Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2016 05:27 AM · On: One Red Rose

Great chapter! Glad to see Brian might not care if JT has average looks. They both will be pleasantly surprised. The red roses was a nice touch.  Hope you can post the epilogue that you had mentioned in the other review. More please. Lol



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie! Thanks for sticking with this story, and for continuing to leave feedback; I really appreciate that. :)  I may do an epilogue, but first I want to flesh out part of the period in between this chapter and the previous one, along with how B and J finally see each other for the first time.  It won't be as simple as one might think, though.  (What fun would THAT be?)

Thanks again for choosing to read this one, and for your comments, Cassie. Next part will be up very soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Dark_Oreo27 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2016 04:08 AM · On: One Red Rose

omg i can't wait!!! they are finally going to meet XD



Author's Response:

Hi, Chrystal!  Thank you for reading this latest chapter, and especially for the feedback.  Yes, they WILL 'meet' in the next chapter (finally), but not before some soul searching on the part of our reluctant blond, and not as directly as some may think (I know, I'm a tease).  

I am glad that you are enjoying this story.  Thank you for the support. Next/last part will be up very soon.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2016 03:32 PM · On: First Encounter

Oh Kim, I enjoyed the e-mail exchange. I'm so curious, Justin will also visit the zoo?
Cain't wait for the next chapter! Happy Sunday, Elly xo



Author's Response:

Hi, Elly, my friend!  So good to see you reading this one!  No, no Justin at the zoo.:)  But in the next part, they will be getting to know each other in a different way (wink, wink).  I hope you continue to enjoy this story, and I hope your Sunday is going well. Thank you for reading this one, and for the support.  XOXO ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2016 09:19 PM · On: First Encounter

The guys almost got off on the wrong foot due to Justin's distrust and suspicion. The email conversations were really entertaining. Looking forward to next chapter! 😁



Author's Response:

Yeah, that didn't go too well at first, did it? LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed their bantering. They will be getting better acquainted coming up (wink, wink).  I will have the next part up either later tonight (or most likely) tomorrow. Thank you for reading,and taking the time to review, Kim!  Looking forward to your next update as well.;)  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2016 11:44 AM · On: First Encounter

I WAS TOLD THIS WAS HERE, AND HERE IT IS. THIS IS QUITE A NICE SURPRISE. E-MAILS, IT'S GREAT ND MANHOLECOVER WHAT A RIOT. YOUR MIND IS VERY FACILE AND BRILLIANT. I AM GOING TO REALLY ENJOY THIS ONE AS THE CONCEPT IS INTRIGUING AND WILL KEEP THE READERS INTERESTED AND WANTING MORE. I, NOW I KNOW IT'S HERE, WILL BE WATCHING FOR UPDATES. THINGS ARE WELL HERE. SCHOOL IS GOOD. GRADES ARE GOOD SO FAR, EVEN THOUGH SOME CLASSES ARE HARD. LINDC KEEPS PUSHING ME TO DO WELL, YOU KNOW HER==MOTHER HEN HA! I THINK SHE MAY BE OVER FOR A VISIT IN NOVEMBER SOMETIME. I MISS ALL MY OLD FRIENDS FROM HOME. HOPE YOU ARE WELL. TAKE CARE LUV2U

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I see Lindc told you about this story. I'm so glad to hear from you, and that you are doing well. :)  I hope Lindc does get the chance to come and see you.  I'm sure she misses you as much as you do her. 

I'm happy that you are enjoying this story. It won't be a very long one; maybe two more chapters? But hopefully I'll have the next one up either tonight or tomorrow. Then probably back to a more dramatic story. :) 

I am keeping extremely busy between the job, my mom, editing for other writers, and some other endeavors. But basically okay.  Glad to hear that you are as well.

Keep in touch! Sending my love back to you as well.  XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: Alois (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 06:18 PM · On: First Encounter

I love the exchanges! I have a feeling they won't meet immediately ;) Truly enjoying this, thank you!



