Reviewer: nicole (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 11:51 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Fate Steps In
YES.... good for daddy dearst... serves him right... i wonder if it has to be family only to be tested..hmmm
" Mr, Kinney you are a match.."
Author's Response: That's a frightening thought. There's a big donor bank out there. Maybe they'll find a match that way. I'm not sure i can handle the level of angst you'd get if Brian was a match. Somehow I think Justin would have to do a lot of persuading.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:52 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Fate Steps In
Wow. Didn't see that coming. Well, he tried. He can't blame himself. I just hope Craig does find a donor, just so Justin doesn't feel the guilt if he should pass away. Great sex scene btw, very hot. Great update.
Author's Response: Glad you liked the sex scene. I'm just getting used to writing them. I'm not too worried about Craig, to be honest with you. Thanks for letting me know you liked the update.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:14 PM · On: Chapter 11 - Fate Steps In
brian knows justin and just what to do to end his turmoil.
what a difficult thing to face. now who will help craig?
Author's Response: I agree. Brian's and Justin's method of communication/pain relief works wel for them. I'm not sure about the last question- definitely not Justin, though. I'm thinking Justin will probably have a little talk with Daddy soon. Should be interesting.
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:24 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Surprise
OMG. This cannot be good!
Author's Response: I don't know. I'm thinking Brian likes having Gus around. The only question is can Lindsay control her interfering inclinations (LOL)
Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:44 AM · On: Chapter 10 - Surprise
lins as a neighbor, could be interesting....
Author's Response: The possibilities are somewhat endless, aren't they. Thanks for the comment.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Surprise
oh no, oh no, oh no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! everything was going so smoothly. knew there had to be a b... em, clitch in the plans somewhere.
here justin and brian thought they would finally get to live a life together, now this. can't they ever get a break?
Author's Response: Not if I want to keep the story moving (LOL)
Thanks for taking the time to comment.
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 11:49 PM · On: Chapter 10 - Surprise
Loving this story!! I'm happy that Brian decided to head to NY to be with Justin and that he finally admitted to himself how much he needs and loves him.
Poor Justin, the this with Craig is just intense. I knew Just would do what he thought was best. Its too bad his father is still an asshole, even as he faces death.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're liking the tale. I agree - Craig is still an asshole.
Hope you keep on reading and reviewing:-)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:01 AM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole
Oh, I think the ILY probably meant a hell of a lot to Justin. Wonderful update, my dear.
Author's Response: I suspect it does when it isn't said too often. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:39 PM · On: Chapter 9 - Tuna Macaroni Casserole
omg i love brian. his relationship with others is amazing. daphne, debbie. all wonderful.
if justin was tired when he came home i think hearing those three little words just woke him up a bit.
nice chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks. I find trying to keep Brian in love & still himself with people the hardest thing. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 11:23 PM · On: Chapter 8 - Liberty Diner
debbie, the words of wisdom.
ems leaving the pitts? i think that's great.
Author's Response: Picturing Emmett in New York is fun, isn't it? Thanks for the reviews. I really appreciate them a lot.
Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 8 - Liberty Diner
yur story is wonderful. more please.
Author's Response: Thanks. I'll try to oblige :-)
Reviewer: Wildsweet_angel (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 04:58 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Craig's Call
I'm really enjoying this story. Justin has a dilemma on his hands. He's not like Brian. I don't think he'll just walk away from his father. Looking forward to reading more.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story. That's the big question at the moment, will Justin help? I'm always curious about other people's read on the characters so thanks for sharing it.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 7 - Craig's Call
caught between a rock and a hard place is justin. he hates him for the things he did yet still wants his father's love. very difficult decision. the best thing brian can do for him is exactly what he's doing. offering his support but letting justin make the decision himself.
Author's Response: I'm glad you think Brian's doing the right thing. I struggled a bit with how far he'd go on pushing Justin not to do it.
Thanks a lot for reviewing. I appreciate your taking the time.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 7 - Craig's Call
excellant chapter, times like those Brian likes to roll over anywho..... ;-)
great how brian let justin know he never truly cut off his father, that justin has to figure out his own way to deal w/ craig
Author's Response: I thought it was more Brian to let him figure it out himself, rather than trying to talk him out of it. I'm glad you agree. Thanks for reviewing. Getting reviews is my favorite thing :-)
Reviewer: Daphne (Anonymous) · Date: June 24, 2009 08:44 AM · On: Chapter 6 – The Show, Part 2
I haven't commented as of yet, but I'm loving this. More, please!
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it.
Reviewer: Pribe (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
is it possible that i already read your story? maybe on another site? cazse every chapter sounds familar to me. but none the less i love your story. hugs, pribe
Author's Response: It's possible. I was putting it up on BJFIC before it vanished & on one other fan fiction site. I'm putting it up here pretty quickly, so this one will catch up soon. I'm just fixing up a couple of things I didn't like later as I go.
