Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 01:41 AM · On: Morning, Part 2
I loved your two chapters. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks!
:) :) :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:36 AM · On: Morning, Part 2
OMG.... you mean there really is a Joe??? How is Justin gonna get out of this.... just when things were going so well... I hope Brian doesn't try to set them up.... I can't wait to see how this turns out..... update soon..
Author's Response: There is now...
Brian's definitely going to encourage Justin to date Joe...there's no getting around that (unfortunately)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 12:20 AM · On: Morning, Part 1
Hurray... they are making progress!!!! Hopefully Justin won't give himself a migraine from thinking too much..... and Brian doesn't panic because he stayed to make coffee...instead of running screaming into the night..... You gotta love em... lol....
Author's Response: They are indeed :) :) :) (or were anyway)
"Brian doesn't panic because he stayed to make coffee...instead of running screaming into the night"
This made me laugh :D :D :D
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 11:59 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Wow .. finally they are getting somewhere ;) One step forward, two steps back? Joe, well I have to say he sounds perfect for Justin. Can't wait to see where you're going with this. I can see Justin liking Joe just fine and a jealous Brian lurking in the shadows. Well, Brian.. you kissed him. Can you take it further?
Please give us more of this story.
Author's Response: Yes, they were finally getting somewhere...Joe's unexpected appearance will definitely complicate things
I'll update soon :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:43 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
omg poor justin, poor brian. damn joe!
Author's Response: :( :( :(
Reviewer: Tiff (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 10:39 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Ok so I'm thinking Brian is going to go all tough and try and convince himself he doesnt care about this Joe guy and then push Justin as hard as he can into this Joe's arms??? Stubborn man but you gotta love him ... he's so darn sexy :)
Author's Response: Brian's definitely going to use the excuse that Joe is better for Justin than he is to push Justin away
Yes, Brian is (so darn sexy)
Reviewer: Druscilla (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:43 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Was very excited to see more chapters this morning. Very hot first make out session. Justin needs to fess up soon so Brian doesn't back off and put the walls back up, and so we can get to the really good stuff! Can't wait! I need more! Love this story!
Author's Response: I'm glad you were excited to see the two chapters :) :) :)
I'm happy you found their make out session hot :D
Brian's definitely going to put his walls back up (unfortunately)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:30 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Whew, this was hot, hot, hot, and Brian is no longer resisting Justin, at least for the moment. The Joe profile worries me, though.
Author's Response: (grinning)
I'm happy you enjoyed this part (well most of it)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:15 PM · On: Morning, Part 1
Brian can't resist him anymore, hmmmm? ;) Wow, he's got it bad. I loved their introspections.
Author's Response: Brian really can't :)
I'm so happy you liked their thoughts :) :) :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:10 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Um, I'd need functioning brain cells to comment on the first-middle part and mine seem to have spontaneously combusted for some reason...
Other than the fact that it was *incredibly* HOT, I love that Brian is not only realizing but acting on the fact that he wants Justin and that Justin, though terrified of loosing his connection with Brian, is not afraid to seize the moments when they present themselves.
A real, live "Joe" was certainly a surprise and I can't wait to see how Justin (and Brian!) handle this twist :D
Author's Response: (grinning)
Yeah...Brian and Justin definitely jumped a hurdle
I'm happy the twist was a surprise :) :) :)
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:52 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
The jerk off session was very hot, I think I need a shower. *ggg*
I like the idea of Justin dating Joe and Brian is hiding in the shadow keep a jealous watch over Justin.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed their jerk off session :) :) :)
Jealous!Brian is super fun
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 07:32 PM · On: Morning, Part 1
Oh poor little Brian is a bit confused because of his feelings for Justin. Sooner or later he have to face the truth
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is (confused)
:) :) :)
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:09 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
Poor Justin. No self-confidence and Brian catches him and teases him about it. As a friend would say - awkward turtle moment. Of course Brian made up for it with that kiss.
