Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2024 05:07 PM · On: Chapter 27
I will admit that I am bummed the story isn't complete, but I knew that going in and the reviews I skimmed were good so I decided I would just go for it. I really enjoyed this. And I love the idea of Alec and Emmett.😍 now I am off to see if you have any other stories!
Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2024 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 20
Oh, I forgot about the robbery!😬😬😬
Reviewer: Allison42 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2024 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 3
"He loved this little moment after sex with Brian, when he was too sated and relaxed to realise the tender thing he was doing." Awwwwww😍
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 11:09 AM · On: Chapter 27
Please finish the story!
Reviewer: BRIJUSLuvrr (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2020 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 27
Luved it plz update sssssssssssssoon
Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2019 02:42 AM · On: Chapter 27
It’s so sad to find this story hasn’t been updated in years.
Absolutely loved it, it would have been nice to read what happened at the end. Oh well.
I hope you are okay though. That’s more important.
Reviewer: dzmom (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2016 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 27
Love this story
Reviewer: chouchou (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2016 12:18 PM · On: Prologue
Why don't you finish this story? You already wrote 27 chapters... Don't let us like that! Please...
Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2015 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 27
I hope you finish this
Reviewer: femmegirl48 (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2015 07:09 PM · On: Prologue
I just found this story and realized it's not finished. Noooooo!!! Please don't leave us hanging like this. We need to know what happens. Pretty please?
Reviewer: kim136 (Anonymous) · Date: November 23, 2014 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 27
r u going to finish the story or will it b r wip i hope not please finish it thanku kim
Reviewer: vinie65 (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2014 10:27 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love your story and I hope you could finish it
Reviewer: Dawnn (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:06 AM · On: Chapter 27
I love this story, is it ever going to get finished?
Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 06:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
Justin is all kinds of adorable in this. So is the li'l cutie babe on the banner :)
Reviewer: Louan (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2014 08:18 PM · On: Prologue
I thought you were doing a brilliant job with your story. I'm just sad that it looks like real life has stopped you from completing it.
Reviewer: shadowfax044 (Signed) · Date: May 12, 2014 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 27
I'm loving this story! I hope you plan to finish, because it's progressing wonderfully, and I'd love to see how it all works out for them. I'm excited to know how Justin's last days at school go, how he deals with bed rest, how Brian eventually comes clean about being in a relationship with Justin, where they move to in order to have enough space for the little girl, what her name is going to be, how Em and Alec get along, what happens between Michael and David and between Mel and Linz... Lots I'd like to know about! It's beautiful so far, and I'm dying to find out how everything develops. :D
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2014 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 27
More please:-)
Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: March 03, 2014 05:45 PM · On: Prologue
This is wonderful! Love how Brian doesn't seem to drastically change, instead making tiny changes.
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 08:15 AM · On: Chapter 3
Hot sex! It's interesting: you actually mentioned a lot of small, unusual details during the sex scene that most people either don't think of, or skip over.
Justin let out a surprised squeak (that was totally manly)--Funny!
Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 08:07 AM · On: Chapter 2
He did not rush over to the intercom--haha, liked that.
Interested to read more of this. I don't think it entirely protray's Brian as cold as he was in the series, but it's not sappy either, which would be worse!
Reviewer: midhat (Anonymous) · Date: January 03, 2014 09:05 PM · On: Prologue
this is one of the best works i have read on brian/justin.It is sweet and nice and deals with other isssues too.So far the storyline is marvellous and i hope the coming chapters will be as good as these and will not disappoint us readers.
Lastly i wish you luck on completing the story so we can know wht happens further in their lifes.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: November 11, 2013 05:45 PM · On: Chapter 27
please consider and finish this wonderful story. I've read it many times,the banner always draws me , the beautiful baby with big blue eyes. The story is wonderful and takes you step and step in Brian's and Justin's life with their baby, it is so entertaining and totally holds your interest.
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2013 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
I love your story, and that banner with that baby's big blue eyes is beautiful, I know shit happens and daily life can rear it's ugly head, but please consider finish this lovly story or at least add a chapter every now and then...you work is much appreciated.
Reviewer: Debs (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2013 10:21 AM · On: Chapter 27
Really, really good. Looking forward to the next chapters.
Reviewer: tnaqaf (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2013 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 27
love the story so far :)
Reviewer: Chocolate (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2013 10:41 PM · On: Chapter 27
Actualiza por favor,. Lo lei en español.
