Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2019 03:12 PM · On: Laid Bare
not bad
Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2015 06:21 PM · On: Laid Bare
What a sexy, hot (and wonderfully long) one-shot. And above all, loving--both physically and emotionally. Beautiful!
Any chance of a sequel? This concludes on a satisfying, humorous note, but there's always room for more Brian and Justin. ;)
I was a little confused by the timelines, since Brian first indicated that Justin stayed in New York for 3 years (36 months), but then Justin came home after 18 months. Then, after he'd been home 6 months, Brian thought about them having been together for 5 years. Going with the 18 momths + 6 months, I'm guessing it should be 7 years (since they were a couple from day one, even with the on again, off again nature of their relationship).
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2015 01:51 AM · On: Laid Bare
I can't believe that I've never read this before. This was amazing. Beautifully written and so full of emotion, I loved this story.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2014 08:56 PM · On: Laid Bare
Hot! That was exactly what I needed today. Thanks! TAG
Reviewer: Annie (Anonymous) · Date: October 14, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Laid Bare
A-FUCKIN'-MAZING! I love it when Brian bottoms, it was really hot and in character. Thank you!!!
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2012 01:12 PM · On: Laid Bare
"...I can only hope that by giving him this tonight it showed him in actions what I have such a hard time saying to him in words..."
I've just read this for the second time and enjoyed even more. Brian bottoming it did say so much more than words.
BRILLIANT STORY!
Author's Response: *blushes at praise* Thank you for letting me know how much you enjoyed it! It's always nice to know when people enjoy it, but to hear someone has read it a second time makes me even happier!
Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2012 07:10 PM · On: Laid Bare
This story was the perfect blend of hot, sweet, raunchy, and romantic. The web chats were especially entertaining and Brian having major moments of introspection is always good.
Nice work JP
P.S. thank you for satisfying my kink for toppy!Justin ;)
Author's Response: Always happy to oblige with the toppy!Justin craving! So glad you enjoyed it and thank you for the glowing review!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 02:04 PM · On: Laid Bare
Absolutely beautiful...
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and then taking the time to leave such a wonderful sentiment!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2012 11:49 AM · On: Laid Bare
That was some strong writing, very well done. The sex scenes were undeniably hot, the web cam one where they’re finishing each others sentences was steamy and cute. Personally, I like a bottom Brian, I wish we had gotten to see more of the one time he did it in the show : ) ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: Thank you, I really appreciate the compliment! Sex scenes seem to be the easy part for me *grins*, it's the real 'plot' that gives me the most trouble, LOL! That was one of my favourite scenes to write because I always thought that finishing each other's sentences during sex would be the only time Brian wouldn't bitch about it - much. I agree and I think they should have given us at least two more scenes where Justin tops because even the strictest of tops has got to crave a prick up his ass now and then! ;P Thanks again for the review!
Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2012 01:43 AM · On: Laid Bare
I love an occasional bottoming Brian. :) This was well done in that we get to hear what is going through his mind. Of course it was very hot as well.
Author's Response: Thanks for the feedback! I love it as well, obviously. It's not an everytime thing, but it DOES happen, the show proved that and so I took the liberty of penning one instance. So glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: kim (Anonymous) · Date: October 31, 2012 01:38 AM · On: Laid Bare
I don't like this story!Briane is so OC in this story(what's the deal with all bottom Brian in this story :he is not a bottom)
also why it is all about Justin giving Briane pleasure ha?why Briane is such a selfish love in this story?
Author's Response: Thank you for showing me that I obviously forgot to put the warning on this like I did on the other sites where it is posted - JUST FOR PEOPLE LIKE YOU.
Reviewer: TheWickedStepmother (Signed) · Date: October 31, 2012 01:02 AM · On: Laid Bare
"I know the idea of a bottoming Brian isn't a favorite of a lot of people... "
Well, he did it before, so there is no need for an excuse. I love your story and Brian´s POV...... worry,humor, love and fuck.....this was sooo sexy ;)
Author's Response: Unfortunately, it appears the warning was necessary and now it's in bold letters ... twice! LOL
Thanks so much, both for the read and then taking the time to review. This one took shape on it's own, however it took shape in tiny bits and pieces over a long stretch of time, so I am glad the effort was appreciated!
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 11:02 PM · On: Laid Bare
It was lovely. I think Brian would want to shoe Justin how much he loves him in just this way. very hot
Author's Response: @>--}--- Thank you for your kind review.
Reviewer: Patya (Anonymous) · Date: October 30, 2012 06:28 PM · On: Laid Bare
I love it!
Author's Response: I'm glad! Thanks for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 10:36 AM · On: Laid Bare
:)
Author's Response: @>-}--- roses for reviews...
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