Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 08:23 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

Another funny and emotional chapter! I Lucile give to Brian the designer bag good idea !!

Brian shows Justin the nursery and then Juatin gives Brian his daddy gift. It's intense ! Thank you !

Author's Response:
Lucille had to get it for Brian; she knew that he'd love it and everyone forgets about poor Dad in the gift giving, so she wanted to remember him in a small way. Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 07:50 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

Oh man I’m crying like Justin over how beautiful and funny and perfect this chapter is. I loved the idea of keeping all the ribbons to make a hat and the book to note the presents and who gave them to people. Lol I love that Lucile got Brian the designer bag that was brilliant.

What nade me smile even more was the moment when Brian showed Justin the nursery that touched my heart so much. Then Juatin giving Brian his daddy gift.

You did an amazing and beautiful job with this chapter xox

Author's Response:
I had fun with this chapter if you couldn't tell by the way it got away from me. Those boys just wouldn't stop bantering and let me get on with the chapter. :) But it was well worth it I think. :) Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2018 04:26 AM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

So much emotion in this chapter. Traditions from the past and new traditions started. really a wonderful chapter!!! Bill

Author's Response:
I'm glad that you lied it! Thanks for reading! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2018 03:32 PM · On: March 22 (Part Three)

What a day. I only hope that Justin doesn't go into labor. At least he has pretty much everything he needs. The only thing he doesn't need is for his stalker to show up.

Author's Response:
Well, so far it's only been Braxton Hicks contractions, but we'll see. Thanks for reading! :)

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