Reviewer: Loahisi (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2013 02:50 AM · On: Chapter 27
ok, it's my first comment on this site but I had to say something. I usually only read finish story and I thought it was one of them. I was so into it that I spend most part of this afternoon reading it and then bam it's not finished lol. I really like this story. I love how you portraied Brian and Justin and you didn't rush into their relationship but you let them grow up. I really hope you will update it soon.
Mathilde
Reviewer: Angel-eyes56 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2013 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 27
Oh I just love this story! I love the idea of Brian and Justin have a little child running around. Their relationship is just so sweet, I'm loving the family their blooming into. I have to admit I can't wait to see how they handle raising a little girl.
And Alec seems to be a good fit for Emmett. Hope to see more of them.
Reviewer: snow (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 27
Glad to see an update!
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 04:51 PM · On: Chapter 27
Glad I found this story. I am so loving it.
Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2013 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 27
I love this story very much, but 5 months between chapters is not for me
so I'll wait for you to finish this before I continue reading .
Thank you for writing.
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 27
Brian giving up the leather ball is a true declaration that he's grown up and decided Justin and his children are more important....The day Brian becomes an adult!! How nice that Emmett is going to get a little action, he always did know how to entertain with the best.
Lori
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2013 05:52 AM · On: Prologue
I love this story. Thanks for the update.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2013 04:45 AM · On: Chapter 27
Brian and Justin are too cute. :)
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2013 09:31 AM · On: Prologue
Please Please finish this story!
Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 18, 2013 02:06 AM · On: Prologue
I keep checking to see if there are any updates to this stroy.
Reviewer: cedon (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2013 01:26 AM · On: Prologue
I've read those 27 chapters at least 4 times since september ! I really like your story even if I usually don't read Mpreg.
I hope you'll update soon
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: September 26, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 26
Loved the story so far! I think it's progressing nicely! I just wish Melanie and Lindsay don't get to Brian and Justin.... I don't know why, but I've always hated them.... :S Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 26
For some reason I don't believe Lindsay, I think it's a ploy to get some leverage with Brian. I just don't trust her.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :P
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 2
I can't wait to read the next chapter,I loved this one alot ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: Thanks :)
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 04:25 AM · On: Chapter 26
Bloody Lindsay she cannot stand it that she is not the blonde in Brian's life. I look forward to the next chapter xxChris
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 1
I love this chapter,im hooked already ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 03:43 AM · On: Prologue
I think your start is great,even if it is the same as the show ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: :P
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 26
How could Lindsay ask for Melanie's parental rights when they are having problemsa?
Love the teddy bear.
It's so nice to read a good Mpreg story again.
Author's Response: Thanks for reading :P
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2012 01:32 AM · On: Chapter 25
I loved the dinner party and everyone's reaction.
Author's Response: :)
Reviewer: ksij (Anonymous) · Date: September 18, 2012 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 26
Yay an update :) love it love it love it, hope you have another up soon
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2012 05:51 PM · On: Chapter 26
I get scared when things are going well for Brian and Justin as I fear angst is just around the corner. However, I like this chapter a lot; thank you.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
On the subject of angst, well, I don't want to give anything way ;D
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2012 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 26
well done! I can't wait to see their baby!!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2012 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 25
Ugh, i never liked David, get rid of him... soon!
A baby girl!! Aw, so cute!
Author's Response: Don't worry. He'll be gone soon - I'm planning to bring Ben in earlier than in the series :P
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 25
Thank you for the update. I like it when Brian is there for Justin when he needs him.
Cheers
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you enjoyed this!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2012 01:57 PM · On: Chapter 25
glad to see u back hope life is good love the story update soon kim
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 09:57 AM · On: Chapter 25
Yay, a girl! Auntie Em needs a playmate. I hope Mel and lindsey can get there heads out of the asses and find a solution that works for all of them, after all how do step parents get to have decision making rights? I love the David hate and as usual cant wait for lindsey to put here foot in her mouth.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :D
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 25
Glad to see an update.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2012 02:26 AM · On: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: rylarave (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2012 12:58 PM · On: Prologue
I wasn't really sure about reading an MPREG, but your scenes on how Brian and Justin deal with the pregnancy, esp the mirror scene, are just so wonderful. Your writing has also improved a lot over the chapters.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2012 04:44 PM · On: Chapter 24
I think they should have a boy. I feel like they would be out of their element with a girl. Oh! And stick with the Irish names for the first and middle names, me thinks.