Author's Response:

Thank you, dear friend! I'm glad you liked the emails. :)  And you're right; this will not be an orthodox meeting.;)  Thanks for reading, and for leaving me your thoughts.  BTW, just finished looking over your own story.  Loved that chapter.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 04:01 PM · On: First Encounter

I love the playful, sexy, and snarky banter between them.  Cannot wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you, Kathy! So happy that you're enjoying it!  I had fun writing the emails.;)  Their relationship will continue to grow until they finally meet. I hope you continue to enjoy their journey. Thanks for reading and for commenting, my friend.  Loved your sexy story, too, BTW! Will be looking forward to your next one.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 03:23 PM · On: First Encounter

I love it, this story is very funny.

Kiss and hugs



Author's Response:

Hi, Susana, my friend! I'm glad that you're enjoying this one.  I like writing humorous stories, and needed something a little less heavy for now.  I hope you continue to enjoy it; I'll have the other part up in the next day or so.  Kisses!  ~Kim

Reviewer: peacock (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2016 02:53 PM · On: First Encounter

So looking forward to when they first meet in person! I love how you set the stage for your stories. The details are great. There's so much effort involved. This looks like it is headed to be another great story.



Author's Response:

Aww...thank you for your very kind words about my stories; I appreciate that so much, and it is very motivating to me.  I do hope you continue to enjoy it.  The next part should be up no later than Saturday.  Thanks again for the support!  ~Kim

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 08:42 AM · On: First Encounter

I can't stop myself smiling :lol
Justin was so cute trying to decipher what manholecover stands for :)
Great work!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm delighted that you're continuing to enjoy this story.:)  I'll have the next part up soon, and I hope you continue to enjoy it.  Thanks for the support.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 05:50 AM · On: First Encounter

Just read both chapters and I'm hooked.

Why didn't Justin ask for Brians name or company name? I would want to know that information if I was Justin.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Hi, Marian! Well, I guess Justin was so concerned that he didn't anger Brian that he didn't think of that. He will find out his name coming up...in a manner of speaking (wink, wink).  That's all I'm going to tell you for now - ha! Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  Next part will be up no later than Saturday.  I am happy that you are enjoying it.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2016 04:26 AM · On: First Encounter

I was happy to see that you posted again. Love the way this is headed. You were right. I was surprised at the way they met. We would of thought they would of met in NYC but by email is so much better. More mysterious. Can't wait to see how much they get to know each other by way of email. Do we see any phone sex or Web cam sex in the future before they Meet? Lol  Waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie! Sorry I missed your review comments.  I really appreciate you taking the time to do that. :)  Their all-important 'meeting' is about to take place, but not in the way you might suspect. :)  And it's funny you mentioned the phone sex, because I had decided to do that before you mentioned it. You must be psychic!  I'll have the next part up soon. Thank you for reading, and for the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: feet526@comcast.net (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2016 04:11 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

wow...what an outstanding beginning of a new "story venture." thank you so much, can't wait for more, and hopefully soon!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it. I will have the next part up very soon, including what happens at their meeting point.  Thank you for reading, and for the feedback. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2016 04:08 AM · On: First Encounter

I was happy to see that you posted again. Love the way this is headed. You were right. I was surprised at the way they met. We would of thought they would of met in NYC but by email is so much better. More mysterious. Can't wait to see how much they get to know each other by way of email. Do we see any phone sex or Web cam sex in the future before they Meet? Lol  Waiting for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie!  I'm delighted you're enjoying this so far! Thank you for letting me know.  I'm glad I surprised you. I'm sure everyone thought it would be face to face.  As for the phone sex, funny you would ask....that's all I'll give away (wink, wink).  More in the next day or so. Thanks again for choosing to read this one!  I really appreciate the feedback.  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 03:29 AM · On: First Encounter

Okay, this is one of the most original ways of meeting, but how do they actually come face to face.  Awaiting a response with baited breath. 



