Hey Heidi, Sorry I just got around to reading this today. I checked when it was first posted, I even copied and pasted the chapter, because the story plot appears that good to me. It just so happened, two other people asked me to beta, and after I said yes, I got 25 chapters to do. So, I have been swamped with that. Finished it earlier today. I had a few WIP's to catch up on, and I planned to read yours. I remember seeing Kim post that two other chapters of your story was posted, so imagine my surprise when I only found one tonight, and that it was only posted today. Did you have a lack of comments? Isn't there a read count, though? That way you should be able to see how many people are actually reading.
Well, I for one, found this first chapter to be well written, and the plot and story already has a good feel to it. I know I will definitely keep reading, so I really hope you will keep writing and posting. You mentioned MPREG, but said, Nobody will be having any babies, but you will have to be able to stomach MPreg. Does that mean that there will be boys in the school pregnant, but we won't have to read about them having the babies?
I did check the tags for your story, hoping for an Anti-Michael fic. I figured if Brian was coming into the school, we'd have dear, little Mikey falling all over himself, trying to be Brian's choice. Hmm, instead we got no Michael at all. But I suppose Debbie's little angel, won't need a school like this. We DO have Hunter, though. Still cocky and wanting Brian. Perfect canon characterization.
Did Emmett mean he could count the gay kids on one hand, or does he need all ten of his fingers and thumbs? ;) I hope Emmett gets to continue to be a part of this story, as he wasn't listed in the characters. I really love Emmett, and it will be fun to see if he's still campy as a teenager, and if Ted will hold the dorky persona.
Hmm, so Brian is still the gorgeous one, even as a teen. I had to chuckle when he mentally went over his list of items to unpack. I heard nothing resembling underwear and socks. And no wonder there, that he zeroed in on Justin, by just a glance. It's a shame they are not going to share a room. Maybe someone will be nice, and switch with Justin...
Loving the story, and I hope we soon get an update.
{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=
Author's Response: Hi Cathy :)
I'm glad you find the plot interesting. I actually posted 3 chapters and only one person reviewed to the last two. I'm a person who takes that very personally and basically goes and cries under the bed when that happens. And as for read count. It dropped to 1/3 from what I'm used to.
As for the MPreg T**. I so want to answer your question but I've promised myself I will never give spoilers :). You just gave to read more.
Sorry, this is not anti-mikey. Debbie would never send her precious baby boy into this kind of school. But happily he won't take much of our time in this story.
Aaah! I somehow skipped Emmett when I added tags. He will definitely be in this story all the way to the end. I added him. Thank you for pointing it out.
Hah Brian will always be Brian. I'm sure he probably has s few pairs of socks and underwear even though he didn't mention them. Now using them is another thing :).
Thank you for the amazing and so supportive review. I appreciate it so much!
Extreme big hugs!
Heidi