Please tell me Brian won't give away his parental rights to Gus and that Justin confronts them in front of everybody? I hope so. Mel needs to be pegged down.
And don't let them forget Gus. There are so many fics where Justin and Brian have kids after Gus, yet we rarely read about him.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading ^^
I'm not planning for Brian to give away his parental rights - I already have an idea set aside for that, but it won't be used until after the baby is born.
And I'm definitely not going to forget Gus. He's just not mentioned much right now because of the tension between Lindsey and Mel, and Brian, but he will be in the next chapter and he'll be around a lot when his new sibling has arrived X)
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Prologue
you start school nowa311; you are still a studenta311; hehea292;I am crazy in work recentlya292;but I will get off work this weekz90;Finally I have a vacation to go back hometown. Hope you enjoy your colleage time.
Hug!
Ivy
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :)
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2012 01:54 PM · On: Chapter 24
Loved the chapter!!! I want to know the gender of the baby!! You're mean!! T0T Can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Mwhahahaha! XD
You'll find out in the next chapter, I promise XD
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24
This will be interesting when they tell the gang lol. BTW I am following you on Twitter using my name Chris Groom
Author's Response: Yes, lots of fun XP
Yay, twitter follower! Welcome~! :3
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2012 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 24
Lovely chapter, but you're a tease !! Aggrrr is the baby a boy or girl ?
* hugs *
Author's Response: You'll find out next chapter, promise X)
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 24
I am so glad you have updated,but but but a little short.when will you update it again?hehehe~~~~~~I am waiting !
Author's Response: I know, I wanted to write more but I just couldn't get it perfect :/ I hope it was still good though!
I'm going to try and update around next weekend at the lastest - I'm going back to college this week so I don't know how much free time I will have!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2012 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 24
So we can't even get to know the sex of the baby...how will we know what color of gift to buy? Great chapter, no matter how long we had to wait.
Lori
Author's Response: Lol ^^ there's still time to get the gifts XD I just wanted to string it out for a bit longer. You'll definitely find out in the next chapter, scout's honour!
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2012 02:24 PM · On: Chapter 23
LOVE the chapter!! I hate Chris Hobbs and I'm glad Alec was there to defend Justin... Didn't expect him to be gay, though I should've.... Haha! Can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: ivylovebj (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2012 08:23 PM · On: Prologue
I just find this story now i read all the chapter all the day.I known it is a happy story when i have seen the title:the beautyful mistake.yes,it is beautiful Brian and Justin had first meet.when Brian take care of Justin,when Brian confirmed his feeling with Justin.When Justin love and concern Brian by his heart. When he smile.those all are beautiful things.
i hope they will have a happiness family forever.The story seems as not ended yet. hope it is going well. thank you so much to updat this story!i like happy story !
Author's Response: Thank you :) I'm glad you're enjoying this fic.
No, it's not over yet. I have a few more chapters planned and then I'm going to start the second part :P
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 23
OMG! Alec, i knew you were gay! Brian's gone soft! lol :) Update soon
Author's Response: Lol, I just had to! It was nagging at me!
Thank you for reading :P
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 23
Great chapter, I was happy to see an update!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2012 03:31 AM · On: Chapter 23
I love this story! I love this chapter! I love B/J together! I love Daphney for supporting J! And I love that Hobbs Get hit!:) thank you for updating!:)
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: May 15, 2012 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 23
It so good to read another great chapter. And I so agree with Daphne at the end :) Hope for another chapter soon.
Author's Response: I always agree with Daphne at the end XD
Thank you for reading!
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2012 01:50 AM · On: Chapter 23
How nice to see Hobbs get put in his place. Will Justin and Brian tell the world about their new relationship or will it remain just between them?
Lori
Author's Response: Yes, it's always fun to put Hobbs in his place XD
I don't think they'd broadcast it, but they wouldn't keep it a secret either. Also, within the next few chapters, everybody finds out about Justin's 'condition' :P
Reviewer: vlsope2@yahoo.com (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 23
I love your story and was thrilled Chris Hobbs got a little of his own medicine this story has been great since chapter one. I know your busy with school and life in general, but every chapter has been worth the wait.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
I'm glad it was worth the wait!
Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2012 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 23
love it
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2012 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 22
"The answer to your question, Mr. Taylor, is yes, I would...definitely want a relationship with you, if you're still willing to take me."
That's more like it! I thought ther diner scene was perfect. Brian needed to see that Justin could be taken by someone else as well as the lack of respect that Justin was receiving because of their non-relationship.