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Well...that is the critical question, isn't it?  It won't be an instant meeting, but they way in which they DO meet will be a little unusual.  (I know, I'm a tease...).

I'm glad you're intrigued.  I should have the next part up tomorrow or Saturday.  As always, I remain grateful to you for all your support. Thank you for reading, and for commenting.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2016 02:52 AM · On: First Encounter

As always - a wonderful chapter. Love the banter. Boy are they going to be surprised when they finally meet one another.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  Yes, I'm rather enjoying the banter myself. :)  This relationship will continue to evolve, you will see, coming up.  And yes, the meeting is going to be the crucial part.  So glad you like this one! Thank you so much for reading, and especially for always taking the time to review. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: sallie (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2016 11:05 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Noooooo,come on...i want more now.i love the story line and it beginning, cant wait to read more.

Author's Response:

Hi, Sabrina!!  First of all, a slightly belated welcome to our site. Thank you for not only joining, but posting stories on here as well!  We love seeing new writers posting stories, and how exciting to see you doing that!

 

I'm very happy that you liked the first chapter. Never fear; Ch. 2 will be posted tonight after I have a brief chance to review it first. The way they actually meet may not be how people think, so hopefully I'll keep some surprised just a bit.;)

 

Thanks again for reading, and especially taking the time to comment!  I will be catching up on your new story shortly, BTW.  Just pressed for time, as usual. And if there's anything we can do for you, just ask. I think Janet (starfire64) is already assisting you, but if you think of anything else, just let us know.  ~Kim

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2016 06:06 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Great chapter. Justin seems very sweet and just a bit mischievous....LOL Love the different attitudes of the thief and Brian to Justin's sketches. Brian has good taste and see them for what they're worth. Need more.

Author's Response:

Hi, Monica!  I'm so glad you're reading along with this one, and like it so far.  And I love your comparison of the thief's POV and Brian's!   So true! Both looking for a source of profit, but in different ways.

I'm delighted that you're enjoying it so far. I know a lot of people like an 'in-control' Justin, and I do, too, within certain stories, but in this one the way it will play out, it is important that he retain a certain reticence to trust a complete stranger. You will see some of that coming up in the next chapter, which I will post tonight.

Thank you so much for deciding to read this one, and for all the support you give me! I appreciate that deeply.  ~Kim

Reviewer: urugwaj (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2016 08:01 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Great story! Can't wait what will happen next and how Brian will be able to give Justin his notebook. Can't wait for the next chapter! 



Author's Response:

Hi, dear friend! I haven't been on Twitter too much lately, but I was just thinking about you, and how happy I was to finally get the chance to meet you!  I hope you are well.  And I hope one day we can meet up again.  I had such a wonderful time with you!  I'm happy that you liked the first chapter.  I will have the next one up either tonight or tomorrow.  Stay in touch!  XOXO  ~Kim

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2016 02:39 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

A new story, Yay! Justin is a brave soul to nod off during a subway ride. He cold have lost more than his sketchbook. Can't wait for him and Brian to meet. This first chapter was great.



Author's Response:

Hi, Kim!  Yes, Justin wants to be an independent sort, and is just a bit stubborn.;)  I remember I, too, was pretty nervous when I first started riding the subway in NYC, but only occasionally do you get a really weird one.  Most are very nice, and will help you if you need it. Sometimes they can be very crowded, though! 

