Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2016 01:39 PM · On: Chapter 1
I read this story and got all caught up in it before I realised it was a WIP. I really hope that one day you return to this story as I think it was brilliantly written -thought provoking, sad and heartbreaking but underlying it all was sure knowledge that there was still love. Please consider returning to finish this.
Reviewer: Aga (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2015 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 7
Are you going to finish the story???????? Please do it.
Reviewer: Mikicn (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2014 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 7
so upset Justin signed he should have fought
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2014 03:08 PM · On: Chapter 7
r u going to finish the story i hope so thanku kim
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2014 08:40 AM · On: Chapter 7
Any chance you'll pick this fic back up? :(
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 12, 2013 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 1
I miss this story :(
Reviewer: lin (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2013 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 7
Fell in love with this story...really hoping you complete it :)
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: March 19, 2013 11:29 PM · On: Chapter 1
PLease don't leave this story unfinished. We need more.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2013 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 7
“I'm not doing this because you fucked him.”
That was a shocker. This chapter was heartbreaking.
Well done!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: February 04, 2013 03:29 AM · On: Chapter 7
So sad. Cried.cried.cried. Hate this chapter.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2013 01:47 AM · On: Chapter 7
O'm crying,this chapter is so sad :(
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
So sad. I hope they can fix this mess.Great chapter.
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:53 PM · On: Chapter 1
Heartbreaking ... But Brian's reasons for wanting the divorce give me hope. The next update can t come soon enough.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 7
This is so sad ... I need a happy update. Justin please do something!!
* hugs *
Reviewer: LoveTheCoat (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 03:39 PM · On: Chapter 7
Oh my goodness, my heart is breaking for both of these men. What a gut-wrenching chapter. Brian - so stubborn and insistent that his own self-worth is null, and Justin can't seem to say anything that will convince the other man of his value. You know I always believed Brian to have a tragically low self-esteem in the arena of his relationships, his actions always seemed desperate, like he was constantly waiting for the other shoe to drop and for everyone in his life to eventually leave him, or believe the worst of him, thus he never fully puts himself out there...but with Justin...gosh - you have me hooked! I will anxiously and patiently wait for your next update. thanks!
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 7
I still cry. Now we have to wait to realize they can not function without the other. Well, this really hurts.
Thank you.
Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 11:37 AM · On: Chapter 7
I tell it like I read it, first if Brian is living at the loft why the hell isn't Justin still living in the house he 28 is he scare to live alone Daphne should have insisted that Justin man up and stay and show Brian he was fighting for their marriage
weather brain wasn't and what was so sad about their conversation it was totally ridiculous.
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Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2013 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 7
I think I probably shouldn't have read this after drinking two glasses of wine on an empty stomach. I'm sobbing here. Brian is so broken and I just want to hold him and make it better. Justin will find a way to do that, won't he? Please. . . Too sad! TAG
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 7
I am so not a happy camper :( I can't believe Brian's reasons for wanting a divorce have nothing to do with Ethan. I really wish he would have thought things through before making this decision. My heart was breaking with every line.
Update soon please~JP
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2013 08:31 AM · On: Chapter 7
Oh, how sad! I wish Justin had refused to sign the papers. I know he thinks he's to blame, but where is the spark in him? I'm a little disappointed that he went ahead and signed. Very intriguing story, though, and very well written. I'm also hoping that Justin and Ben don't wind up as more than friends, but I suppose while they're trying to console each other it could happen. (?) Looking forward to more.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: January 22, 2013 06:19 AM · On: Author's Notes
You have to hurry back and help us resolve some of this ASAP. Please! There's only so much angst a person can take. Waiting with baited breath! TAG
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:01 PM · On: Author's Notes
Thanks for the update but i am not sure why you needed to do that it is your story you decide how it progresses and finishes, life is not always easy. I am really enjoying this fic and if it stirs some folk to worry about the outcome you are doing your job.
