Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2020 02:51 AM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
A little surreal. Justin and Brian at the Faire weekend. I loved the ending of Season 3 but not much else. Well of course the reunion between Brian and Justin was important too. I haven't commented much as every time I try MW was having issues. So glad it is letting me do so now. I can't wait to see what you do with the fairie weekend.
Author's Response: The only problem with the greatest unification was that in this story Brian never pushed Justin away. Hope you find the fairie weekend funny.
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2020 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
Oh my, that was head spinning for Justin wasn't it. I would feel so worried to what was going on if I were him. I loved this chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for loving this chapter.
Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2020 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
I look forward to each new chapter. how is justin going to explain his worries.
Author's Response: That's a whole other story.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2020 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
I am loving the story and am finally all caught up to the current chapter!!!! I think it was very sweet that Brian noticed that something's up with Justin and suggested he talk with Alex.
Author's Response: This Brian is much more intune with what's going on.
Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2020 09:15 PM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
I am a little confused with the message Mysterious Marilyn gave to Justin. I am not sure who she is talking about. Hopefully you can clarify it in the next chapter.
Author's Response: I had to reread this chapter to see what I wrote. All I can say is she must have had too much mushrooms.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2020 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 58 - Episode 58 – (Stand Up for Ourselves)
OMG! This was so hilarious - until you put Mikey there - ah heck, it was still funny. Just keep those magic mushrooms away from Debbie and Mikey. Can you picture Debbie and Mikey having LSD-like hallucinations? Debbie might start stripping and singing The Age of Aquarius, and Mikey might hallucinate that him and Brian are having sex and attack Brian. OMG! I'm laughing so hard!!!
But yeah, I'm surprised Brian didn't take off running, too. And as far as joining in the naked volleyball game? NOBODY would have been able to hit the ball as they would have all been ogling Brian and Justin's naked bodies. (Oh, God! What if Debbie joins in??? (Oh my, I'm ROFLOL!)
On a more sober note - Now what's going on with the munchers?
Thanks for comedy hour!
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Then this chapter lived up to its promise. I'm almost sorry that I wasn't able to include your suggestions.
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