Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2015 06:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

well done - can picture it happening just like that!

Charle

Author's Response: Well it would explain why Michael was always so rude and angry towards Justin, besides being jealous... Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2015 01:23 PM · On: Chapter 1

To be honest, I was very confused throughout this. The main issue is the constant switch in POV's, which prevented this story from really making an impact on me. The characters just said little things, and then you switched to another person. I would ahve preferred to see the most relevant character speaking continuously throughout this story. You still could have shown what the others were thinking either by separating each POV and adding more detail to their words, or by indirect characterization; showing us how the other characters acted from the protagonists viewpoint. That would have made more sense to me. 

I didn't really dig the idea of Michael being in love with Justin; its too far away from his character for me. Also, Brian didn't sound quite like himself either; I can't see him confessing his love for Justin, particularly not to Michael, whom he knows has a secret crush on him. Towards the end, I felt Michael got the short end of the stick and was rather cruelly dismissed despite his feelings- couldn't they have talked it all out, instead of Brian telling Michael to "fuck off"? That is completely unlike him. They're friends, they love each other.

But that is just my perspective. 

Reviewer: taurus (Anonymous) · Date: January 08, 2015 07:08 AM · On: Chapter 1

I was not expecting Michael in love with Justin. That was different. How about some more chapters to see where this development will lead?

Author's Response: That seems to be the consensuses, I'll have to see where my muse takes me... Thanks so much ~ Later Kathleen

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2015 12:23 AM · On: Chapter 1

Omg...I soooo didn't expect that twist and the whole time I thought he was talking about Brian...damn go figure.

Author's Response: I know, I'm evil... I just thought that it might explain why he is always to negative and angry towards Justin... Just like children, always pick on the one they actually like the most... Later Darling ~ Kathleen 💕

Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

For a second there I thought everyone had lost their minds. But nope just Mikey like always lol. Thanks for this it was a laugh I really needed today!

Well done!

:)

Author's Response: I'm so glad I could help take the edge off your day. Hopefully you're feeling better... Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen 💕

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2015 07:12 PM · On: Chapter 1

Oh lordy lady the things you come up with. Ha! Michael in love with Justin.
Was fun to read.

Author's Response: You never know where my mind will take me... But that's one sure way to get Brian to finally admit his true feelings... Later Hon ~ Kathleen 💕