Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Fatherhood
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2016 12:13 PM · On: Chapter 16- New York

Oohh. Very exciting romantic getaway and now the baby cometh

Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed the romantic getaway and soon the baby will come

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2016 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 16- New York

anxious for the baby to arrive.  Great chapter.  I was reallly happy to see am update.  Hate to think about your story ending.



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end but there will be more stories-  maybe in this universe-  just not sure

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2016 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 16- New York

What a nice trip into New York and I love how you put Randy in the story.  Way cool.



Author's Response:

Thanks-  thought it would be fun to mention real life events and incorparate them into the story.  I might actually get to see the show if he is still touring with them in March.  The local boradway production is bringing Cabaret to my city and we have season tickets.  I hop[e he's still touring at that time.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2016 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

Looks like Brian and Justin are well prepared for their little one. So glad Cyn is the surrogate, she won't be using the littleone like Linz uses Gus.

Good that the boys are having a small vacation before the event.

Feel Jen will be better at helping them than Deb, she is too brash ane over does all the time.

Fantastic update, thanks for sharing!

JoAnn



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin are as prepared as possible.  I think Jen will be thrilled to have a biological grandchild but will know well enough to stay back when needed.  

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

I was so glad to see this update I thought it was lost with all the changes to sites and new site starting up. Great chapter I am eager to see the new baby soon

Author's Response:

I was waiting for the site to move before updating.  The new baby will be here soon.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

I wonder if they will have to hurry back from NYC.  Hope they enjoy their visit.  Hate to think of this story ending.  Thanks for the update.   Bill



Author's Response:

Thank you for the kind words. So glad you are enjoying the story.  I might be enticed to write another story in the universe but we will see.  Have to see what My muses say.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2016 12:08 AM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

Loved this chapter.  I'm excited for the baby to be born!



Author's Response:

Thnaks-   baby will be here soon-  I promise

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: May 20, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

Lovely update.  They boys having fun before the baby comes along. 

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

thanks-  so glad you are ejnouing the story and thanks for writing

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2016 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 15- One Lst Adventure

Glad to see another chapter.  Will they have a good time or will the baby decide to come early?



Author's Response:

will post another chapter soon and you can find out

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2016 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 14-Shopping for Baby

The closer to this baby coming, the less I like this Brian. I hope Justin is right an out Brian changing once the baby's born. Justin has to remember that Brian wasn't around Gus 24/7. Its going to be tough that's for sure.



Author's Response:

New parents always have adjustments to make- 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2016 03:43 AM · On: Chapter 14-Shopping for Baby

Loved this chapter.  So Brian to be complaining while doing whatever Justin wants.  Can't wait for the baby to arrive.  Bill



Author's Response:

Soon-  the baby will get here soon-   promise-  Brian doesn't want to let Justin know everything

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2016 03:12 AM · On: Chapter 14-Shopping for Baby

Oh joy!  Another chapter and about shopping.  I can just imagine Brian acting that way.  Why is it they never had this stuff when my kids were born.



Author's Response:

Brian does love his shopping-  Yeah-  didn't have this stuff when my kids were little either-  based on my grandson's tons of paraphenalia

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:15 PM · On: Chapter 13- The Care and Feeding of A Baby

Just catching up and....WHEW! I can't wait until the big day.

Author's Response:

Glad you are enjoying the story-  I love when I get several chapters to read at once.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2016 05:03 PM · On: Chapter 13- The Care and Feeding of A Baby

Hmm, interesting lessons.  So they missed listening about breast feeding?  Not really something they would need to know.  lol.  Steak dinner sounds great.  You've made me hungry.  Can't wait to see where your muse leads you.



Author's Response:

My beta thought the umbilical cord slid show was hysterical-  exciting as watching grass grow

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2016 03:04 AM · On: Chapter 13- The Care and Feeding of A Baby

I think B&J are in for a little shock when they get that baby home.  Really enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Yep -- new parents are always in for a shock

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 12-- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

No couldn't picture Brian in Lamaze classes. Justin's just wonderful about it all.
Brian certainly has some conditions for going to the second day. Sure Justin won't mind meeting them.
Fun story. Touching and heartbreaking at times, like when Debbie or the girls or Michael open their mouths. But all in all it's fun.
I thought this would be posted on another site but This fine.

Reviewer: Rhonda (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2016 05:16 PM · On: Chapter 12-- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

Alway great to read your story.  Please don't wait to long to post the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I have the next one written, it is just getting reveiwed by the beta-  hope to post by the next weekend

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2016 03:52 PM · On: Chapter 12-- I Don't Know Nothing Bout Birthing No Babies

Can't blame Brian for not wanting to actually see twat.  It is special that Justin makes the sacrifice to do so.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for still reading-  I know it has been a really long time.  I loved writing this chapter and enjoyed Brian a lot.