Mostly - just wanted to say how much I am enjoying this story & hope you keep on writing:)
Author's Response: Yeah that was a humilating moment for Justin...but I'm glad you liked the happy consequences :) :) :)
Awww...thanks! I'm so happy you've been enjoying this one :) :) :)
Reviewer: Debv3 (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 06:01 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
I like this chapter, I'd like to see how Justin figures out how to tell Brian who "Joe" really is, and then how Brian is going to introduce Justin to all of his "friends", Justin in this form doesn't totally resemble Brian's "type". Keep it up!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!
Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
This chapter was so hot. More. Fast.
Author's Response: I'm very happy you found it so :) :) :)
Reviewer: fizzles (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 02:40 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
you rocked this chapter! So hot, and so intriguing! you got me wondering a lot of things homie...keep up the good work and give yourself a pat on the back! :)
Author's Response: Awww...thanks!
"So hot, and so intriguing"
(grinning, grinning, and more grinning)
Just out of curiosity, what things?
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 01:27 PM · On: Morning, Part 2
oh god i totally love this fic! it's amazing and their jerking-off-session was great!!! Love how you write them =) keep up the great work!
Author's Response: I f-ing love hearing that!
:) :) :)
"Love how you write them =) keep up the great work!"
Awww...thanks!
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:36 AM · On: Morning, Part 1
more more more more.............................................
Author's Response: soon, I promise :)
Reviewer: fizzles (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:49 AM · On: Morning, Part 1
yeah woo!! good job! cant wait for more yo!!
Author's Response: Awww...thanks! I'm happy you're eager for more :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Morning, Part 1
oh what a tangled web they're in.
Author's Response: unfortunately, they'll remain in it for a while longer
Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: January 04, 2010 01:28 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Oh I totally love this story. I have just finished reading the 14 chapters and I hope that you will be able to update soon!
Author's Response: Oh wow, cool :) :) :)
I'll definitely update soon.
Reviewer: Sarah (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2010 08:11 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Wow I love this story I just started reading this today and already I want more. When are the boys going to finally tell eachother how they really feel. I really can't wait for the rest of the story. Please update soon!!!!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you've been enjoying this one :) :) :)
They're going to keep dancing around each other for a little while longer, I'm afraid
Reviewer: Henny71 (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:32 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Nice chapter. Update soon.
Author's Response: Thanks! I definitely will update soon. This is the one story that I can't help but update at least once a week, many times more often...
Reviewer: Moscow Lady (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Beautiful story and such a wonderful, touching chapter. You're a great writer, I love all your work. Thank you very much!
Author's Response: Awww...(actually triple awww...)
Thank you so much for the great compliment!
(grinning and blushing like a fool)
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:56 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Brian will be Brian and putting distance between him and his Sunshine is what he does best... can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Indeed...
I won't make you wait too long :)
Reviewer: Druscilla (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Ok, I need more! I have been checking all day long for additions to this story! I love it so far. More please!
Author's Response: Sorry to keep you waiting. I'll update soon. I promise :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:16 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Oh, Brian... don't be too hasty! You hurt Justin (too badly) and I'll be sure to find him a nice "Joe" to be with instead - don't think I won't! ;-P
Brian is so naughty... he delights in tormenting Justin, but then is astounded when Justin (even unknowingly) torments him right back! And as he's lying there thinking about distancing himself from Justin, he's holding him tighter- the twat! :D
Author's Response: Don't worry...you won't need to hook Justin up with anyone else :) :) :)
Yes, very naughty...Brian freaks out whenever Justin 'takes the initiative' (the almost kiss and the sleep kiss). He doesn't like feeling not in control.
Yeah...that is a bit ironic (Brian's talking about pushing Justin away while holding him tighter)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 08:08 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
OMG.... It was too late for Brian to drive home... so he had to sleep with Justin?? OK.... lol... I don't think Alaska is enough distance .. to keep them apart..... update soon...
Author's Response: Brian's excuses are pretty lame :) :) :)
"I don't think Alaska is enough distance .. to keep them apart"
You're right about that
Reviewer: fizzles (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 06:34 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
more more more i love this story!!!! good job :D
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this story!
