Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Shattered Glass
Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2017 12:19 PM · On: The Sound Of Silence

Wow....lindsey have some explaining to do....great going...waiting for more.a86;😊



Author's Response:

She will won't see, I mean that was a shitty thing she did. Be prepared with tissues for tomorrow. Thanks again for the wonderful reviews xx

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2017 12:16 PM · On: No Matter What.

I love this fic....gus is very brave...u did awesome work.



Author's Response:

*Blushing* Thank you so much. I love Gus he is such a brave boy just like his dad. There is lots more coming be prepared xx

Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2017 08:28 AM · On: No Matter What.

I love this story, I felt so bad for poor little Gus. And those two bitches ,how could they do that with the kids in the house. Brian being so protective of his son and the love he has for Gus and Justin is always great to see.

In the begining they were in the loft then Britin. Do they live in Both? Did they get married since Justin did not go to NY? I was wondering if this follows some or all of canon because the girls never went to Canada. Looking forward to next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much I am delighted that you love it.

 

They live in both and this won't be following cannon I should really mark it AU. I agree I love his love for them and we did see that within the show itself. Posting more today. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxx

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 04:33 AM · On: No Matter What.

People do not realise how much children watch and feel when parents are in domestic violence relationships

Author's Response:

i know and its so sad isn't it xx 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 01:19 AM · On: No Matter What.

People do not realise how much children watch and feel when parents are in domestic violence relationships

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 01:18 AM · On: No Matter What.

People do not realise how much children watch and feel when parents are in domestic violence relationships

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2017 01:16 AM · On: No Matter What.

People do not realise how much children watch and feel when parents are i domestic violence relationships

Author's Response:

You are right, kids do see and hear more then people realise and the girls need to know that. Brian does because he has been there. Thanks super much for the review x

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 09:30 PM · On: No Matter What.

Their shoulders must be weighing them down with all the faith Gus put on the four men.
Wonderful update.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I am sure their shoulders must be, to have a child have that kind of faith in you is a very powerful thing. Lots more to come. Xxx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 04:26 PM · On: No Matter What.

Love how all the men join together to make sure their children come first.  Somehow I don't think Mel and Lindsay getting better will be soon especially if they keep blaming each other for their problems.  



Author's Response:

The guys are great aren't they and when the kids need them they do all they can. Those girls need a good shake up that's for sure. Thank you for the wonderful review x

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 02:20 PM · On: No Matter What.

Glad that Linsay and Melanie are acting sensible about the kids even though they needed to think about them before this.  So adorable that Gus and JR are so glad to see each other.  Really enjoying your story and look forward to more!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Those girls do need to wise up for sure, they need to put the kids first. I love the kids are close here because I do think they would had the show carried on. Thank you so much, I shall be posting more tomorrow xox 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2017 01:32 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Aww such a sweet ending to this chapter.  Boy Linds and Mel sure have a volatile relationship.  Kudos to Brian for taking charge.  And I'm glad Michael seems more mature in this.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much that means a lot to me. Brian will do anything to make sure his family is safe and Michael will as well I'm sure. There is lots more drama to come xxx

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 01:03 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Incredible that Linds and Mel had no idea that their child had left the house! Bad enough not to check on Gus during all of that time, but to fail to check on J.R. who is just a baby?? How could they leave her alone for so long? Awful. They deserve everything that is coming to them. Whatever their problem is not an excuse. They are the ones behaving like immature brats. Loved seeing Brian taking charge and laying down the law to L. & M. And, it was good to see Justin being such a great dad to Gus. Great chapter!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much that mean more then I can say. I do agree with you, to not check on the kids is so wrong and anything could have happened and look what did happen. Brian loves the kids with all he is and Jusfin the same. So much more to come. Xx

Reviewer: Sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: January 27, 2017 12:11 AM · On: Worse before it gets better.

I hope he takes them to court and wins. Let them have visitation. Would serve them right. Never even bothered to check on either kid. Shameful on the girls' part.

Author's Response:

The girls should feel shame for this happening, to not check on your kids is neglectful. There is so much more to come and I hope you enjoy it. Thank you so much for the review, means everything to me xx

Reviewer: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 09:16 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

What a nerve,Mel is the one who has the guts to get angry,but not as angry as Brian is..Seriously though they didn't know that Gus was gone??What an irresponsible parents..I think they should solve the problem for the kids and then fix their own problems either get back together or not as long as they work together for both kids..

Another great chapter,thanks for sharing..

Author's Response:

You are so right they should have known their child was gone from the house, I mean shouldn't parents check on their kids? There is a lots of tension and balls in the air right now. There is lots more to come. Thank you so much for the wonderful review it means everything to me x

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 05:49 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

A sweet, tender and heart wrentching moment between Justin and Gus. Oh how my heart aches for the poor little boy. thank goodness he was able to get to B&J. That he's now feeling safe and secure. He's going to have a lot of questions and concerns in the near future I would imagine. He must wonder why his mothers are behaving in such a way. Was surprised when you clarified that Lindsey smacked Mel. I thought it was the other way around. The girls are really going to have to get their shit together now!! Brian will follow through. Micheal I think will do everything he can to grasp onto Jenny as well. both men will do whatever it takes to keep their kids safe and secure. Both physically and emotionally.

