Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 08, 2014 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Reunions
How sad! This is so interesting but it's not finished. A lot of possibilities for this one. It would have been a very good alternative story for Justin and Brian.
Author's Response: i thank you for the interest in this story. Be happy to know that it shall be continued and finished this year. My new year's resolution is to finish up all the stories here.
Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2013 08:41 PM · On: Chapter 17 - Reunions
Please please finish this story pretty please. Please say your going finish this story this is best I read so far
Author's Response: i do plan to finish this story in the new year just hang in there with me.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2013 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 17 - Reunions
Oh, I do so hope you plan to finish this story. It's really interesting and I can't wait to see where you will go next.
Author's Response: Yes i do plan to finish it. I was loving doing it but i want to finish up True Lies first and then hit the others or i may try to hit a little of all of them you know. Maybe that's the way to go.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2012 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 16. Face to Face
the only thing good is when Tia told Justin (you let him walk all over you. You are not to blame for what Craig did.) as Wendy William once said a gay man is still a man, know the diffience.
Reviewer: casse noisettes (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2012 01:18 AM · On: Chapter 15. Rejected
Craig took Tamara from Justin without his consent. How come he didn't know about the second baby ? Didn't he saw the birth certificate ? Didn't he talked to his doctor or Daphne's doctor ? All of this show how much Justin was stupid. But I really don't like the way Brian treats him. Craig didn't have the right to give the baby away. I mean, okay Justin couldn't defend himself but where was Daphne's family ? I would think they would like to know Daphne's condition.
I understand Brian's fear of losing Tamara but he's pissing me off. He's forgetting that Justin just learned that his daughter was stolen from him.
I don't like the living all together. Working together, living together, parenting together. They don't know each other. It's too soon. The girls can hang out together then Brian and Justin. There're a lot to take in so little time.
You know how to frustrate me ;P
Author's Response: Well that is how it happened in the show. Thet moved into together but it took years for the couple to have feelings for each other and after six seasons I do not even think they ended up together. Of course this is going to be a bit different. Okay so right now emotions are raw and things about the birth certificate and things will make more sense. Craig was truly a bastard and well bare with me please. I dont hate Justin really I dont. It will all make since in the end.
Reviewer: Krista (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2012 08:40 PM · On: Chapter 15. Rejected
I really dig this story, but why do you always make Justin the bad guy? Do you not like him or something? For the life of me I can't figure out why he is always the one getting put down in this story :(
Author's Response: OMG is that what you get from this? I love Justin and right now I had to turn back his distaste for Brian because he is not to realize how he is falling for Brian. I love Justin. I never thought that was what you get when you read it. Just bare with me I promise you will love him in the end.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2012 05:36 AM · On: Chapter 15. Rejected
Justin need to stand up to brain,
he's her father no matter what, He didn't know he had another child,
shit he was fighting for his life, and he wasn't the one to give her
up either, you need to stop making Justin the bad and weak person
it's really stupid and unfair.
Author's Response: I resent that. I dont think Ive done that yet in ths story. Thanks for reading.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2012 02:19 PM · On: Chapter 14 Do You See What I See?
Loved the three last chapters!! Really can't wait for the next one to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2012 07:21 AM · On: Chapter 14 Do You See What I See?
J AI HALTE DE CONNAITRE LA SUITE
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2012 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 11. Living Arrangements
Thanks for the lovely chapter.
* hugs *
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2012 12:10 PM · On: Chapter 11. Living Arrangements
Great chapter! Can't wait for Brian to know that Justin is not a bad man and that the real villain is Craig Taylor... ¬¬ Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2012 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 11. Living Arrangements
love it
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2012 04:26 AM · On: Chapter 10. Welcome Home
Loved the chapter! Can't wait to read more! Kisses!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 10. Welcome Home
love it
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 9. Share My World Part 4
Love the chapter! Can't wait to read more! Kisses!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 06:21 AM · On: Chapter 4. That Girl Has My Face!
love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 3 - First Impressions
love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 06:03 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meet Tamara
love it
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 06:00 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Meet Tia
love it
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2012 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 9. Share My World Part 4
He hit Justin !!!!! If your chapter's going to always be short you need to use strong words/language to project what you are trying to express.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2012 01:09 PM · On: Chapter 8. Share My World Part 3
OMG!!! I practically ate the chapters away!! Absolutely LOVE the story!!! Really can't wait for the next chapter to be up!!! Hope to read you soon!!! Kisses!
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 08:52 PM · On: Chapter 8. Share My World Part 3
Hope everything is gonna be alright between Bran and Justin.
* hugs *
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 7. Share My World Part 2
TRES BELLE HISTOIRE
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 7. Share My World Part 2
Excellent choice, love that banner too.
* hugs *
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2012 06:39 PM · On: Chapter 7. Share My World Part 2
Oohhh I want to know how and when Justin will explain that Tamara is his daughter. And how will brian react!? Aggrr need an update.
* hugs *
hope you like one of the banners.
Author's Response: I didnt like the banners I loved them. I gotta get someone to help me choose which one to use. Im glad you are enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2012 01:06 AM · On: Chapter 6. Share My World, Part 1
thanks for the lovely chapter.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thanks more soon.
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2012 08:51 AM · On: Chapter 4. That Girl Has My Face!
oh my goodness - I am giggling - this is going to be hysterical
not only the obvious fun from the show's basic theme, but this strong, confident, bold Justin and a petulant Brian with an ego we are used to but a need for acknowledgement and approval that is almost as new as this history with Kiki that I am sure I have never read in any fan fic before
very nice - tons of fun - more please!
Charle
Author's Response: Oh yes fun with kiki it will be fun
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 18, 2012 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 4. That Girl Has My Face!
well this is intersesting update soon
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2012 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 4. That Girl Has My Face!
Ooh woww twin-sisters. More please.
* hugs *
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 08:34 AM · On: Chapter 3 - First Impressions
:) fun
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meet Tamara
oh honey - things are about to get more interesting than anything you have ever known... this is going to be a hoot - really looking forward to watching this play out - thanks
Charle
Author's Response: Sweet I guess ur familliar with the show I promis updates and good things
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: March 15, 2012 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 3 - First Impressions
Hi, Gal...
Wow! This is a really good start... I like it. Hot... about that bathroom scene being their first time... even though you left it all to the imagination... it stilll was HOT, HOT, HOT!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2012 02:24 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meet Tamara
sounds promising. will you be finishing this one as you have several i have been following but they haven't been finished. it's hard to become engrained in these stories and have them sit here not being completed. i will keep reading this one please continue this one to its conclusion. thanks
Author's Response: Yes I will be
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2012 09:19 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meet Tamara
i like were u r going the story is good update soon kim
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Meet Tamara
:)
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 06:43 AM · On: Chapter 1 - Meet Tia
:)
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