Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2012 09:09 PM · On: Great Pleasure
Justin being a tease--mr. kinney is not going to like them apples. So cute.:)
Author's Response: Thank you! I wanted to drag out their UST a bit. Hehehe
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 03:36 PM · On: Great Pleasure
Things are starting to heat up between our boys, that simple kiss was so telling of how they really feel about each other.
But our beautiful duo shouldn't get too relaxed as the murderer is still at large.
Update soon please JP
Author's Response: Oh yes, feelings are growing. :) That's the best part of these stories, right? Well besides the sex...
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 12:30 PM · On: Brian Bottoms
"For once I'll call bottom."
I does remind me of that old classic movie. It's written just as well. The cabin scene was perfect, and the old lady was a hoot. Loved it!
Author's Response: I'm flattered! I think that's the greatest compliment I've ever had. Thank you!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 12:20 PM · On: Twenty Questions
I loved the ridiculing. It is a very entertaining chapter that reminded me of It Happened One Night. Great writting!
Author's Response: I'd never heard of that until you mentioned it, so I went and looked it up on IMDB. I read some of the quotes and I can't help but agree with you. I kind of want to watch it now. Thank you!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 07:42 PM · On: Brian Bottoms
Love this. It's getting better and better.:)
Author's Response: D'awww...Thank you! It's always nerve-wracking posting a new chapter; I don't want ti disappoint. I'm glad I haven't so far.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 05:40 PM · On: Brian Bottoms
Very action packed. Love the chapter names - very cleavor. Looking forward to whatever comes next. TAG
Author's Response: Thank you! I try to make them interesting. The murderer will enter soon so look forward to that! :)
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 03:16 PM · On: Brian Bottoms
This just keeps getting better. Now let's see if our boys will make it through the night without tearing each other apart.
More please JP
Author's Response: With the way things are going that might be harder than it sounds. :) Thanks for all your wonderful support!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2012 12:10 PM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
Finally got a chance to start reading this. Welcome to the ranks of MW authors. Im off to read the next chapter. TAG
Author's Response: Well I hope you enjoy it! Thanks for giving it a shot and for welome. :)
Reviewer: storm217 (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 05:54 PM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
This story is great! Absolutely loved Justin playing 20 questions and carrying on a conversation between him and Brian by himself. Can't wait to see where they end up and what they're going to do about it all.
Author's Response: Thank you! They do have a long way to go, but I promise it will be worth it.
Reviewer: norm 1 (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2012 04:01 PM · On: Twenty Questions
keep it coming!!
Author's Response: Will do! Thank you for the encouragement!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 03:36 PM · On: Twenty Questions
Justin taunting Brian the way he did was priceless lol. But where does the dynamic duo go from here?
Guess there's only one way to find out
More soon please JP
Author's Response: I want a lot of byplay and UST, I'm glad it's coming off alright. I don't want it to be corny, lol.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 12:12 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
Welcome to MW. I’m sorry I haven’t been able to review sooner. I am loving this fic and I really enjoy the premise at it’s always nice to read something a little different. I think you are teasing us a little saying they will end up in bed as I’m sure you will put us though so much more suspense before that happens. LOL. I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
Cheers
Author's Response: Well let's just say that in a murder fic not everything is as it seems. :) I like to be a little cryptic, tell the truth but only part of it...I'll guess you'll just have to wait and see. Hehehe
I'm glad you're enjoying it so far; I wanted to do something unique and different. I wanted to really add something to the site and give myself a challenge (I've never written anything like this before).
Thanks for your feedback!
Reviewer: Dilia (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2012 06:56 AM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
Ok so far so good, I can't believe this is your first fic, you know I'm a very picky person especially when it comes to things I read. I'm not really a literary person but let me tell you a few things about your writing.
- The idea is extraordinary. *You chose quite a unique one*.
