First I want to apologize for the delay in my reading this update. Just remember if it takes me a day or two after posting to get to it, I will. So, please be patient with me. I have no intention of abandoning reading it.
Okay, So it sounds like the green-eyed monster is starting to rear it's ugly head. I realized after my first review when I mentioned the tags, that was something I was going to point out, saying that, if we didn't have an Anti-tag, that jealousy would be the next best thing. Am I surprised that it's JUSTIN who's jealous; you bet. I really thought it would be Hunter, as the jealous one. So a surprise it was, but your way, makes for a more interesting story. But, Justin needs to get himself in there, and make himself known, while pushing Hunter away, because Brian really wants nothing to do with Hunter. Something Justin would know, if he would assert himself a little more, and not allowing Hunter to get his chance with Brian. But hopefully before long, it will be Hunter as the jealous one.
If can interject a request here, a little flirting I can deal with, but please don't let it go any further than that between Brian and Hunter. Not sure if I could stomach that. Besides, I don't believe you would be that cruel. ;)
So, Mikey's working the in the diner. I kind of get the impression that Brian and Michael got into some trouble, and while Brian's punishment was to be sent to this school, Debbie's making Michael work at the diner, hoping to keep him out of further trouble.(just speculation.)
I do have one question for you, due to your response to my last review, do you have this story totally finished? I can see you must have chapter five written, but the whole thing? That's quite a feat. Well, I'm looking forward to that long of a story.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Author's Response:
It is totally okay :). You take your time.
Hah yes, Justin’s the jealous one in this story. And yes, he has a long way to go if he wants to claim Brian because he has himself a rival in Hunter. Let’s see how that goes.
I don’t think anyone in this fandom particularly enjoys seeing Brian (nor Justin) with other people and especially with Hunter. Hunter just does not fit in there. So even though I promised I won’t give spoilers I think you’re pretty much safe here :).
I always thought it was weird that in the show Michael didn’t or at least it was never mentioned that he worked at the Diner. I think would have been quite in character for Debbie to make Michael work in the diner when he was in his teens. These are just my thoughts. As for Michael and him getting in trouble, no he did not do anything illegal. That is another thing that will kinda be in chapter five (Brian-vice, ch 5 is a big deal!) if you read between the lines and interpret and so on. I can explain after I post it if you don’t see it :).
Yes, I do have this whole story finished. I could never write as other people in this fandom seem to. Like write a chapter and immediately post it. I never write long stories in chronological order. I write a scene here and there until it’s finished. Usually I start quite near the end of the story so I know what I’m aiming for.
Thank you so much for the wonderful and supportive review. I appreciate it!
Hugs! Heidi :)
