Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 07:34 AM · On: The Beginning of It
madr me cry, loved it
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2013 11:08 PM · On: The Beginning of It
I gotta say that I've been reading a lot of Christmas stories lately and this is one of the best. Fantastic job!
Reviewer: LINDA (Anonymous) · Date: November 12, 2013 01:17 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
ITS BEEN A WHILE SINCE YOU WORTE ANY THING NEW ARE LIKE YOUR ANTI MIKEY AND LINSEY
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:56 PM · On: The Beginning of It
I never read scrooge or a christmas carol,but I read this and I think its just beautiful ~ Yvonnne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:40 PM · On: Christmas Future
Im actually crying!! ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:30 PM · On: Christmas Present
Im all teary eyed lol ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 11:18 PM · On: Christmas Past
This is incredible!! ~ Yvonne xx
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2012 10:47 PM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
I love this lol ~ Yvonne xxx
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2012 05:31 AM · On: The Beginning of It
so good - love the way you paint it !
thanks - and Merry Christmas!!!!!
Charle
Reviewer: jay (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2012 12:19 AM · On: The Beginning of It
great story!!!
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2012 08:34 AM · On: The Beginning of It
everyone knows A Christmas Carol ,but this was just different enough. It was sweet and sad and funny, very well done.
Reviewer: Jean (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2012 09:08 PM · On: The Beginning of It
this was a well done version of the classic, and it still stayed in character. happy holidays
Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2012 08:52 AM · On: The Beginning of It
That was a lovely read, thank you!
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 12:15 PM · On: The Beginning of It
This was definitely one of the best Scrooge stories I have read. Well done!!!
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 04:17 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
loved every last minute of it!
thanks
Charle
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 02:57 AM · On: The Beginning of It
I truly enjoyed this Christmas story. I like it much better than the original. The narrative throughout the story was charming and humorous at times. Each chapter was more intriguing than the previous. This last chapter of Brian mending the error of his ways was enchanting. Like I said before -- BRILLIANT!
This will be a favorite Christmas story of mine for years to come.
Happy Holidays and thank you for this gift!
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Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 02:44 AM · On: Christmas Future
“'Open your eyes, fuckwit,' a familiar voice said."
Melanie as the Grim Reaper -- that was genious. The future for Gus and Justin was Brian's worst nightmare.
Another exceptional chapter!
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Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 02:33 AM · On: Christmas Present
The diner party at Deb's was my favorite part. Brian had done so much for the family clearly out of love. And it was short sited of Michael to think what Brian did for Justin was out of pity.
This was another excellent chapter!
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Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 02:25 AM · On: Christmas Past
That airport scene was heartbreaking.
Well done!
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Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2012 02:20 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
‘It became inevitable, enforced with a fist and harsh words upon a young and impressionable mind, that Brian would become exactly like his father. Brian liked to believe that because he fucked men rather than women…”
I can’t believe I had not read this before. It’s great that this site showcased this story. I would have missed it. This is BRILLIANT! I love the way you made the comparisons between Brian and in this first chapter.
And how can one not compare Brian to Scrooge. You did one hell of a job with this. :)
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Reviewer: Akasha (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2012 03:07 PM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
omg ... I nearly cried ... ist was really a wonderful story ....
Author's Response:
Thank you
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2012 08:30 PM · On: The Beginning of It
Dear Jules,
It is really what i have considered all those days since I read one book which says that every result what you got in the future is based on every move and decision you have made before.we will never know what the live and our life will like.you never know which road you chosed and what decision you have made are good for you or others,so what we should do is cherish what we already have and try our best to be happy,to do what we loved.just do it at once don't hesitate any longer!