 

I will have the next chapter up either tonight or tomorrow! I'm so glad that you are liking it so far, and I hope you enjoy the rest. Thank you for reading, and for the support! I really appreciate that. ~Kim

Reviewer: lindc (Anonymous) · Date: August 30, 2016 01:27 AM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

OMG I love the beginning. It is nice you incorporated my favorites in the series in this. We all loved Emmett and Vic. I just knew something great was coming--and here it it is. Waiting for more soon. lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Lindc!  So good to hear from you!  I'm thrilled that you liked the beginning while I set up the plot.  I do love Emmett, Vic, and Daphne.  I still remember the scenes between Justin and Vic very well; especially when they were making the girls' wedding cake. So funny!  Loved Vic's character, and wish they hadn't killed it off. :(

 

Thanks for letting me know you'll be reading this one, and that you enjoyed the first chapter!  I hope everything is going well for you, my friend. You know I wish nothing but the best for you and Lee. *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: Cassie (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 10:35 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Yeah! A new story from you! Always love your stories and this one is no different. I think I read that you have this one almost done so that you will be posting regularly. That's great and I am looking forward for more.



Author's Response:

Hi, Cassie!  What lovely comments; thank you so much! That makes me very happy to hear.;)  

And yes, I will be posting a chapter probably every other day as I finish it up. I'm well into it, so it shouldn't be a problem to do that.  I'm going to try and not post stories going forward until I at least have several chapters written, since I feel bad when I can't update faster.

Thank you again for your kind words!  I really appreciate that, and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. ~Kim

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 10:03 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim,

Great first chapter! I'm very curious how Brian and Justin will meet in such a big city. Can't wait to read more😊



Author's Response:

Hi, Laura!  I'm delighted you're enjoying this story so far.  You will find out how they meet in the next chapter; it may not be what everyone thinks.;)  Thank you so much for not only reading, but also leaving feedback.  I am very appreciate.  I will have Ch. 2 up no later than Wednesday. :)  ~Kim

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 09:32 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Justin, so innocent. Losing his book will yeach him...a) don't sleep on the train and b) dont duck out on security. Brian has initials, i cant wait to see how he tracks him down to return the book. Gonna be fun.



Author's Response:

Hi, my dear!  Yes, Justin is going to be in for a surprise coming up.  LOL! Love your advice for him!  You'll find out how they make contact in Ch. 2, which will be up no later than Wednesday. Thank you for reading, and for the comments! I"m happy you're still reading on here, and you are going to love all the changes coming soon!  ~Kim

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 09:31 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

What a lovely late summer surprise to find a new Fic from you!

I love the fact that it mentions so many NYC places that I'm familar with. Who knows, maybe I might run into Brian or Justin next time I'm passing the Library, LOL!

Just a little hint... if you want to go for more authenticity, the subway announcement is simply: "Stand clear of the closing doors." 

Looking forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Hi, Trish!  Yes, I have to be careful with your knowledge, because you're a NYC expert!  I'm glad you're enjoying the story.  I took your advice, BTW, and changed the message.:)  Thanks.  

I'll have Ch. 2 up no later than Wednesday. Thank you for reading, my friend, and especially for the comments!

P.S.  I assume you know that Randy's new photo book for Cabaret is now available online?  I have an extra if you need it, or I can send it to Judy. Just let me know.  Hope to see you again soon in the not-too-distant future. *hugs*~Kim

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 09:29 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim i love the first chapter so i am in lol

Author's Response:

Hi, Chris! That's great to hear! So glad you like it so far! I will have the next chapter up no later than Wednesday. Thank you for reading and especially for the feedback, my friend.  ~Kim

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 08:20 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

I am so excited for this new story.  I was hooked from the very beginning.  What year is this story taking place?  Can't wait to see how the book brings them together.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

Hi, Dee Dee! I'm so glad you're excited to see this new story!  As for what year, I hadn't really concentrated on that, TBH.  But since Justin is 19, I would think early 2000's, although I'm not sure we would be in the same realm technologically.  I hope you'll grant me a little poetic license, just in case. ;)

BTW, received your email. I haven't really had a chance to respond, but we DID get soaked last night near here. Fortunately, with us on a hill, it wasn't a big problem, but thank you for checking. :)  Thanks for choosing to read and especially for taking the time to review, too, my friend!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 06:12 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

You have outdone yourself.  Now just how will Brian and Justin meet?  That is my question.