I'm glad you're liking it and took the time to review. i appreciate it a lot.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2009 09:54 AM · On: Chapter 6 – The Show, Part 2
fun chapter. poor justin started out to save the guy now who is going to save him? brian is having too much fun with this.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. I just can't see Brian letting an opportunity like that pass, can you?
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 10:31 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Show Part 1
that has to be john's partner that just walked it. i feel a foursome coming on but i sure as hell don't want it happen. brian has to tell him about craig sooner or later. might as well get it over with when they get home.
Author's Response: You're right - it's John's partner. I wasn't planning a foursome, but now that you mention it... (LOL)
Thanks a lot for reviewing.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2009 09:12 AM · On: Chapter 5 - The Show Part 1
Very nice update. I'm looking forward to reading more soon.
Author's Response: thank you.
Reviewer: mikkie (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:54 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
it feels real! Please keep going! Can't wait to read more...
Author's Response: That's the best compliment. I'm trying to keep the feel of the show, so thank you very much.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 10:24 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Client
Very interesting end of the cliffie. What will Justin do? Will he be a match? Will Craig contact Justin too soon and piss Brian off? So many questions to be addressed. I'll be looking for your update. I'm enjoying the originial ideas too.
Author's Response: I'm glad that I've left all the questions I meant to unanswered. I hope the resolutions are satisfactory for you, although I expect there'll always be a string left dangling. Thanks for letting me know what you think.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2009 03:07 AM · On: Chapter 4 - The Client
ok, so now this new client is going to make a play for brian? i sure as hell hope not. let him stay with his boyfriend and leave brian and justin alone. maybe they could be friends but mr, avery better stay out of brian's bed and brian better keep it in his pants. craig says justin owes him. owes him what? the chance to keep a homophobe alive. brian is going to try his hardest to talk justin out of it.
Author's Response: I guess the big question is how much has Brian changed? The old Brian would have slept with John and would have let Justin make his own mistakes. What will the post -513 guy do? I'm finding it fun to think about as I work on this. Thanks for reviewing. I really, really appreciate it.
Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 09:09 PM · On: Chapter 3 - New Rules
I like it - go on!
Author's Response: I plan to - and thanks for the encouragement. I really appreciate reviews. Makes me think people are reading :-)
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 - New Rules
they're great together. on to a new life. just them, justin taylor the artisit and brian kinney his partner and owner of kinnetic. plain old folks. just love them to death. what the f is craig's problem now?
Author's Response: One day I'll get some of the AU ideas I have down, but for now - the story-line is just plain folk. I'm hoping I can keep it interesting. And on Craig's problem - you'll find out next chapter (LOL) Thanks a lot for taking the time to review.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2009 07:25 AM · On: Chapter 3 - New Rules
Great chapter with a little cliffie on the end. Now I wonder what Jennifer's problem is.
Author's Response: Got to try to keep people reading, so a cliffhanger or two is needed - you'll find out next chapter. I'm not huge on long suspense. As always - really appreciate the time you take to review.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Saying Hello
what a reunion. boy they just couldn't. two months will do that to you. then, “No. Wait a sec, Brian, just wait. I want to talk to you – about our future.” like water putting out a fire. great chapter.
Author's Response: Yeah - a relationship talk really wouldn't do it for Brian. I'm glad you liked the chapter & really appreciate the review.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2009 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 2 - Saying Hello
Excellent Chapter! Your writing is most discriptive and visual. I look forward to your next installment. Good work.
Author's Response: thank you. I'm glad you're enjoying the writing & truly appreciate the time you take to review.
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
I like it. Keep going :D
Author's Response: That's the plan. Thanks for letting me know you liked it - it helps to hear it.
Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: June 12, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
Even I"m getting nervous and I'm just the reader. I can't imagine what Brian is feeling. Surely Justin won't send him away...right?
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear I got your emotions going a bit. Thanks for reviewing - it's very encouraging.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 09:03 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
I forgot to mention one more thing. Season 6 stories are very popular and a great foundation for a story. Most of us really hate how Cowlip ended the show anyway and love to write the story better than they did. Feed your plot bunnie lots of rich green lettice and let the ideas fly.
Author's Response: Happy to hear I'm not the only one who hated the ending because I certainly did.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 07:04 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
i think you're off to a good start. i'd like to read more.
Author's Response: Thanks for the encouragement. I do appreciate it a lot.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 06:50 AM · On: Chapter 1 Brian Arrives
I like how you write. The mental study of Brian is always a popular plot for a story but I would caution you not to over use canon as it can be repetative and boring. You might want to only mention canon as required to develop the plot's background and sssume your readers already know the canon anyway. You had enough new thoughts to not over do it this time. I'm looking forward to your updates. Welcome of MW.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. All advice is most welcome - especially from an author like yourself, so I'll definitely keep it in mind.
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