Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2015 02:38 AM · On: Standards of Manhood
Jack is an absolute wanker, I'm so happy Deb stood up for him though, I wish she's stopped him from leaving :(
Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 24, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Standards of Manhood
The psychological growth of the plot is most interesting. I see perhaps your story is based on Brian's mental state and how he/they deal with it. I've read other stories with this type of plot but by far your is the best I've seen.
Author's Response: That's such a wonderful compliment! I found myself using background knowledge of psychology far more than I ever thought I would while writing the story (at times, quite explicitly in Author Notes!).
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2009 02:25 PM · On: Standards of Manhood
I'm glad Brian has informed Justin of his nightmares, Justin will stay on alert as much as he can from NYC. Won't be surprised if he shows up one day. I really think Brian should tell him about the flashbacks, they are getting more intense by the day it seems.
Reviewer: Kitty_Ballou (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Standards of Manhood
Phewwwww...
*coughs*
Have to go on reading... *runs for the next chapter*
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 08:43 PM · On: Standards of Manhood
Great chapter.... I could just picture Brian walking into someplace like Pizza Palace.. no wonder the poor man got a headache just from looking at the cars in the parking lot... as for Brian and Mel .. I think you got that conversation just right.. she is always finding fault with him because she is extremely jealous of Brian's affection towards Lindsay and Gus...
Author's Response: Thanks so much!! I know, even JR was amazed to see Brian at Pizza Palace. :) I'm so glad that the Brian/Mel interaction was on target; I was surprised at how jealous she actually was by the time I finished the chapter!
Thanks so much for commenting; it means a lot to have such faithful readers. :) :)
Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Standards of Manhood
This story is a great idea! I'm looking forward to Brian actually doing something about what's going on with him. I think you did the pizza place just fine. I'm ready to read more!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Justin is going to come soon, and convince Brian that seeing a psychologist is necessary.It will be nice for him to be proactive and get through some healing. I hope you'll enjoy the future chapters, too. I'll have the next chapter posted soon. Thanks very much for commenting!
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