Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For This Time
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2020 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 35-Episode 35 (It's Because I'm Gay, Right?)

So, Mikey wants to sue the "Rage" publishers because he thinks Brian ratted him out? If I was Brian, I'd tell the blabbermouth to stuff it. If Mikey thinks his "best friend" would sell him out like that... Brian needs to tell him to stuff their friendship where the sun doesn't shine!

And why can't there be TWO comics? The storylines, sidekicks, etc... would ALL be different. You can bet your bottom dollar that Mikey's wouldn't feature a black female sidekick, nor would it feature black racism. Justin's would reach a much farther target audience. The graphics in Justin's would be top-notch, vs what Michael could find for an artist. And just how many rewrites and edits do you think the publisher would ask of Michael???? LOL!

I see you wanted to know what I thought was actually going on with "This Time." I really hate to put it in black and white, but, here's what I thought:

When there was a screech of the brakes and people were flying and screaming on the bus in the Prologue, I right away thought there was an accident, and I think Justin is in a coma dreaming all of this.

Because even if Marilyn somehow finagled a "do-over" it doesn't account for the mature Brian we're seeing.

So, I will be anxious to see how it all turns out.

HUGS  ~Cathy



Author's Response:

Yeah, Mikey has gone a little nutso, but Brian is used to being blamed.  He has changed in that he's unwilling to finance Mikey's dream.  I thought about using that idea but haven't decided just how I'll end this, afterall I have 3 more season's to change.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2020 07:36 AM · On: Chapter 35-Episode 35 (It's Because I'm Gay, Right?)

Michael is really a jester. He will not understand what is happening to him, he can remain in his misery. I like this part let's see where you are going to take us

Author's Response:

Brian is not at his beck and call.  Ben is not willing to play with Mikey.  Perhaps the next chapter will be inlightening?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2020 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 35-Episode 35 (It's Because I'm Gay, Right?)

Michael thinks he can get away with everything doesn't he. I think they nailed it by putting all their brains together that Michael is just throwing his toys out of the pram. I think this was a brilliant chapter. 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Michael actions did come out of the blue in this chapter.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2020 07:26 PM · On: Chapter 35-Episode 35 (It's Because I'm Gay, Right?)

Poor little Mikey, nothing seems to go his way. Let him do the comic himself and pay someone to draw it. Won't be able to cheat someone he doesn"t know who wouldn't turn around and sue him.

Ben will take Hunter in, file for guardianship, things will go smoothly. Mikey will have nothing to complain about. Deb should look into becoming a certified foster parent. Make everything legal. It'd be good for her and again Mikey would have little to complain about.

Of course Divina would help.

I can't wait for Sundays. 



Author's Response:

Mikey came up with an idea, but won't follow through unless someone tells him step by step what needs to be done.  You'll have to wait to find out if your predictions come true.

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