Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2020 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
I'm glad Justin was more mature with his mother at the therapist I do hope it helps makes things better. I don't like the way Deb still is with Justin, why is she like this.
this is brilliant work xx
Author's Response: Deb has always been team Michael and Michael doesn't like Justin.
Reviewer: Randy-Fan (Signed) · Date: December 04, 2019 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
I'm late..Sorry. I find it really interesting how this develops, with the knowledge of what Justin has now. I hope he can avoid many mental and physical injuries. Thank you so much for sharing!
Author's Response: I think you'll be surprised with some of the things that happen. Don't ever be sorry, expecially for leaving such a nice review.
Reviewer: BritinManor (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2019 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
Again, I'm really liking this new and improved series. With Jennifer not finding him at Woody's, maybe it will calm some of her qualms about telling Craig. Then there won't be no beating up Brian.
The GLC art show must be coming up. Maybe Lindsay won't ask him to enter this time...either that... no naked pictures of Brian. Oooh... but Jennifer did see Brian at the show. (Vivid imagination - that woman.)
The therapist went a lot better. I'm sure it helped that Justin acted more grown up.
Restocking with Tracy. Dr. Dave must be on the horizon. But, Tracy didn't seem all that impressed with Michael. I look forward to how you handle that little tidbit. Will Michael be chasing her?
I'm still nervous about the loft robbery coming up. Hmmm... maybe when Justin sees the prepetrator leaving (Michael?) he can call Brian and tell him the loft was left unlocked, after seeing him leave.
You, my dear, had the right idea on a re-do. I'm presuimg you are having to watch each show prior to writing your chapter. What an awesome way to rewatch it.
We stil need some major attitude adjustments with the 'family'.
HUGS ~Cathy
Author's Response: As you may have noticed Justin doesn't have much to do with Michael unless Brian does. So some things come out quite different then you would have thought. I had a lot of fun with the robbery which I don't think you'll see coming. Yes, I do watch the series and I have to remind myself that this is from Justin's POV, some things he didn't have knowledge of and unless someone else brought it up there wasn't much he could do. But what he does do with Daphne's help is pretty good.
Reviewer: purpledee (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2019 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
I am loving this story so far. It reminds me of a few others, but better.
Love your stuff, here or on KD.
Thanks
Deb L
Author's Response: Glad to know you're loving this. I'm hoping not to repeat certain things This Time.
Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2019 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
I hope Jennifer comes around soon.
Author's Response: Let's just say you might be a little surprised with how this turns out.
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2019 01:44 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
Here's hoping Justin throws Jennifer off the trail for awhile. She means well, but the second she told Craig about Justin, all bets were off. And Justin needs to find a way to bypass Debbie. She seems to be keeping him away from Brian at all costs.
Author's Response: If she hadn't heard Debbie's verson of who Brian was Jennifer might have been more understanding. I'm afraid there is no hope for Jennifer Taylor.
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 28, 2019 01:28 AM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
Brian less hedonistic is very interesting. Love this story. Bill
Author's Response: He doesn't seem to be listening to Michael as much.
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2019 04:02 PM · On: Chapter 5 - Episode 5 (Now Approaching ...The Line)
Justin more mature makes good decisions.
Author's Response: At least he sees where he went wrong last time.
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