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 02:10 PM · On: Author's Notes
when i read the ethan part i there was more to it go have a good time in ur life i will wait its a great story , thanku kim
Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:57 AM · On: Author's Notes
This is me saying it like I read it...In every story about Brain and Justin it portray brain as a alpha straight/gay kind of guy who get a free pass for everything and Justin as the sissy needy more girly kind of gay guy (far from the truth) who is favor to be hurt by brain and to accept it with honor, for me as a reader it feel a little unbalance. But what I don't understand is why Ethan is so hated he never broke Brian and Justin up they were already broken back than. But to be fair in this story he sit Justin up. Maybe in the land of tell it like it is Justin will find a pill and take it to tell Brian like it is once and for all.and see if justin get a free pass
Author's Response: I'm sorry if my story or my portrayl of Justin isn't your cup of tea, but I don't mean to make Justin out to be a pussy. I don't think the character was a sissy at all - naive, yes, but not a sissy. Maybe I will convince you that was not my intention with future chapters. I also don't hate Ethan or think that he broke Brian and Justin up. Break-ups happen, and theirs probably should've happened then, but Justin handled it very poorly, hurt Brian unnecessarily, made a bad decision, and ended up getting a free pass from everyone in the end. Hopefully you'll stick around for the rest of the story, but I appreciate the constructive criticism either way.
Reviewer: Pats (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 05:19 AM · On: Author's Notes
Justin is an a-hole as usual. Brian should leave him and find someone who understands him and doesn't just jump in with another. Ethan holds the truth but we all know that something happened. Brian was mourning someone he really loved deeply and Justin should have been more patient. Poor Brian.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:37 AM · On: Author's Notes
Just write your stories-I think everyone knows this is a Brian and Justin story and they all have angst before the happiness kicks in. We don't really know what happened with Ethan do we? I for one don't want a divorce maybe it will happen and maybe not. Depends where your muse takes you. I guess all these reviews are a good thing. I t means your writing has had profound interest, so don't make any identifying statements about it. We all know it will be ok in the end.
Reviewer: Morgan (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 04:30 AM · On: Author's Notes
I have to say I really like this story. To me, it's about time we had a Justin did Brian wrong and Brian is angry by it. Nither one of them is the "bad guy" here. One did not set out to injure the other. Though I get tired of Justin always being the one hurt and Brian always being the one going after Justin to make up....
So, thanks.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 02:48 AM · On: Author's Notes
I'm so happy you cleared all that up. I really love this story, even with all my reservations about Brian's behavior. It was never critcism of the story. Believe me, when I hate a story, I don't bother to review. I love this story because it gets me so emotionally involved. I should have been clearer with my reviews. Sometimes my brevity gets me in trouble.
You have written your Brian and Justin the way you see fit and should continue in that vein.
I look forward to more.
Sandra:)
Reviewer: Carol (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story ... It's well written, the characters and their responses are totally believable ... with loads of angst potential. Poor Brian ... 2 weeks between updates ..... Noooooooooooo
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 01:56 AM · On: Author's Notes
I am enjoying it very much,and I know things will get worse before they get better. I can't wait for the next update ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: Diana (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 12:52 AM · On: Author's Notes
Hi Lyndsey,
i just want to say that i really appreciate and like the way you adress all the readers of your storie.
Thanks for explaining the reason why Brian is acting the way he is and why they have to go trough that right now. I really believe you cleared a lot of things up for us!!!
Keep going.
Best wishes
Diana
Reviewer: cedon (Anonymous) · Date: January 17, 2013 12:11 AM · On: Author's Notes
I love your story !
I think Brian's reaction is really hard on Justin ... but it's the way he did things in the series too - I always thought that Justin's problems weren't handle very well by his friends ... that he was mostly left on his own with advices.
I kind of wish you would quit school and work to only wor on this story !! (just kindding obviously)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 11:51 PM · On: Author's Notes
As a loyal follower of this story, I appreciate you taking the time to address our concerns. Yes we are all a little bit taken aback with Ethan coming back into the picture and Brian hastily asking for a divorce, so much so that we find it quite easy to place blame.
I hope your studies go well and hope you can update soon~JP
Reviewer: Anika (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 11:45 PM · On: Author's Notes
Hey, Just wanted to let you know..
