Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2020 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 42 Episode 42 (Out with a Whimper)

Well, I'm trying to catch up on some reading... and just finished three chapters...

This is getting to be a strange story in some areas... It seems like everything is all hunky-dory and back to normal with the family... Lindsay seemed unconcerned about the fact she sawed Mel's hand off... she was just out having a good time bowling, and I noticed she didn't even go and say hi to Gus or want to hold him. It's been quite a while since she saw him, yet couldn't even say hi...

Brian and Justin are once again associating with Debbie and Michael, it's like Debbie didn't call CPS and try to get Brian in trouble and Michael didn't try to kill Brian's son... I mean, seriously???????? Why would you EVER even be in those people's lives again?

And I guess I'm wondering, are Mel and Lindsay still living in their house, or did they have to move? How did they get all that blood out of the hardwood floors? Or was it all tore up and new flooring put in? I don't think I could live in a house and have to have visions of that nightmare, day in and day out.

How old is Gus? Two? Maybe... yet he was looking at the map, and calling Mrs. Stone, Mrs. Claus? SMH... My four kids weren't saying Mrs. Claus at two... yep, he's doing good...

It sounds like the resort vacation is a place from hell; I'm SO glad Emmett had no filter and laid it on the line for the old coot... it sounds like some employees either need firing, or need some disciplinary action taken.

It seems like Ethan is already a goner before he was even a starter... arrogant prick... Good deal!

HUGS ~Cathy

Author's Response:
Yes, this is a strange story. There are spots where Justin had no knowledge of things that had occurred, so when things change he's not always aware that they have. There is not much that Brian nor Justin can do when other people bring Debbie or Michael into the story. Gus is his daddy's boy, he's a genius. Ethan shows up again, you can't get rid of bad pennies or Michael would have been gone ages ago.

Reviewer: Proud Acadian (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2020 04:10 PM · On: Chapter 42 Episode 42 (Out with a Whimper)

i wonder what you have planned for the rest of their 'working vacation'.

Author's Response:
They'll have their fun, but a little problem will pop up.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2020 09:32 AM · On: Chapter 42 Episode 42 (Out with a Whimper)

Wow I would have been so angry just like they were if I were treated that badly at the lodge. They need to be looked after better then that. I'm glad Brian didn't blow up I sure would have. Cannot wait for more x

Author's Response:
That's why they need Brian's help. I don't think the owners have any idea how they're preceived.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2020 09:07 AM · On: Chapter 42 Episode 42 (Out with a Whimper)

The day ended better than it started. I hope they will continue to have a good time.

Author's Response:
I have a feeling that Brian will win out being the advertizing genius that he is.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2020 01:29 AM · On: Chapter 42 Episode 42 (Out with a Whimper)

Life is completely chaotically busy right now but I love taking a break and catching up with this story.

Author's Response:
Glad I can help. There are so many good stories being written right now. I'm honored that mine is one you are keeping up with.

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