost in her feelings for jagger. let her talk to brian. it was once the same position for him and justin. twelve years older and a buddiing artist who's career was about to take off. she's fighting it just like he did, and look where it got him. having a picnic at night on a hill top in france, with the man he loves, who doesn't remember much, yet...... now remembers that he loves brian in return.
Author's Response: You're right, the situation between Jagger and Corrine is very much like B/J's. As always, you are following perfectly! I do plan on having Corrine go to Brian for advice down the road. There is so much to deal with before then however, (I feel another long story building here. lol) I've a surprise coming up that might change the direction of the plot. Loved how you summed this up.."who doesn't remember much, yet...now remembers that he loves Brian in return." Perfectly said. Justin STILL doesn't remember much about Brian, BUT he now remembers the love. Very significant. Also that you added 'in return'. Signifcant too cause he accepts completly that Brian loves him. Thanks sjmpets. Your comments always validate that my story is being interperted the way I intend.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 11:13 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
oh my god. this story is getting better and better. I am sooo in love with it. I love how justin is so eager to learn everything about their lives. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks rose! *hugs*! This one is harder to write then the last one because the storyline is more complicated. I'm trying to make sure all the details fit so it's easier reading, and not so confusing. I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 09:30 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
I still havn't let out my breath for,...ok now I have. That last line was one of the best I LOVE YOU's I have ever read. Thankyou so much for this update. I know this will sound strange but I have been a little lost of late , but this fic makes me so happy and this chater well duh!!!!! Thankyou, thankyou, thankyou, I owe you my smile.
Author's Response: I know exactly how you feel Gerri. I've had some pretty rough personal issues going on recently and feel 'totally' lost. I was so glad to finally get this chapter posted. The only time I feel at 'peace', is when I'm writing. and when I'm writing about our boys, it's very special for me. I'm very, very happy this story makes you happy. Writing it gives me great pleasure as well. Knowing others enjoy it too, is a gift. Thank you.
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
BEAUTIFUL!!!!! can't wait for your update, pleaaaase. thanks
Author's Response: Hey thess! I'm sorry for the long wait on this one.. :-( Hopefully I'll get the next chapter up sooner. Life has been, well, lets just say interesting this past month. Thanks for commenting! I'm glad you're still enjoying this story.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:07 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
Yeah, another excellant chapter. Love the conversation between Em and Brian. Brian and Justin on their date was beautiful.
Author's Response: I loved writing that scene between Emmett and Brian. I always liked their relationship. I'm glad you liked B/J's date as well. I hope to be quicker in updating the next chapter. Thanks so much for your comment!
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 06:36 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
Wow. Someone pass the tissues!!
Author's Response: Ah thanks! Justin loves Brian! Yeah!!! I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 04:03 PM · On: Getting To Know You...
that last line was perfect, great chapter, I loved their date
Author's Response: Thanks Sara. Sorry it took so long to update. Hopefully I'll get the next chapter up sooner. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2008 09:42 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
Every chapter you post just makes my day. What can I say more...? Hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: And you've just made my day! :-) Thank you for this wonderful comment!
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2008 09:27 AM · On: It's In His Kiss
great chapter- as always- Can't wait to see what the evening will bring for our two boys
Author's Response: Thanks sfscarlet! I'm working on a few idea's for the 'dinner date.' It should prove interesting. I hope to have another chapter up by next week. Thanks for commenting!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2008 06:44 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
It;s great to see Jagger and Brian on the right side for a change and I love the interactions between them and Corrine and Justin.
Author's Response: Jagger is so much lke Brian in many ways, but there's a tad of Justin in him too. Lethal combination for Corrine! lol I'm working on the dinner scene next. That should prove interesting! Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Sapphire (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2008 02:20 AM · On: It's In His Kiss
Your writing is beautiful, Gina Marie ;) Even without the intriguing storyline, your words just draw me in. I really love the way you wrote Jagger's thoughts at the begining of the chapter- amazing characterization!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for that wonderful compliment Sapphire! It means more than you can imagine, coming from you. You're a writer with extrodaniry talent and vision. It's an honor that you enjoy my writing. I'm having fun with the jagger character. I picture him as being a mixture of Justin's enthusiatic impulsiveness, and Brian's stubborn jaddeness. It will be interesting to see where my muse takes thier relationship. The dinner scene is next. It should be fun. I hope you enjoy it!