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
fuck you're killing me! NOW Brian's going to keep his distance? aarrgghhh!!!
Author's Response: Sorry...
He's gonna try...try being the operative word :)
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 05:41 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Somehow I doubt Brian will be able to put distance between them. At least I hope he want :)
As always .. can't wait for another chapter.
Author's Response: He won't be able to :) :) :)
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 03:55 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Oh Brian!
Putting on shows then plotting out escape routes when things get too swell... what're we gonna do with this guy? Haha =] Hope he doesn't screw anything up too bad or bring some tears to Justin's world!
Great update, thanks! And I think you really hit the nail on the head with this chapter - I think this is exactly the point Brian would be trying to convince himself he's not becoming interested.
Author's Response: Brian freaks out whenever Justin 'takes the initiative' (the almost kiss and the sleep kiss). He doesn't like feeling not in control.
"you really hit the nail on the head with this chapter"
Awww...thanks!
Don't worry. Brian won't be able to stay away :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 03:43 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Oh, Brian is gonna do his scaredy-cat routine again, pushing Justin away, huh? *sigh* Oh Brian...
Author's Response: He's gonna try :) :) :)
Reviewer: feroza (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 03:08 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
Typical Brian! When emotions get the better of him he starts to retreat!
great fic...update soon!
feroza
Author's Response: That is his MO...
I'm so glad you're enjoying this one :) :) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 29, 2009 02:12 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
who's brian going to hurt more by putting distance between them? can he do it? we'll wait and see.
Author's Response: That is a very good question :)
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 29, 2009 01:13 AM · On: Safe Is A Relative Term
*sigh* hot and cute and I so love it! Now I need a cool shower.
And tomorrow Brian start the distance thing...*wink* Did I mention that Brian is so fucked. *ggg*
Author's Response: I'm very happy you found this part hot and cute (that's what I was going for)
Yes, yes he is. Whatever he says, he won't be able to stay away--
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 08:29 AM · On: Babylon, Part 2
Ahh... safe at home at last- the hectic holidays are OVER!
AND I have a nice, sweet fic to curl up with too :)
Thank you so much for taking my humorously intended suggestion and turning it into a fabulous series of wonderful Christmas gifts! It did truly save me this weekend when things were getting too tense with the family...
Oh boys... I really enjoy peeking inside the boys' heads and hearts on this one. I hope Mikey & the rest don't give Brian too hard of a time later :(
I love your stories because even though they are AU (to varying degrees) Brian and Justin are still very "visible" - I can clearly see strong elements QAF's Brian and Justin being displayed - the different scenarios simply showcase and emphasize different aspects of their "realtionship" dynamic. Simply Brilliant! :D
Author's Response: Awww...I'm glad you find this one sweet :) :) :)
You are very welcome. I'm just sorry I couldn't get them all done by Christmas (I was relieved actually...I needed something to keep my mind off the holidays...it's my first Christmas since my husband and I split up).
It is nice to have access to their thoughts :) :) :)
I'm glad that you think my Brians and Justins are Brian and Justin-like. I try to keep them as close to canon as I can (though sometimes they are circimstantially out of character)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:40 AM · On: Babylon, Part 2
Amazing.... not only did Brian run after Justin... but....in front of the "gang"... I love how this is going... now if only.. one of them would admit how they really feel.... about each other....
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are liking the way the story is progressing :) :) :)
It'll happen...not right away though
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Wow...... Brian turned down a trick so as not to upset Justin??? he has it bad... lol....
Author's Response: Yes, he does :) :) :)
Reviewer: Sling (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 02:09 AM · On: Babylon, Part 2
More please ;) This story is really great and I can't get enough of it
Hugs Tina
Author's Response: I f-ing love hearing that!
:D :D :D
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 28, 2009 01:37 AM · On: Babylon, Part 2
Whew, the dancing scene was hot, and I love that Brian chased after him. He's going to get shit from his friends, though... :0
Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the dancing scene hot!
Yes, lots of shit from his friends...
