Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2020 07:42 AM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

Omg I had tears in my eyes. That was an incredible and heartfelt talk between Brian and Gus. The emotions poured off the page straight into my heart. Gus is such an amazing young man he will get his dad through this. Emmett he is a doll isn't he, I'm so glad he was there as well. 

 

Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Your words are eloquent.  I'm thrilled that you are enjoying the story and find it well written.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2020 04:12 PM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

Something told me Gus would definitely understand.



Author's Response:

Gus is still coming to grips with what Brian told him.  He is more impressed that his father wants to make sure that he is in his life.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2020 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

Like Emmett, I am proud of Brian. It is not easy to have such a conversation with his child but he succeeded and Gus, a clever little boy, understood everything. Wonderful chapter. I can't wait to read about the pizza party and what's going on the next day. I'm sure Gus will like Justin.

Author's Response:

Brian is really working to make his life one that he enjoys.  He wants Gus in it and he has finally started to realize that having friends that you want to spend time with and are interested in your well being is important.

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2020 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

That was a great chapter. I would have found it hard to be that honest with my 10 year old. Every time Brian called himself an alcoholic I just cringed. That was tough.

Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know that the writing impacted you and you could feel Brian's pain.  Glad you are enjoying the story.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2020 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

thanks for update



Author's Response:

Your welcome. Still thrilled that you continue to read and comment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2020 12:32 AM · On: Chapter 29- Discussions

Emmett is probably pleased that Brian is being so upfront about everything with Gus.  Most parents aren't.  You made me hungry for pizza.



Author's Response:

Emmett is a friend to Brian.  I just haven't explored their friendship like I want to.  Home made pizza is the best

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