Reviewer: Blueberry Muffin (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2016 02:43 AM · On: Decisions

Love this series.  Sent an email did you get it?



Author's Response:

so glad you are enjoying the series-  No , I did not get an email-  please resend to sfscarlet61@gmail.com

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2016 09:13 PM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Great update.  Poor Gus trying so hard to convinence Brian and Justin to let him stay with them.

Hope Brian and Justin beat some sense into Linz, Mel, Mikey and Deb.

Thanks for sharing, RL can be very hard sometimes, take care.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

I think he really gets tired of his Momma and Mom saying bad things about his Dad, especially when there is more unconditional love from his Dad.  So glad you are still reading the story and thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

I'm glad that Gus is not disappointed about not living with his Daddy & Justin.  Families can be really "helpful".  I am thinking they might hear about that helpfulness from Brian.  Still really enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill

 

So glad you are still reading and enjoying the story.  RL is a lot right now and I don't have as much time to write as I used to.  I'm committed to finishing the story.  I think Brian is tired of dealing with 'the family'

Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 05:20 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Just spent the last hour playing catch-up with this story, I really like this : )Someone needs to lock Lindsay and Mikey in a room and throw- a -way the key, wow, those two are obnoxious. Awww, Gus fixing breakfast for his dad and Justin was so sweet :  ) I sent you an email too ;  ) *Hugs* Janet



Author's Response:

Glad you are finding it enjoyable-  I don't have as much time now to write but I do love this story.  LIndsay and Mikey are very self centered when it comes to Brian-  even in my universe

Reviewer: rainbow83 (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2016 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

I loved the conversation between Brian, Justin and Gus



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I wanted it to be reassuring to Gus and I'm glad that I got that across.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 03:06 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Great chapter.  Someone needs to have a talk with all the busybodies running their mouth.  I almost wish that Gus could live with them.



Author's Response:

It would be nice for Gus to live with them, but I think he will have a big part in their lives

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2016 02:45 AM · On: Chapter 11- Moment of Truth

Loved the way they talked to Gus about the baby situation and made him feel both important and wanted.  They really are great dads.



Author's Response:

thank you-  I think they are ready to be fathers and Gus loves both of them-  he feels loved and protected by them and that is important

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2016 07:30 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

   Thank you for this terrific story. 


   We got a problem with Gus.  He has determined that he is moving in with Brian and Justin and is learning things to help take care of the baby.  No, Gus is not moving in, we are going to have a very unhappy Gus.  He is going to be one very disappointed kid.  We can be sure that Brian and Justin will try to explain to him once again that he is very important to them and will always be.  I don’t think that will be enough.  I just hear him asking ifAC the new baby can move in, then why can’t he. Good luck trying to explain that.


   I will be interesting to see how all this plays out, but I fear, very badly.


DavidR



Author's Response:

David:

 

So sorry that I did not respond earlier.  Gus really wants to be helpful.  The next chapter is now up and you can find out what happens.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 03:13 PM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Uh oh.  It seems like Gus is thinking he will be living with his dads all of the time, not just visiting.  Something is up.



Author's Response:

Gus is tired of all the naysayers.  He loves his dad and Justin, but we will have to wait to see what happens when the baby arrives/

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

By the look of this chapter, and thanks to wanton-speaking 'adults' (I'm certainly using the term loosely), the next chapter will probably be named "Ode de Tantrums" starring Gus Peterson-Marcus (Kinney)! I sure hope that B&J can reassure him and remind that poor darling that they have NEVER lied to him unlike the other pain in the ass adults (there's THAT word again) in his young life. Lindz, Mikey and Deb (possibly even Mel by default) should all be tarred, feathered and GAGGED throughout the remainder of the baby wait! 

In the meantime, thank you for giving me a well-timed and well-written diversion from my own work! 

HUGS,

~Nichelle



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

 

Thanks for thoughtful comment.  I don't hide my dislike for some cannon characters and I write them in the future in the same vane.  Lindsay and Melanie only want Brian for the money he contributes while Lindsay has fantasies of the nuclear family with Brian as the leading man.   I can't imagine Brian forgetting Gus, even with a new baby.  

I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story and it is keeping your interest.  Updates are soon coming.  Just need to find a new beta-  if you know of anyone- please pass their name to me.

Reviewer: Blossomlegs (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 05:11 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Brilliant update!

Looks like Gus is goig to have a confusing/hard time when the baby arrives.  Mel, Linz, Deb and Mikey shouldn't be saying such negative things in front of him about how wrong it is for Justin and Brian to have this baby.