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Babylon, Part 2
Aww, that's adorable. Brian Kinney doesn't chase after anyone but yet he's willing to go for Justin. =]
Thanks for the update! Fabulous way to start off my day!
Author's Response: Yes...Justin is inspiring him to a great many things he never does :D
You are very welcome!
:) :) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:04 PM · On: Babylon, Part 2
oh boy i don't think f**ked is the word to describe how brian is. instead of taking him to eat, take him back to the loft.
Author's Response: Indeed not...tormented might be a better word :)
Reviewer: mazfitz (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:37 PM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 1: Enter Justin
hey i love this story so much every time i finish a chapter i just want to read more. I cant wait til you update Please update soon thanks again for a great story.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this one! You are very welcome :) :) :)
It won't be too long...I love writing this story
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:29 PM · On: Babylon, Part 2
Thank's for the wonderful update. I'm so fascinated because of the hot interaction between Brian and Justin. It's breathtaking.
Can't wait for more. *ggg*
Author's Response: You are very welcome :) :) :)
"I'm so fascinated because of the hot interaction between Brian and Justin. It's breathtaking."
(grinning like a fool) I love hearing that!
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Babylon, Part 1
I totally agree with you, Brian is sooo fucked! *ggg*
Author's Response: (grinning)
Yup
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:49 PM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
This story makes me happy too. You have so many stories going on, but this one is my favorite .. and Fawn Armani.
Author's Response: That's so great to hear! This is probably my favorite (to write), too :)
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:11 PM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
I can't wait for them to get together for real. Can it be anything else than spectacular :)
Author's Response: I think it most definitely will be spectacular :) :) :) When the time comes, I hope you agree...
Reviewer: shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Babylon, Part 1
"Toppiest of tops" nice! =]
I'm so happy nothing went to shit and so far the evening is going well for the both of them! I just hope Brian doesn't break any hearts since he seems to truly care for Justin.
As always, great update!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked that phrasing :) :) :)
Justin's heart is safe (tonight anyway). I promise :)
Awww...thanks!
Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Hi,
I wanted to say that I've started reading this story and I really like it. The premise is interesting, it provides for lots of character growth, and it's very engagingly written. I'm looking forward to the rest! :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking the story (and the premise)! There is most definitely great potential for character growth in this one :) :) :)
"it's very engagingly written"
That's so great to hear!
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
This is the brain I like and can respect, he’s looking at the inside more than the outside of the person. This is very very good
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking this version of Brian!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Brian is truly fcuked now! LOL Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is!
:D :D :D
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:09 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
Good save! :D And Brian is getting in deeper...
Author's Response: I'm glad you think so (that it was a good save)
:) :) :)
Yes, yes he is :D
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
klsjdkj kj kjlkfsjdlkf lkdlfksd !! OMG... Whew! Hot chapter, and both of them called each other's name. ;) This should be fun to see what happens next!
Author's Response: I'm very happy that you found this part hot!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:53 AM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 1)
Whew... oh my... *rushes off to next chapter*
Author's Response: I take it that that means you enjoyed this part :) :) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
although brian is taking justin as he is, i think it's time for justin to hit the gym. not for brian but for his own well being. his own piece of mind. he ate because he was lonely i guess but he isn't any longer.
Author's Response: A lot of people have been saying Justin should hit the gym, but I'd rather have Justin start loving himself for who he is, not who he could be. Justin doesn't see himself as he is. He's 20-30 pounds overweight, but as far as he's concerned, he's obese. And that's simply not true. So he's pudgy; that doesn't make him unlovable or undesirable.
Okay...I'll get off the soapbox now :)
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:09 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
I adore Justin - "it's kind of rude to call out someone's name when you're having phone sex with a person" LOL. Our very own Miss Manners
Oh nooo, Babylon? I'm worried. That other encounter Justin had made me sick... I could be considered a fatty, and know how people are - that guys reaction was pretty on the ball. A lot of douche bags out there!
Another amazing chapter, can't wait for another!