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Yes, Brian and Justin are finally together. It took him long enough. That was one of my favourite lines as well XD
Reviewer: pen-f (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 8
I like how you try and keep as close to canon as you can. :) Keep up the awesome writing!
PF
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2012 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 22
Lovely chapter and wonderful moment at the end.
Looking forward to your next update.
All the best,
Laura
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this story! I'll hopefully be updating soon!
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 22
Aww! finally they're together! Dont fuck it up Brian! lol
Author's Response: Haha, yeah, that should be one of Brian's top protries :p
Thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2012 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 22
I love it, love it, love it!!!:D
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2012 12:57 PM · On: Chapter 22
i love it great chapter kim
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2012 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 22
Love the story so far!!! Can't wait to read more!!! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 05:12 AM · On: Chapter 22
ahhhh, finally Brian!
Author's Response: XD
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 22
aahhhhh * making a happydance with a very big sunshine smile * so sweet.
* hugs *
Author's Response: :D Thank you!!
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2012 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 22
such a good chapter. the bomb.:)
Author's Response: Haha, thank you :D
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 22
awwww how romantic, Brian Kinney romantic perfection, yum.
This was wonderful in every way, you have such a great writing style too. The first time I read it I was thrilled with the point you ended on. I gave a huge sign and felt complete. But after reading it again of course I'm dying to find out what happens next, I always want more but this was a drop of perfection.
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
I'm so glad you're enjoying this story! I'm on easter holidays next week so hopefully I'll be able to update a few of my stories, more frequently :p
Reviewer: pen-f (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2012 05:29 AM · On: Chapter 1
When I started reading fanfics I loathed the idea of male pregnancies, thinking they were weird and just...no. But after reading some I quickly fell in love with the concept, and your story is no exception.
Love, love, love!
-PF
Author's Response: :D Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying this story!
Reviewer: Cat (Anonymous) · Date: March 22, 2012 05:06 PM · On: Chapter 21
Oh Emmett, you have no idea! Lol! I love this chapter! Please upload more soon :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this story!
Reviewer: Missn31 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 03:39 AM · On: Prologue
Sooo pleased to see this new chapter. It was certainly worth waiting for. Thank you, looking forward to reading more xxxxx
Author's Response: Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying this story :D
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 01:38 AM · On: Chapter 21
lovely chapter, thanks.
* hugs *
Author's Response: Thank you :)
*hugs*
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2012 12:27 AM · On: Chapter 21
Great Chapter. The way Brian is so slowly coming to realize the feelings for Justin is written so wonderful. You know how to squeeze every drop of emotion out of it. It's driving me nuts but I know it's whats makes the story good.
Lori
Author's Response: You know how to squeeze every drop of emotion out of it.
I hope that's a good thing lol ^^
I'm so glad you're enjoying this story so much :D
Thank you for reviewing :)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2012 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 21
hey great chapter it was amusing to kim
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: vlsope2 (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2012 04:43 AM · On: Chapter 20
I really love your story and await further chapters and the banner is beautiful.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: March 13, 2012 01:33 AM · On: Chapter 20
When will this story next be uploaded? It's really great, and i cant wait for more :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)
I'm going to try and write the next chapter this weekend. I've been meaning to get around to writing it for a few weeks now.
Reviewer: Monique Renee (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2012 11:54 PM · On: Chapter 20
Amazing!!! I hope you're still updating this story.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Yes, I am definitely continuing this story!
Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 03:13 AM · On: Chapter 20
I love this story! Can't wait to read more and hear Brians reaction to being robed! And Brian and Justins relationship (yes, I see it as a relationship;)) is adoreble and I really hope Justin doesn't leave Brian!! Thank you for a good story and keep up the good work:)
Author's Response: Thank you! :D
I'm so glad you're enjoying this story. Hopefully, I'll be updating soon so keep reading!
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: February 29, 2012 12:10 AM · On: Chapter 20
I remember this episode. If he kicks him out in this story too i'll cry :)
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
I hope you keep reading xD
Reviewer: Cat (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 11:45 PM · On: Prologue
This is really great!
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 20
love it keep up the good work kim
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2012 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 20
I like this Brian so much. Please don't make him blame the burglary on Justin like in the series, pretty please!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :D
I won't give anything away, you're going to have to keep reading! :)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2012 05:28 AM · On: Chapter 20
Look forward to Brian's reaction.
