Reviewer: Naughty_teaspoon (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2019 08:13 PM · On: Magic Show
Love it so far.
Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2015 02:57 AM · On: Magic Show
I can't stop reading this.
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:31 PM · On: Magic Show
Great chapter here. Justin flying in was perfect.
In the Author Chapter Notes you said:
Justin finds out about Brian's problems and heads to New York City...
I think you mean to say Pittsburgh.
Author's Response: You're right -- I should fix that!
Thanks! :)
Reviewer: Kitty_Ballou (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 04:14 AM · On: Magic Show
Poor Brian... *cries* And I love your Justin! He's so adorable und so cute! I really hope he's able to help Brian!!
Reviewer: carlou (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Magic Show
This story keeps getting better and better.I just love to see the vunerable side of Brian,it's about time he lets himself be taken care of.I would love for him to finally accept the fact that he deserves to be loved and not be afraid.
Beautiful work.
Author's Response: Your thoughts are exactly like mine -- I promise Brian will get there. That's exactly, exactly the sentiment I was hoping to evoke with this chapter -- a look at the insecurities in Brian's character. You have *no* idea how happy I am right now to read your comment and know that this is what got through!!!! :) :) :) :)
I do promise he'll get there... my biggest concern is to get him there while keeping him true to his essential character. I hope I can manage this, without cheapening his growth or simplifying the process to the point of demeaning it...
Thank you so much for the sweet comment; it means so much to me!!
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2009 03:12 AM · On: Magic Show
Wow, that was intense. You really understand it to write strong emotions. I could feel Justin´s need to be with Brian and his wanting to help him. And I have the urgent need to take brian inmy arms to tell him that he ca trust Justin with his feeling, that he´s worth it and everything will get better in time. That´s a wonderful story and I´m waiting for the next chapter.
Hugs, Sunny
Author's Response: Awww!! Thank you!! This is such a gratifying comment because this is exactly what I was aiming for as a writer! I have the same feeling toward Brian; I channeled it through Justin in the next chapter. I'll have it posted really soon, I promise. ;)
I can't tell you how much I appreciate the comments -- knowing this was your response helps me feel like I really am on track with the story. Thank you!!
Tiffany
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 11:10 PM · On: Magic Show
I am so glad that Ben was concerned enough to call Justin.... and now comes the hard part .... Brian has to be able to finally tell Justin about his past... and Justin has to make sure that Brian comes out of it in one piece..
Author's Response: Oooh, you just gave me a great idea!! Rather, a great quote to use later in the story from one of my favorite books. I never would have thought about it until I read your comment about Justin making sure that Brian comes out of it in one piece... it's so true. That's the other side of what Justin wants -- and what they both want -- the closeness of knowing, but then the responsibility of having that trust...
Thanks so much, especially for the quote idea! I'll be using it in an upcoming chapter. :)
Reviewer: templeton_ma (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 10:01 PM · On: Magic Show
great direction. This is definitely on of the best story about Brian's confrontation with his past. I love it.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! What a good compliment! *blushes*
I've thought a lot about how Brian's past might have made him into who we see, and I've really been enjoying trying to explore those issues in this fic. Unfortunately, it seeems like there'll be a lot more to deal with... and Justin has to convince him to see the psychologist yet. I'm so glad you've continued to enjoy the story! Thank you so much for commenting again! :)
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 05:30 PM · On: Magic Show
Oh fuck, I feel so bad for Brian, but he really should know Justin better than that.
I'm looking forward to the next chapter.
Author's Response: That's an interesting point; I think usually he would be more confident in Justin's feelings/support. I think it's the nightmares and flashbacks that have him so insecure at this point.
I'll have another chapter posted soon; it's lighter and NC-18 (figure everyone could use a break; especially Brian!!).
Thanks so much for your thoughts!
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Magic Show
i can't wait for justin to get there. help is on the way brian. just hang on a little bit longer. he'll love you more.
Author's Response: Don't worry -- Justin walks in the door in on the very first line of the next chapter. :)
I just finished a chapter in which the subject of Justin's love is the central topic...You're prophetic ;).
Brian's doubts really are sad...
Thanks as always for the comments. I know I say it all the time, but it does make this all worthwhile when people comment! And you give such a good emotional gauge! :) :) :)
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