Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2020 08:05 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)
GUI is just odd and I hope that the guys can stop this and that Brian doesn't give up his rights like he did the last time. I'm very worried things might go bad. Justin to the rescue I hope. Fantastic work x
Author's Response: Gui was odd. So many have written stories about what he reasons were. Hopefully mine was different. Things might change this time.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 09:18 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)
Let's see what you'll find so Justin can stop Brian from losing his rights to Gus. In the series he should have made Gui understand that he was Gus' father and that Gui had nothing to say. Brian gave up too easily. Mélanie being a lawyer she could have found a solution for Gus to have 3 parents. Maybe in your story Lindsay and Gui will end up in jail. I'm sure Mélanie and Brian will take care of Gus very well.
A self defense class is welcome and Justin should warn Daphne about Hobbs.
Author's Response: Don't worry Justin is indeed able to stop Brian from giving up his rights. Gui will be a thing of the past. As for Daph, Justin won't let her be alone with Hobbs and she'll know why they are taking self defense classes.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 06:02 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)
Well, I was wondering if the girls were broke up... as last we heard, they were still living together in the house. This was another Cowlip screw-up. What type of friends and family would allow this? Brian came off as spineless to me. That day in the grocery store... he should have threatened Gui, not slunk away and let Gui have the last word. He was STILL Gus' father. He should have forbidden Lindsay having Gus around Gui... should have told her he would turn her in and take Gus away if she went through with this... not give up his rights. The whole arc makes me boil. And Melanie as an attorney, should have been very vocal about the laws she breaking... and done it in front Gui. The whole bunch, just let Gui and Lindsay ride roughshod over them. Well, my dear, you can really fix it this time.
Self-defense classes can never hurt. Justin needs to explain to Daphne what happened at prom, so she knows not to bully Hobbs.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Daph knows but she's man enough to stand against Hobbs. The thing about the girls is Justin wasn't as involved with their goings on the first time so a lot of what's happening is new to him.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 05:23 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)
Great chapter seeing Mel off side a bit was interesting in the series and a interesting spin here thank you
Author's Response: Shame she fell back into old habits. Maybe she'll learn.
Author's Response: Shame she fell back into old habits. Maybe she'll learn.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 02:53 AM · On: Chapter 16 - Episode 16 (French Fried)
Great update. Lindsey was never a favorite of mine. Mel can be a bitch, but she is an honest one. Terrific writing.
Author's Response: She has pissed me off too many times for me to make her nice. I'm hoping to redeem Mel though.
Author's Response: She has pissed me off too many times for me to make her nice. I'm hoping to redeem Mel though.
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