And I hope you're feeling better =]
Author's Response: I'm happy Justin's 'explanation' made you laugh :) :) :)
Don't worry too much...Babylon is definitely a place Justin could get hurt, and badly, but he's with Brian, who is protective of him, and Brian isn't just out to have a good time. He's taking Justin there for a reason...and it isn't to f--- other guys :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 06:18 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
brian is so hooked that going to babylon with a "fatty" isn't going to bother him. that green eyed monster got him good.
go dance the night away, who knows what's going to happen.
Author's Response: Indeed Brian is hooked...his jealousy most definitely got him good :) :) :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 04:53 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
Please do write more! My sister's in-law's have just invaded an I think I am going to either kill them or myself before the night is over- Dad-in-law is the type of person is right, regardless of whether he knows what he's talking about or not. And everything has to be done a particular way - HIS. I will miss my sister desperately, but I can't WAIT to leave.
I'm sorry you're depressed though. That feeling sucks. :(
Having a nice new chapter to come home to would be lovely - and if it makes you happy too then that's even better! ;-)
Author's Response: Family can be a pain...
It's just the holiday blues...it'll pass :)
well..I just posted a new chapter. I'll probably write one more (to finish the Babylon part)
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:09 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
Yeah...Justin did a good job in making Brian jealous.
Now let the boys go dancing.
Can't wait for more. *ggg*
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more (that Justin's doing well) :) :) :)
I'm so happy you are excited about the next part! (I am, too)
:) :) :)
Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:01 AM · On: The Aftermath, Take Two
This chapter was amazing... I am sad to here that you are a little depressed. I hope your day/week improves-- just to let you know, you writing this story makes me sooo happy too. Looking forward to your B/J relationship as it develops :o)
Author's Response: Awww...I'm very happy you think so!
Thanks for wishing me well. It's just the holiday blues. I'm sure it won't last.
"you writing this story makes me sooo happy too"
I f-ing love hearing that!
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 03:00 AM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
OMFG! That was soooooooo hot! I need a shower to cool down!
Thank's for making my day!
Author's Response: I'm very happy you found it so!
Awww...I made your day? :D :D :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:53 AM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
i hope when they get together it's going to be just as hot if not hotter. whew!
Author's Response: Rest assured, it will be :D :D :D
(I'm probably setting the bar too high for myself with all this pre-action action, but...I feel up to the challenge)
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:33 PM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
Been waiting for this cause I don't do waiting .....both calling out each other's name how hot and sexy is that.
Author's Response: I'm very happy you found this part hot :) :) :)
Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2009 11:11 PM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
Oh. My. God! (fans self)
I am *SO* glad I decided not to brave the mall with the rest of my family this morning! :D
You are truly fantastic!
I LOVE that Brian is jealous of Joe and that Justin's caught on to the fact that Brian loves his lips & eyes ;-) These boys are so cute!
Author's Response: I know this wasn't on your Xmas list, but I had an unconquerable urge to update this one...but I'll definitely post another update for Just Another of Our Beginnings, as well as updates for the Forbidden and KOLA, in the next few days.
Awww...I'm so glad you enjoyed this part!
I couldn't agree more (they are f-ing adorable)
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2009 10:21 PM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 2)
Oh maaaan, another great chapter. This story is so hot, yet adorable and completely enthralling. Can't wait for an update! And hmm, I wonder if Brian will catch that a) Justin said his name (again) and b) he was even saying Justin's name!
Love it!
Author's Response: "This story is so hot, yet adorable and completely enthralling."
I f-ing love hearing that!
Your first question is answered in the next part, which I just posted :)
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 26, 2009 12:08 PM · On: Phone Sex, Take Two (Part 1)
You are writing one hell of a long foreplay :) Thanks for the update, you just made my morning.
Author's Response: Yeah, I know...I don't know why...it just came out this way. I'm very happy you are liking it so far :) :) :)
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2009 02:56 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
hilarious. love it.
Author's Response: That's so great to hear!