Reviewer: LibertySun (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2012 05:16 AM · On: The Beginning of It
This story was marvelous. Wonderful, engaing writing that I just adored. Such a fun, refreshing take a a tale told 'a million times over'. :P Thanks for sharing. *hugs to you*
Author's Response: Thanks! I loved writing this one and worked really hard to make it something special. Glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 06:23 AM · On: The Beginning of It
Just read the entire story and I must say that I thoroughly enjoyed your version of A Christmas Carol. This is a definite keeper!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2011 11:20 PM · On: The Beginning of It
I haven't been on the computer for a few days (I wonder why, lol) but was very pleased to see the completed story when i signed on. As I said, I almost didn't start this story but am very glad I did. It was very well written and I loved the way you choose to tell it. Thank you for sharing and Happy Holidays to you!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it!
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 12:39 PM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
I think this was the best rendering of "A Christmas Carol" I have ever read. Great fic.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 01:46 AM · On: The Beginning of It
Awesome! Amazing! Beautiful... I can't think of enough words to describe how wonderful this story, and this chapter was. You've truly captured the spirit of Christmas, and the sense of joy, wonder, hope and love that should come with the holidays.
Again you've brought me to tears with such a moving and inspiring story, but tears of joy this time.
Thank you so much for sharing this story, as short as it was, it was truly enjoyable, entertaining and beautiful. And I must say that the ending was brilliant, including the comment about Tiny Tim and Scrooge... perfectly woven in to capture the classic story, but from Brian/Justin's perspective... amazing!
Cheers, Laura :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words! This story was a true labor of love, so I'm very happy that it has been so well recieved. I've found myself becoming a bit of a Scrooge around the holidays in recent years. This story let me recapture some of the magic of Christmas for myself. If it did the same for others, then I really feel like it was more than worth the effort. Thanks again! Jules
Reviewer: JustBeAQueen (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 01:31 AM · On: Christmas Future
I tried to prepare myself to read this... this part always gets me, no matter what version I watch or read (even the Muppet Christmas Carol). Didn't prepare me enough though, I'm still wiping the tears.
Amazing chapter. Very well written, even if Dickens did have a tendency for melodramatics, it certainly fits... and again you've woven the brilliance of Dickens novel and the dynamic characters of Liberty into this stunning Christmas story. And having Melanie as the Grim... pure genius my dear!
And Justin seeing Brian... and Brian's reaction... whew! Wow! I can't wait for the next chapter, to see what your creative and imaginative mind comes up with!
Cheers, Laura :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I have to admit that the story seemed to write itself in many ways and I was just as devastated writing this chapter as I have been each time I've reread it. Melanie... I love her character so much right now. I thought Brian really needed a spirit to guide him through things and a silent Grim like Dickens wrote just wouldn't play here. I also needed a little lightness in this darkest of chapters and the interplay with her seemed to help. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter! Jules
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 01:29 AM · On: Christmas Future
Oh, man, I'm sitting here weeping. That was good for the soul, but so damn painful. Beautifully written, great job!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thanks. I reread it this morning after i posted the chapter and cried again.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 01:19 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
This is wonderful.
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 12:49 AM · On: Christmas Present
I'm still really enjoying this story. It is moving along quickly and I can't wait for the next installment. Thanks.
Author's Response: Thatnks! There's just two chapters left, so it will continue to move quickly!
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 11:56 PM · On: Christmas Present
I am loving this story! And begging for more.....
Author's Response: Christmas future will be up tomorrow... I promise!
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 01:35 AM · On: Christmas Past
Awww! Poor Brian, I want to give him a big old hug and tell him everything's going to be OK. Great writing, awesome chapter!
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: I know! As I was writing this, I realized just how depressing A Christmas Carol really is. It just kept getting worse and worse...
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 02:25 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
:)
Author's Response: Thanks!
Reviewer: ycorgigirl (Anonymous) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:32 AM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
Wow, I almost didn't read this because, well, as you said, it's a story we have heard many times but I'm glad I did. It is very well done and I am looking forward to the next installment. Thank you for sharing.
Author's Response: Lol! Thanks. I had fun writing this one.
Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 09:54 PM · On: A Ghostly Visitor
This is great! Can't wait to see where you take it....
Author's Response: Thanks! I had fun writing it.
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