- The writing style: very often I get so excited about the idea when I read the summary but when I start reading I can't last to the third chapter without pulling my hair out :D . It's just that the writer can't make me care, fails to make me imagine the characters or the places from the lack of words or sometime makes me overactive my brain to keep up with lines and lines of repetitive words and repetitive descriptions of the character's inner thoughts, they take half a chapter to finish a trivial conversation between our boys and that kind of stories * the repetitive kind* get a lot of reviews from readers!!!!!!!!!!!!!.
*I already finished the fourth chapter and I still care, you made me care ; ) *
- Keeping up with one direction "stay tuned with the plot summary", you doing quite a good job at that till now. You know, very often I read a story, say at least 8 chapters, I decide to put it in my favorite but then after those chapters the story goes to entirely a different direction, for instance, it starts dark then goes too light or sometime the writer solve the main problem between the two main characters and then goes on 20 chapters after that with boring details of the happy life!!!! or when we are at the peak point of the plot and the writer cut it off ten chapter short!!!! Oh did I mention the stories with lots and lots of funny sex scenes, every two chapters there is one, like there wasn't already enough of that in the original show ;) *one or two scenes of explicit sex is more than enough keep the rest focused on the emotions not the act itself * . All in all the smart writer is the one who plans ahead and keeps the reader coming back for more.
Ok, don't listen to me I'm babbling   I'm just so frustrated lately because it seems I can't find a story hold my interest and now I found your story and a few other ones still new,so keep going with the good job and good luck to you.  
Author's Response: Oh dear! When I first saw your review I freaked out and said 'Oh no! They're listing all the things they hate about my story!' And then I read it and was pleasantly surprised. Thank you so much for all that wonderful feedback!
Having written about 20 chapters so far I can safely say that this story does focus heavily on the murder and its repercussions, so I think we'll be good about that. There is fluctuations between moods, but that is more along with what is happening to them at the time, so I feel like it's natural and I hope you feel the same way when it happens.
Also, there is sex here, but I didn't want it to be about sex, you know? I know that in the show that's the main part of their relationship and I so I figured if people wanted to watch them having sex every five minutes they can go onto Youtube. So yes, it happens, but it's rare (2 scenes out of approximately 25 chapters - give or take because I haven't quite finished it yet).
And it didnt seem like you were babbling at all. I've had the same problem with stories on here all the time. I start reading one and maybe the writing isn't interesting me enough but I give it a try any way because I like the idea, and then it just totally veers off... And now I'm rambling.
Anyways, thanks for your review, and I hope I don't let you down! :)
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 11:57 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
this was way better than all the rest so far.Brian really is being an ass.
Author's Response: Thank you! So far the general consensus is every chapter is better than the last; I can't complain about that right? And Brian will start warming up, don't worry.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 10:48 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
Oh Lord! The suspense is killing me. How will Justin explain everything and will Brian believe him? There are the pictures. I guess I'll have to wait and see what developes.
Author's Response: Yes because if there's anything Brian and Justin are good at, it's communication. Lol I'm happy to know you're hooked; things will keep building the deeper we go in. Thank you!
Reviewer: blacklizard (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 10:36 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
omg this story rocks i'm on the edge of my chair!!!!!!! like literally
please up date asap i'm so hooked
for a first time writer i take my hat off to you
Author's Response: Ahhhh, your review made me squeal in glee. I'm glad you're enjoying it so much! Thanks so much for your review.
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2012 07:59 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
Love it. Who was the assailant and who was the victim??? HMMMMMM!! the cheese is getting more binding. Can't wait till the next chapter. Very interesting--this one.:)
Author's Response: Who indeed? I'll tell you one thing, the victim...not important. But the assailant, very important. Thanks for the feedback! :)
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 07:17 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
brilliantly set up! loved the action in the museum, Justin was clever to take a few photos :D can't wait to see how they cope being thrown together like this! keep up the excellent work, looking forward to the next chapter!! X
Author's Response: Thank you! I was really nervous about the murder part because it's really important to the story, obviously, but i've never written anything even remotely like that before. I'm glad to know I pulled it off.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 05:26 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
Oh you clever little devil, now Brian and Justin have their work cut out for them protecting each other.
Does this mean they'll have to live together to accomplish this goal? I can't wait to find out.
