Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
I hope things aren't going to differently that it would ruin things for Justin and Brian. This is such a gripping story.
Author's Response: Their only problems this time will be Mikey and the Girls. Also Justin's parents.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2019 07:42 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
Hey! It's catch up day for me! This moving is for the birds, and only having access to my internet a couple of hours a day, is playing havoc with my reading and writing.
Anyway, I loved this. If nothing else, I'm getting a chance to 'watch' the show again, which is long overdo.
I had forgotten the Marvin Telson thing was this early on. And even though no Jennifer at the art show, it sounds like Debbie put her two cents worth in Jennifer's ear. Did Deb also confiscate the tip? Brian ALWAYS tips.
And so glad Brian wanted to bring Justin and Daphne to Babylon!
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: Limited access to the internet is a bummer. If I got it right Justin didn't know about Telson, so I had to figure a way around that. Jennifer is on my bad list, unfortunately Deb messed up what might have kept Craig from learning, but since Justin was unaware that Craig found his drawings there was nothing to be done. Did Deb confiscate the tip, I think so in this version. Brian, in this version, does some unexpected things.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 11:03 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
As in real life, you change your opinion more often. I also don't think Debbie is the great mother. Her affection often came with a price tag. And I don't want to start with Michael.... :(
Author's Response: I'm afraid that Michael does not come out good in this story.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2019 10:04 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
I definitely like the new version of the happenings in this chapter. Brian giving Justin his card to contact him if need be and telling Justin that he and Daphne should go to Babylon with him to celebrate the success of his show. Debbie, I am none too happy with. And neither is Justin. He is definitely seeing how she really is, and he doesn't like it.
Author's Response: I felt that Brian could have been a bit more helpful without making Justin feel like a kept boy. I wasn't happy with Debbie talking the way she does and getting away with it.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 02, 2019 09:46 AM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
I love this story and it's more and more surprising. We're about to get Jennifer to tell Craig unless ... I can not wait to read more.
Author's Response: I'm afraid Miss Tattle Tale, stays in character.
Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2019 08:42 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
Great update. Love this time around. Hope it ends happy. Wonderful writing.
Author's Response: Well, it depends on what you call happy. LOL. Thank you for reviewing and saying such lovely things.
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2019 06:50 PM · On: Chapter 6 - Episode 6(The Art of Desperation)
I'm loving this story Darling!
You should know that you've posted this chapter twice, back to back...
Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm going crazy but I have fixed the posting. At least I think so, so if you check to make sure I'd appreciate it.
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