:D :D :D
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2009 07:08 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
So sweet. :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you think so :) :) :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
OMG... Brian is in soooo much trouble... not only with his feelings for Justin...but.. Gus like to wear women's shoes and a tiara!!!! LOL .... I can't wait to see what happens next....
Author's Response: Yes, he is :) :) :)
I'm so glad you enjoyed this part and are eager for more!
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 01:24 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
Gus is absolutely precious in this fic... love it :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so!
:) :) :)
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 09:37 AM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
I really love Brain and Gus and Justin and Molly they are so cute.
Brian and Justin so want each other...This is a very nice story ... want more.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you liked their bit of 'family time' :D :D :D
Yes, yes, they do!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 05:42 AM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
Too, too funny!!! Poor Brian, not sure what to do with Gus!! And Brian is so attracted to Justin, hopefully he'll get over his shallowness and see that Justin is good for him.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you got a kick out of this chapter :) :) :)
Yeah, both Gus's behavior and Brian's increasing attraction to Justin definitely threw Brian :D :D :D
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
This chapter was much fun, especially Gus in high heels *gg*
Brian want Justin and I so hope, he want him also with his overweight.
Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!
Brian most definitely wants Justin :) :) :)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2009 01:09 AM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
Ohhh come on you have to update more than one chapter this is such a good story
Author's Response: I might update this one again tonight or tomorrow :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2009 12:42 AM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
LOL! This chapter was very funny, with Gus twirling around in the heels and Brian resigned to it. :) Brian is starting to find Justin harder to resist. Can hardly wait till find out what happens next! :D
Author's Response: I'm happy you found this one humorous :) :) :)
Yes, the Taylor glamour is strong :D :D :D
Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:50 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
i'm always happy to see that there is a new chapter online! i like the growing friendship between b and j. although i can't imagine brian dating a gay who's not a perfect body. i don't know why, but well, just isn't fitting in my mind. maybe justin is going to loose some weight and is going to get more confidence... love to read more soon!
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking the way B/J's relationship is developing.
Unfortunately/fortunately, depending on how you look at it, Justin isn't going to lose weight. Brian will need to get over his shallowness (if he wants Justin, and he does).
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Am I Pretty, Daddy?
that was precious.
karate and home schooling. if gus is going to flame brightly i don't think that would help.
Author's Response: I'm happy you think so :) :) :)
Brian just wants to protect Gus (though that's probably impossible).
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2009 01:24 AM · On: Almost, Almost Everything
There is some kind of magic between Brian and Justin and like it very much.
Great update, please more *ggg*
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so! I might update this one again tonight.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2009 06:07 AM · On: Almost, Almost Everything
This is getting better and better...... with Brian helping Justin get "Joe".... both of them are starting to get comfortable with each other ... and with Molly and Gus getting together....who knows what will happen...... update soon...
Author's Response: That's so wonderful to hear!
Yes, they are definitely growing closer :) :) :)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Almost, Almost Everything
Justin is wearing him down :) So close, just so close and then Brian freaks out! UGH! But he's willing to have another try with the phone sex. Brian, Brian, Brian!
Author's Response: He most definitely is wearing Brian down :)
Unfortunately, Brian's gonna continue to freak out (for a while anyway). He's uncomfortable with the fact that he likes Justin as a friend, yet also wants to fuck him (especially since Justin's chubby, and Brian's too focused on looks)
Brian realizes that a second round of phone sex is dangerous, but he did promise to help Justin...
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:31 AM · On: Almost, Almost Everything
I love reading about how Justin is unwittingly enticing Brian. Oooh, he's got it bad. ;)
Author's Response: And I love writing it :D :D :D
They both do :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:17 AM · On: Then Came the Waiting
Oooh, Brian is falling for him, even though he is fighting it off. It was satisfying that he punched out the jerk who humiliated Justin; he's his secret avenger!
Author's Response: Yes he is (falling for Justin and Justin's secret avenger)
:D :D :D
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 02:08 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
OMG, that was one of the hottest phone sex conversations I've read... Whoops, wonder if Brian caught Justin calling his name! "How was I" indeed, lol. Fabulous.