Hope Brian and Justin canmake him understand that they will still love him as much as they do now and they will still have time for him.

Good to see Brian and Justin standing up to Linz and not gettingaway with her bull----.

Thanks for sharing, looking forward to next.

JoAnn



Author's Response:

JoAnn:

 

Thanks for the comment and taking time to let me know you are enjoying the story.  The baby will definitely change the dynamics of everyone involved in the little family-  including the adults not raising him/her.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Does this mean the Gus is planning to move in with his dads once the baby is born?



Author's Response:

What Gus wants and what he gets are not necessarily the same thing.  I'm not revealing any future actions-  lol-  just have to keep reading

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2016 01:11 AM · On: Chapter 10- Christmas Aftermath

Trouble ahead, I hope Gus doesn't get too upset.  He has a typical 10 year old sense of being subtle.  Great chapter!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments and your continued support.  He hasn't realized subtelty yet. 

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2015 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

I love your stories. I'm so glad you continue to write. Thanks! Can't wait for the next chapter.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking the time to let me know you are enjoyig my stories and my writing.  I write because I love to do so.  It is a creative outlet.  Unfortunately I do not have the time I used to have to do it, but I still always finish every story I start.  Thanks for reading and I hope you enjoy.

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2015 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Lindsay is going to be sorry. Brian will distance himself from her if she isn't careful.
It's about time that they caught onto her jealousy. They'll make great parents, and no matter what, there will be Cynthia.

Author's Response:

Aboslutely.  Lindsay is walking on thin ice and she may fall in, only to find that no one will rescue her.   I think Brian and Justin will make great parents.

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2015 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Gus thinks he is going to live with Brian and Justin once the baby arrives?  I think he is in for a surprise.



Author's Response:

I'm not saying what will happen here-  my muse has not decided.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 08:53 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

The baby should be here soon.  It's disappointing to see that Mikey and Deb are not being supportive.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

The baby should be here soon.  I was hoping to have it arrive before the end of the year but it doesn't look like that will happen.  I think it will take as long to write the story as it takes to have a real baby.  ( lol) but regardless, thank you for taking the time to comment and let me know you are enjoying the story.   I would have hoped Debbie would be supportive, being the surrogate mom and all.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2015 05:48 AM · On: Chapter 9--Dolls and Zombies, and Baby Monitors

Nice happy chapter, wellthe munchers aren't happy but that doesn't matter.  I hope Gus enjoys his time with B&J.  Really enjoying ypur story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Bill:   Thanks for the comments and I'm so glad that you are enjoying the story.  It can't always be filled with angst.  lol.

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 04:38 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Loved it. Can't wait for the baby.

Author's Response:

thank you.   BAby will be here soon-  hopefully by the end of the year!

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2015 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

All I have to say is that Mikey needs to give it a rest already.

Author's Response:

Yep-  totally agree- I'm not a Micheal fan

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2015 01:02 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

   Yep, I am still out here, and still enjoying this story.


   As for Michael, I don’t give a damn what he thinks.  He just doesn’t matter to me.  I am glad you wrote the chapter, but Michael will never understand that bond between Brian and Gus and Justin and Gus.  But Michael is right about one thing,  Brian will have less time for him.  But more importantly, Brian will ‘want’ to have less time for Michael. 


   Again, thanks for the story.  We sure have come a long long long way.


DavidR



Author's Response:

Thank you for continuing to read despite the slow process in writing the story.  I really don't like Michael-  he needs to grow up and I don't understand how Ben ever stayed with him.  Yes, when the baby comes, Michael will definetly be low on the total pole.

Reviewer: Nichelle Wellesly (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2015 04:24 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Hey Darling! Just catching up with this story and I can't wait for MORE!!! OH Good God's Garage where do I start??

I am absolutely EXCITED that Brian and Justin have chosen Cynthia for the baby. I wanted to smack the fire out of Lindsey and Melanie several times during the series for the way they discounted Brian's feelings/ role in Gus' life. It's nice to read fics where they get their comeuppance for that and they preconceived notions are proven false. With that in mind, I have to say it was also REFRESHING to see Melanie as the voice of reason when speaking with Lindsey and Michael about Brian and Justin's relationship/parenting of Gus. I think this is finally opening her eyes and seeing the Brian that Justin has seen since night 1.

