Reviewer: LegendaryBritinKinlor (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2018 09:46 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
Oh my. I didn't think anything would ever better than the last chapter. This is so much better I am so happy Brian and everyone saw and heard all of that. I feel for Brian and Mel for the pain of what they heard but I know in the long run it's for the best. I adore Daphne who is just the best Bestie ever IMO and I love her reaction most lol. I am concerned for Justin with the chat he and Brian will now be having but I know they will get thru all of this crap together.
I do hope you are feeling better!! Looking forward to more!!
WELL DONE!!
:)
Author's Response: well, I'm glad to know that the reveal lived up to the intial showdown. It's always hard to gauge how much to repeat and what to leave out for the other characters introspection; so, glad that I found the right balance. The upcoming chat...yeah, that could get bumpy; but I'm sure that they will work things out in the end. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:46 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
OMG I CANT BELIEVE HOW THAY ALL CAME OUT. Good for Justin, but oh my goodness Brian. You could just feel his heart breaking with all of the new realizations. Awesome job!!! Hurry give us more!!!!
Author's Response: Things certainly heated up there; hopefully all will be well in the end. Except for Lindsay; she can jump off a cliff for all I care. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:41 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
First off I hope that you are ok now and I am so very sorry you had to go through all of that. Know that we are here for you xox
Wow just wow that absolutely took my breath away several times. The power in every word rang out as I read along. Lindsey is a bitch of all bitches isn’t she. She has a venom inside her that she will try and bite everyone with who is is jealous of or wants power over. She didn’t expect the antidote to be Justin Tayore did she. Wow did he work her over and spit her out. That was perfect every single word.
my heart broke for Brian he is so confused and I’m sure that the hurt he is feeling will go once he sits with Justin and hears him out. I do think the hurt over Lindey will be harder.
thank you for this out of this world chapter xx
Author's Response: I'm doing much better, thank you! :) Yes, this particular Lindsay is a viper in the nest and boy did she ever show it. it will be her end though, becuase Brian is through playing games and once he has had the chance to overcome his shock, and really process what has happened, I guarantee that will be one unhappy blonde. As for Brian and his Sunshine, things might be a little bumpy, but they'll work it out. They always do. :) Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 05:33 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
"OMG"!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THAT WAS FU@KING PRICELESS!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I was seating on the edge of my seat READING THIS!!!!!!! The house catching on FIRE!!!!! WOULD NOT HAVE MADE ME MOVE!!!!!!!! ( until I was done haha)
BRAVO!!!!!! On this chapter!!! I give you a STANDING Ovation!!!!!! You TRUELY are a gifted writer and I would pay to READ you!!:) and I'm CHEAP!!
Seariously though, Thank You. I needed that confrontation,It was Perfect! Glad EVERYONE got
to see it!!!
Can't wait for the next Chapter!!!
Author's Response: LOL! I laughed throughout this entire review! I loved it! Thanks! Although, please do promise me that if the house is burning down, you will at least take the computer with you and get out if you can't put the story down. ;) Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 02:04 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
Wow how Brian can hold back and not explode Lyndsay? Justin and he have so much to talk about Sap it was a bit light in the TV show Thanks for the update, I hope you are better.
Author's Response: I think Brian was still in shock. I doubt that Lindsay will be very happy once he has had a chance to process things. And the Sap story line was poorly executed in the show. It had so much potential to address serious issue and they glossed over it. Not cool. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 12:10 PM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
Hi, Ashita! I hope you're feeling a lot better now. As I said before, I admire how you can keep writing on such a regular schedule, and this is currently one of my favorites, so I look forward to each chapter. :) Well, we got the Lindsay smackdown most of us, at least, were hoping for! I was expecting that Brian being Brian would have rigged up some sort of surveillance system for the house, and what an eye-opener that was for all of them. Now, however, Justin has a lot of explaining to do with Brian as well.
I always wished they had covered what had happened at Sap's party, but, as usual, they quickly glossed over that on the show, along with a myriad of other subjects/plots, and moved onto the next one. So, I'm glad that you covered that. I suspect it's going to be a somewhat tense conversation coming up now.
BTW, I LOVED your feisty Daphne here. She was like a tigress with her claws out, ready to rip Lindsay to shreds! I always loved her character on the show.
Thank you again for posting this very entertaining story on here! Loving it! ~Kim
Author's Response: Daphne was so ready to kick her ass; damn Liam for stopping her.
I really didn't like the way they handled the Sap party plot point. Because Justin was druggd against his will and violated at the very least, even if he managed to get away before getting raped. And then they just went on their merry way as if there would be no reprecussions for that. He didn't even have nightmares? Sorry, but I hae a tough time believing that Justin, a port-bashing Justin at that, just walked away from that without feeling a thing? And Brian, who is well aware of what a scum bag Sap is, doesn't even question the abruptness of Justin quitting? There had to have been at least rumors of what happened at those parties. It was really poorly handled.
And the conversation between the boys, that will be fun...not. Hopefully they will work things out though. Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: mcm (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 10:33 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
How is Lindsay still alive. Oh My.
Author's Response: How indeed? Thanks for reading! :)
Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2018 04:50 AM · On: March 22 (Part Five)
I hope Brian isn't too upset. Justin should have been more honest with him. They always seem to get into trouble when they try to "protect" each other. Hope you are feeling better, another great chapter!!!!! Bill
Author's Response: I'm doing much better, thank you! And yes, Justin really should have come clean; but I can also see where he would want to eep it to himself since it would end up hurting Brian a great deal to know that Lindsay did this. Rock meet hard place. Thanks for reading! :)
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