LOVE THIS STORY!
Your writing is immaculate and also wanted to let you know that I actually understood why each of the main characters acted how they did. It's pretty reasonable, really.
Anyways..did Ethan by any chance drug Justin? Would that be the cause for Justin's loss of memory, plus the unintended sex?
Good luck with your semester and I as always would be eagerly awaiting for the next chapter on this awesomely written angst fic.
Author's Response: Hm...we shall see. :) Thank you for reading! I appreciate the feedback.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 11:21 PM · On: Chapter 6
How are you going to fix htis mess? I'm counting on you..
Author's Response: It's going to take some work, but don't fret too much just yet. There's still hope.
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 08:03 PM · On: Chapter 6
brain stated it he pushed him away and i can see his point about the fiddler i would try to talk it though and take it from there kim
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 6
Omg this is awful we need the boys to get past this but I suspect we have a lot of angst to go through first
Author's Response: You are correct in your suspicion! Thanks for reading/reviewing!
Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 6
Please update soon! I can´t stop reading!
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 6
*sniffles* Please no...Not divorce. Oh please make this happy again. I don't think I can take all these depressing events. And yet this is so good that I can't stop myself from jumping on every update. Another one soon please?
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 16, 2013 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 6
NOOOO. SAY IT ISN'T SO. MY GOD I HATE THIS. BRIAN DROVE HIM AWAY AND HE CAN'T CARRY HALF THE BLAME. SOMEONE NEEDS TO GROW UP HERE. NOW WHERE IS THIS GOING, SADNESS FIRST I GUESS. NO DIVORCE-PLEASE. MIDDLE GROUND NEEDS TO BE REACHED-DIVORCE IS THE LAST THING AFTER ALL ELSE FAILS. WILL BE WAITING WITH BATED BREATH FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 6
“You – you want a divorce?”
That should have been Brian's line. And where was Daphne when Brian was treating Justin like crap? I know Brian's best friend died, so it was okay to treat Justin as if it was all his fault because he was still alive? So Justin was supposed to be the whipping boy until he felt better? It's understandable for someone to grieve, but to abuse his spouse because of it is unexcusable. And t be mistreated because of Michael? He and Justin were probably never even that close. Justin needs to find a new man and a new best friend.
And that house is suppoed to belong to Justin. *grumble*
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 09:56 AM · On: Chapter 6
Oh, this is so sad! No, Brian, don't do it! But I can understand. Something tells me it's not all as it seems, though; I don't care if Justin WAS drunk. At least that's what I'm holding out for. Gutwrenching chapter but so good! Looking forward to the next update. ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 6
Really????? I am so pulling my hair out right now. Please tell me they don't actually go through with it. Brian absolutely CANNOT let Ethan win again.
Please update soon~JP
Author's Response: We shall see. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Raine (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2013 01:12 AM · On: Chapter 5
I really really really like this story! :)
Author's Response: I'm glad, thank you!
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2013 10:18 PM · On: Chapter 5
I feel sorry for both the boys, but I know they will work it out.
Author's Response: We shall see. ;) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2013 04:31 PM · On: Chapter 5
oh shit why did Justin have to be so honest!!
Author's Response: A little different from the first time, eh? Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Chapter 5
“You're talking to me now?”
That should have been Justin's line. Justin never would have fallen into Ethan's hands if Brian had remembered he had a husband to fall back on. He not only neglected Justin, he verbally abused him at every turn. Now if Brian was smart, he would be on his way to kick Ian's butt.
Okay, I'm calm now. You got me hooked. Please update soon! :)
Author's Response: It wasn't the cheating that made it so bad, it was the person he cheated with. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh well this is just so sad. I really hope you find some way to make this happy again, because I don't know if my emotions can handle a sad fic.
Author's Response: Well it IS a B/J fic, isn't it? It'll get worse before it gets better though. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: morgan (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2013 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 5
Am likeing this story very much. More please :)
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: January 14, 2013 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 5
it's a setup
Author's Response: I wouldn't be so certain. ;)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 5
I'm soooo not happy about this little turn of events. I don't see Brian getting over this easily because this wouldn't be the first time Justin has left him to "run off" with Ethan.
