Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 01:21 PM · On: Chapter 28- 1000 Lies and 1 Truth

Now that Brian knows Lindsay asked for money she didn't need will he be able to have an honest conversation with her? Will Melanie be approachable about the problem?



Author's Response:

I'm not sure Brian wants to confront her.  He's still leary about the legal access to Gus.  Maybe when he is sure that he can see Gus, no matter what happens, then maybe he will discuss her lies.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:16 AM · On: Chapter 28- 1000 Lies and 1 Truth

Brian, who goes to school to find out about Gus' schedule, is excellent. Lindsay will finally be caught up in her lies. He and Gus are going to have a good time together. Gus is so happy to be with his father. He's a smart little boy who sees and feels things. Great chapter..

Author's Response:

Brian is now realizing their is a lot to do as a father and he is feeling out his new role.  Love that Gus is giving Brian kudos.

Reviewer: Crookedhalo1 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 08:12 PM · On: Chapter 28- 1000 Lies and 1 Truth

nice read though it left me wanting more

 



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I just finished the next chapter and sent it to my beta this morning.   Hopefully she will beta it soon.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 07:30 PM · On: Chapter 28- 1000 Lies and 1 Truth

Good on Brian for doing that going to the school was definitely the right thing to do. The conversation between father and son brought a lump to my throat. It was so beautiful. This was an amazing chapter thank you for writing it x



Author's Response:

Thanks-  Brian at the school was fun to write.  The conversation with Gus was cool, he loves his dad.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 03:40 PM · On: Chapter 28- 1000 Lies and 1 Truth

darn Lindsey, cant stand her



Author's Response:

Lindsay and her drapes and lies and lies and lies.  

You must login (register) to review.