Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2020 02:34 AM · On: Chapter 56 Chapter 56 (The Election)

HELLO!!! I'm doing my darndest to catch up on all the WIPs that I read. I am SO far behind. Too many medical situations going on.

I'm kind of at a loss what all to say. This chapter, though, really raised my claws (and my blood pressure - which the doctor made me promise to try not do.)

First, I guess I'm curious, is everyone aware that it was Michael that persuaded Debbie to help Rita? And WHY? Because, if Brian is going to back away from Debbie, I sure as heck would expect the same treatment toward Michael. And if anyone knows why he did it - Well, let's just say he will lose Ben for CERTAIN - not that he ever had him.

The girls - boy I have a lot to say there. #1 - if I was Justin, I would DEMAND they come clean to Debbie and Michael about the TRUE parentage of Melanie's baby. Besides, it would save Melanie TONS of grief, and get rid of Michael and Debbie.

Is Lindsay really pregnant? She's HAD a baby, so she should be showing well before Melanie. And if Mel is, and Lindsay's not - *SMH*... those women. And how can you connect with your partner, when you're both pregnant, without the child that binds? Pregnancy should bring out the loving nature of wanting to BE a parent - not give your other kid away.

Is Emmett going to start having memories/flashbacks to the 'Other Time'?

Stockwell must have been really worried about what Rickert would do to his son, and went after him after finding out his son was there.

And Hunter - my heart is bleeding.

Hugs,

Cathy

P.S: I have a friend, who isn't a MW member, who has been reading this story, and she wanted me to tell you how very much she is loving this. She tried sending you a message through the contact button, but wasn't sure if it was operational. So this is from her - I love this story and look forward to every week.

Author's Response:

You know I had the same questions about what I wrote, so there are going to be changes in the next couple of chapters.  Tell your friend that I am grateful for her review.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2020 07:06 PM · On: Chapter 56 Chapter 56 (The Election)

Deb is turning out quite nasty in this,  Love it!

Hope now that Michael got involved in this, Brian cuts him out too. 

Also can't wait to find out what Lindsay is up to.  Prob not preggers at all!

Deb L.

Author's Response:

Snicker.  When you find out what Lindsay did, I think you'll be very surprised.

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2020 11:33 PM · On: Chapter 56 Chapter 56 (The Election)

Wow, great chapter.  Glad Stockwell lost again.  Poor Hunter.  And everything I think I can't hate Michael more, I do.  And, Deb can be almost as bad.  WONDERFUL WRITING.

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2020 11:32 PM · On: Chapter 56 Chapter 56 (The Election)

Wow, great chapter.  Glad Stockwell lost again.  Poor Hunter.  And everything I think I can't hate Michael more, I do.  And, Deb can be almost as bad.  WONDERFUL WRITING.