Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2013 04:21 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

I can relate to Yvonne's obsession and lets face it those stories were biographically based.  You did try to put a stop to her voyerism, though I'm not sure you succeeded.  Surprise!  The brooch video camera was a nice touch, and not one I expected.

 

Author's Response:

Heh, heh, heh...their visitor is quite persistent, isn't she? Wouldn't YOU like to have video evidence of their lovemaking?;)  Talk about erotic video.;)  Thanks for reading and for the comments!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 06:25 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

This was totally halarious to read this.

I get the same way when I'm stuck writing a long story. I then get blindsided by another idea and then I run with that.

Thanks for writing this. Jane

Author's Response:

Hi, Jane!  Always so great to hear your thoughts.  I'm delighted that you enjoyed this one.:)  I guess Vonnie just inspired me with her previous adventures - ha!  What I wouldn't have given to have been a fly on the wall during those encounters; I would definitely pay admission - LOL!  Thanks so much for reading and for the feedback; I am very appreciative.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: LEE (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 09:41 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

WOW WHAT A STRANGE, ODD STORY.  I AM THE DESIGNATED READER AS BB AND LINDC HAVE GONE TO OTHER HOSPITALS IN THE AREA TO DO MORE TEACHING SEMINARS.  SHE WAS HAPPY SHE GOT TO GO THIS TIME AS SHE IS BB'S RIGHT HAND GIRL.  I DON'T THINK I COULD HAVE SOMEONE WATCHING ME AND MY LOVE INTEREST GETTING IT ON.  I'M NOT QUITE AS FORWARD AS BRIAN AND JUSTIN.  HA!.  RICK REALLY LIKED THIS ONE.  I TOLD HIM HE WOULD AS HE IS A TAD ON THE STRANGE SIDE.  HE LIKES VAMPIRE STORIES.  I AM READING HIM ONE BY ANOTHER WRITER ON HERE.  WE ARE ALL REALLY GOOD AND WORKING HARD.  WE WILL BE GLAD WHEN THE MISSING ONES GET BACK, I THINK BY NEXT MONDAY.  WELL BREAKS IS OVER SO I HOPE MY STORY IS NEXT!!!!!!!! WILL BE WAITING FOR MY UPDATE.  LUV 2 U

Author's Response:

Hi, Sweetheart!  I'm always so glad to hear from you.:)  Yes, I know; this was not my normal style of writing.  But another writer friend of mine was having a birthday, and I was continuing the voyeuristic slant to her other stories.  Normally, I'm not too comfortable with writing these, either.  And I apologize, BTW, for the delay with "Heart's Desire." I HAVE started on the update, and have about half of it done.  But I'm struggling somewhat with the next chapter for some reason.  But I will plod on and definitely update it soon.  I presently have a horrid cold, though, and feel pretty lousy, so it may be a few more days yet.  Ugh.  One of the downsides to teaching; I always come down with what the students get!  This is still much better than pneumonia with sepsis anyday, though; never want to go through THAT again!

 

Are you by chance reading Janet's story to Rick (Hiding in Plain Sight?).  That's a good one, and I can see why you would like all the mystery and intrigue; it kinds of reminds me of "Paper Hearts Killer," at least the suspense part, and I remember how much you enjoyed that one.:)  Tell Rick I said hello as well as Noah (I think that was his name), Brian, Nonie, and, of course, lindc.  I love all you guys!  Take care and I promise to get your favorite updated very soon.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: gmapam (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 04:23 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

nice!!  hahaha...I liked that one!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading and for the comments; I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.:)  I would gladly fill in for her anytime - ha!  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2013 01:54 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

Weird, interesting, hot, entertaining and bizarre. Definitely a bit different for you, my friend, but nonetheless wonderful. I didn't read the prequel to this (or the stories that inspired this), although I have read some of Yvonne's stories. 