Looking forward to more JP
Author's Response: Live together they shall. Manage not to kill each other before the murderer comes after them...well we'll see about that. :) Thanks for the review!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2012 12:32 PM · On: Wrong Place, Wrong Time.
"Suddenly the rear window blew out, ripping a scream from his throat."
That was a great action scene. I loved the scene of Justin hidng in the museum, too.
Excellent chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you! This is the first time I've tried writing something so...involved. If you know what I mean. Usually it's all about drama and angst and nothing actually exciting happens. Good to know I made it interesting!
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Photo Opp.
Great start. I liked the first two chapters and am interested in reading more.
Keep going!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Well I'm glad you're still liking it, it keeps getting better, I promise! :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 08:24 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right
"He was sitting with Nathan at a nice restaurant sipping a lousy lemonade, because the waiter carded him.."
That dinner was hilarious. I loved the part about the lousy tip, too. And then the kiss... LOL. Nathan is definately out of the running.
I see that Brian has made a lot of enimies. I'm just wondering who is going to get murdered if not him.
Good chapter!
Author's Response: Oh no no I couldn't kill Brian. Almost kill maybe, but never kill. And yes, Brian's rise to the top has made him many enemies, some you won't even expect. Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right
Very intrigueing. I figured Nathan wouldn't measure up, but what will Justin end up doing. Why does that man insist he did the copy and the designs for the campaign? Something is screwy. But that only makes this more interesting. Another 10 star chapter.
In fact the other's should have been 10 too. I don't know were I got 5 being the top.
Author's Response: Woot! I doubled my previous ratings, Lol :) I'm glad you're so interested; there will be many questions, and they will all be answered....eventually.
Reviewer: SR (Anonymous) · Date: December 04, 2012 08:16 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right
Coming along nicely - I think things are about to get exciting!!!
Author's Response: Indeed they are! Thanks for the review, I hope I don't let you down.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 08:00 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right
Oh now it's really about to get interesting.... Are Brian and Justin being forced together because of a witness protection program? If so, I hope Molly and Jennifer aren't hurt in the process.
More soon please JP
Author's Response: Well I'll let you know now Molly and Jennifer have a very sall role in the entire fic. I'm glad you're anxious for more! I really don't see the point of posting anything if people don't enjoy reading it. You know?
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Fight For The (copy)Right
So Brian definitely didn't steal anyone's ideas? I wouldn't believe it even he did, he's just too brilliant to have to pass off someone elses work as his own lol! Uggh Nathan was such a slobbery creep, glad that's him out of the picture (fingers crossed)!
Keep going, am looking forward to having Brian and Justin thrown together in the next chapters! :D
Author's Response: Of course he didn't; it's Brian! :) Thanks for the review and who knows about Nathan...
Reviewer: neetaskita (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 03:10 AM · On: Photo Opp.
Good start. Will be waiting for your next chapters.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it so far, thanks for the feedback! You have to wait long, new chapters come every day.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 11:24 AM · On: Photo Opp.
I loved the initial meeting of Brian and Justin. That was nicely done.
Justin meeting two potential love interest in one day was unusual and very interesting. I'm wondering where this is going.
Author's Response: I wanted them to meet on the same day so he could begin comparing the two. I hope you keep reading and enjoying! Thanks for reviewing!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 11:13 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
I couldn't find any problem with the set up pf the characters. You've done a wonderful job of drawing a person into the story. I'm amazed that this is your first time at QAF fanfiction.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the great feedback! It's good to know I've started off on a good point.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 10:54 AM · On: Photo Opp.
Justin has indeed had a productive day. Can't wait to find out how the date goes. Is the gallery owner a good guy or not ? There is no reason to think he isn't, but you never know. Knowing Brian, sampling Justin is definately on the menu. This story would get 5 stars from me.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're loving it soo much. We have a long way to go and people aren't always what they seem; but I'll reveal nothing. Thank you so much for the review!
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 10:43 AM · On: Photo Opp.
I like it so far, but I'm not sure where it is going .