As always I want to put a muzzle on Michael. Honestly, I don't know how Ben did it in the series and I certainly don't while reading the various stories. I always find it strange that in a friendship 15 years in the making, Michael never got to see and understand WHO Brian was underneath all the bravado. But I guess we can attribute the saying "People see only what they want to see" to Michael- a character who refuses to accept change and has no filter to accept reality. I seriously hope reality takes a big bite out of his ass big time...LOL

My prediction: Michael and Lindsey will lose their minds once the baby arrives. Gus will go stay with his Dads. And Melanie will restore Brian's parental rights so that Michael can no longer use that as a Brian Bashing Tool. Well at least that's what I would love to see happen. However, I am LOVING your story as is! Although I will continue to follow this, I can't wait until it's finished so that I can read all the related fics back-to-back again. You've done one helluva job on the series so far and I'm HOOKED!

Happy Writing!

~Nichelle 



Author's Response:

Nichelle:

  First, let me say thank you for the well thought out and generous comments you left on the story.  As a writer, I aprpeciate each and every comment but is always nice to have a long discourse.  

Cynthia seemed to be a good choice for the surrogate.  I know in many stories, folks have chosen DAphne, but I didn't want that for them.  I thought Daphne was better suited to being an Aunt than a surrogate mom.  The time that Justin and Daphne had sex brought way too much angst to their relationship and I just didn't think that was a good combination.  

I totally agree about Ben.  It just seems wrong that anyone would stay with a spouse where it was obvious that their feelings for someone else are still very much to the surface.   Michael wants Brian and he really isn't ready to accept that Justin has him.

Not going to address your prediction-  it will spoil the story.  Glad that you are enjoying the story and I hope the ending will be good for you.

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: October 25, 2015 12:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Urgh Micheal is such a controlling putz! He just never gets a clue no matter how many times he is told!



Author's Response:

Michael does not realize that Brian has grown up and that he wants different things in his life.  Maybe one day, he'll realize that Brian has the right to change.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 04:06 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Love how Melanie is the voice of reason.  Ben too.  Michael has a one track mind and has lost the ability to empathize with other people. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the comments.  I think Melanie sees Brian a little differently.  True, she is not a big Brian fan but I think that is more due to the jealousy she feels for Linds' feelings for him.  I've never seen how Ben can put up with Michael.

Reviewer: Larka (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 03:37 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Grow up Michael!



Author's Response:

Larka:

  Not only does he need to grow up but he needs to stop trying to get everyone to side with him regarding the baby and Brian.

Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 11:32 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

still reading...and still enjoying and anxious to see what happens

also - while I am admittedly not a Michael or Mel fan - it is refreshing to read a story where Michael is actually positively involved in JR's life - the parents get along - and except for the Michael and Brian whinefest...the usual resentments and Brian bashing ae not the main character - thanks for that

and - not that it will stop him - I'm glad everyone is letting Mikey know they don't agree with him

looking forward to more

Charle



Author's Response:

Happy that you are still reading.  I feel very badly that it is taking so long for me to post and write this story but RL is just incredibly busy.  Not an excuse, just it is.  REgardless, I am excited that my readers can relate to the characters and enloy my portrayl.   I'm always surprised when I watch the series that folks didn't see the good part of Brian.  

Reviewer: Andrea (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2015 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Enjoying the story.thanks for your hard work.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2015 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Enjpyed this chapter.  Michael never changes.  Can't wait for the baby to arrive.  Really happy to see your update!!  Bill

Reviewer: sophie'smom (Anonymous) · Date: October 24, 2015 03:26 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Jealousy is a Green Eyed Monster

Michael's still an ass, and I think everyone is finally getting a bit tired of his immature rantings.
No redeeming qualities, can't see what Ben is suppose to.

Author's Response:

I've always wondered what Ben saw in Michael.  I think I totally lost any respect for the man when he told Brian that Justin should have died after the bashing.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2015 01:02 AM · On: Chapter - All About Gus

   Thanks for the chapter, it was good.


   There sure looks like a problem will exist with Gus.  Brian


and Justin failed to convince him that with the new baby, they


will still find lots of time for him.  I wish Brian had told Gus


about the day Gus was born, and the bond that had formed


instantly.  No matter what, a new child or whatever, that bond


is never broken.  I think Gus would have understood that. 


Now of course, when his plan is rejected, he will feel rejected,


and I guess it will be up to Brian to convince him of otherwise. 


It sure won’t be easy.


  Thanks for the story, I do enjoy each update.


DavidR



Author's Response:

David:

 

Thanks for the wonderful comments.  It is an idea to have Brian talk to Gus about the day he was born-  I might use that.  Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2015 01:35 PM · On: Chapter - All About Gus

Great update. I just have to ask though what the hell is wrong with everyone? Why would they even fix their lips to tell Gus that his dad's won't have time for him or would forget about him? They need to check themselves.

Author's Response:

Thanks-   The gang is true to form-  not  thinking and still believing Brian is the "bad guy".  I don't think they ever learn.

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