Reviewer: msv713 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2008 09:00 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
What a wonderful chapter. I loved Justin remembering "ice cream kisses". That had me smiling. I love the concern the two boys showed for their dads. Look forward to hearing more about B/J's dinner.
Author's Response: Thanks msv713! I was a little nervous about this chapter. So much r/l stuff going on I've been a bit blocked. I'm hoping to have some fun with the next chapter, and the dinner scene.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2008 06:15 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
jagger is so much a mixture of justin and brian. his relationship with corrine is so similar to his father's. i waiting for the push and pull. brian was lost in justin's first kiss also. the one benefit that jagger has going for him, IS his fathers. and his smarts. jagger is on the cusp of a budding career, but he will fit corrine into it and fight anything that comes in the way. has he found his soulmate in corrine? that remains to be seen. so, justin felt the slight push brian gave him and he wasn't too happy about it huh? It hurt, and angered Justin. He may not have any memory of Brian or their past life together but that didn’t change the fact that he knew Brian belong to him. And he knew Brian knew it too. So why was he pushing him away? “You can’t get rid of me. I’m on to you.” peter and jagger together are enough to drive anyone nuts. at least justin knows brian enough to realize that he's all about honesty. i think that maybe seeing some of his paintings just may help him. he always has a connection to what he's painted.
Author's Response: I was just saying to the last reveiwer how Jagger has the impulsive nature of Justin yet the sophistication of one who lived a rough life at such a young age, much like Brian. You're right, his relationship with Corrine is going to be much like Justin's was with Brian. Jagger is a stranger to love, so he can't put a name to what he feels for Corrine, but he does know what he wants, what he 'needs', and thats Corrine. That kiss they shared was like the first kiss Jagger ever recieved. Which it was actually. The first 'love' kiss he's ever recieved. Though it will take him time to understand that. As for our boys, you know that Justin wasn't going to let Brian get too far away from him! He knows Brian is his, and Justin doesn't share well. :-) It's funny you should mention Justin seeing his own paintings. I have plans for Justin to visit his show. I'm working on the dinner scene now. Hmmm.... now that should be fun writing! lol As always, your comments mean so much. Thank you!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2008 03:49 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
it will be interesting to see how things go with jagger and corrine, jagger and peter had things so wrong in regards to jason/andy but its cute that they are looking out for their dads. I cant wait to see what happens at brian and justins dinner
Author's Response: Thanks Sara! Jagger is an interesting character to write. Being nineteen, he's a like like Justin, young and impulsive, but he's also lived a very rough life growing up, much like Brian, giving him an air of sophistication one doesnt' normally obtain until much later in life. I think Corrine's a good match for him. I'm working on the dinner scene now. I hope to get it up by next week. Thanks again for commenting! So glad your still enjoying this story.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2008 02:54 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
I love your long chapters and I love the intensity of them and although they are long they are just too short. ( am I making any sense??) Every time I finish a chapter I want the next one... :-)) rose
Author's Response: You make perfect sense! Sometimes I think I run on too long in some chapters, it's nice to hear people not only don't mind the long chapters, but prefer them. I'm working on the next chapter now. Thanks so much for your comment!
Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: June 04, 2008 02:48 PM · On: It's In His Kiss
Oh, the icecream kisses.. a very nice memory indeed :) Great chapter! and i'm completely falling for Jagger ;) hope he really found his soulmate in Corrine.. it would do him good! update soon!
Author's Response: I loved that ice-cream kiss scene in the show! I thought it an appropriate memory for Justin. :-) Jagger's got his hands full with Corrine. That should prove an interesting relationsip. I do believe they are soul mates. Thanks for commenting Sigi! So glad you're enjoying this sequel
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Do I Move You
great chapoter- hope corrine and Jagger go further- I like them together- Jagger defending her was awesome. keep up the great tale.