Author's Response: WOW! Thanks! I think he was too distracted by the phenomenal orgasm :) :) :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:58 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
I laughed out loud at the difference between Brian's and Justin's hookup/dating techniques; Brian really is incorrigible, and when he mentioned that Justin is a "fatty", OMG! This should be fun to see Brian making him over into his idea of the perfect man.
Author's Response: I'm so glad this chapter gave you a chuckle :) :) :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:49 AM · On: Longing
Oooh, Justin has intrigued Brian with the thought of phenomenal sex; he's good!! Can't wait to find out what happens next!
Author's Response: Indeed he does :) :) :)
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2009 01:39 AM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
I love this so far. They are connecting intellectually. I'm wondering what Brian will do when Justin removes his coat, though. Good story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you are liking their progress so far (I hope you continue to like it)
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2009 01:43 PM · On: Then Came the Waiting
These two are too funny!! Brian likes Justin as much as Justin likes Brian. And Mr. Kinney is already in protective mode!! Love it!! Wonder what this phone call is going to be about.
Author's Response: Yes...they are most definitely sitting in a tree :) If they can just get to the kissing part...
Part of it was that Brian was being protective; part of it was his feeling a little bad for saying what he said to Justin (calling him a fatty)
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2009 03:51 AM · On: Then Came the Waiting
How sweet your story is. I love it so far. Especially the punching part. *gg*
Can't wait for more. Please update soon!
Author's Response: Awww...thanks! The punching part was fun to write. That guy would have been damn lucky to have a little Sunshine, even if he's a little chubby.
I hope to post the next part in a few hours.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2009 11:30 PM · On: Then Came the Waiting
brian callled, justin is trying to count calories, sound like some long walk could be in order.... LOL
Author's Response: You mean for Justin to walk to Brian's?
That would definitely be helpful for burning calories (and not just during the walking part)
:) :) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:54 PM · On: Then Came the Waiting
violett, this is one fun read. love it.
"Justin actually made a cake, German Chocolate, ate half of it." omg a riot.
Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are finding this one fun!
:) :) :)
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2009 10:49 PM · On: Then Came the Waiting
Cant wait for next chapter... I think they've already fallen for eacthother I just cant wait for them to fall in love :)
Author's Response: Yes, they are deep into lust and like (though Brian would try to deny the lust part). Love is just around the corner :)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2009 06:15 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
WOW..... How was I ??? Not Bad..... OMG... Brian really knows how to understate his feelings.... lol.... update soon...
Author's Response: He is most definitely the king of understatement :D
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2009 06:30 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
Not bad at all. Justin sure knows his stuff :)
Author's Response: I'm so glad you think so!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2009 01:11 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
WOW! Justin's good, knew he would have Brian going!! Brian's reaction is too funny..."not bad" Of course Brian didn't catch on that Justin yelled out his name!
Author's Response: Yeah, Justin has some skills :) :) :)
Brian is the king of understatement :D (and a little obtuse sometimes)
Reviewer: Shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:11 PM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
That was hot!
And I really like this story because it's very different from others. Great job! Can't wait for another update =]
Author's Response: I'm so happy you think this part was hot, and the story, different :) :) :)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:43 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
that was one of the best nonsex sex scenes i've ever read.
Author's Response: thanks so much for the great compliment :) :) :)
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 11:30 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 2
*whew* Now I need a shower! more please lol
Author's Response: :D :D :D
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2009 05:19 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
OMG... this is too funny.... Justin is right Brian is not very perceptive... he described Brian's looks and personality perfectly.... and he still has no clue that Justin is talking about him!!! lol.... I can't wait to see what happens next...
Author's Response: Brian is definitely blind in this situation :) :) :)
I'm glad you are excited about what's next. I should post the next part soon, in a couple/few hours...
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2009 12:07 AM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
Love this story. Love the banter between B/J. I was a little put off by Brian thinking he wouldn't take Justin to his gym. That was a little to insecure and vain and on Brian's part, imo. BK in my view would take Justin to his gym and tell everyone else to fuck off. I really never thought he gave a damn about what others think.