Author's Response:

Hi, my friend!  Have I piqued your curiosity?  And that is a good question.  That is mainly the crux of this rather short story (at least compared to my normal ones!).  I hope you will continue to be both entertained and a little perplexed as to how that will happen.  Thank you as always for reading, and being our most prolific reviewer and supporter of our stories. I think you're going to love the change coming up!  ~Kim

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 05:07 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim : ) Ohhh, this is interesting. Poor Justin, but I think Nick did him a favor by swiping that book ;  ) Can't wait to see the reactions of B and J when they finally meet. Looking forward to more, my friend :  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Yeah, Justin won't feel that way at first, but something tells me that might change (wink, wink). But how they meet may not be how everyone thinks (how's that for a teaser?).  Thank you for reading this first chapter, and especially for the comments.  *Hugs* back ~Kim

Reviewer: cuivresdesaxe (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 04:37 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi Kim,

What a nice surprise to see a new story from you; now I'll be waiting for the next chapter! How will you get these two to meet??

Bea



Author's Response:

Hi, Bea!  Hmm...how they meet will be a crucial part of this story.  I'm so glad you'll be reading along.  Thank you for reading the first chapter, and especially for taking the time to comment! I really appreciate that.  And enjoying your story very much, by the way! I will be looking forward to your updates.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Sunsuso65 (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 04:04 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

I love this story Kim .

Brian is going to be surprised when he finds out who JT is.

😘



Author's Response:

Hi, Susana!  Yeah, both men will be anxious eventually to see what they look like (don't want to give too muh away yet). :)  I'm so glad that you are enjoying this story so far! 

Thank you for reading, and for all the support you give me. Ch. 2 will be up no later than Wednesday.  *Besos*  Kim

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 03:03 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Great set up of Justin and I love him growing up with Emmett and Daphne as his best friends.

Your AU stories always seem to be so well done... thank you...

can't wait for the boys to meet :)



Author's Response:

Hi, Kathy!  I love AU stories, so I'm glad you do, too.  I really appreciate the compliment about my stories; thank you. :)  And I always loved both Daphne and Emmett's characters.  They won't be featured TOO prominently in the story (unfortunately), but they will make an appearance again before I'm done.

 

Thanks for trusting me to get this one finished in relatively short order.  It's not a very long one, but it should be updated regularly over the next week or so, and finished soon as well.  I hope you continue to enjoy it!  ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2016 02:58 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Hi, Kim - Glad to see a new story from you. Such a nice start too. I won't count on this being a few chapters. I know you too well! Haha!

Great start here, really enjoyed the New York references. In my mind's eye I could vividly see each step as I am familiar with the places you utilized. Thankfully I have never encountered a thief there - I feel very fortunate in that! I did worry when the thief was stalking Justin; I'm glad nothing physical resulted. And, of course, thrilled that Brian found the notebook. I can't wait to see how that comes into play...

Looking forward to reading more. Thanks so much for sharing. :) *Janet*



Author's Response:

Hi, Janet!  Thanks for reading, and for your comments, my friend.  I, too, was trying to think of NYC in my mind's eye.  I can clearly recall those two lions to either side of the library, and I always enjoyed walking through Bryant Park, so I thought it would make a good setting for part of the story. 

Glad I've never met a thief there, either. I remember the first time I went to NYC, I was pretty intimidated.  But now the subway is pretty much old hat.:) Thanks again for checking this sory out, and for the comments! I greatly appreciate that.  ~Kim

Reviewer: Stauneauge (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2016 01:46 PM · On: Purloined and Perplexed

Wow, great idea to develope a bit of mayhem lol, thanks :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and for taking the time to comment!  I'm glad you're intrigued. :)  I'll have the next part up no later than tomorrow.  Thanks again for the encouragement.  ~Kim

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