Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2014 06:45 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
"every piece of clothing he owned was strewn around the room" Oh, good men do that to. LOL
"Let's dance." Yay, that should be a happy dance as Brian didn't go with the trick.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2014 09:03 PM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Wow! I'm impressed. Glad Mikey wasn't there. Just thinking of the whining that would have produced makes me shudder.
Author's Response: If he'd had more of an audience for that refusal it might not have happened. Helps that Brian had a goal in bringing Justin to Babylon and tricking would have made achieving that goal impossible. Gotta love the goal oriented :-)
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2012 04:31 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
:)
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2009 03:28 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Wow...... Brian turned down a trick so as not to upset Justin??? he has it bad... lol....
Author's Response: Yes, he does :) :) :)
Reviewer: Meggi (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Babylon, Part 1
I totally agree with you, Brian is sooo fucked! *ggg*
Author's Response: (grinning)
Yup
Reviewer: shelly (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 12:49 PM · On: Babylon, Part 1
"Toppiest of tops" nice! =]
I'm so happy nothing went to shit and so far the evening is going well for the both of them! I just hope Brian doesn't break any hearts since he seems to truly care for Justin.
As always, great update!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked that phrasing :) :) :)
Justin's heart is safe (tonight anyway). I promise :)
Awww...thanks!
Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 10:16 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Hi,
I wanted to say that I've started reading this story and I really like it. The premise is interesting, it provides for lots of character growth, and it's very engagingly written. I'm looking forward to the rest! :)
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking the story (and the premise)! There is most definitely great potential for character growth in this one :) :) :)
"it's very engagingly written"
That's so great to hear!
Reviewer: meme (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:52 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
This is the brain I like and can respect, he’s looking at the inside more than the outside of the person. This is very very good
Author's Response: I'm so happy you are liking this version of Brian!
Reviewer: gotb30 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 09:18 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
Brian is truly fcuked now! LOL Can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Yes, yes he is!
:D :D :D
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2009 08:37 AM · On: Babylon, Part 1
although brian is taking justin as he is, i think it's time for justin to hit the gym. not for brian but for his own well being. his own piece of mind. he ate because he was lonely i guess but he isn't any longer.
Author's Response: A lot of people have been saying Justin should hit the gym, but I'd rather have Justin start loving himself for who he is, not who he could be. Justin doesn't see himself as he is. He's 20-30 pounds overweight, but as far as he's concerned, he's obese. And that's simply not true. So he's pudgy; that doesn't make him unlovable or undesirable.
Okay...I'll get off the soapbox now :)
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