Author's Response: Thank you for reading :D
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2012 08:01 PM · On: Chapter 19
silly Justin~~~ Brian loves you!! You can't leave him like this, at least not when you are carrying a child!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing :)
Don't worry, I only do happy ending!
Reviewer: josie (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2012 12:31 PM · On: Chapter 19
another of your fic that im obsessed with! please update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you enjoy my writing!
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2012 07:54 AM · On: Chapter 19
Oh oh Here comes trouble, but then again what else is new with the boys?
What the hell, for the sake of your story, I am gonna go with the "nothing worth having comes easy" though I am not a fan of this particular idea [I mean why the fuck should we always struggle and suffer for the things we want the most in this lifetime, shouldnt some things just come easy?]
Excellent update sweetie, and I will be waiting for the new update so we can see where your muse is taking you. Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
As upsetting as it is, there needs to be some kind of conflict for our boys or it wouldn't be them. But I promise you, everything will get sorted out over the next couple of chapters xD
I'm glad you're enjoying this story and I'll try and update over the weekend :)
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2012 06:31 AM · On: Chapter 19
Enjoyed it.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 19
i'ts a shame justin is thinking that why kim
Author's Response: Thank you :)
All will be revealed soon xD
Reviewer: Missn31 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:09 PM · On: Chapter 19
Love this chapter but not the ending!! I just want Brian to tell Justin he loves him and wants a beautiful future but then I guess that might not be such an exciting story. Great writing as ever - think this might be one of my most favourite fan fiction stories xxxx
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying this so much. I'm hoping to update again before next monday, but I have to see how my revision goes this week xD
It's great to read that someone loves my work so much :3
Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: February 13, 2012 10:07 PM · On: Chapter 19
Brian seems content with the way thing are. I don't see Brian wanting Justin to leave or not wanting more the relationship. Justin should just make his feelings known although it didn't help in cannon.
Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you :D
Both Justin and Brian will get there say at some point soon, I promise :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:38 PM · On: Chapter 19
I just knew this chapter was too good to be true, now Justin is going to do something crazy! Must be the hormones talking. Why can't he just open his eye/heart and realize how Brian feels...well of course we need a story filled with drama.
Great story.
Lori
Author's Response: XD Thank you for reviewing!
I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yes, there must always be drama between Brian and Justin or we all wouldn't be so interested. I will say that the next few chapters will be focusing on B/J relationship xD
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: February 10, 2012 08:18 AM · On: Chapter 18
For a man that makes his living by manipulating words, he sure has a problem to use them when it is imperative in his own personal life...Geeesh this always gets to me, maybe because I can so relate....
I liked the swift reaction from Justin dealing with Gus' fever and Brian rushing to the rescue.
As for the dykes, I did not like it in the canon, and I still don't like it in any AU I read.
Ohhhh and I liked the fact that Brian actually heard himself repeating that he would not move on from Justin...yeah our boy is trully fucked!!!! LOL
Great update sweetie, until the next time then...Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it.
I didn't like that moment either, but I felt it should be added in. It's a turn in Brian and Justin's relationship and it's something that's important with another baby on the way, but don't worry. There will be some tense relationships for a while but everything will work itself out :D
Brian was always fucked when it came to Justin, just took him five seasons to realise XD
Reviewer: Anno53 (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 18
I like the way this story managed to enter bits of canon with it. Very clever!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you enjoyed it!
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2012 10:20 PM · On: Chapter 18
" I want what’s best for Gus, I do, but I don’t want him to grow up and think that I didn’t want him."
That is such a valid point. I can't believe Lindsay didn't think of that.
Author's Response: Thank you, that's all the thought when I watched the show. Children think in strange ways and sadly, if they push Brian away like the tv series, that was bound to happen.
Thank you for reviewing! :D
Reviewer: Sisa (Anonymous) · Date: February 01, 2012 02:43 AM · On: Chapter 18
Nice chapter. I like how you connect parts of your story with the serie. Please update soon.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm hoping to update by monday, but we'll have to see :D
Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2012 09:11 PM · On: Chapter 18
great update love it update soon kim
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 18
Great Chapter, I love how you can fill one chapter with so many plot twists and emotions. You cover a lot of things but don't make it feel rushed and glossed over. Great writing, good flow and I can't wait for more!
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying it, and I apreciate the writing praise lol :D
Reviewer: jacknalecsmom (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 06:26 PM · On: Chapter 18
I love this story, very sweet POV for Brian. When the Liberty Ave family start finding out, that should be entertaining. After all, how much longer can Justin hide his pregnancy?
