Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Boarding School
Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2018 01:41 AM · On: Chapter 7 Mopey Monday

BTW, I was going to ask you if you were going to put your banner back on for the story. It was such a nice banner. And, have we ever been told the name of the school, because I don't think we have.



Author's Response:

Now it's back up. I didn't put it up on the second round because I think it might give a little too angsty image of this story and maybe that repelled readers. I don't know. Maybe now it doesn't matter because all who will ever follow this story knows what this is about. 

Heh yes, the school doesn't have a name. I'm bad with naming things and titles. I couldn't come up with anything. Luckily it's not important plot vice. 

Reviewer: britinmanor (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2018 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 7 Mopey Monday

I could almost see and hear Justin's eyes roll at the suggestive way Hunter was talking and eating his fries, (that's if you can hear eyes roll ;) But I swear I could. *chuckling* He's really kind of a skanky character. The Littlest Hustler:

I think it’s only a question of time before I get into his pants. Dream on, lover boy.

At least I’m a professional. Yeah, that's exactly why Brian wouldn't want you. 

I'm wondering why Justin is a little standoffish when it comes to affection and sex. That ought to make for a nice reveal later. But it's evident he's not comfortable by lewd remarks and obscene gestures.

Then...

Touché for Justin. Decided to play a little dirty. Watching the common room, and yes he won. He got 'the man'.  Put that in your pipe and smoke it, James.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=



Author's Response:

Oh yes, we heard Justin do the eyeroll! Hunter is a little too selfconfident when he goes after a man. I think it's because of his former "job". 

I know Justin's little... Wll I don't know what to call it, is going to make a nice reveal. I've read it :D. (I'm being stupid here again) 

Yes, we are so giving the points for Justin! James can suck it.

Thank you for the comment :).

Hugs! Heidi

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: December 15, 2018 08:49 PM · On: Chapter 7 Mopey Monday

Great chapter.  The little hustler always did want Brian, but he never had a chance.  Terrific writing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I think in every universe possible Hunter will always want to "bag" Brian :D. Hopefully he never does in any of them. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story. Thank you for the comment. 

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