The woman in this is totally crazy, although, in a way, I can completely understand. We've all imagined it when we write or read fanfiction, but if there were such a real couple we wouldn't invade their privacy just for our own pleasure. However, seeing G & R together, I will definitely say that there is nothing that beats seeing something like that in person, even if it was just a look. I would feel like a menacing voyeur if I were in the position of the woman in this story. And that part with the brooch at the end was exceedingly creepy, my dear. Although it would be very funny if when she gets back home to realize that it actually hadn't been working because she forgot to turn it on (with being asleep and then tied up and all). 

If I had been writing this I would have had Brian be a bit more vindictive, but in a Brian-esque way... I would have had Brian give her a kiss goodbye at the airport, followed by the most menacing look he could come up with and say something like "don't ever fucking come back". On the other hand, if her psyche is just crazed enough, that might not work at all, and would just seem like a strange invite to come back. I definitely would have had Brian comment to Justin (at the airport in front of her) about going home and having all the locks and security codes changed to every building Brian owns, along with one final threat/reminder of a restraining order if they ever see her again. 

Anyway, great story as always, love! Weird, but amazing. And I understand about being inspired by other stories on here; not only have your stories inspired a couple of mine, but I've been inspired by a couple of others to write other stories. One of these days I'll write a Sherlock story, course if I post it here I'll have to ask for a new category, because there isn't one. 

Cheers, Laura :) xoxoxo (Can't wait till June!)

Author's Response:

Hi, Laura!  Thank you for reading and for the always thought-provoking comments.:)  Yes, this was definitely a different departure for me.  I wish I had thought about the brooch malfunctioning when she got home; I would have written that in. That WOULD have been poetic justice, wouldn't it?  I'm not sure quite WHAT got into me to write this - ha!  But now that I'm 'back to normal' (well, as normal as I can get!), I'm heading back to the much-neglected "Heart's Desire."  I AM working on it - have about half written - but I'm struggling a little, so this one popped in my head and I ran with it.

I'm definitely looking forward to June, too!  It will be so great to finally meet you and the others!  Take care and see you soon!  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2013 12:07 AM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

Ahhhh, this was adorable, Kim. Not to mention hot! I didn't know what to expect when I opened this one, but I was surprised and immediately charmed by this story. Wouldn't we all love to be in that position? I think we'd all gladly fall under the Kinney look of censure for such a coveted vantage point! Haha. Fun and perfect as always. Thanks, my friend. *Hugss*

Author's Response:

Thank you, my friend!  I'm happy that you liked it.:)  Kind of weird, though, I admit - ha!  But Vonnie must have inspired me.:)  And now I have to stop playing hookey and go back to "Heart's Desire."  I'm working on it, but for some reason this next chapter is vexing me.:/  Thanks again for reading and for all the support you give me.  *Hugs* ~Kim

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 11:34 PM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

As always your stories are wonderful. This one had me laughing the whole way thru. I loved the meal she was served, well all but the wine, I would want a Dr. Pepper. I bet is Tricky had been staying with them he would have been an excellent security dog and provided even more fun.
Lori

Author's Response:

Hi, Lori - Yeah, where IS Tricky when you need him to lick someone to death?  Ha! That does remind me, though; I think someone needs to make a reappearance soon for a certain wedding in the spring.  Hmm..perhaps I need to kill two birds with one stone and make it a Valentine's Day wedding...I'll have to work on that.;)

I'm so glad you enjoyed this one, my friend; thank you for reading and for the comments, Lori.  *Hugs*  ~Kim

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2013 08:32 PM · On: Someone's Been Sleeping in my Bed...

This is undoubtedly the best wake up call I've had in a long time (it sure bets the hell out of having someone yelling TOE THE LINE SOLDIER at you lol) I absolutely love the ending even though she broke part of the deal with her sneaky ass :)

Keep the wonderful stories coming~JP

Author's Response:

Hi, Tamara!  Loved you line about the drill sargeant - ha!  I'm glad I could make your morning wakeup call more interesting.;)  I'm so happy that you enjoyed this little tale of weirdness.  Thanks for reading and for the comments, my friend; you know how much I appreciate that.  *Hugs* ~Kim