Author's Response: Thank you, I thought it was cute too :3
I already have when the pregnancy will be revealed to every one planned out, but it will be a few more chapters - to make up for it, a lot happens in those chapters ;)
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2012 06:20 PM · On: Chapter 18
I think its time for Brian to see an attorney-other than Mel-about arranging for Mel to have guardianship of Gus without taking Brian's rights. After all step-parents get to be part of decision making. I always wonder why Brian trusted Mel with the whole parental rights thing instead of talking to his own attorney. Look forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: Hmm, maybe that will happen sometime in the future *wink, wink, nudge, nudge*
Thank you for reviewing :D
Reviewer: `qafqueenbee (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2012 11:52 PM · On: Chapter 7
Ii'm enjoying the story, I you plan to finish it.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm definitely plan on finish this story. I should hopefully be focusing on this story for a while now :D
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2012 10:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
Please Please Please continue this story
Author's Response: Don't worry, I will continue this story. I've just been busy with college work and reading :p
Hopefully, I'll finish the next chapter today, at the earliest :)
Thank you for reviewing!
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2012 08:52 AM · On: Chapter 16
What a prick of a principal, huh? Confidentiality his ass, he wouldnt know it if it came and bit him in the nose!
I liked it that Brian came to the meeting to defend Justin and their unborn child...
And what about that Alec character, I loved it! It was an unexpected, pleasant surprise!
Until next time sweetie *Hugs* Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Yeah, when teachers say 'confidentiality', it doesn't usually stay private for long.
I'm glad so many people like Alec XD
Hopefully I'll be posting again soon!
*hugs*
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 08:39 PM · On: Chapter 16
Lol I just love a protective Brian he knew that if he was there Justin's rights would be protected aw so sweet. Interesting turn of events with Alec I wonder what that is all about :)
Author's Response: Thank you :)
All shall be revealed....
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 12:06 PM · On: Chapter 16
Worth the wait!
Lori
Author's Response: Thank you! :)
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 16
Ohhh we like Alec, in a strange sorta way. Is he just a good guy, is he gay, did he have a baby, a thing for Justin????? So many questions! Brian is being great and I hope Justin doesn't trust Mikey to much (I know that was last chapter but I just re-read it ;}) Look forward to the next chapter and the re-appearance of Craig in all his stupid glory.
Author's Response: Hahaha, I'm glad you like Alec but I'm not going to give anything away. Do know he will turn up as a frequent character of the story at some point though :D
Thank you for reviewing - I'm glad your enjoying my work! :)
Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: January 04, 2012 03:55 AM · On: Chapter 16
YAY! I like that Brian showed up like that. The chapter was great as always! <3
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2011 08:10 AM · On: Chapter 15
I wonder at what lengths Jen is gonna take it to protect her son! I foresee turbulence in the future for the boys.
I hope Brian is gonna be the bigger man here and actually support Justin and his feelings towards him and their unborn child, when the shit hit the proverbial fan.
Until next time sweetie. Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I hope we're all going to be proud of our Brian XD
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2011 07:56 AM · On: Chapter 14
I did not expect Michael to be so grown up in this update *snikering* and actually insightful of Brian's condition...being in love with Justin... LOL ha fucking ha... I guess the joke's on him
I will keep going now. Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
I'm glad you're enjoying the story!
Reviewer: inabluefunk (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Chapter 13
I adore Vic! and I love Daphne! Their support is unwaivering towards the boys.
I guess I am gonna continue reading now. Marla
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 15
Ohhhh this was good. Can we believe Michael? Will he behave and treat Justin with kindness? How much longer till Brian comes to terms with his new reality, he's in LOVE! What a great story. I hope a brick house falls on Jennifer, she is a witch! hmm maybe I should have used a b instead of a w...
Lori
Author's Response: Hahaha, well, only time will tell ;p
Thank you :)
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 15
Thanks for the lovely update.
* hugs * and a happy holiday
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Happy Holidays to you too! *hugs*
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 04:56 AM · On: Chapter 15
not liking Jen right now, why do I think she has some stupid thing up her sleeve? Bad Jen! Hope Brian starts warming up to the idea that he is falling for Justin.
Author's Response: Thank you :)
Reviewer: NATHALIE RUDE (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 05:45 AM · On: Chapter 14
SUPER HISTOIRE. ATTEND LA SUITE
Author's Response: Thank you :)
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