Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 03:06 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Brian is so cute with Gus and the idea Justin gave him for the new agency is fantastic. Gosh I hope Mel goes away and never comes back x Brilliant work c

Author's Response:
Wouldn't that be nice.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2020 01:34 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Daycare is a great idea. Justin continues to remember problems and come up with great solutions.

Author's Response:
It did block Mel and her attitude.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2020 09:50 AM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

A daycare is a great idea and in addition it prevented Brian from having his usual ways of managing pain after the announcement of his father. I love all the new ideas you have and it's so much better!

Author's Response:
Thank you. A great compliment makes my day.

Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

So, I take it the girls are still together... but even still, if Melanie was in Florida (I NEVER understood this) did she fly home solely for the reason and fact that Brian was going to watch Gus? And if she was in Florida... why did Lindsay even call her? That says so very little about the women's characters.

But, it all turned out good... the daycare is an excellent idea, and good to have in place from the ground up. Will Ted be the CFO? And since Melanie was helping out... will he put her in as the company lawyer? Although that could get sticky if custody issues come up. We've heard nothing about Cynthia yet either.

And Brian working after hearing Jack's news, was a much-needed improvement.

HUGS ~Cathy

Author's Response:
I'm thinking Melanie went to visit her parents who live in Florida. If i'm right they were separated, though Mel probably called to check in on Gus before she left to come home.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 09:54 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Ha! So clever a day care centre and a business distraction for Brian before he went it to Brian Kinney pain management

Author's Response:
It's not original but it did seem to fit my plot.

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Great chapter. Love all these new ideas you keep coming up with. Wonderful writing.

Author's Response:
Thank you. I couldn't help coming up with new ideas, which isn't easy with all the wonderful writers we have on this site.

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2020 04:48 PM · On: Chapter 15 - Episode 15 (The Ties That Bind)

Love it!! What a great idea it was for Justin to come up with daycare at the agency, and definitely good timing, too. It eliminated the opportunity for Brian to go out, and made him look good in front of Melanie, which is always a good thing.

Author's Response:
Melanie showing up and berating Justin was something I wanted changed. Glad you loved it.

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