Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 07:52 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
Wow lol I can't believe they got David up on that stage. I'm so glad Justin got up there as well and still got the crown. Brian made me smile encouraging him and catching him when he jumped off the stage. Fab work x
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2020 03:24 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
Once again, I'm chuckling. Some of your rewrites can do that to a person.
First, just because Justin gave the CROWN to David, JUSTIN still won. So, Justin should get the thousand and the Bahamas trip. I couldn't quite figure that one out.
Well, long and short of it... Michael had to eat his words. Justin didn't make a fool of himself... and David out-danced most of the other guys. (Even at his advanced age.)
I'm sure it was all of Michael's grumbling about Blake that had ticked Ted off that he signed David up. Michael really wasn't a very good friend to any of those guys when it came right down to it. He could have also still been pissy about "their invitations being lost in the mail" for Senator Baxters party.
My Favorite line of this chapter: Brian had gone along because he hadn't wanted people to think he was a kept man.
That is SO CLASSIC Kinney... Touché !!!
In regards to Brian being put on suspension and possibly losing his job... WHY HASN'T HE WRUNG MICHAEL'S NECK - LITERALLY???
But, why is that holding up him opening his own agency? I would think that would push him to get it started.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: It does eventually. But as alway Michael's comments get in the way, but Mikey's slowly losing control. Thank you for the lovely comments.
Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2020 06:12 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
Wanted you to know I really love this story. Hope to see you post again soon. Thank for the good read.
Author's Response: Thank you, it's nice to know that you are enjoying this.
Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
I love this story do much. I can't wait for you to post more. I never want it to end. LMAO. Keep up the great work.
Author's Response: At this rate it may never end. LOL.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 01:05 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
I'm glad that Justin won again, but thought it was a great gesture to give the crown to David. It ticked Michael off, so that's always a win-win. LOL
Author's Response: Ticking Michael off is so much fun.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
The changes are very subtle but they are there and make everything even better! Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you. That's what I was hoping for.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 07:48 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
Lol funny chapter I had actually forgotten all the stuff in that episode
Author's Response: Some of the stuff in certain episodes are difficult to figure in because Justin wasn't aware but a few changes here and there and it works.
Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2020 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
Still intrigued and looking forward to more subtle changes. I like that Ted entered David into the competition and of course Michael is still a 'pain in the arse'.
Author's Response: Hehe. Getting even with Mikey is the main theme here.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2020 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
I like This Time better for this episode. Your rewriting of each episode is amazing. What a fantastic idea.
Author's Response: Thank you a high compliment indeed.
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2020 08:54 PM · On: Chapter 20-Episode 20(The King of Babylon)
thanks for an ealy update. now another week wating *sniff*
Author's Response: Sorry, but life is getting difficult. Hope you find it worth the wait.
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