Terrific update! Definitely really getting into this. You always write such emotionally charged stories. doesn't matter what the emotion is, whether it be anger adn frustration and concern as in this one, or heart warming and loving like others.

Cheers,

Elaine



Author's Response:

Thank you, I'm blushing now. I always thought Gus and Justin would have these moments if the show went on so it seemed fitting. This wasn't an easy chapter to write and it gets even more emotional as it goes on. There is much the girls need to do. The guys will hold onto the kids tight and make sure they feel the love from their dads. Xox

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 04:04 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

Poor Brian.  This must dredge up lots of bad memories for him.  Glad that Mel was at least a little cooperative and realizes they have a problem.  Another great story from you!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I'm sure it must be for him and he is in protective mode now and Brian like that is not to be messed with. There is lots more drama to come. Thank you ever so much, I'm over the moon you like it x

Reviewer: April_Danielle (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 03:40 PM · On: Shattered Glass

What's wrong with women?Are they out of their mind,roughly fighting while small kids are around??Poor Gus,cannot take it anymore..It's a good he's a smart little boy and knows how to find a way to get out of the house to get some help,but it was dangerous as well...Thank God it wasbthe brother who works for Brian who he bump into..Now the girls better be watch out,bcoz there's storm coming their way,from Brian is already bad how much more to add Michael and Debbie...I just love to see they tear them into pieces of which they totally deserve...
Just the beginning already loved it,so i'm looking forward for more chapter..Thanks for sharing.😘

Author's Response:

you are most welcome, those girls need to wise up and put the kids first. Thank god for the guys and Gus's huge heart. xxx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2017 03:08 PM · On: Worse before it gets better.

They might still call Brian an asshole, but when it comes to the kids he treats them the same and with respect.  Something the girls aren't doing.



Author's Response:

You are spot on, the girls just focus on what's good for them what makes them look good. Brian puts the kids first when protecting them. Thank you sooooooo much for the review xx

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2017 01:37 AM · On: Shattered Glass

Wonderful to see another story from you. And, a nice long one, too, so there is a lot to anticipate! So many questions--how long has this been going on? What in the world is wrong with Linds and Mel? How dare they expose the children to anger and violence! I wonder what Michael's reaction will be? Gus is so brave and so thoughtful. Thank goodness he bumped into the right person. I'll be anxious to see how this plays out for everyone.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, Gus is def his fathers son isn't he looking after people. I'm sure Gus will tell his dad all and those girls are gonna have to face Brian and Michael. Thank you so much for the review, I cannot say how much it means to me. Hugs xx

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:50 PM · On: Shattered Glass

Wow, what a start!!!  Lucky for everyone that Gus ran into someone who knew him.  Linds & Mel are going to feel the wrath of Brian and I hope it is swift!  Looking forward to more.  Bill



Author's Response:

Fir sure thank god for David, oh the girls will def feel Brian's rath we know how much he loves his son. There will be another chapter today. Thank you so much for the review it means everything to me. Hugs xx

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 11:26 PM · On: Shattered Glass

Really intense story.  Do the girls even know that Gus has gone?  Gus would feel happier if he knew that Mikey had his little sister safe.  Can't wait for another chapter!



Author's Response:

It is a very intense start alright and Gus is such a brave boy. There is more drama ahead. I'm posting another chapter today xx thank you so much for your review it means so much to me. Hugs xx

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 09:31 PM · On: Shattered Glass

I love it and you have 14 chapters already goody a long fic yepee

Author's Response:

Oh thank you soooooooo much, I'm filled with joy that you love it. I have no clue how long this will end up, it has a life of its is Lol lol . Thank you so much for the beautiful words and I hope you enjoy the rest of it. Big hugs xx

Reviewer: emac66 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2017 07:11 PM · On: Shattered Glass

Jeebus mother fucking christmas! Holy shit! I want to reach into this story already and bitch slap those 2 women! Oh I hope that Brian and Michael are able to keep the kids. I hope they force those 2 to get the help they obivously need. I don't trust either of them at the moment though. anticpating how those phone calls are going to go. And that physical violence is in the mix too. No plce to those 2 kids at all!!!!!

My heart was stuck in my throat at what gus had to hear, never mind when he was out on teh street so scared. thank goodness he came across Dave!! That the poor guy was able to get to his daddy. what a sweetheart looking after his baby sister.

I have to say, in just 1 chapter I'm already revved up and am eagerly anticipating this story. Glad you have at least 14 chapter already. Hoping you post regularly.!! lol. I can see myselg chomping at the bit read one after another.

Terrific start.

Cheers

Elaine



Author's Response:

Lol ŷou made me laugh out loud. Yeah poor Gus was so brace wasn't he, his only thought is to get his sister to safety. There is lots more to come and some new faces I hope you'll enjoy. I wanted to slap them myself and I was writing it. There is lots more to come and I truly hope I don't let you down with Sony of it. Your reviews always have me smile. 

 

Ill lll be posting one a day, I'm gonna try writing more Friday I can't tomorrow as I'm going to a country music concert. 

 

Big hugs xx

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