Justin really needs to find out what actually happened between them so that he and Brian can save their marriage.
I'm still loving this story update soon please~JP
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 14, 2013 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 5
Oh, this was wrenching but so good. Such a myriad of emotions - what a roller coaster! Very well done. I can't wait to hopefully get more of the backstory regarding what happened between Justin and Ethan - I don't suppose there's any possibility of a setup here, but a girl can hope. I AM glad he told Brian the truth, no matter how painful it was.
Very intriguing story! I'll definitely be waiting anxiously for the updates to it. *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it! I think there's a good chance we'll find out more about that night soon enough.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 06:45 AM · On: Chapter 4
Wow great chapter. What the hell has Ian done to sunshine. Brian is going to be pissed.
Author's Response: You're right about that! Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 4
Not Ethan!! Anyone but Ethan...Oh gaw...This is all so...Gaw! Frustrating. *pulls at my hair* Brian's putting up his walls, Justin's cheating again, this time while they're married again which is WAY worse. Or did he? We didn't SEE it...Maybe it's a misunderstanding? Yes? Please....Update soon!
Author's Response: Hm...we shall see. :) Update coming very soon.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:33 AM · On: Chapter 4
Well, I knew the minute that he met Ethan what was coming along with the synopsis. I assume he did, indeed, have a one-night stand with him, albeit only half consensually due to his drunken state. Not good, especially with Brian. I suppose the question now is, does he tell him the truth NOW or make it worse by keeping it from him? Something tells me if he does that Ethan will be more than happy to point it out to his husband, who, incidentally, has been treating him like a real jerk. Of course, Ethan was a jerk, too, for taking advantage of the situation.
Very interesting story; I'm looking forward to more. And BTW, responses to feedback make US happy, too.:) Thanks for the story. ~Kim
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it. And you're right, I do need to do better with responding to feedback. I appreciate every bit of it. Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:27 AM · On: Chapter 4
This still doesn't look like Justin did anything but get drunk due to Brian pushing him away again and then Ethan taking advantage of him. hey both should hide Ethan's body somewhere.
Author's Response: Now there's an idea... :) Thanks for reading!
Reviewer: Coral (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 4
OMG I HATE Ian !
Update soon Xx
Author's Response: Somehow I doubt you're alone there. Update coming very soon. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2013 03:39 AM · On: Chapter 4
NOOOOOOOOOOO!!!! Ethan is a fucking asshole for taking advantage of Justin's compromised condition. I just bet that he can't wait for Brian to find out about it. Why didn't he just take Justin the fuck home like he was asked, especially since it was no secret to him that Justin and Brian were married?
Brian and Justin have enough shit to deal with without the fucking fiddler around to complicate things further.
I hope this doesn't fuck up their relationship permanently.
Author's Response: Yes, there are some tough times ahead. Major angst warning! Ethan was definitely in the wrong here and, unfortunately, Justin will have to suffer the consequences of his actions. Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 10:15 PM · On: Chapter 3
Justin was being more than patient with Brian. I wonder why Brian is so angry and why with Justin. This is a intriguing story and well written. Please update soon.
Reviewer: IcedCupcake (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 02:05 PM · On: Chapter 3
I finally got time to ready these first few chapters, and wow! I really like where this is going. Well...Plot wise. Not for my emotional wellbeing of course because Brian's old walls coming up are not good. Distance between him and Justin; not good. But I can see this being a beautifully written and heart-wrenching story. So please update soon!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2013 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 3
Sad! He needs some tlc whether he thinks he does or not. Maybe he will come to his senses. Sorry Michael is gone but Brian is not going to recover from this too soon.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 3
Wow, Brian is really rebuilding the old walls isn't he? I understand to a degree but under the circumstances, he really should allow his husband to help him through it.
Please update soon~JP
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2013 07:06 AM · On: Chapter 3
This is very good! I believe I may have read at least part of this before on LJ (?), but I like the dynamics going on here. Naturally, Brian would be torn up over his best friend's death. And I could see him reverting back into his shell, even though he deeply loves Justin.