But I love how he's direct with Justin about his weight. Truth is, it is an obsticle. Especially for gay men who for the most part are obessed with their physical appearance.
Can't wait to read the phone sex. this is getting hot!
Author's Response: Brian always says he doesn't care what people think, but that isn't always true. He continues tricking despite the fact that it brings him little pleasure (after a while) because people expect him to. If he really never cared what people thought (on the show), he would not have responded with bad behavior every time someone teased him about caring for Justin.
I'm happy you like his directness. Unfirtunately, you are right. Weight is a big deal for gay men.
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:56 PM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
You write an excellent Brian, he is blunt but that is what we like about him, right? Justin should take Brian up on his offer to go to the gym. More time with Brian, why say no to that? :)
So looking forward to The Phone Call, Part 2 ;)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for saying so! Yes, Brian's bluntness is (oddly enough) one of his best qualities :) :) :)
Justin is going to keep trying to lose weight, but he's going to remain chubby (I want Brian to overcome his shallowness and choose Justin despite his imperfection). But don't worry, they'll still spend a lot of time together, and at some point, Justin will catch a glimpse of Brian working out (can't wait to write his thoughts about that!)
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 09:44 PM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
Leave it to Brian to be so blind about his and Justin's feelings....
Author's Response: Yup :) :) :)
Reviewer: eroza (Anonymous) · Date: December 08, 2009 05:22 PM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
This is quite funny, I'm really enjoying this
feroza
Author's Response: That's great to hear!
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2009 02:43 PM · On: The Phone Call, Part 1
Very sweet of Brian to want to help Justin, albeit with the dig about his midsection. Can't wait for Justin to do the phone sex, Brian doesn't know what's going to hit him!
Author's Response: Brian is practicing tough like :) :) :)
That is so true (about Brian's not knowing what's going to hit him)!
:D :D :D
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 06, 2009 04:01 AM · On: Longing
Wow... poor Justin... being so insecure Brian would see his "pot belly" that he was afraid to take off his coat... It should be fun trying to see Brian help Justin... to get his "Man"... lol.... update soon...
Author's Response: Yeah Justin definitely has a complex :(
But he'll work through that.
I agree, Brian's helping Justin get his crush ("Joe") will be tons of fun :)
Reviewer: TakeMeToHeaven (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2009 09:56 PM · On: Longing
well, that was cute! couldn't wait for the 3rd chapter and Brian's reaction to Justin's flab, haha.
hope you keep posting :)
Author's Response: I'm happy you are enjoying this one. It's definitely been fun to write so far :) I might post another update tonight.
Yeah, at this point, Brian's about as deep as a puddle of water when it comes to looks...but that'll change...
Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: December 05, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Longing
This is such a sweet story. Good work.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm so glad you are enjoying this one :) :) :)
Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: November 29, 2009 01:42 AM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
So far so good :)
Can't wait to see what transpires while at the African fusion resto, or afterwardds...
Author's Response: Thanks!
I'm happy you are excited about what's to come!
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 10:28 PM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
excellant, love the meeting. now will brian confess his juice diet? LOL can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm happy you are liking the story so far and that you are excited about what's to come :) :) :)
Reviewer: samcdee (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2009 09:46 PM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
You've got me hooked. LOL Looking forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: I love hearing that :) :) :)
Reviewer: kleene*87 (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 07:01 PM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
great start. I've never read something like that and I love the way they're becoming friends first. I hope you'll update soon, because you have me seriously hoked
Author's Response: Thanks! That's wonderful to hear :) :) :)
Reviewer: joe (Anonymous) · Date: November 28, 2009 04:07 PM · On: Roy's Restaurant, Part 2: Enter Brian
wow, you have me here! can't wait to read more, so please update soon! i like that justin isn't the perfect twink, and that they become friends first.
Author's Response: I'm glad you are liking the story so far! I'm excited about this new (to me, at least) dynamic, too :)
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