Author's Response: Well I'm kind of glad you can't tell, I don't want it to be too predictable; of course I don't want it to be too undirected. But I'm sure if you give it a few chapters you'll be good. Thanks for the feedback!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Photo Opp.
OH BOY! OH BOY! OH BOY!. LOVING THIS STORY. hE WILL WANT HIM TO SAMPLE HIM IN THE NEAR FUTURE, I'M THINKIN!!
Author's Response: Love the enthusiasm! It's really not worth posting a story if no one enjoys it, so i'm glad you are!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 08:27 AM · On: Photo Opp.
I like where this going. I can't wait to see what happens between our boys when Justin lets Brian 'sample' his work.
I'm so glad you will be updating daily JP
Author's Response: Yeah it helps when you already have 20 chapters written. :) I hope I don't disappoint.
Reviewer: BluCallie (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 08:26 AM · On: Photo Opp.
I LIKE THE PLOTLINE SO FAR AND WAIT FOR MORE TO COME.
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thank you for your review and keep enjoying the story!
Reviewer: SR (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2012 08:23 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
I like the idea of this story - but to say that the Taylors are living paycheck to paycheck and then have Justin with an expenisve camera seems a little unrealistic.
Author's Response: I see your point. I guess I just wanted to focus on the fact that they're poor and he has a nice camera, not exactly how the two interplay with each other...Well I hope you can overlook it and keep reading. :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 07:36 AM · On: Photo Opp.
Hi, Dear! This continues to be such an enjoyable read! Love these two lines in this chapter:
"You want me to 'sample' you, Taylor?"
and
Hell this man could aggravate paint off a wall!
LOVE it! LOL! I'm going to enjoy reading this whole story - what a ride! Thanks for deciding to post this over here.:) *Hugs* ~Kim
Author's Response: The sample line was my favorite of the chapter too!
Thanks for all your great help.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 10:09 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
hey Cupcake - welcome to MW
nice intro for our boys - we know enough about them to care about what comes next - and I am anxious to see what comes next ... and down the road how they meet
I am guessing from the title that his trip home will be more eventful than he would expect, and perhaps they meet in the midst of whatever drama is coming
nicely done
Charle
Author's Response: Thank you for the review. :) There is a bit more building until the murder though, but don't worry, it happens really early on. I hope you continue to enjoy the story!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 07:40 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
I have a feeling that before long I too will be In Too Deep into this story. Which ever way you take it - it looks to be a wonderful read.
Author's Response: Hehehe I see what ya did there. :) I'm glad I've piqued your interest, I hope I don't let you down.
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
You have me intrigued with this one. It's very different and I am anxious to see where this story takes us.
Update soon JP
Author's Response: I'm glad I've got you hooked, just wait until the murder takes place. :) Updates will be regular, so make sure to check back!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2012 02:39 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
THIS IS GOING TO BE A GEM--I CAN FEEL IT. PLEASE UPDATE REALLY SOON. LOVE IT!!!:) PREDEC2 IS THE BEST WITH ER BANNERS. SHE HAS DONE A FEW HERE--BEAUTIFUL!!
Author's Response: Yeah Predec2 was an amazing help! I really hope I don't let you down, and don't worry about updates. I have 22 chapters already written, so you'll be getting regular updates.
Reviewer: carlou (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 01:19 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
Good start,looking forward to the next chapters.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback. I plan on updating daily (for as long as I can) so make sure to keep an eye out and let me know how I'm doing. :)
Reviewer: Hannah (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 12:33 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
intriguing premise, I'm a big fan of AU :D well written, characterisation is really good and I am very much looking forward to reading the rest of this story so please keep going! thank you for sharing this :D:D
Author's Response: Thank you for the review! I sure hope this keeps you intrigued! I tried to make it interesting, but you'll have to let me know what you think.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Let's Meet Our Boys
:)
Welcome to Whispers, we're glad you joined us.
Author's Response: Thanks for the welcome. It was a long time coming, I have no idea just how long I've been lurking on here, but it was too long.
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