I hope they are able to reconcile soon. Still wondering from the synopsis what Justin did that will have such dire consequences, but love the angst! Looking forward to the rest of this. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2012 10:49 PM · On: Chapter 2
Omg how sad! Please post the next chapter soon!
Reviewer: britinified (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2012 11:45 AM · On: Chapter 2
Brian's in pain... I figured he'd be the one to ruin his and Justin's relationship....
Then again, Brian being so.... Brian, he'd probably widthdrawl himself from Justin & their marriage, sending Justin into the arms of someone else....maybe?
Can't wait to read more.
-britinified
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2012 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
wow = I don't even have words...this will stretch Brian's emotions to the breaking point...and I can't wait to see why he's pulled away from Justin...looking forward to more.
Charle
Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2012 12:13 AM · On: Chapter 2
I was never a fan of Mikey, but I don't know what's worse to be hit by an 18 wheeler. Or to beconsidered a minor character!
Author's Response: I don't consider him a minor character either, but if you'll read my response to an earlier review, it was turning people away because they thought Brian and/or Justin would die. I'm still not sure why exactly Michael is not a major character. And the eighteen wheeler thing was something that actually happened in my home town last year.
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 08:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Well this is intense. Great start.
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 07:39 PM · On: Chapter 2
Really enjoying your story! Of course, I love angst and this one sounds like there's going to be plenty of that.:) I could see Brian reacting exactly the way he did here, too, although it concerns me that he's pulling away from the one person he's going to need the most. I imagine at some point (hopefully) that will change.
Looking forward to how this story progresses! Thanks for sharing it with us. *Hugs* ~Kim
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2012 06:52 PM · On: Chapter 2
Okay it seems as if Ben and Brian are blaming Justin for Michael's passing......but why? I'm curious now.
Update soon please JP
Author's Response: No, not at all. Ben only snapped at Justin because he's upset about Michael. Brian is reverting back to the emotionally stunted individual he once was in tough situations. No one is mad at Justin and he hasn't done anything wrong...yet. :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2012 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 2
I dont get it. Howis it Justin's fault that poor Mikey bit the big one? Why is Brian in a snit about the whole thing. I don'tknow how the boy puts up with it?
Good story!
Reviewer: orhida43 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 06:27 PM · On: Chapter 1
Soon after that do not begin reading your new story, amid warnings that the mayor character die, but in the end I
and I'm glad you're going to change the warning signs of a story.
Real life was currently very difficult and I do not need more Brian
or Justin's death.
PS
I mistakenly left a comment at the end of your story, "It's deep for
healing, "I do not know whether it can be deleted there.
Reviewer: meme$veryrich (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2012 07:53 AM · On: Chapter 1
major character death (Brian or Justin) so which one is going to die?
Author's Response: Really? I thought "major character death" referred to any main/major character on the show - as in, any of the gang. It felt strange referring to main characters as "minor". Regardless, no, I won't be killing off Brian nor Justin in this fic. Sorry for the confusion, I'll change the warning.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2012 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 1
Dang, this was good. More please!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2012 01:22 AM · On: Chapter 1
good beginning-going to love this one.:)
Reviewer: storm217 (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2012 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 1
Interesting start...I hope I can handle the angst that's sure to come :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 1
I was having my morning coffee when I came across this fic, as with any fic with a major character death tag I was a little trepidatious about reading it. I decided to give it a chance and I'm glad I did.
Oh shit.....my sentiments exactly. Now I'm curious about what happened to Mikey and to see what kind of a mistake Justin makes this time (please don't let it be with the fucking fiddler)
Next chapter soon please JP
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 01:50 PM · On: Chapter 1
I just got home from work and decided to give this a try. It seems intriguing. I like the potential that you might be killing off Mikey ( been reading too many fics lately where Michael and attempt homicide multiple times on Justin and all is forgiven), but I'm not sure if I'm liking the Justin makes the mistake part. I shall withhold judgment till later, LOL.
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