Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2020 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

Well, this was a little better, but why do I expect Michael as being the one who called to have the locks changed at the loft, and why didn't they look around and see if anything was missing? THAT was the first thing they should have done...

It was a nice idea for Justin to think of having Brian have a physical, but I really doubt any cancer could have been detected a year and a half earlier than it was in canon... but then again, maybe THIS TIME, he won't get it... Lots of weird changes, so why not that?

I'm not sure how Gus could have had 'otitis' media, and them not know sooner.

As nice as the thought of Justin fathering 'JR', there is NO WAY, a baby born of Justin and Melanie could look anything LIKE Gus... You have Brian, with chiseled features, a unique handsome man, and Lindsay, statuesque... versus, Justin and Melanie, cute pixie-type people, little button noses... nope... they won't look anything alike... hmm, I really thought Brian would have been smarter than that.

I loved the little lever in the closet in the bathroom... everybody should have one of them.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Let's go with everyone being very tired after their trip home shall we?  Gus is such a sweet child, very rarely complaining.  If his ears hurt he wasn't complaining about it.  Okay, my idea that Mel and Brian had dark hair and Lindsay and Justin are blondes might be a little forfetched but that's the way I was looking at it.  You should always have an escape root.

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2020 07:17 PM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

I wonder if you wil lhave Mel tell Michael that he is sterile so he 'can't' be a father so they have to go with Justin



Author's Response:

Now that's a great idea.  Sadly I didn't think of it.  ; )

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2020 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

Poor Gus that must have been so distressing for him. He is lucky to have His dads there who actually care and look after him. I wish they had full custody. I am looking forward to seeing what's next will they pick Justin instead and if they do what will the reaction be. Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Gus doesn't get distressed, if he had they might have noticed things earlier.  So for if the girls demanded their son back I don't think Brian would give in.  There are so many ways Mel's pregnancy can go.  You'll have to wait and see.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2020 09:41 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

Does Michael have something to do with changing the lock? It's a bit hazy. Justin the father of Mel's baby it's quite strange but why not for sure they would have more money

Author's Response:

It sounds like something Michael would do since he wasn't invited on the trip to Vermont.  We'll have to wait and see who ends up being the father.

Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2020 04:49 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

You keep adding more mysteries!  We need some answers! LOL

I really want to know what Justin's parents were thinking.  And shouldn't child services or the police be after them for child abandonment?

Has mad moron Mikey been in cahoots with a locksmith?  

Thanks for this update.

Deb L.



Author's Response:

First you'd have to find them.  Molly's in safe hands with Justin.  As for Mikey, that would be a good guess.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2020 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

I think Mikey would have changed the locks, but nothing happened yet. What is going on with this baby stuff?

Author's Response:

I agree Mikey was probably behind it, but how to catch him?  I didn't really want Mel going through the stuff with Michael, but some things don't seem to want to work out.  I'd hate to lose Jenny Rebecca.

Reviewer: GammaB (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2020 01:03 AM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

Wonderful update.  I have read this story from the beginning, but have been unable to review for a while.  I got a different computer and I lost my MW account.  I tried to get it reinstated, but with no success.  I was  HappyGamma.  So hopefully I will not have any more problems.  Fantastic writing.  Love this idea and all the different ways you are taking it.  



Author's Response:

Sorry to hear of your computer problems, but glad to know you're enjoying this story.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2020 10:46 PM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

Lol Emmett always on top of everything

Author's Response:

Yep.  I always felt that Emmett was short changed in the series.

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2020 08:46 PM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

I’m confused as to how a baby born of Melanie and Justin could be mirror image of Gus when Gus, on the show, has dark hair and hazel-ish eyes and Justin and his mother and sister all have blonde hair and at least Justin has blue eyes.
Also Jenny Rebecca deserves to be born in this timeline as herself not half someone else as she would be if anyone but Michael is the father so, even though I may be the only one reading this story to think so, I hope Lindsay and Melanie don’t have Justin as the baby’s father.

Author's Response:

Lindsay has blonde hair, though her's might be from a bottle.  I haven't really decided if the girls are going to use Michael's sperm or Justin.  We don't know if the baby would be a girl if Justin's sperm is used.  

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2020 07:55 PM · On: Chapter 43 Episode 43 (Mad Dog Kinney)

thanks for update.  stay safe



Author's Response:

And thank you for leaving a review.  You stay safe too.  

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