Great chapter.  Could just picture our boys on their adventure.  Love how they are getting closer.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you think so :). Thank you for the comment. 

Loved the update, although the boys should of paused in their ascent, and got to 'know' each other a little better. The stairwell can be a good meeting spot. *hint - hint*, as you can hear anyone coming and going.

The next time the guys meet in the kitchen, they will have to have two spoons with one ice cream, because if they won't touch and have fun, their spoons can. (Okay, now I'm getting silly.)

So, Brian did get caught shoplifting, but Justin was simply slacking off in school and his parents wanted him to learn discipline. I think I'm following along okay, but I'm confused at your response to my last review. Based on your comment you're going to get a little confused in the near futute. I've reread it two times, trying to pick apart what you meant about what I said, and can't come up with anything. I know I mentioned homophobic parents, but, hmm...

Well, I'll keep reading. Still loving it, and waiting to find out what Emmett, Ted and Hunter did to be sent there.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

 

Author's Response:

Oh excellent idea. Unfortunately we won't get any hot stair moments in this story :(. 

I can so imagine a spoon fight and then maybe that can get a little... dirty, you know :D. 

I feel like a mean person now. You didn't get it. But in the next chapter you will for sure! It's about Justin. But what I said is kinda true. You are now confused, just by another reason :D. I'm sure you'll have a AHA! moment with the next chapter. This is also actually really helpful for me because now I really see what my readers see, to me things are obvious and sometimes that makes writing hard. 

You'll get Emmett's and Ted's stories in the next chapter. Want to guess why Emmett's there :D. Unfortunately I didn't include any story for Hunter because I thought it would be obvious because he's an ex-hustler. His mom (ugh hated her in the show) put him there. And I can't see Hunter as 'opening about past' type. There was never a good moment. 

Happy to hear you're still enjoying this :). Thank you for the comment. 

Hugs! Heidi

Yeah I'd like to give a Shoutout to......
"MINT CHOCOLATE CHIP!!!!!!!!!! "

Author's Response:

Hah. Isn't it weird that I'v only once tasted Ben and Jerrys and I didn't find it any different from other ice creams. Am I horrible person now? :D

Thank you for the entertaining comment.