Author's Response: I like this relationship as well. I'm glad you do as well. Yes, they are going to go further *ahem* *wink* lol Thanks for commenting sfscarlet!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2008 07:52 PM · On: Do I Move You
What a fantastic 7000+ chapter, just what I needed, not healthy today so this was great. I love how nobel Justin is being and I love how stressed that is making Brian as it would. I love Brian's anger and fear all exploding and of coarse there is that hope poping up again in the form of a memory. I have a feeling Jagger is about to be tamed by an unexpected older women, just what he needs someone he can't boss around, or take his shit, or fall for his ...hang on she has alrady, lol. I am loving this by the way.
Author's Response: Thanks gerri! I'm sorry you're not feeling well. :-( If it's any consolation, I'm feeling ill myself. Don't know if it's allergies, or something else but I think I'm going to the doc tomorrow. I'm glad you liked this chapter! Yes, there is hope, Justin's memory is coming back, little by little. And Jagger is going to have his hands full with a certain red head. Thanks for commenting, and I hope you feel better soon!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2008 02:05 AM · On: Do I Move You
this was definitely jagger's chapter. from flirting with corrine to giving justin vodka instead of water. i don't blame him for wanting to stay with adeline. he's right, he has to find himself first. now brian is going to woo him. to make him fall in love all over again. corrine had to get over the age problem, i think jagger would be good for her. even if he is alot like brian his love for her would be as deep and stunning as brian's is for justin. and justin, striking mark with his crutch. way to go. no matter what, don't mess with his family. justin doesn't realize it yet, but he's a bulldog when someone threatens what's his. now it's time to celebrate. he has a memory of himself and brian. wasn't one of the best memory but a memory noe the less.
Author's Response: See, this is why I love you sjmpets! *big hug* You sum up everything so perfectly. Sometimes I worry people don't read my chapters as I intend them to sound, but your summary proves they are coming across as I inteneded. This was Jaggers chapter. I like this character and I see a good match with him and corrine (I laughed writing that voka scene!) Brian is on a mission, to woo Justin back, only Brian style. He knows Justin, Justin in his nature has always been the pursuer. Brian is the hunter, but in their relationship, Justin is the one who hunts and keeps Brian in line. So Brian has to make Justin want him. If he goes to him, or pursues him, Justin will push him away, (as he has done already) but if Justin feels Brian drifting from him, he'll pull him in. (Hence Brian testing this theory by flirting with the waiter. He wanted to see Justin's reaction) Unwittingly though he managed spark a memory in Justin. It's a very good sign of things to come! So glad MW is back! So glad you're still enjoying this story and so grateful for your wonderful comments!
Reviewer: kika (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2008 10:47 PM · On: Do I Move You
“That little shit threw me out!” Brian roared as he paced back and forth in front of his sister. Rena sighed. “Why do I get the feeling of déjà vu?” She said. Hahaha...I love this chapter! and Jagger...I love the character....half mike jagger and half Brian! (for me) ciao
Author's Response: Thank kika! I like Jagger too! He's fun. I'm working on the next chapter this week. So glad MW is back! Yay!!!
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2008 09:00 PM · On: Do I Move You
Great chapter. I hope Brian's plan will work on Justin. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Brian has his work cut out. But I'm sure he's up for it! :-)
Reviewer: Nikita (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2008 08:32 PM · On: Do I Move You
This is great! Loving stories of Justin and Brian "relearning" each other!
Author's Response: Thanks Nikita! I'm enjoying writing this one!
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Do I Move You
wow great chapter, you really just gotta love Jagger, hes so great, and Im loving Brian thinking he will seduce Justin, or whatever it is his plan is, fingers crossed it works
Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2008 01:08 PM · On: Do I Move You
wow great chapter, you really just gotta love Jagger, hes so great, and Im loving Brian thinking he will seduce Justin, or whatever it is his plan is, fingers crossed it works
Author's Response: Thanks Sara! I'm really enjoying writing the Jagger character. He's a lot of fun. It should be interesting seeing how Brian seduces Justin. Thanks for commenting
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2008 03:54 AM · On: Breaking the Silence
wonderful chapter- so glad that Brian has convinced Justin and Adeline to go to the doctor. Will have to see how Andy and Justin are linked- lineage - great chapter as usual.
Author's Response: Thanks sfscrlet. I'm working on the next chapter now. Justin's reaction to Brian. More clues coming up about Andy/Justin relationship. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2008 06:26 PM · On: Breaking the Silence
wow... this chapter was pretty intense...great...:-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks rose!
Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2008 02:26 PM · On: Breaking the Silence
Now was Brian supposed to give Justin this much information??? Will Justin's mind cope with all the conflicting information? Would I read this to the end of my days to find out? LOL!!!
Author's Response: Well I hope not till the end of your days gerri! I want you around a very long time! *hugs* You know Brian, he can't stand not getting right to the point. He did kind of jump the gun. Justin is strong, but this is going to throw him a bit. He's got a lot to deal with. I'm sooo glad you're enjoying the story! I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 07:14 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
OH MY don't keep us in suspense, how the proluge fits in..... Love that character Fran.....
Author's Response: I love Fran too! Love how she and Brian interact. Down the road a few chapters, you'll see exactly how the prolouge fits in... Thank you so much for your comment!
Reviewer: Cait (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 06:48 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
AAAHHH!!!! I'm so so so so so excited there's a sequel!!! When i saw it I screamed. i love BTWYTWY and so far this story is spectacular. although, I don't think you're capable of writing bad stories, ;-)
Author's Response: Awww Thanks Cait! *big hug* But BTWYTWY is a hard act to follow! I hope you enjoy the sequel. I got some things in mind I hope the readers will like.
Reviewer: Maria (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 04:51 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
This story is wonderful. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're enjoying it. I'll try to update soon.
Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 04:06 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
I am so excited that you decided to write a sequel to this story. *g* Something tells me that Brian and Justin's lives will forever change once they get to France. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: I think your something is right... Trouble abounds in France. Thanks for commenting Lynn! I hope you enjoy the sequel..
Reviewer: starbaby (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 01:56 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
I was so missing the family. Glad to see you back. I am having no luck with the banner either.
Author's Response: I'm working on the banner starbaby. :-( I did it myself this time, that's probably the problem~! lol I've asked helen for help. Maybe she can bail me out. Thanks for commenting. I hope you like the sequel.
Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 01:42 PM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
I can't tell you how happy I am to see you've started the sequel to BTWYTWY!! And, what can I say, I LOVE IT! The love between Brian and Justin, and how much Brian adores his kids (and how the play tricks on him and get away with it!) Justin, always the clever one... and Brian, still the same, old queen we love so much.. haha the fits he gets when someone dares to mention the evil F word :) Thanks so much for continuing with this story.. i really can't wait to read more! All the best, Sigi
Author's Response: Thanks Sigi! I see Brian as being the 'pussycat' parent when it comes to the twins. He's more strict with the older kids. (I think he can relate better to them) but having such shitty childhood when he was that young makes him want to give his babies all the love and freedom he never had. I kind of thought it so in character to have Brian refusing to be 'forty' lol. I can just see him taking it so serious and not talking to his own sister for just mentioning the word! I'm going to have fun with that one throughout the story...Thanks for your comment!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 11:36 AM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
hey, I thought you wanted to take a break?? I didn´t expect you back so soon. but I am glad.... great start... please update soon...:-))
Author's Response: I didn't expect to be back so soon either. But I just missed this family so much! I am looking forward to exploring the kids lives now that they are young adults, with all the problems that come along with that. And of course, LOVE putting our boys in sticky situations. :-)
Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2008 07:56 AM · On: The Trouble With Kids...
Brilliant as always! I'm hooked already. PLease don't break my heart too badly. =)
Author's Response: Thansk We_Dreamerz! I'll try not to. I'm still forming the story in my head. My muse is taking me all over the place lol. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Tess (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 07:15 AM · On: Prologue
I am so happy you are doing a sequel, the banner doesnt show up for me either
Author's Response: I'm working on it Tess, thanks for commenting. I'm still gettting use to the new site.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2008 05:54 AM · On: Prologue
off to an interesting start gina. i can see justin in france and adeline thinking he is her son. for some reason your banner didn't show up on my screen. hope it will eventually. by the way, glad to have you back honey.
Author's Response: Hey sjmpets! As always..you're on the right track...well almost. *smile* Please let me know about the banner, I had a hard time uploading it. I hope it comes through. I might have to ask for help on this one.
Reviewer: Sally (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2008 05:31 AM · On: Prologue
I am intrigued, jaques sounds similar looking to justin, look forward to reading more
Author's Response: Thanks Sally! I hope you like Chapter one, I use your name... *wink*
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